Chapter 22
RECAP:Mihir is in coma.......n garewals n viraanis money fight
So Now lets see wheres our Sujal ........as usual in his original place
He's drinking too much
Sujal remembers all the moments he spent wid kashish......
Sujal to himself:nahiiiii .......nahiiiii nahi jee sakta main kashish ke bina nahi rehna mujhe apne papa ke saath main jaaonga apni kashish ke paas jaa raha hoon....... par papa mama ........yeh log samajhte kyun nahi hai main kaise jee paonga main apni zindagi ke bina kabhi nahi main abhi jaa rah hoon kashish ke paas
n he drives away in his car
...he goes to Viraani house...Kashish ia spking to tulsi
Kashish:mumma humein papa ko delhi shift karna hi hoga....yahan ke doctors se meri baat ho chuki un hone kaha hai hum yeh kal kar sakte hai...
Tulsi:kashish tere papa theek toh ho jayenge na
Kashish:mumma papa coma mein hai...[sujal gets a big shock]unhe kaafi time lag sakta hai theek hone mein[tears fall thru her cheeks] mahine...ya phir kaafi saal...[she turns n sees Sujal standing there]
Kashish:tum yahan
Sujal:kashish yeh sab
Kashish:yeh sab tum hi ne toh kiya hai tum ne aur tumhare pariwar ne...... humein pehle hi bahut dukh diye hai ab tumhe aur kya chahiye plzz ab tum is dukh ko aur mat badhao tum yahan se chale jao...jao yahan se sujal
Sujal:par kashish main to yahaan tumhara saath dene aaya tha
Kashish:nahi chahiye tumhare saath sujal nahi chahiye aise saath jo mujhe dukh aur aansoon ke ilawa kuch na de nahi chaiye aisa saath mujhe i hate u sujal i hate u
Sujal is feeling as if a knife has pierced his heart.he's feeling his whole life has cum to an end.his kashish whom he loved soo much today is telling him to go away frm her life. he just cant accept dis.his life is shatterd into bits.with sorrow
filled in his heart he leaves da house
he goes to garewal house
Veena:aagaya tu kitni fikar ho rahi thi mujhe tujhe kuch ho jaata to
Sujal:kaash kuch ho jata maa
Veena:yeh tu kya keh raha hai sujal
Sujal:haan maa aaj mujhe nahi jeena nahi jeena is duniya mein jahan meri kashish mujhse itni nafrat karti ho jahan koi kashish ko sahara dene ke liye na ho jahan koi humare pyar ko samajhne wala na ho nahi jeena mujhe aisa jahan mein aaj kashish ko jitni takleef ho rahi hai uska ehsaas hai ap logon ko aur yeh sab humari wajah se...meri wajah se[he cries]
Veena:aisa nahi kehte sujal sab theek ho jayega tu fikar mat kar
Sujal:kay theek hoga maa kya hum fir se virani pariwar se rishta jod sakte hain kya hum mihir uncle ko theek kar sakte hai kya hum fir se utne khush honge bolo maa bolo
Sujal:jawab nahi hain na maa kuch bhi theek nahi ho sakta ab maa kuch nahi
He goes away to his room.
The next day itz morning.The garewals are having der breakfast wen Kashish enters
Kashish:oh to aap log humara sab kuch cheen ke aaraam se nashta kar rahe hain
The whole family sees there.
Lalit:tum....tum yahan kyun aayi ho
Kashish:aayi toh thi yeh dekhne ki aap log kitna gir sakte hain aur ab dekh bhi liya
Lalit:apni yeh bakwas band karo aur jo kam hai vo kar ke jaao
Kashish:mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai yahan khde reh kar bakwas karne ka main toh bas yeh 500 crores lutane aayi thi
yeh lijiye aapke paise vo paise jisne ap logon ko itna gira diya vo paise jisne mere papa ki.....yeh haalat kardi... lejiye(n she gives it to lalit)
Kashish goes away.Sujal cums dwn.He sees kashish going.
