Chapter 62

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Part-62

Kashish aur Akshat dono Dr. Shashank ki office me jate hai........

Dr. Shashank: aaiye.......bethiye.......muje aap log se bahot zaroori baat karni hai........

Akshat: kya baat hai...........bhaiyaa thik to hai........

Dr. Shashank: I am sorry to say.........per unki halat bahot kharab hai....yeh case ab bahot hi serious hai......aap yeh to samaj sakte hai ki woh kis halat se gujar rahe hai.......maine Mr. Garewal ki report dekhi........ab hamare pass subah se pehle operation karne ke alawa aur koi dusra ilaj nahi..........

Kashish: itni jaldi.......

Dr. Shashank: aap ho sake to us insaan ko bula dijiye jo bone marrow transfer karne ke liye taiyaar hai.......Lekin Mrs. Garewal......

Kashish: lekin kya........

Dr. Shashank: hum yeh operation to karne ko taiyaar hai lekin main aap ko yeh bharosha nahi dila sakta ki woh bilkul thik ho jayenge............shayad woh hamesha ke liye paralized ho jaye ya ho sake woh coma me chale jaye...........ya phir hum unhe hi kho de......

Kashish: aisa kuch nahi hoga..........muje apne pyar aur apne bhagwan pe pura barosha hai...........aap apna kaam kariye mera Bhagwan unka kaam karega..........

Dr. Shashank: aap us insaan ko jaldi se jaldi bula lijiye.....

Akshat: woh main hi hoon..........aur main iske liye taiyaar hoon.......

Kashish: lekin usse pehle muje kisi se baat karni hogi..........

Kashish yeh keh ke bahar chali jati hai.............

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Kashish Charu ko phone karti hai.......

Kashish: hello.....Charu...........main Kashish bol rahi hoon.......

Charu: haa bhabhi boliye......Akshat ghar pe nahi hai.........

Kashish: Charu.........Akshat mere saath hai.........kya tum is waqt Sanjeevani Hospital aa sakti ho.....

Charu: is waqt........aur hospital...........sab kuch thik to hai.......

Kashish: Sujal ki halat kharab hai..........aur mera tumse baat karna bahot hi zaroori hai.........tum jaldi se aa jao.....

Charu: thik hai main aati hoon..........

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Thodi dair ke bad Charu waha pe aati hai.......

Charu: Bhabhi aap ne muje bhulaya..........kya baat hai aur ab Sujalbhaiyaa ki tabiyat kaisi hai......

Kashish: unki halat bahot nazuk hai.......subah se pehle operation karna hoga...........Akshat ne faisla liya hai ki woh apna bone marrow Sujal ko dega ........lekin main usse pehle tumhari razamandi chahti hoon......kyunki kisi ko dukhi karke main apne pyaar ke saath khush nahi reh paungi..........lekin main apne pyaar ke bigar bhi nahi reh paungi..........ab faisla tumhare haath me hai........

Akshat: Charu........mera faisla ab badalnewala nahi hai.......

Charu: Akshat......tumne faisla kar hi liya to main kya keh sakti hoon...........lekin aaj muje samaj aa gaya ki apno ki madad karna hamara ferz hai.......aur main teen logo ki maut ki jimedar nahi banna chahti kyunki itna bada gunaah mujse nahi hoga..............muje is operation se koi sikayat nahi hai kyunki muje apne bhagwan pe barosha hai woh mere Suhaag ki raksha karega..........

Kashish: Charu.......main zindagi bhar tumhara yeh upkar nahi bhulungi...........main tumse vaada karti hoon ki tumhare Akshat ko kuch nahi hoga..........

Akshat: chaliye bhabhi........Dr. Shashank se kehte hai ki sab kuch taiyaar hai...........

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Kashish, Akshat dono Dr. Shashank se milne uski office me aate hai.......

Kashish: Dr. Shashank.............hamari aur se is operation ke liye Akshat taiyaar hai..........aap ple apni aur se taiyaariyaan shuru kar de........

Dr. Shashank: Sari taiyaariyaan to main shuru kar dunga lekin hum Mr. Garewal ka operation tabhi kar sakte hai jab woh hosh me aayenge..........unka is subah se pehle hosh me aana bahot zaroori hai.......

Akshat: to aap unhe hosh me laiyena.......

Dr. Shashnak: hum apni aur se puri koshish kar rahe hai ab aage upperwale ki marzi........

Kashish: Sujal ko hosh aaiyega aur yeh operation bhi hoga............

