Chapter 98
Part-98
Ab ghar se burai gayi hai to khushiyaan to ghar ke aangan ko chumegi..........kehte hai ki ghar me khushiyon ka rehna bahot zaroori hai kyunki bina khushi ke to rehna bahot hi muskil hai.........aur yeh baat Garewal Mension ki deewaro se jyada kaun samaj sakta hai............aaj bhi ghar me dher sari khushiyaan aani baki hai................abhi to zindagi ka ek padav khatam hua hai aur dusara shuru.........ab dekhte hai ki aakhir Charu ki soch ne kaun sa surprize tai kiya hai......sab log ghar pahunchte hai jaha pe.................Prerna, Khushi, Neev, Prachi, Mihir aur Tulsi in sab ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai........
Prerna: Sujal kya hua.......woh teeno ko.........
Sujal: Mama.........hum case jeet gaye........in teeno ko unke kiye ki saza mil gayi..............unhe 18 saal jail ke bad fasi ki saza huyi hai.......
Prerna: tum sach keh rahe ho na........
Sujal: aapki kasam khata hoon............main bilkul sach keh raha hoon.........
Tulsi: upperwale ke ghar deir hai andher nahi............use to uske kiye ki saza milne hi thi jinhone hamare bacho ke saath.......
Prachi: haa mama.......aap thik keh rahi hai........ab Sujalbhaiyaa ki zindagi me sirf khushiyaan hi hogi.........
Kashish: khushi se muje yaad aaya...........Charu tu hum sab ko koi surprize denewali thi..........to ab bata na.......
Neev: kya aaj sham ko phir se dhamakedar party honewali hai...........
Charu: nahi.........isse bhi badi khushi ki baat hai........sunoge to khushi se uchal padoge..........
Akshat: ab tum bataogi tab hum sunenge na...........
Charu: tum na apne kan bandh kar lo......kyunki tumhare soch se bahar hai..........
Angad: muje lagta tha ki aaj tak sirf main aur Kripa hi ladte hai lekin yaha to humse bhi koi badh ke hai..........
Kashish: ab tum teeno ladna bandh karo aur saaf saaf batao.........
Charu:ab main jo kahungi woh aap mana nahi karenge.........pehle vaada kijjye.........
Kashish: achcha main aur Sujal tujse vaada karte hai ki tu jo chahegi wahi milega...........ab to bata...........
Charu: maine socha hai ki kyun na is khushi ke moke pe aap dono ki phir se Shaadi kar di jaye.............
Kashish: phir se shaadi........
Charu: haa jab aapki shaadi huyi thi tab nahi main thi nahi Akshat..........ab hum sab aapki shaadi ko dekhna chahte hai....................aapne vaada kiya hai aap piche nahi hat sakti..............
Sujal: thik hai..........main shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hoon..........
Kashish: main bhi..........
Prerna: wake me bahot hi achcha socha hai tumne charu..........
Anjali: ab tum sab khade kya ho...........jao jake kaam shuru karo kyunki aaj raat ko Kashish ki mehndi hai..............Mama.....aap Khushi ko dekhiye.........Kripa tum koi kaam nahi kar sakti is liye tum beth ke sare mehmano ko phone karke bataogi........Angad tumhari jimedari yeh hai ki tum sara decoration ka kaam karo...........Kavya aap catering ka kaam,.........aur Neev aur Akshat Sujal ke saath shopping pe jayenge.........aur Charu aur Prachi Kashish ke saath...............
Kavya: aur aap kya karegi.........
Anjali: main aur Tulsi aauntie ap sab pe nazar rakhenge ki aap sab thik se kaam kar rahe hai ki nahi..........
Angad: yeh achchi baat hai.......kaam hum kare aur tarif koi aur le jaye..........
Kashish: Angad.......tum apni bhabhi ke liye bhi itna nahi karoge.......
Angad: kya kaha........
Kashish: aaj se tum jab chahe muje Bhabhi bula sakte ho.........
Angad: sach.........waqt aane pe bataunga.......abhi main chalta hoon muje bahot kaam hai.......chalo Kavya.............
Sujal: chalo Kashish hum bhi Mall chalte hai........