Sujal: Kashish....... yahan ....aayi thi
Lalit:humari bezaati karne
Sujal:kya
Lalit:aayi toh thi yeh paise lautane per bezaati karke gayi
Viraani house
The viraani's are leaving the house.tulsi closes da door of da house. shes crying
Tulsi:yeh vohi ghar hain jo tumhare papa ne itni mushkil se banaya tha yahan tumharui bachpan se lekar jawani tak sari yaadein maujad hain tumhare papa ne kabhi nahi socha tha aur nahi humne ki kabhi humein yeh ghar chodne hoga
par aaj halaat ne hume us raaste par la hi diya hain jahan hum kabhi nahi ana chahte the
Kashish:maa hume papa ke dushmano se badla lena hui hoga humein unki maut ka badla lena hui hoga
Tulsi:nahi kashish hum kisi se koi badla nahi lenge tumhare papa bhi yahi chahte the plz chalo yahan se
Kashish:jaise ap chahe maa
So. all the virani's hav left shimla n shifted to Delhi.
3 YEARS LATER!!!!!!!
There's a biggg house fully decorated with balloons and cartoons......its a very big n beautiful house.....
We see a lady in saree going in a room
Lady:toh hogaye ready dono baap bete
We see a man and a child turn dis side
Man:haan....dekho mera beta lag raha hai na bilkul mnere jaisa
Lady(laughs):Sumeet tumhara beta tumhara dhruv sirf 3 saal ka hai abhi vo tumhare jaisa kya mujh jaisa bhi nahi lagega
Sumeet:haan kumkum vo toh hai par phir bhi bachhe bachpan se hi apne mummy papa jaise dikhte hai
kumkum:hmmmmm ok mere hero ke papa
sumeet:yeh kya hero dhruv toh phir main kya
Kumkum:tum....hmm....hero ke papa
Sumeet:aur tum hero ki mumma
Kumkum:haaan....ab ap logo ki baatein ho gayi ho toh chalein
Sumeet:haan chalo
All three of them go out
Outside we see veena, lalit n tia waiting 4 dhruv
Veena:aagaya dhruv arre waah aaj toh dhruv ek dum hero lag raha hai
Lalit:haaan bilkul hrithik roshan jaisa
Tia(goes n hugs him):hi baby happy birthday
Dhruv(in his baby sweet voice):thanQ bua par bua chachu kaha hai
Veena:vo dhruv beta chachu office mein hai unhe kuch kaam hai vo abhi thodi der mein aajayenge tum cake kaato
Dhruv:nahi main chachu ke bina cake nahi katoonga
Sumeet:dhruvv zidd nahi karte beta tum cake kato na chachu aaajayenge
Dhruv:nahiiiii
Kumkum(goes 2 dhruv):dhruv beta aapke saare frnds aagaye hain na aur apka hi wait kar rahe hai tum cake kaato chachu aate hi honge
Sum1 on da door:aate honge nahi aagaye
Yeah dats sujalllll,
Dhruv runs to sujal:chachuuuuu ap aagaye
Sujal(carries him):haaaan chachu aagaye chalo ab jaldi se ek puppy(kiss) do
Dhruv(kisses sujal):mera giftttt
Sujal(puts his hand on his head):arrrrrreeeeee vo toh main bhool gaya
Dhruv(gets dwn):jaao chachu main apse baat nahi karunga
He goes away.......Dhruv is sitting on the sofa wid his hands fold n anger filled on his mouth
Sujal:dhruvvvv sorry plzz maaf kardo kal laonga pakka
Dhruv:par bday toh aaj hai na
Sujal:arre haan bday toh aaaaj hai phir kya karein......hmm ek idea hai
Dhruv:kyaa
Sujal:apni ankh band karo
Dhruv:okkk
Sujal:happy bday to u happy bday to u (n he takes out a gift frm his coat)
yeh raha apka gift
Dhruv:thanx chachu (n he hugs him)
Kumkum:ap ap dono ki baatein khatam ho jaye toh cake kaat le
Sujal:haan chalo
Dhruv n others go to the table where da cake is cut.......Dhruv n Sujal cut da cake n dhruv gives da 1st bite 2 sujal n den his parents n it goes on
The party goes on 4 sumtime n den finally itz over.Every1 go to der rooms.Sujal is in his room.
He has a photo in his hand,
He has a pic of kashish in his hand n tears r flowing frm his eyes.He remembers all da happy moments of Kashish with him
Suddenly a very fast air blows n sujal is thinking
kyun Yeh hawayein aaj bhi mujhe tumhari yaad dilati hai
kyun yeh hawayein mujhe chooti hai toh
aisa lagta hai tum ho
kyun inke har aahat mujhe tumhari yaad dilati hai
kyun nahi bhool pata main un yaadoin ko
kyun tumhe soche bina ek pal bhi nahi guzarta
aakhir kyun aisa hota hai
mujhe pata bhi nahi tum kaha ho kaisi ho kashish
shayad tumhe koi aur mil gaya ho
par kyun main tumhari yaadoin se nahi nikal pata
kyunn
Song in background:
Tum nahi ho yahan pur,
tera ehsaas magar hai.