Kashish yeh kehke bahar chali jati hai .............

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Kashish bahar bench pe bethi ro rahi hai aur Charu aur Akshat use sambhal rahe hai........Jab Kashish ke phone pe Prerna ka phone aata hai.....

Prerna: hello............Kashish...........beta aap dono kaha hai.......main kab se tumhe phone try kar rahi hoon.......

Kashish zor se rone lagti hai.........

Prerna: Kashish tu ro kyun rahi ho aur Sujal kaha hai............woh thik to hai na......

Kashish: nahi mama...........Sujal ki halat kharab hai........Subah se pehle operation karna zaroori hai.............mama main kya karoon......

Prerna: tu phikar mat kar..........sab sahi hoga........Main aur Kavya aate hai...........

Kashish: ple mama aap jaldi aaiyega.....yaha Sanjivani me....

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Thodi dair baad Prerna aur Kavya Hospital pahunchte hai........

Kavya: Kashish..........Sujal kaisa hai.....

Kashish abhi bhi ro hi rahi hai........

Akshat: abhi hosh nahi aaya aur jab tak hosh nahi aata operation nahi ho sakta..........

Kavya: tum.....

Akshat: Main Akshat..........inka Bhai...........aur yeh meri wife Charu......

Prerna: kya tum...........mere bete ko....

Akshat: jee haa..........main taiyaar hoon.......

Prerna: Bhagwan tumhe sari khusiyaan de.........

Jab Nurse aati hai.........

Prerna: Nurse.........mera beta kaisa hai.....

Nurse: abhi uski condition kharab hoti ja rahi hai.........unhe hosh hi nahi aa raha .............unka hosh me aana bahot hi zaroori hai...........

Kashish bench se uthke jane lagti hai........

Charu: bhabhi aap kaha ja rahi hai.....

Prerna: use jane de.........pata hai woh kaha ja rahi hai.........

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Kashish chal ke raste me ja rahi hoti hai jab woh ek Mandir ko dekhti hai...........

Kashish: meri kasoor kya hai...........aaj tak aap ne kyun muje itni khushiyaan di...........jab mujse mera sab kuch aap ko chinna hi tha to kyun muje itne sapne dikhaiye...........mera kasoor itna hi hai ki maine aaj tak kisi ka bura nahi chaha.........maine sabse jyada aap pe barosha kiya aur aapne muje yeh saza di...........kyun kiya aapne..........Maa to apne bacho ke saath aisa to nahi karti to maine to aapko apni Maa ki tarah puja aur aapne mere saath hi...........lekin meri ek baat yaad rakhna ki agar Sujal ko kuch hua to main isi mandir me apna sir patak patak ke apni jaan de dungi..............aap yeh kyun nahi samjti ki meri jaan mere Sujal me basi huyi hai.........mujpe rehem kijiye.........main ab aur nahi seh sakti..........kitni agnipariksha tu ab legi...........main ab thak gayi hoon...........apne pyaar ki apni khushi ke liye ladte ladte..........main aapke aage apni zoli phelati hoon.........main aapse apne Sindoor ki bhikh mangti hoon...........lauta dijiye meri maang ka sindoor..........lauta dijiye..........

Kashish itna keh kar rone lagti hai jab uske cell pe Kavya ka phone aata hai.........

Kavya: Kashish........Sujal ko hosh aa gaya hai.........tum Jaldi se yaha pe aa jao........

Kashish: main abhi aati hoon........

Kashish phone rakh deti hai........

Kashish: Maa aap ka bahot bahot sukhriya..........aap ne meri baat man li........main janti thi ki aap apni beti ko rote huye nahi dekh sakte ........lekin abhi bhi yeh musibat khatam nahi huyi.........aap ko abhi bhi mere suhaag ki raksha karni hogi...........ek baar yeh opration ho jaye phir main aur Sujal khud aapke mandir aayenge aapka sukhriya karne ..............

Kashish diya jalake Hospital pahunchti hai.......

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Kashish Sujal ke room me jati hai........jab woh dekhti hai to Sujal ki aankhoin me se aanshu beh rahe hote hai...........Kashish aake Sujal ki pass bethti hai aur Sujal ka haath apne haath me leti hai........

Kashish (tears are running); kaise ho.......

Sujal looks at her sadly.......

Kashish; kuch nahi hoga tumhe..............kuch bhi nahi......thodi dair me operation ho jayega aur tum bilkul thik ho jaoge...........main hoon na tumhare saath..........tum bilkul ghabrana mat........