Kripa: aap log saath nahi ja sakte.........aaj mehndi se pehle aap dono nahi mil sakte........
Kashish: lekin Kripa....
Anjali: aur tum charo ki jimedari hai ki yeh dono ek dusre se na mil paye.......samje.......
Charu: jee Bhabhi.........ab hum chale.........
sab log apne apne kaam pe nikal jate hai.........
Prerna: sab bacho ko ek saath khush dekh ke kitna achcha lagta hai............
Tulsi: bacho ki kilkari se to ghar sajta hai..................ab bhagwan kare is ghar me khushiyaan aati hi rahe.........
Mihir: ab aap log bhi kuch kaam kijiye...........main zara Kripa ki madad karta hoon..........
Ab sab log kaam karne chale jate hai.........
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Ab dekhte hai ki Mall me kya ho raha hai...........Sujal aur Kashish ek hi Shop me apne Shaadi ke liye kapde pasand kar rahe hote hai..........
Neev: Bhaiyaa............aap bar bar waha kyun dekh rahe hai.........aapke kapde yaha pe milenge........
Sujal: woh tu nahi samjega........
Akshat: sab samjte hai.........aap Bhabhi ko dhundh rahe ho na....
Sujal: jab pata hai to puchta kyun hai.........
Neev: sorry Bhaiyaa........aap Bhabhi se ab nahi mil sakte....ghar pe pata chala to sab ki bahot dant padegi...........
Akshat: aur isse achcha hai ki hum log shopping kare............
ab dekhte hai dusri aur kya ho raha hai...........Kashish bhi Sujal ko dekh rahi hoti hai.........
Charu: Bhabhi aapki nazar jise dhundh rahi hai use aap nahi mil sakti.........
Kashish: janti hoon lekin aadat se majbur hoon.......woh aaj ke pehle kabhi akele shopping nahi ki na........
Prachi: oye hoye........kya baat hai Bhabhi........lekin aapko to pata hoga ki Bhaiyaa ki pasand kya hai.........
Kashish: haa muje pata hai ki use kis tarah ka joda pasand hai.....use na woh wala joda bahot pasand aayega...........
Charu: Bhabhi aap kabhi do minute ke liye apne bare me soch sakti hai.........mera matlab apni pasand ka kuch lijiye........
Kashish: Charu.......ab jab yeh puri Kashish Sujal ki ho chuki to ab pasand napasand ka kya..........meri her pasand Sujal ki pasand ban chuki hai..........
Prachi: muje to abhi bhi yakeen nahi hota ki koi is tarah kisi se pyaar kar sakta hai.......
Charu: ab dekh liya na to yakeen bhi kar lo........
Prachi: waise Bhabhi aaj ki raat kaunsa dhamaka honewala hai........
Charu: dhamaka..........
Prachi: Bhabhi ki pichli mehndi ne to mere aur Neev ke beech zagda shuru kar diya tha...............
Charu: per kyun......
Prachi: kyunki us din Bhaiyaa ne apne haathoin se Bhabhi ko khana khilaya tha kyunki Bhabhi ke haath mehndiwale the...........aur hum sabko apne Pati se bahot sikayat thi.......
Charu: wow............kya aisa aaj bhi hoga......
Kashish: woh to tumhare bhaiyaa jane.........ab tum muje yeh dress do main try karke aati hoon..............
Charu: jaldi karna..........abhi jewellary bhi lene jana hai.........
kashish: main yun gayi aur yun aayi.........
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Kashish woh dress leke Trial room me jati hai.........aur woh apne dress ki dori kholne hi wali thi ki koi uske haath pakad leta hai...........Kashish use thapad marne hi wali thi ki......
Kashish: Sujal......tum............
Sujal; aise kya chikh rahi ho.....mera bhoot dekh liya..........
Kashish: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.........kisi ne dekh liya to............
Sujal: to kya haa.......meri biwi ho tum........aur muje meri biwi ke sath jo karna chahu woh kar sakta hoon..........
Kashish: lekin socho un charo ko pata chal gaya to ghar pe pata lag jayega.........jao na tum.......
Sujal: main yaha tumse milne chori chupke se aaya aur tum ho ki.......bhalai ka to koi zamana hi nahi raha.........
