Chapter 11

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Kanchan

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I am thankful for all of you for commenting. Here's an extra long part, Enjoy!

Part 11:

After exact 15 min everybody where outside except Rdhima and Anjali.
Armaan: Are Champ, Why are these girls taking time?
Atul: Anjali must be dressing for me.
Armaan: Oye, So its this.
Atul: Leave it.

Ridhima and Anjlai come, both looking extremelly beautiful. Seeing them Atul and Armaan's jaw fell open. Anjali went near Atul and Ridhima towards Armaan.
Anjali: Atul, Close your mouth.
Atul: Ya, Doing it.
Ridhima: Armaan, If you keep your mouth open, A big bug will go in.
Armaan: Nah!
Rahul: Muskaan, You look beautiful.
Muskaan: You are telling this to me now.
Rahul: Sorry

Everyone walked and soon reached the gaon. It was decorated beautifully and it was MahaShivratri so there everyone where doing Aarti. The doctors walked inside the mandir and began singing with everyone. As the Aarti finished everyone sat on some chairs. There was a big open space, the sarpanch walked up to them and:
Sarpanch: Now can we all dance?
Shubhankar: Dance?
Sarpanch: Yes, Jagran.
Shubhankar: You all start. We'll join you.

The dance started, It was in pairs:
Shubhankar: Keerti?
Keerti: Let's dance Shubhankar.
Shubhankar: I was thinking of it.
Muskaan: Rahul, Can we dance?
Rahul: Of course.
Atul: Anjali, Will.. youdancewithme?
Anjali: What?
Atul: Will you dance with me?
Anjali: Come on Atul.
Sapna: Hey, Armaan Ridhima why don't you dance? I'm getting myself a partner.
Ridhima: I'm...
Armaan: Will you?
Ridhima: Only if you don't fall on me.
Armaan: I can't promise that.
Ridhima: Ok

Both went to dance, but their hearts thinking that only they are dancing. Everyone one by one sat down but Armaan and Ridhima continued as their hearts wanted them to continue. Both getting an unknown feeling while dancing. Both leaving aside everything and travelling to their world. Meanwhile:
Rahul: Are you'll sure they don't like eachother?
Sapna: No, you should see them at house.
Anjali: They are always running behind eachother.
Muskaan: But they say no? Opposites Atract.
Atul: Well, anythig can happen.

Armaan and Ridhima finished and came.
Armaan: What were you all talking?
Atul: We were talking about the bhagam bhag in the house.
Ridhima: Bhagam Bhag?
Anjali: You two, always running behind eachother.
Sapna: And playing silly pranks on each other.
Shubhankar: Ok guys, come on, we have to leave.

Everyone went walking, Armaan and Ridhima were a little behind as everyone left early. Suddenly:
Ridhima: Aaah!
Armaan: What happened?
Ridhima: My leg?
Armaan: The camp's there, Just a little more.
Ridhima: Armaan, I can't
Armaan: Get up
Ridhima: Armaan, It's hurting.
Armaan: Just a little more.
Ridhima: Armaan..
Armaan: What Armaan? Armaan's dead, Did you know that?
Ridhima: Stop joking and find a way.
Armaan: Get up a little. I'll carry you.
Ridhima: Will you able to carry me ?
Armaan: I'm not a man or what?
Ridhima: You are but..
Armaan: What but? Come on.
Ridhima: Ok

Armaan carried her and soon they were at the camp, Everyone got shocked and starting questioning them. On seeing this, Armaan responded what had happened and took Ridhima to her tent:
Armaan: There you go.
Ridhima: Thanks.
Armaan: I'm going, take care.
Ridhima: Do me a favour. Give me the novel from there.
Armaan: Alright, Love story?
Ridhima: I like reading them.

She opened her book on the last page she left it. But:
Ridhima: Armaan...Pls see this.
Armaan: You know I don't believe in love.
Ridhima: Just see what is written.
Armaan: Ok Baba

I need help from you and your.....
Help me and my ........

Ridhima: What is it?
Armaan: I think I need to go.
Ridhima: But..
Armaan: There's something I need to ask someone.

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Comments (11)


Will try to write long ones. Thanks!

16 years ago


Thanks! Will continue soon.

16 years ago

awesome part. wonder who is asking for help. please continue soon

16 years ago

hey nice prt yaar cant wit 2 reead more cont super soooooooooooooonnnnnnn n plzz thoda aur bada likhna luv ya n tak care mahru

16 years ago

awesome update ....... please jaldi continue karna please

16 years ago

hey kanchan finally u hv updatd wow yaar it ws amazng prt yaar too good AR dance nd atul bhagam bhag it ws sooo fnny nd he carried her 2 their tents nd evry11 shockd nd whts tht plzz cont soon nd finishd suspenses plz cont soon nd do pm me yachna

16 years ago

nice part pls continue soon

16 years ago

continu soon....and plzzzz pm me wen u do update luv ridz, .x.

16 years ago

OMG...anoder twist!! do cont. soon!! liked dis part...esp. da Bhagam Bhag reference!! Keep it up! Marisha

16 years ago

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww such a nice n special part,special becoz it had so much happenin.....................& d cliffhanger plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon it was wonderful

16 years ago

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