Chapter 13
Recap:Sujal's gets all these cute surprises 4 his bday n after troubling 4 da whole day Kashish tells him that it was her...
Sujal:toh finally tum aa hi gaye kab tak chupogi mujhse aakhir tumhe aana hi tha (he reaches close to her but her face is still covered with the bouquet)isse pehle ki main tumhe dekhon main tumse kuch kehna chahata hoon shsyad thx ek bahut chota shabd jo tumne kiya mere liye itne surprises mujhe isse pehle kabhi nahi mile aur shayad ab tum meri zindagi mein aa hi gayi ho ab toh milte rahenge lekin yeh saal mera sab se yadgaar saal rahega sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se thank you so much Kashish(n he removes the bouquet)
Kashish cant face so she decides to cover her face n hides in him...she hugs him....
Sujal hugs her back...Both of them are really happy but Kashish is too scared to disclose her face ...Finally Sujal lifts it up and spks...
Sujal:tumne yeh sab kyun kiya
Kashish looks dwn...
Sujal:kya mujhe aj ke din bhi mere sawaalon ka jawaab nahi milega
Kashish looks at him n spks....
Kashish:maine yeh sab isliye kiya taaaki tumhe khushi mile
Sujal:mujhe khushi milegi toh....usse tumhe kya
Kashish turns away:haan mujhe kya hoga(n she starts to walk...Sujal holds her n brings her back)
Sujal:lekin phir bhi tumne yeh kiya kyunki tum mujhe khush dekhna chahti thi ....kyun?.....hum itne naadaan nahi hai Kashish....tumne jo mujhse kehna tha woh toh tum keh nahi pa rahi ho isliye yeh kardiya taki mujhe ehsaas hojaye lekin izhaar karna bhi toh zaroori hota hai na aur jab tak tumhara izhaar nahi aayega main intezaar karoonga....(n he goes away...Kashish blushes n goes back)....They have their dinner n go back... ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;
The nxt few days go on really well but niether sujal nor Kashish do izhaar...Zaib n Kripa's rishta becomes pakka n itz thier engagaement day....Sujal Kashish n some other family members had planned a small show on the love of Zaib-Kripa....Sujal Kashish come on the stage...
Sujal:ladies n gentlemen ap sab log yeh toh jaante hi hai ki aaj yahan Zaib aur Kripa ki sagai hai
Kashish:lekin kya ap log yeh jaante hai ki yeh log kaise mile ....pyaar kaise hua...
Sujal:well im sur ap log nahi jaant magar janna zaroor chahenge
Kashish:toh isliye hum apne is chote se musical performance se ap logon ko Zaib aur Kripa ki love story batayenge
Sujal:ab in dono ki kismat mein milna toh likha tha lekin Zaib tha london mein aur Kripa India mein...
Kashish:hmmm toh humari Kripa apne Zaib se milne london chale gayi...(Kripa blushes) aur jab undono ne pehli baar ek dusre ko dekha toh yeh tha unka haal...
Tia-Ranveer come on the stage...
Tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
jo hosh tha vo toh gaya
badan ki yeh khushbu
jagane lagi jaadu
tu hoke beekabu dil kho gaya
tumhe jo maine dekha tumhe jo maine jaana
Sujal:kashish ...zaib aur kripa par toh ek dusre ka jadoo chalne laga lekin in dono ko pyar ka ehsaas kaise hua
Kashish:pyar ka ehsaas toh ankhon ankhon mein ho gaya lekin problem thi izhaar ki
Sujal:exactlty yeh izhaar karna hota hi bada mushkil lekin izhaar karna toh padta hi hai na aur Zaib Kripa ne apni mohabbat ka izhaar is tarah kiya
Kumkum Sumeet and Prerna Anurag together come on the stage...
Hum dil de chuke sanam
tere ho gaye hai hum
teri kasam
haan hum dil de chuke sanam
tere ho gaye hain hum teri kasam
teri kasam......