Kashish: waise aap karne kya aaye the........
Sujal: main to tumhari madad karne aaya tha............ab mujse behtar tumhe kaun jan sakta hai.........
Kashish: matlab.........
Sujal (whispers): tumhari dori bandhne aur kholne ka hakk to mera hai......
Kashish (hits him): Sujal.........tum bhi na.........
Sujal (holds her both hands): main bhi kya ........
Kashish: kuch nahi niklo ab yaha se...........
Sujal: ek shart pe...........pehle ek kiss.........
Kashish: nahi.........ab shaadi se pehle kuch nahi.........
Sujal: thik hai to main aaj raat ko sabke samne kahunga...........phir to tum mana nahi kar sakti...........
Kashish: nahi tum aise muje blackmail nahi kar sakte........
Sujal: jaan main to bahot kuch kar sakta hoon..........
Sujal Kashish ki aur aage badhta hai..........aur Kashish jake deewar se takra jati hai...........
kashish: kya kar rahe ho chodo........
Sujal: tumhe chodu..........ho hi nahi sakta..........ab to double zurmana dena hoga..........
Kashish: double......
Sujal: muje satane ke liye..........ab yeh tumpe hai ki tum kaha se shuru karna chahti ho..........
Kashish: thik hai pehle aankhein bandh karo.........
Sujal: tum to aise keh rahi ho ki hamari sach me shaadi honewali ho.........
Kashish: thik hai to main nahi deti........
Sujal; nahi deti kya haa............tum dogi aur zaroor dogi........aur yeh tumhare pati ka order hai............
Kashish: aankhein bandh karo.........
Sujal apni aakhein bandh karta hai............kashish first kissed his forehead, than to his eyes.......than to his cheeks.......
Kashish: ab ho gaya ab jao yaha se..........
Sujal: abhi to sirf jurmana hua hai....abhi asli saza to baki hai...........come on Kashish tum janti ho main kis ki baat kar raha hoon...........
kashish: uske bad tum paka yaha se jaoge.......
Sujal: pakka..........
Kashish: apni aankhin to bandh karo.........
Sujal apni aankhien bandh karta hai aur Kashish thought about giving a quick kiss but it turned out to be passionate..............jab bahar se knock ki aawaz aati hai.........
Kashish Sujal ko dhaka marti hai.......
Kashish; Sujal ab..........
Sujal: kuch nahi hum kya kuch galat kar rahe the...........pehle chal ke dekhe to zara.......
Kashish: Sujal.........woh.....
Sujal: haa......
Sujal Kashish ki dori phir se bandhta hai aur dono thik se apne kapde karke bahar aate hai...........
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Jab darwaza kholte hai to dekhte hi reh jate hai............
Sujal; aap charo........
Neev: yahi hume puchna chahiye ki aap dono.......woh bhi trial room me ek saath............
Charu: kya aap log do minute ke liye bhi alag nahi reh sakte...........
Kashish: woh Charu.......woh........
Prachi: waise andar ho kya raha tha..........aadha ghanta ho gaya..........hum log pagal ki tarah aap log ko dhundh rahe the aur aap hai ki..........
Sujal: kuch bhi to nahi.......tumhari Bhabhi ko meri zaroorat thi to.........
Akshat: Bhabhi ko zaroorat thi.......aap mens wear chod ke yaha ladies trial room me sirf Bhabhi ki madad karne aaye..........bahot achche ......lekin hum aapki baat pe yakeen nahi karnewale.........
Kashish: Akshat tum apni Bhabhi pe to yakeen kar sakte ho na.........
Akshat: Bhabhi aap pe yakeen hai lekin Bhaiyaa pe nahi.......kyunki jab bhi yeh aapke sath hote hai to sab kuch bhul jate hai...........
Neev: lagta hai is bare me ghar pe khabar karni padegi.........
Sujal: yaar ghar pe kuch mat kehna........aaj ke din bhi marwana hai kya...........
Akshat: woh to mama tai karegi............
Sujal; aap dono apne bade bhai ki baat nahi manenge............ple is bar maff kar do..........i promise agli bar aisa kuch nahi hoga.........
Charu: aur hua to.......