Sujal: Maut se darr nahi lagta........lekin tumhe chod ke nahi jana chahta...........

Kashish puts her hand on his mouth........

Kashish: kahi nahi jaoge tum..........kahi nahi tum ja sakte mere bigar..........muje chod ke tum nahi ja sakte........tumhe wapas aana hai..........meri zindagi me mera bankar........main tumhe kahi nahi jane dungi.......

Kashish yeh kehke Sujal ka haath pakad ke rone lagti hai..........

Sujal: rok lo na muje..........tum rokogi to main ruk jaunga.........yeh jung main akele nahi jeet sakta.........kuch nahi hai mere pass........kuch nahi kar paya main........maut ke samne haath phelake fakir ki tarah khada hoon........ab meri joli me kuch nahi........sivay maut ke.......kuch nahi hai mere pass......

Kashish: nahi Sujal............jin ke pass pyaar hota hai........woh kisi ke mohtaz nahi hote.........jinki zindagi me pyaar hota hai unke samne maut kya bhagwan bhi gutne tek deta hai...........aur tumhare pass pyaar hai........mera pyaar............bahot pyaar karti hoon main tumse........I love you Sujal..........

Sujal: I love you too Kashish..........bahot pyaar karta hoon main tumse..........

Kashish Sujal ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai.............Sujal Kashish ke forehead ko kiss karta hai............

Sujal: ab maut kya ab to main puri khudai se lad jaunga.............

Kashish Sujal ko aur zor se pakad ke rone lagti hai.............Jab nurse andar aati hai......

Nurse: hum yaha pe Mr. garewal ko operation ke liye le jane aaye hai..........

Sujal: main laut ke wapas aaunga..........main wapas aaunga tumhare liye..........

Kashish: main tumhara intzaar karungi.......

Kashish yeh kehke phir se rone lagti hai................

Sujal: ab tum nahi rogi.........Kashish vaada karo ki main jab tak wapas nahi aata tum nahi rogi........

Kashish: vaada karti hoon........

Sujal: ab muje ek pyari si muskan ke saath jane do..........

Kashish thodi si muskurane ki koshish karti hai..........

Sujal: jab tak main wapas nahi aata tab tak aise hi muskurati rehna..........

Kashish: yaad rakhna main tumhara intzaar kar rahi hoon........

Kashish kiss Sujal's forehead.........

Sujal: main jaldi hi wapas aaunga..........

Nurse takes Sujal to the operation theater................

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Nurse: Suniye..........aapko Dr. Shashank ne apne office me bulaya hai............

Kashish: kyun......

Nurse: kuch paper sign karne hai........

Kashish Dr. Shashank ke office me aati hai..........

Dr. Shashank: Mrs. Garewal hume aapke signature in papers pe chahiye........

Kashish: signature.........

Dr. Shashank: yeh papers pe sign karne ke bad......agar Mr. Garewal ko kuch bhi hua is operation me to hum ya yeh hospital uske jimedar nahi hoge.............

Kashish rone lagti hai.........jab Prerna aur Kavya aake use sambhale hai...........

Prerna: sign kar do beta........

Kavya: hamare pass aur koi rasta nahi.........ab hume doctor pe bharosha karne ke alawa koi chara nahi..........

Kashish: mama..........aaj yeh kagaz ka tukda mere Sindoor ki kimat tai karega...........Main yeh sign to kar dungi lekin main yeh nahi janti ki kal subaah tak mere Sindoor ka rang rahega ki nahi...........mama aaj se pehle kisi bhi patni ne apne pati ki zindagi ka sauda kisi kagaz pe nahi kiya hoga..........main kitni majboor hoon...............

Kavya: tumhe apne Bhagwan pe to yakeen hai na........

Kashish; muje upperwale se jyada apne pyaar pe yakeen hai.........muje yakeen hai ki mera Sujal muje kabhi chod ke nahi ja sakta.........main janti hoon ki aaj tak maine aur mere bache ne kabhi kisi ka bura nahi chaha to upperwala bhi hamare saath insaaf karega......hume hamara Sujal lautake.............Muje apne Sindoor aur apne Mangalsutra pe pura yakeen hai...........ki mera pyaar jeetega........

Kashish papers sign kar deti hai..........

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Akshat room me operation ke liye taiyaar ho raha tha jab Charu waha pe aati hai...........

Charu: Akshat.........muje bahot darr lag raha hai........tum wapas aaogena .............