Kashish:mil gaye pyaar hogaya izhaar bhi hogaya ab problem thi gharwalon ki
Sujal:lekin kehte hai na miya biwi razi toh kya karega qazi gharwale bhi tayar hogaye
Kashish:aur phir kya jashan ho raha tha har taraf khushiyan hi khushiyan aur phir lo aaj sagai bhi ho gayi
Sujal Kashish come on the stage...
Dulhaniya dulhaniya dulhaniya dulhaniya
teri banegi yeh dulhaniya dulhaniya
sharmaye shramaye dulhaniya dulhaniya
raat yeh aayi hai nachenge hum
teri sagai hai nachenge hum(they go n get Zaib Kripa on stage and all the others join them)
nachegi sang mein dulhaniya dulhaniya dulhaniya dulhaniya
Every bodys dancing ....Sujal Kashish's eyes meet at one point..they freeze their the dace gets over n everybody leaves the stage but Sk are still their n b4 sum1 elz realises this Kumkum n prerna come upto them....
Kumkum snaps...Kashish Sujal stop staring at each other...
Kumkum:dance khatam ho gaya hai aur sab log floor par aa gaye hain.Tum dono kaunsi duniya mein ho.
Prerna:waise tum logo ko ek dusre ke alawa bhi kuch dikhta hain
Kashish blushes,
Sujal:aisa kuch nahiin hai meri bhabhiyon wo to bas
Prerna:vo to kya
Kashish:vo to bas hum ek game khel rahe the
Kumkum:dance karte karte
Sujal:arre haab dance mein concentration laane ke liye
Prerna:acha kaisa game
Kashish:hum dono ne decide kiya tha ki hum ek dusre ki aankhon mein poore gaane ke doraan(throughout) dekhenge jiski palkein pehle jhuki vo yeh game har gaya
Kumkum:sach mein
Sujal:of course bhabhi
Prerna:theek hain chalo kumkum hum chalte hai
Kumkum n Prerna leave,
Kashish n Sujal:thank god! bach gaye
Kripa:Kashish-sujal chalo naa ab humare saath aake betho
Kashish:haan haan chalo
Sujal:chalo
Now all the elders r sitting n enjoying the party.The kids r also having fun.The party goes on.
By now most of da guests hav left.Elders hav taken their dinner.Only kashish-sujal n kripa-zaib were left
Zaib:mujhe to bohot bhuk lag rahi hai chalo khaana khate hai
Sujal:haan mujhe bhi
Kashish:Tum ladke naa kabhi bhi apni bhuk tolerate nahiin kar sakte
Kripa:bilkul sahi kaha kashish
Sujal:kya karein hum aap jaise mahaan to nahiin hai na
Kashish:very funny
Sujal: Its not at all funny ab humein to itna dance karne ke baad bhuk to lagti hi hai ab main tum jaisa bhi to nahiin hoon jo har waqt khaata hi rehta hai aur phir sab ke saamne bhuk hi nahiin lagti kyunki pehle hi sab kha liya
Kripa n Zaib laugh
Kashish:kya kaha (she's very angry)tum bahut bure ho im going frm here(n she
runs out of da house)
Sujal:arre baap re yeh to naraaz ho gayi isse dekh kar aata hoon
Kripa n Zaib:jaldi jaao
Sujal goes to da garden where Kashish is already sitting n crying.