Kashish: Sujal ne kaha na kuch nahi hoga......aur uski jimedari main leti hoon..........
Prachi: pyaar ho to aisa.....ek ki galti ki saza dusra le..........
Sujal:ise hi to pyaar kehte hai.......
Neev: aapke pyaar mohabbat ke chakar me hume dair ho gayi to ghar pe bahot dat padegi aur yeh pata chala ki humne aap dono ki milne diya to pata nahi Anjalibhabhi kya hal karegi........is liye chaliye Bhaiyaa.........
Sujal: ek minute.........
Akshat: ab kya hai........
Sujal: tumhari Bhabhi se ab pura din nahi mil sakta to kuch personal baat karni hai...........
Prachi: personal...........
Sujal: samja kar........
Akshat: thik hai lekin sirf do min.......
Sujal: thik hai.........
Sujal Kashish ke pass jata hai.......
Sujal: to aak to pura din milna muskil hai is liye...keh dona.....
Kashish: kya......
Sujal: jo bhi.......
Kashish: Main tumse bahot bahot pyaar karti hoon...........I love u.......
Sujal:aise nahi......
Kashish: I love u Sujal.........ab jao......
Sujal: aur mera jawab to leti jao..........I love u too........
Sujal hugs Kashish...........
Charu: hmmmm........hmmmmm.........
Akshat: humne aapko baat karne ki izzat di aap to shuru hi ho gaye.......
Neev: kya zamana aa gaya hai..........kabhi garden me to kabhi trial room me.....kabhi kisi party me to kabhi khud ki shaadi me............aap log thakte nahi.........
Charu: yahi sikhna baki reh gaya hai apne bado se.......
Prachi: ab chale......dair ho rahi hai.........
Prachi aur Charu kashish ka haath pakad ke use wahase le jate hai...........
Sujal: haye.....yeh raat kab hogi...........
Neev: waqt aane pe........ab hum apni shopping pe dhyan de..........
Sujal: ek phone kar loon......
Akshat: nahi..........chaliye............
Akshat aur Neev Sujal ko leke chale jate hai............
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ab Waqt aata hai Mehndi ki Raat ka..........Sujal kab se sidiyon pe nazar bitake khada hota hai......jab waha pe sare ladke aate hai..........
Angad: lagta hai yaha kisi ka hal behal ho raha hai.........
Sujal: aur kitna waqt lagayegi......
Angad: woh to ladkiyaan hai aur bhai unhe to waqt lagta hai.....ab woh hamari tarah to nahi jo do min me taiyaar hoke aa jaye.........
Neev: aapne bilkul sahi kaha...........her bar Prachi ki waje se late ho jate hai aur puchne pe iljam sara mujpe dal deti hai...........ab yeh bhi koi baat huyi........
Akshat: haa yaar tu sahi keh raha hai..........agar humse ek min bhi dair ho gayi to marne ko daudti hai aur hum to kuch nahi kar sakte.........Sujalbhaiyaa ap kuch nahi kahenge.........
Sujal: ab kya kahoon........ab intzaar bhi itna haseen lagne laga hai ki..........
Kavya: kaun keh sakta hai ki yeh unki dusri bar shaadi ho rahi hai.......yaar kuch log bahot hi naseebdar hote hai ki.........jo ek hi janam me do bar shaadi ek hi insaan se.........
Angad: are yaar aisa mat keh.......muje nahi karni isi janam me dubara shaadi aur woh bhi Kripa se...........
Akshat: woh dekho Bhabhi aa gayi..........
Sujal sirf Kashish ko dekhta hi reh jata hai jaise pehli bar dekh raha ho............Kashish itni khubsurat lag rahi thi ki kya kahe........jab woh log unke pass aate hai........
Kripa; Sujal aise kya dekh rahe ho......kuch kaho bhi.......
Sujal: Kashish aaj tum bahot bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho.........
Kashish: tum bhi thik thak lag hi rahe ho.....
Sujal: thik thak...
Kashish: haa.......koi khaas nahi hai........
Sujal: Kashsih........
Kashish: achcha baba bahot achche lag rahe ho........
Charu: ab mehndi shuru kare.........