Dil ke deewarein sooni.
Kya tujhe iski khubur hai.
Koi aahat hoti hai,
yun lagai tum ayee ho.
Bhool kur saari baatein
saari khushiyan layee ho.
Jub mera toota bhurum.
Oh oh oh oh
Teri purchayee thi hum,
rehgayee hai tanhayee.
Yaad sau baar kiya hai,
tum nahi ayee.
Thoda sa pyar hua tha,
kuch nahi baaqi
Now we see a gurl standing at a window crying.....the winds touch her n she thinks
kyun main in hawayoin mein tumhe dhoondti hoon
kyun yeh dil aaj bhi tumhare baare mein hi sochta hai
kyun main kisi aur ke baare mein kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti
kyun tumhara pyaar mujhe itna kamzor kar deta hai ki
main kabhi bhi tumhe bhool nahi paati
aaaakhir kyun tum mujhe itne pyaare ho sujal
tumne toh koi aur bhi mil gayi hogi
par kyun mera dil yeh nahi maanta ki
mujhe tum nahi mil sakte
kyunnnnn
yes its kashish.......
Song in background:
Bewafa tum nahi ho,
bewafa hum nahi hain.
Apni kismat mai shayad,
ghum bhi kuch kum nahi hai.
Ek hulchul si jaane,
kyun rahe meray mann mai,
kuch sumuj mai naa ayai,
kya karun hoon uljhun mai.
Tum kharai iss kinare
Oh oh oh oh
Hum kharai uss kinare,
kaisi hai ye muchboori.
Mur ke jub bhi dekha hai,
aankh bhur ayee.
Thoda sa pyar hua tha,
Kuch nahi baaqi.
ok here ends this part sorry 4 writing after soooo long but guys i promise ill continue regularly now
tc,
komal......
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Comments (13)
Sad that though sujal came to support kashish she was rude to him.sumit kk scene was nice.druv is cute.
1 months ago
awsome thats so sad pls con asap dont make it like the real show kahin to hoga because ur storys much cooler
17 years ago
monikaseth wrote: wow aap ne conti ki thanks dear ure most welcum..im glad u lked it mishty_shawan wrote: hey read all the parts of ur story.......ur fanfic is fab...u r a gr88 writer...do cont soon..........can't wait to read all the parts thanku jee...il cont soon payal9 wrote: gr8888888888888888 work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon komal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hey payal..thx soo much..il cont asap
17 years ago
Honii wrote: kimm jeee wow yaaar masth part leki bohot sad can't see sujal kashish like this abbh inneh jaldi seh milado plzzz..i like chootah dhruv his character is shoooo shweeeeeetttt and cuteeee continue soooon cant' wait more &n bsp; hana jee..humein bahut khushi hui ke u liked it...i cont reli soon golu_1677 wrote: wonderful part komal. feeling sad for sujal and kash. waiting for the next part post it soon thanku janu_2006 wrote: gr8 part cont. soon thx nm16 wrote: pls cont pls pls cont soon ya sure
17 years ago
Guriya wrote: awesome... &n bsp; ..feeling v sad 4 both.. ...cont soon... im glad that u toched by this part..thx komalsirwani wrote: payal9 wrote: hey komal dii!!! kya dii?! kitni time laga di??? but its ok i understand, u were out of station. no worries, take ur time... but not too much time!!! hey payal..plz mujhe di mat bulao..me just 15...hehe il update 2day pakka ok dii, i mean komal hehe dats much betta awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that dhruv-sujal scene was soooooooo sweet and soooooooooo cute!!!!!!!! and the last scenes of SK r so painful... i just hope SK get back together very soon!!!!!!!!!! its really sad seeing them... not together plzzzz cont. soon!!!! Thx soo much 4 likin it il cont soon
17 years ago
gr8888888888888888 work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon komal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
17 years ago
hey read all the parts of ur story.......ur fanfic is fab...u r a gr88 writer...do cont soon..........can't wait to read all the parts
17 years ago
wow aap ne conti ki thanks dear
17 years ago
pls cont pls pls cont soon
17 years ago
wonderful part komal. feeling sad for sujal and kash. waiting for the next part post it soon
17 years ago