Sujal(goes in front of her n holds his ears):I'm sorry plz ro mat
Kashish:tum mujhse baat mat karo humesha mujhe satate rehte ho tum bahut bure ho bahut bure
Sujal:acha theek hain maana main bura hoon tum jo saza dogi vo manoonga par please dont cry pleaseeeeeeeee(n he wipes her tears)
Kashish:pakka jo saza doongi vo maanoge
Sujal:ek shart par
Kashish:yeh kya baat hui punishment ke liye bhi shart
Sujal:arre shart to sun lo
Kashish:kya
Sujal:tumhe pehle apne is khubsurat se chehre par ek khubsurat si muskaan laani hogi
Kashish smiles
Sujal:yeh hui na baat ab shart batao
Kashish:saza yeh hai ki tumhe mujhe apne haato se khaana khilana hoga
Sujal:yeh kya saza hui
Kashish:ab meri saza to yahi hai ab tumhe maana hai to maana warna tumhari marzi(n she turns away)
Sujal:ok ok gussa mat ho khilaonga
Kashish:to jao naa
Sujal:kahaan
Kashish:khana laane
Sujal:oh.........theek hai 2 min laata hoon(n he goes)
Kashish:jaldi aana
Sujal:haan haan
Sujal goes in takes da food n goes out while going out he meets Kumkum on da way
Kumkum:Sujal kahaan jaa rahe ho
Sujal:kahiin nahiin bhabhi vo main...main..main
Kumkum:bakri ki tarah main main kya kar rahe ho batao naa
Sujal:vo main yeh khaana leke jaa raha tha
Kumkum:vo to mujhe bhi dikh raha hai par kahaan jaa rahe the
Sujal:bahaar
Kumkum:bahar kyun
Sujal:vo......yunhi aaj mujhe khuli hawa mein khaane ka mann ho raha hai
Kumkum:acha to theek hai thero main bhi chalti hoon
Sujal:nahiin nahiin bhabhi aap kyun takleef le rahi hain main akele chala jaonga aur waise bhi bahar bahut thand hai na
Kumkum:haan vo to hain acha theek hai tum jao main kisi ko bhejti hoon
Sujal:iski ki zaroorat nahiin bhabhi wahaan mere dost hain ok bye
Kumkum:bye(n she laughs)
In the garden,
Kashish:Sujal kahaan reh gaye the itni der
Sujal:arre vo main jab aa raha tha to kumkum bhabhi ne pakad liya
Kashish:tumne unse kuch kaha to nahiin
Sujal:keh to diya par kyun?(acts 2 be innocent)
Kashish(puts her hand on her head):Hey Bhagwan! yeh kya kiya ab vo humare baare mein kya sochri hogi
Sujal:kya soch rahi hogi?
Kashish:vo soch rahi hogi ki hum dono ke beech mein kuch hai
Sujal:haan to sachmuch hai na
Kashish:kya
Sujal:i mean ke dosti hai na
Kashish:o haan.........par phir bhi hum kya karein
Sujal:karein kya chup chap wahi karte hain jo maine bhabhi ko bataaya
Kashish:kyaa
Sujal:khaana khaate hain
Kashish:haan vo bhi theek hain chalo khaane khaate hain
Sujal starts feeding Kashish....They talk abt various things.Now the food is over,
Kashish:Sujal agar kumkum bhabhi ne kuch poocha to
Sujal:kaise poochegi
Kashish(confused):matlab
Sujal:matlab yeh jab unhe pata hi nahiin to poochegi kaise
Kashish:iska matlab tumne mujhse jhoot kaha
Sujal:maine kaunsa jhoot kaha
Kashish:sujallllllllllllllllllllllllll(n she hits him on his arm playfully)
Sujal:arre arre (n he holds her hand)
Both r lost in each other.
Song in Background
Jee yeh chahe yeh lamhe
Bas yahi pe ruk jaaye
Saamne tum raho aur
Hum tumhe dekhe jaaye
Dil mein hone lagi hain
Meethi meethi si hulchul
Tum raho saath jaise
Meri aankhon ka kajal
Saath din raat rahe
oooooooo ooooo
Pyar ki baat rahe
Aur rahe kuch na baaki
Thoda sa pyar hua
Thoda hai baaki
Thoda sa pyar hua haiii
Thoda hai baaki
Again theres a snap!
Both sujal-kashish suddenly turn the other side to see who it was.