Sujal: mere bigar to shuru hi nahi ho sakti........
Prachi: haa bhaiyaa aap se aaj tak koi jeet saka hai.......chaliye...........
Sujal jake Kashish ki hatheli pe sabse pehle apna naam likh deta hai.........aur phir bahot hi dhamal masti hoti hai..........
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Ab sab log khana kha rahe hote hai jab Kashish akeli bethi hoti hai jaha Sujal apni dish leke aata hai........
Sujal: khana khaya......
Kashish: nahi.....
Sujal: bhukh lagi hai.....
Kashish: bahot.......
Sujal: mere haath se khaogi.......
Kashish: haa.......jaldi se khilao.........bahot bhukh lagi hai............
Sujal Kashish ko khana khilane lagta hai jab Kashish ke bal use pareshan kar rahe hote hai....Sujal use hatake use Kashish ke kan ke piche karta hai.........Sujal was about to kiss kashish's cheek....
Kripa: ahhmmmmm..........ahmmmm.......
Sujal: woh Kashish ki aankh me kuch chala gaya tha.........
Kripa: jaise main kuch janti hi nahi............
Kashish: sach me Kripa.......
Kripa: mujse jooth mat bolo.........
Charu: waise manna padega.........bhaiyaa bhabhi ka kitna khayal rakhte hai............aur ek yeh hai jise kabhi koi parwaah hi nahi........
Akshat: jaan parwaah uski ki jati hai jo uske layak ho.........tum to mere kehne se pehle hi khana kha leti ho............is liye tumhe khana khilane ki naubat hi nahi aati.........
Kashish: lekin pati ke haath se khana khane ke bad khane ka swad hi badal jata hai..........yeh sab sirf ek patni ka dil hi janta hai ki woh kab se is din ka intzaar karti hai........
Sujal: aur pati ko bhi khushi honi chahiye apni patni ko khana khilane me...........aur pati kaise kha sakta hai jab unki biwi ne kuch nahi khaya ho...........
Kripa: tum ab baatein bandh karo aur Kashish ko khana khilao........
Sujal: haa.....
Akshat: hum bhi chalte hai taki aap dono ko disturb karnewala koi na ho...........
sab log waha se chale jate hai..........Sujal kashish ko aise hi tang kar raha hota haia ur Kashish bhi use tang kar rahi hoti hai lekin aise me bhi dono ka pyaar chalak raha hota hai..........yeh dekh ke sab ki aankhin bhi khushi ke aanshu se bhar jati hai............aur aise hi sham khatam ho jati hai...........
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Ab raat ko Kashish apne kamre me janewali hoti hai jab Prerna,Anjali aur Angad aate hai..........
Anjali: sorry Kashish aaj tum apne kamre me nahi so sakti.........
Kashish: per kyun,,,,,,,,,
Prerna; kyunki shaadi se pehle tum aur Sujal ko alag alag rehna hoga.......
Sujal: lekin Kashish akeli kaha soyegi.....
Angad: tum iski fikar mat karo.....woh aaj mama ke saath soyegi....tum apni fikar karo tum akele kaise songe.......
Sujal: yeh thik nahi.........yeh hamari pehli shadi thode hi hai.........
Prerna: beta.........shaadi shaadi hoti hai ab rasam ko nibhana to padega..........
Kashish: nahi Mama aap jaiye........main kapde leke aati hoon......
Anjali: aana mat bhulna warna muje dubara bulane aana padega...........
Angad: Sujal........agar raat ko neend na aaye to guard keh raha tha bahar machchar bahot badh gaye hai use hi marte rehna aur subaah ho jayegi..........
Sujal: tuje main dekh lunga...........
Ab Sujal aur Kashish wapas andar aa jate hai.........
Sujal kashish ka haath pakad ke use apni aur karta hai...........
Sujal: jana zaroori hai........
Kashish: haa zaroori hai........ab mama ne kaha hai to jana hi hoga........Sujal sirf ek raat ki to baat hai......
Sujal: is liye to.........puri ek raat tumhare bigar.......Kashish ek raat me kya kya ho sakta hai...........
Kashish:Sujal........ab mama ki baat ko main nahi tal sakti.......... tumhe kab subaah hogi pata bhi nahi chalega..........