Akshat: Charu.......agar muje kuch bhi ho jaye to tum Kashishbhabhi ke saath chele jana...........main agar kisi ke bare me soch sakta hoon to ek woh hai jispe muje bahrosha hai ki woh tumhe sambhalegi.......tumhara khayal rakhegi..........

Charu: aisa mat kaho..............tum kahi nahi jaoge kyunki main tumhe kahi nahi jane dungi.........mera khayal koi rakh sakta hai to woh sirf tum ho........samje tum.........tum wapas aa rahe ho mere liye.........

Nurse: chaliye..........sari taiyariyaan ho gayi hai.............

Akshat: i love you charu.......

Charu: i love you too........main tumhara intzaar kar rahi hoon..........

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Dono ko operation theater me le jate hai aur operation shuru hota hai..........yaha bahar Kashish aur Charu dono hi pareshan ho rahi hai............

Prerna dono ko sambhalne ki koshish karti hai lekin dono ki aankhoin me se aanshu rukne ka naam hi nahi lete..........Kareeban char ghante baad Dr. Shashank bahar aate hai...........

Kashish: doctor...........Sujal kaisa hai.....

Charu: aur Akshat........

Dr. Shashank: Dono hi thik hai..............operation kamyab hua...........thodi hi dair me dono ko hosh aa jayega............

Kashish: thank you doctor.........

Dr. Shashank: yeh sab aap ke pyaar aur vishwas ka fal hai............main thodi dair baad aake dekhta hoon.......

Kashish: Charu tumne suna..........dono thik hai........

Charu: haa Bhabhi...........Akshat aur Sujalbhaiyaa dono thik hai..............aur yeh sab aapki bhakti aur shraddha ka parinam hai jo aapko upperwale pe hai...............

Kashish: main aap logo ko bata nahi sakti ki main kitni khush hoon............Mama maine aap se kaha tha na ki main aapke Sujal ko thik karke laungi...........ab hum wapas ghar aayege..........maine apna vaada pura kar diya........

Prerna: haa beta...........tum aur tumhara pyaar jeet gaya..............

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Thodi dair ke baad Nurse aati hai aur batati hai ki Akshat ko hosh aa gaya hai............

Kashish: main Sujal se pehle us insaan se milke uska sukhriya karna chahti hoon jisne muje meri khushiyaan lautaee hai.,,,,,,,,,,,

Kashish, Prerna, Charu aur Kavya sab log Akshat ke kamre me aate hai.........

Charu: kaise ho.......

Akshat: thik hoon.......tumse kaha tha na ki main wapas aaunga.........Sujalbhaiyaa kaise hai.......

Charu: abhi unhe hosh nahi aaya lekin woh thik hai.......

Akshat: Bhabhi...........maine apna ferz nibha diya..........Ab to aap muje aapko Bhabhi bulane ka hakk de sakti hai na........

Kashish: Haa Akshat ab tum muje Bhabhi bula sakte ho............Akshat ab main puri zindagi bhar tumhari karzdar ho gayi...........main jitna tumhara sukhriya karoo utna kam hai............tumne muje mera pyaar lautaya hai............

Akshat: maine sirf apna kartvya nibhaya hai...........

Prerna: Kashish.............yeh bhi bilkul hamare Sujal ki tarah baatein karta hai.........Beta........tumhara bahot bahot sukhriya.........tumne hume hamara Sujal lauta diya...........

Akshat: ple aap muje sharminda kar rahi hai........

Prerna: Kashish.........jab Akshat thik ho jaye to Akshat aur Charu dono hamare saath Delhi rehne ke liye chalenge...........

Akshat: Nahi yeh mujse nahi hoga.......

Prerna: agar tumhara Bhai tumse yeh kehta to tum mana karte......

Akshat: thik hai main taiyaar hoon.............

Prerna: Bhagwan ne muje apni aaulad nahi di lekin yeh dekho aaj mere pass char char bete hai.........maine aaj yeh faisl le liya hai ki ab se mere charo bete mere saath rahenge..............Sujal, Angad, Akshat aur Kavya tum bhi.......

Kavya: hum kaise aa sakte hai........yaha ka business......

Prerna: kavya yahi meri aakhri khawaish hai.......kya tum ise pura nahi karoge..........

Kavya: aapko main kaise mana kar sakta hoon...........hum log jaldi hi Delhi shift ho jayenge...........

Nurse: Suniye....... Mrs. Garewal aap ko jaldi se Mr. Garewal ke kamre me bhulaya hai...........

Kashish: kya hua.........

Nurse: chaliye to sahi...........

Kashish aur sab log Sujal ke kamre me jate hai...........Akshat ko chod ke........