Sujal:arre kumkum bhabhi prerna bhabhi aap log
Kumkum:haan hum log
Kashish:aap yahaan kaise
Prerna:yeh sawaal to humein tum dono se karna chahiye
Sujal:wo hum to yahaan par kuch dhoondne aaye the, hai na kashish
Kasshish:haan hum kuch dhoondne aaye the
Kumkum:achaaa vo kyaaa
Kashish:vo......vooooooo (n she sees the other side n finds kripa n zaib so she tells) vo hum zaib aur kripa ko dhundne aaye the
Sujal(sees kashish but kashish shows him the other side wid expressions):haan zaib aur kripa
Sujal goes to zaib n kripa and
Sujal:arre haan hum to inhe dhundne aaye the kahaan the tum dono hum tumhe kab se dhund rahe hain
Zaib:yeh tum kya keh rahe ho sujal(hes confused)
Kumkum n Prerna r still standing with kashish n r just abt to go der.Sujal points over to kumkum n prerna bhabhi
Zaib:ohhhh to tum humein dhund rahe the hum to bas do min ke liye bahar gaye the
Kripa(also understands everything):haan sujal hum bas bahar gaye the abhi abhi aaye hain
Kashish: oh theek hain ab chalo ander chalte hain
Sujal:haan haan chalo
Zaib:haan kyun nahiin
Kripa:bilkul chalo
These 4 turn n start to walk away wen,
Kumkum n prerna together:thero
They all get afraid n turn bak in a line
Kashish:kya hua bhabhi
Kumkum:agar tum log zaib aur kripa ko dhundne aaye the to phir yeh khane ki plate
prerna:haan haan yeh plate
Sujal:yeh plate......yeh plate to .....yeh plate to (he luks at kashish)
Kashish:yeh plate to hum Zaib aur kripa ke liye lekar aaye kyunki unhone khana nahiin khaya tha
Zaib:haan yeh plate humare liye hi thi
Prerna:tumhe kaisa pata zaib
Sujal:arre vo to basic sense hain agar humare haath mein plate hain aur hum Zaib aur kripa ko dhund rahe hai to vo unhi ke liye hain
Prerna:acha acha theek hain chalo kumkum ab hume chalna chahiye
Kumkum:haan haan chalo
kumkum n prerna leave,these four give a big sigh.
Sujal:aaj to dusri baar aisa hua
Kashish:haan sachmuch aaj to yeh dono hume maar hi dalti
Zaib:par tum dono yahaan kar kya rahe the
Sujal:tumhe dhund rahe the
Kripa:sujal yahaan par bhabhiyan nahiin hai sach sach batao
Sujal:acha theek hai batata hu yeh sab kashish ki galthi hain
Kashish:ismein meri kya galthi hai
Sujal:aur nahiin to kya maine kaha tha mujhse naraaz hone ko aur phir khana khilane ke liye kehne ko
Kashish:tumne nahiin kaha tha lekin maine tumse kaha tha mere peeche yahaan takk aane ko aur phir sazaa mangne ko maine kaha tha
Sujal:vo to tum naraaz thi isliye main aaya tha
Kashish:to tumne mujhe moti kyun kaha phir isliye main naraaz thi na
Sujal:ab jo sach hai vo hai usmein naraaz hone ki kya baat hain
Kashish:kyaaaaa kaha (now shes ready to beat him)
Sujal goes n hides behind Zaib
Zaib:arre arre Kashish yeh kya itni badi hokar maarogi use
Kashish:phir kya karu vo mujhe saara din satata hai moti kehkar
Kripa:kisi ke kehne se ho to nahiin jaata na bilkul bacho ke jaise ladte ho tum dono
Zaib:right aise behave karte ho jaise 8 saal ke chote bache ho
Sujal:acha baba ab aap mujhe lecture mat dijiye soory bas
Kashish:haan even im sorry
Sujal:ab chalein andar warna yeh bhabhiyan teesri baar aa jayein gi
Now all go inside......The party gets after 2-3 hrs n its time 2 go.
They all go out where all are there except Zaib n Sujal.All the elders r gone.Only kumkum-sumeet n prerna-anurag wid these both jodis r left.