Sujal: lekin muje tumhare bigar neend nahi aayegi........
kashish: tum chalo mere saath...........
Kashish Sujal ko sulati hai aur uske forehead pe Good Night kiss karti hai...............
Kashish: I love you.....
Sujal: i love u too.........
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Ab Kashish Prerna ke kamre me aati hai..........
Prerna: Kashish.........
Kashish: jee mama..........
Prerna: kuch baat karni thi.........
Kashish: jee kahiye.....
Prerna: aaj mehndi ke waqt jo khushi maine Sujal ke chehre pe dekhi use main chahti hoon ki her waqt tum use banayi rakho.........
Kashish: main aapse vaada karti hoon ki ab yeh muskaan kabhi nahi jayegi...........aur mere aur Sujal ke ristey me sirf aur sirf khushiyaan hi hogi..........
Prerna: janti hoon........meri sabse achchi bahu jo hai tu..........ab chal soja .........subaah abhi bahot sara kaam hai........kal tumhari haldi hai phir Sangeet bhi..............
Kashish: Good Night Mama..........
Prerna: good night beta...........
ab Sujal aur Kashish dono ek dusre ke bare me sochne lagte hai............
Kashish: pata nahi is waqt Sujal ko mere bigar neend aayi hogi ki nahi..........pata nahi khidki bhi bandh ki hai ki nahi........kahi unhe sardi na lag jaye..........
Sujal: kya Kashish bhi is waqt so gayi hogi.......nahi woh bhi meri tarah nahi soyi hogi......use bhi mere bigar neend kaha aati hai........lekin kya woh is waqt mere bare me soch rahi hogi.......
Kashish: Sujal main tumhe bata nahi sakti ki main aaj kitni khush hoon...........kash main tumhare pass hoti to .......
Sujal: Kashish mujse ab raha nahi jata.......kab yeh subaah hogi aur kab main tumhe dekhunga.............
Prerna: Kashish...........beta light to off kar de......
kashish: jee mama.........
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Ab raat ke kareeban do baje huye hote hai.......kashish uth ke dheere se dekhti hai to Prerna gehri neend me so gayi hoti hai............Kashish dheere se bahar nikalti hai.........aur apne kamre ki aur jane lagti hai..........apne kamre me jake dheere se darwaza lock karti hai............aur bed pe jake so jati hai.........kashish dheere se apna sir Sujal ke kandhe pe rakhti hai.........
Sujal: aane me bahot dair kar dii.........
Kashish: woh Mama ko neend hi aaj nahi aati thi............lekin tum abhi tak kyun nahi soye........
Sujal: tumhara intzaar kar raha tha............
Kashish: tumhe yakeen tha ki main aaungi.........
Sujal: haa kyunki main janta tha ki agar main nahi so sakta to iska matlab meri kashish bhi abhi tak nahi soyi...........
Kashish: kya karoon tumhari baahoin ke bina muje neend kaha aati hai.........
Sujal: muje bhi tumhe dekhe bina neend nahi aati.........
kashish: aaj ka function kitna achcha raha naa....sab kitne khush the........
Sujal: haa..........aur tum bahot hi achchi lag rahi thi aur khaas karke tumhari mehndi.......
Kashish: pata hai aaj sab log mujse kitna jal rahe the.........sab kehte hai ki yaha pe sabse jyada pyaar koi karta hai to woh hai Kashish ka Sujal..........
Sujal: to yeh to achchi baat huyi na.......
Kashish: haa lekin jante ho aaj main kya soch rahi thi............kash main kabhi is mehndi ko apne haath se mitne hi na doon..........
Sujal: kyun.......
kashish: taki tum muje roz apne haatoin se khana khilao........
Sujal: waise idea bura nahi..........soch raha hoon tumhe aur bhi kaamo me meri madad ki zaroorat padegi.........jaise tumhare kapde........
Kashish: besharam.........ab so jao......
Sujal: main yaha tumhara intzaar sone ke liye nahi kar raha tha.........
Kashish: to phir kyun kar rahe the.......
Sujal: tum na kabhi kabhi muje lagta hai jan bujke anjaan banne ki koshish karti ho........koi baat nahi muje to yeh ada bhi pasand hai..........