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Kashish: Dr. Shashank.......kya baat hai sab kuch thik to hai..........

Dr. Shashank: I am sorry Mrs. Garewal...........humne apni aur se puri koshish ki...........lekin hum aapke pati ko nahi bacha paye.......

Kashish (screams): nahi......yeh nahi ho sakta.......nahi ho sakta maine kaha na.........

Nurse covers Sujal's face with a white sheet.......Sab log ke pair ke neeche se zameen nikal jati hai.........Kashish pagal ho jati hai aur jake safed chadar ko hata deti hai.........

Kashish (roti huyi): hataiye is chadar ko..............durr jaiye yaha se.......chuna mat mere Sujal ko..........suna tumne..........

Kashish (holds his face):tum bilkul thik ho......... utho.......maine kaha na utho Sujal..........

Charu comes and holds her.......

Charu: Bhabhi sambhalo apne aap ko........

Kashish: durr raho charu............

Kashish Charu ko dhaka marke dur kar deti hai........

Kashish (shaking his body): suno........aankhein kholo.........ankhein kholo Sujal.......Suno aankhein kholo...........aankhein kholo naa sujal........

Prerna: Kashish.......beta............hosh me aao.........

Kashish: suniye.........meri baat...........tumne mujse saath jine marne ka vaada kiya tha...........tum aise vaade todke nahi ja sakte.........tum apna vaada nahi tod sakte........utho tum..............utho na......Sujal utho.......aap ko woh saat phere ki kasam...........utho Sujal.........muje chod ke tum nahi ja sakte........utho Sujal........tumhari Kashish tumse keh rahi hai...........

Kashish hugs him so tight.........

Kashish: Utho sujal.........tumne kaha tha ki main tumhara intzaar karoon..........dekho Sujal ab tum apni baat se phir rahe ho.........utho na Sujal.......

Kavya: Kashish...........Sujal ab kabhi nahi uthega..........

Kashish: apni bakwass bandh karo............yeh abhi aankhein kholega.........yeh muje chod ke kahi nahi ja sakta..........main janti hoon...........mere pati mujse kiye huye woh saat kasme nahi tod sakte.........aap sab log durr rahiye humse..........suno......yeh sab se keh do ki tum apni Kashish ko chod ke nahi ja sakte.......aankhein kholo...........bata do in sab ko ki tum sirf so rahe ho............main tumse keh rahi hoon.......tumhari Kashish tumse kuch keh rahi hai..........meri baat mante kyun nahi tum...........aankhein kholo.........

Kashish hugs him again and cried loudly..........

Kashish: utho..........hum dono aapke bina nahi jee sake.............utho Sujal...........utho...........maine kaha aankhein kholo..............Sujal..........

Sujal whispers in her ear...."KASHISH"...........

Kashish seperets him and

Kashish: Sujal........

Sujal: Kashish...........

Sab log ko apne kan per vishwas nahi ho raha tha........

Dr. Shashank: aap ple sab log bahar jaiye...........hume patient ko dekhna hai...........nurse oxygen shuru karo.........jaldi.........

sab log bahar chele jate hai..... Dr. Shashank aur nurse..........oxygen aur IVs suru karte hai...........aur woh log Sujal ki heartbeat ko observe karte hai.......thodi dair bad Dr. Shashank bahar aate hai..........

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Dr. Shashank: Savitri ka kissa aaj tak suna tha......magar aaj dekh bhi liya........20 saal se main is proffesional me hoon......magar aisa karishma maine aaj tak nahi dekha.........aapki aastha aapke pati ko maut se bacha ke layi hai.........Yeh ab bilkul thik hai.........yeh abhi puri tarah se hosh me nahi aaye lekin ab ghabarane ki koi baat nahi......lekin aap ko iska bahot khayal rakhna hoga.......yeh abhi bahot hi kamzor hai...bahot hi dhayan rakhna hoga aap ko Mrs. Garewal.........

Kashish: Aap uski phikar mat kijiye......main rakhungi Sujal ka pura khayal..........ab main inhe kabhi apne se durr nahi jane dungi........

Dr. Shashank: abhi jo maine dekha hai usse muje aap ki baat pe pura yakeen hai........muje vishwas hai ki aap unka bahot hi achchi tarah se khayal rakhegi ........kyunki jo Aurat apne pati ki zindagi Bhagwan ke ghar se la sakti hai woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai..........aap apna aur apne pati ka khayal rakhiyega.........aap ne Mr. Garewal ko phir se yeh zindagi di hai.........yahi samjo ki ab yeh sirf aapki udhar ki dii huyi zindagi jee rahe hai...........ab bura waqt chala gaya hai...........ab koi bhi musibat nahi aa sakti.........abhi kuch dino ke liye hume inko yaha pe rakhna hoga.......