Sumeet:yeh sujal kahaan gaya ab iske bina hum kaise jayenge
Kumkum:haan kahaan reh gaya Sujal
Kripa:bhaiya bhabhi aap aisa kijiye aap log sab nikliya hum charon baad mein aa jayenge
Kashish(goes to Anurag):haan bhaiya plzzzzz thodi der mein hum aa jayenge'
Prerna:bacchi hai aa jayegi thodi der mein bethne dijiye na
Anurag:tum sab to mujh se aise pooch rahe ho jaise maine mana kiya tumhe
Kashish:iska matlab mein ruk sakti hoon
Anurag:haan
Kashish:wow bhaiya thanq soooo much u're da best
Anurag:vo to main hoon
All laugh,
Prerna:acha thhek hain hum chalte hain par tum log jaldi aa jana
Kashish n kripa:haan bhabhi
Kashish:aur haan bhabhi ek aur baat
Prerna:kyaaaaa
Kashish:bhabhi vo aaj kripa humare saath hi rahegi maine aunty se pooch liya hai chalega na
Prerna:yeh bhi koi poochne kii baat hai ofcourse kripa humare saath reh sakti hain
Kashish:thx bhabhi
Now kumkum-sumeet n prerna-anurag r gone
Sujal n Zaib cum outside
Zaib:permission leli tum dono ne
Kripa:haan haan par sirf 1 ghante ki ok
Sujal:haan haan ek ghanta bahut hain
Kashish:gr88888 then chalo chalte hain
Sujal:haan chalo
These four leave the place n go for a long drive.
(actually these 4 had already planned for a drive so yeh sab natak tha jo kashish n kripa ne kiya tha)
They enjoy a lot on da drive.they hav ice-cream n then finally they go bak home.
Zaib stops da car a little in front of Kashish's house.Kashish n kripa get dwn of da car wen zaib also gets down.
Kashish:arre Zaib tum kyun......(n then she realises dat kripa is also der)oh to kripa se baat karni hai theek hain aaj tumhari sagai thi na to sirf isliye jaao baat karlo
Kripa(blushes):kashish tu bhi naa
Kashish:lo maine aisa kya kaha
Kripa:bas bas tu jaa ab
Kashish:ok ok jeeju aa gaye to mujhe bhaga rahi ho dekh loongi tumhe
Kashish goes near sujal
Sujal:tum yahaan kyun aa gayi ghar bhul gayi kyaa yaad dila doon
Kashish:jee nahiin mujhe apna ghar acchi tarah se yaad hai vo to main isliye aa gayi kyun ki zaib ko Kripa se baat karni thi
Sujal:oh theek hai vaise mujhe tumse kuch kehna jo main poori party mein kehne ki koshish kar raha tha
Kashish:aisa kya hai jo tum mujhe puri party mein kehne ki koshish kar rahe the
Sujal:vo yeh hai kii...............kehdo kya
Kashish:bolo naa sujal
Sujal:sach much bolo kyaa
Kashish:Sujal ab tum bol rahe ho kii main jaao
Sujal:ok ok bolta hoon
Kashish:sujal boloooo
Sujal:acha theek hain chodo tum jaao
Kashish:ok bye(n she turns to go away)
Sujal goes n holds kashish's hands n brings her close to himself and
Sujal:tum aaj bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho
Kashish blushes
Song in Background
Yeh kaisi khushboo hai
Yeh kaisa jaadoo hai
Hawa si aayi wo dil le gayi
Ladki hai vo bekaboo
Kyun vo mujhpe marti hai
Kaise ab yeh maano main
Pyar vo bhi karti
Toota koi taara
Ho jaa tu humara
Kahe jaa rahe hain
Chale jaa rahe hai
Hai re Hai re
(these r lyrics 4 do ajnabee frm khushi)
Both are lost in each other but they are distuirbed wen they hear foot steps n look dwn...Kashish shies away n she runs to her house.Zaib n Kripa cum near Sujal
Zaib:isse kya huwa
Sujal:kuch nahiin chalo hum chalte hain
Zaib:haan chalo bye kripa
Kripa:bye
Zaib n Sujal leave n Kripa turns to go inside.She reaches the door were she finds Kashish n Prerna standing.They all go inside
Prerna:maine tum dono ka bed tayaar kar diya hai kripa tum kashish ke saath hi soogi(sleep) na
Kripa:haan bhabhi
Prerna:acha theek hai chalo ab tum log change karlo phir so jayo bahut thak gaye hoge na
Kashish:haan thak to gaye hain
Kripa:to phir chalo chalte hain sone
Prerna:gud nite
Kashish n Kripa:gud nite bhabhi
In kashish's room,
Kashish goes n hugs Kripa
Kashish:bhaagwan kare tum hamesha yunhi muskurati raho
Kripa:aur bhagwan kare tum humesha yunhi khush raho.......acha kashish ek baat puchu
Kashish:pooch na
Kripa:kya tu Sujal se pyar karti hai
Kashish(shies away):yeh to kya keh rahi hai kripa aisa kuch nahi hai hum to bas acche dost hain
Kripa:sirf acche dost ho kashish bas aur kuch nahiin kya tum uske baare mein kuch feel nahiin karti
Kashish:aisi koi baat nahiin hai we r just gud frnds tats it
Kripa:to phir abhi kuch der pehle jo bahar hua vo kya tha
Kashish(shocked):tumhe kaisa pata
Kripa:maine aur Zaib ne sab dekh liya tha
Kashish:ok i agree i love sujal...