Kashish: tum nahi sudhroge........
Sujal: jo sudhar gaya uska naam Sujal Garewal nahi........
kashish: tumhara naam to Sujal Garewal nahi Romeo Garewal hona chahiye........
Sujal: aur tum meri Mrs. Juliet Garewal......
Kashish: I love my romeo........
Sujal: i love my juliet too............
Ab aise hi Sujal aur Kashish ek dusre ki bahaoin me so jate hai duniya se anjaan............
Comments (14)
CONTINUE SOON I CANT WAIT YAAR OR JUS MAIL THE NBEXT PART TO ME THE LAST PART HAVE BEEN READ ABOUUT 4 TIMES CANT WAIT CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
16 years ago
really awesome story! love it!
16 years ago
wow!!!i was waiting for this part soooo long...aakhir mein all the bad guys are shown their correct place...good jobfinally...sk can have a peaceful life.....loved the court scene...hmmm...i wonder wat the surprise is whatever it is i just hope it is a pleasant one....good going....keep it up
16 years ago
kashish dear pehli baat i'am so sorry, main itne time se story par comment nahii karr paayi.. woh darasal hua yeh kii i got stuck in some work... lekin now me back with my comment... i hope tumko mere comments pasand aaye.. pehle tho woh 97th part.. 97th part padne ke baad tho mere khushi ka tikhana hii nahii raha.. aakhirkaar tushaar, swayam aur rishi apne sahii jagah pohanch gaye.. these three deserved to be there from a very long time.. jail tho bas unhi theeno ka intezaar karr rahii thi.. i'am seriously so happy kii court ne faisla sujal, kashish ke hakh mein sunaya.. lekin is sab mein mujhe dukh bhii bohat hua..aur mera dil is liye dhuka kyun kii swayam, tushaar aur rishi ko sazza dilane ke chakkar mein, sujal,kashish had to relive all the painful moments that they have undergone in the past.. sujal, kashish ka joh kal tha, woh baatein joh unhe dard, takleef ponchathi hai, they both had to face the same situation again, by revealing the fact in the court.. isse bada dard sujal, kashish ke liye aur kuch nahii hoga.. har baar sujal, kashish apne dukh se ubarthe hai, aur phir unke kal ka kachcha-chitta unke saamne aa khada ho jaatha hai.. aur yeh sab bas un theeno kii wajah se... mujhe sachchi us tushaar, rishi aur swayam par bohat ghussa aa raha hai.. ab bhi when i think about them mera tho khoon khol uttha hai.. aur tho aur main yeh bhi kahoongi kii joh sazaa un theeno ko apni ghaltiyon, apne gunaahon ke liye mili hai, woh ab bhi bohat kum hai... jis tarah se kashish se court mein sawaal kiye gaye.. i wish i could kill the villain party lawyer to.. uski itni himmat kii woh kashish se sawaal kare.. woh jaantha hii kya hai sujal, kashish ke zindagi ke baare mein... aur jis tarah ka jawaab kashish ne diya, uske liye bohat himmat kii zaroorat hothi hai.. aur kashish ko yeh himmat, mili hai tho bas sujal kii pyaar kii wajah se.. kashish yeh baat jaanthi hai kii jab thak sujal uske saath hai, uske saath kuch bhi bura nahii hoga... aur yahii pyaar kashish ko himmat de
16 years ago
mindblowing having sujal and kashish wedding again was a great idea the scenes between SK were amazing and very romantic. the trial scene room was really good.i liked the way u potray the love between sujal and kashish. also the last scene between the two was really good. cant wait 4 their wedding.
16 years ago
WOW marriage again.. itz gr8..... The trial room bit was very cute...... luved it.... Cant wait for the next part... PLzz continue asap.............
16 years ago
hey gr8 part.. cont.sooon
16 years ago
hey kashish wow wat a beautiful part................yaar ye dono thoda contro;l nahi kar sakte......aur ab maza aayega subhe.............
16 years ago
gr8 part kashish..!! vry cute.. plz cont. soon..
16 years ago
hey cool part just love this story but i really wish they get caught cont soon
16 years ago