Kripa:ohh kashish im soooo happy 4 u (n she hugs her)
Kashish:acha baba theek hai par ab sote hain na plzzzzzz chalo mujhe neend aa rahi hai
Kashish offs the light of her room n sum1 who was standing at her door leaves the room.
Kripa is asleep but how can kashish sleep shes just thinking abt our hero but phir bhi kisi tarah us raat ke khubsurat palo ko yaad karke vo so jaati hai
In Sujal's house,
Sujal reaches home n except kumkum nobody is awake.Kumkum opens the door for Sujal.
Kumkum:aa gaye tum thak gaye honge na chalo jaldi se jaa kar so jao
Kumkum is abt to go wen sujal holds her hand n tells her to wait
Sujal:bhabhi mujhse apse ek baat kehni hai
Kumkum:haan bolo
Sujal:bhabhi vo.......bhabhi i think im in love
Kumkum:jaanti hoon
Sujal:kyaaaaa par kaise
Kumkum:teri bhabhi hoon tujhe kya lagta mujhe tere dil ki baat nahiin pata chalegi aur woh ladki jisse tu pyar karta hai uska naam Kashish hai na
Sujal:wow bhabhi aap to mujhse bhi 2 kadam aage nikli gr8 haan
Kumkum:haan par ek problem hain
Sujal:kyaaaaaa
Kumkum:kashish ki shaadi kisi aur ke saath fix ho gayi hai
Sujal(completely shocked):kyaaaaa
Kumkum:haan aaj party mein hi jab tum dono bahar garden mein the tab ek vijay naam ke ladke se uski shaadi fix ho gayi hai
Sujal:aisa nahiin ho sakta bhabhi humein kisi bhi tarah is shaadi ko rokna hoga
Kumkum:yeh to tabhi hi possible ho sakta hain jab tum kal sab ke saamne apne pyar ka izhaar karo
Sujal:kuch bhi karunga bhabhi bas kashish kisi aur ki nahiin ho sakti
Kumkum:theek hai Sujal par Kashish ka kyaa kya vo bhi tumse pyar karti hai
Sujal:ofcourse bhabhi mujhe poora yakken hai
Kumkum:lekin yeh yakeen sach mein tabhi badlega jab tum use propose karoge
Sujal:abhi karoon kyaa
Kumkum:haan Sujal jaao abhi jaao
Sujal:theek hain n he leaves the house
ok guys here ends this part hope u liked it...do comment
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kimmy
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Comments (11)
Song sequences were nice.sk scenes were romantic. Is kumkum lying that kashish's marriage is fixed to make him propose to kashish?
7 months ago
ok kimmy dear..tu likh.. me waiting palkein bichake....
17 years ago
hw swweet dii me gonna write the nxt part ASAP
17 years ago
[QUOTE=komalsirwani]sun_423 wrote: kimmy yaar the part simply rocked... i loved it totally from the bottom of my heart.. kasam se keh rahi hoon dear kya likha hain tumne.. that was a very damn superb job done... me totally fida on this story the word which suits your story the best is perfect... it was simply amazing..awesome...superb.. marvellous...splendid... mindblowing... mindblasting... .... jhakaas...bindaas..... super duper coolllllll......marvelous...... excellent.... fantastic.. ek dum dhassu........you are totally a rockstar & your story completely , absolutely rocks , it is very rocking..... it is very coolllllllllll.... i loved all the scenes between sujal & kashish.... yipee sujal , kashish mil gaye , all happy happy...... very wonderful......the scenes were shooo cute..sweett... the emotions were all sooo goodd... they were expressed so wonderfully... simply stupendous yaar.. you are just tooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd i loved the part.... it completely bowled me over... me totally dumb-struck after reading the part.... oh i totally loved the part & i love your story completely..... dear i think main tumhari jitni bhi tareef karoon kum hain.... so yeh talliyan tumhare liye.. ab please continue soon... Hey di thx soooo much love 2 read ure comments....im very happy that u commented muaaahhhhh[/QUOTE]kimmy dear..me glad u liked the comment..... yaar do not thank me... dosti me no sorry..no thanku.... hotha hain...... & ur story is worth all the praise...samjhi... please continue soon.... me waiting fir the next part eagerly........love u....
17 years ago
sun_423 wrote: kimmy yaar the part simply rocked... i loved it totally from the bottom of my heart.. kasam se keh rahi hoon dear kya likha hain tumne.. that was a very damn superb job done... me totally fida on this story the word which suits your story the best is perfect... it was simply amazing..awesome...superb.. marvellous...splendid... mindblowing... mindblasting... .... jhakaas...bindaas..... super duper coolllllll......marvelous...... excellent.... fantastic.. ek dum dhassu........you are totally a rockstar & your story completely , absolutely rocks , it is very rocking..... it is very coolllllllllll.... i loved all the scenes between sujal & kashish.... yipee sujal , kashish mil gaye , all happy happy...... very wonderful......the scenes were shooo cute..sweett... the emotions were all sooo goodd... they were expressed so wonderfully... simply stupendous yaar.. you are just tooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd i loved the part.... it completely bowled me over... me totally dumb-struck after reading the part.... oh i totally loved the part & i love your story completely..... dear i think main tumhari jitni bhi tareef karoon kum hain.... so yeh talliyan tumhare liye.. ab please continue soon... Hey di thx soooo much love 2 read ure comments....im very happy that u commented muaaahhhhh
17 years ago
awsome so cute and adoreable love the characters and also the one who made them it shows ur ability
17 years ago
kimmy yaar the part simply rocked... i loved it totally from the bottom of my heart.. kasam se keh rahi hoon dear kya likha hain tumne.. that was a very damn superb job done... me totally fida on this story the word which suits your story the best is perfect... it was simply amazing..awesome...superb.. marvellous...splendid... mindblowing... mindblasting... .... jhakaas...bindaas..... super duper coolllllll......marvelous...... excellent.... fantastic.. ek dum dhassu........you are totally a rockstar & your story completely , absolutely rocks , it is very rocking..... it is very coolllllllllll.... i loved all the scenes between sujal & kashish.... yipee sujal , kashish mil gaye , all happy happy...... very wonderful......the scenes were shooo cute..sweett... the emotions were all sooo goodd... they were expressed so wonderfully... simply stupendous yaar.. you are just tooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd i loved the part.... it completely bowled me over... me totally dumb-struck after reading the part.... oh i totally loved the part & i love your story completely..... dear i think main tumhari jitni bhi tareef karoon kum hain.... so yeh talliyan tumhare liye.. ab please continue soon... sun_42339095.1394097222
17 years ago
jus gng gr8... ....waitng eagerly as wht will happen nxt...continue sooon....
17 years ago
hey ppl thx 4 commenting n honii just wait n watch wat happens nxt
17 years ago
wow komal tumhari ff awesome yaar it rocks great going me loved it tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooood i think kum kum is lieng to sujal maybe she wants him to propose thats why all that natak par u never know maybe vijay stuff is true waiting eagerly for the next part continue soon once again mindblowing,fantastic, superb ,amazing part
17 years ago