Kashish: main aap ki baat samaj sakti hoon..........lekin main janti hoon ki Sujal ko hospital me rehna zara bhi pasand nahi........woh yaha pe nahi rukenge.......jaise hi woh ghar jane ki halat me ho jaye..........main unhe ghar lejana chahti hoon.........main uski jimedari leti hoon............

Dr. Shashank: thik hai..........jaisa aap chahti hai waisa hi hoga.........

Kashish:Thank you Doctor........kya main ek bar Sujal se mil sakti hoon........ple doctor....

Dr. Shashank: aap bilkul mil sakti hai lekin sirf aap hi..........

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Kashish room me jati hai jaha pe Sujal soya hua hota hai...........

Kashish: Sujal.........main janti hoon ki tum muje sun rahe ho..........muje yakeen tha ki tum apni Kashish ko dukhi nahi dekh sakte.........Sujal ek bar aankhein khol ke mera naam lo na.........Sujal.......tum jante ho kuch hi din baad karwa chauth hai aur yeh mera pehla karwa chauth hai............Sujal tumhe thik hona hoga kyunki main chahti hoon ki tum khud mera yeh vrat pura karo..........Karoge na Sujal........Sujal kitni dair ho gayi tumne mujse baat nahi ki.........Sujal..........ek baar apni Kashish ke sir pe haath rakhke kahona ki tum mujse pyaar karte ho..........Sujal........kaho na.......

Kashish yeh kehke Sujal ke side pe sir rakh ke rone lagti hai jab Sujal Kashish ke sir pe haath rakhta hai..............

Sujal: Kashish.........

Kashish: Sujal tum thik ho gaye..........main janti thi ki tum thik ho jaoge...........tumne apna vaada pura kar diya..........

Sujal: Kashish........Akshat...........

Kashish: woh bilkul thik hai.........woh tumse jaldi hi milne aayega.........lekin tumhe apna khayal rakhna hoga.........

Sujal: I am sorry.........kashish........maine tumhe bahot rulaya.........

Kashish: nahi Sujal main sab baatein bhool jana chahti hoon..........mere liye tum thik ho wahi kafi hai..............i love you Sujal............

Sujal: i love you too........

Kashish kiss Sujal's forehead and hugs him so tight...................

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wonderfull part kashish !!!!!!!!!!!!..........i'm speechless after reading this part .......the way u proprait every character is amaizing !!!.......i'm soo happy that sujal is finally out of danger ! akshat prove that he can do anything for his brother life !!!!!!!!!................so now everyone is going to live in Mumbai as prena wish ! .........but kashish did prove that miracles are possible, but more than that you have to believe in what you want !!!........................love this part yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!........can't wait to read the further parts !!!!!!!...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

16 years ago

dat was such a sweet part...cont soon cant wait to c wat hapns next

16 years ago

pls cont just cant wait for the next part

16 years ago


kashish dear superb,marvelous,excellent,brilliant,just too good..simply mast...zabardast....yaayy..me soo khush.. sujal theek ho gaya..it is party time..yaahoo.... yippeee.....me really very damn happy.....balle..ballee... keep up the good work going........ do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... sun_42339504.2462152778

16 years ago

hey kashish i am really sorry i was busy in my studies and tests so that's why i am replying so late. iss story paar comment karr rahi hu magar baki do paar weekend pe zarur comment karugi.i am really sorry again . any ways. kya kahu main yaar . this part i guess was the best one ever . i mean you are just a fantastic writer . the way you have potrayed kashish's emotions are amazingggg and i can't describe them, they are that good . you know jaab kashish ko pata chalta hai ki sujal is no more and all, aur jiss tarah tumne woh scene likha hai with pics and all . i got really emotional aur mere ankh bhar aaye reading that part . jitni tarif karu utni kaam hogi kashish . but i am glad ki sujal sahi salamat hai, kashish ko apna pati aur aik bache ko uska baap sahi salamat mill gaya . thanks for recovering sujal from cancer . the part was excellent, wonderful and exceptional from others .the part was great !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......can't wait any lonegr.bye.takecare.

16 years ago

very nice part yaar!loved it.....sujal is alive and kash made him alive....i hope now nothing come b/w both sujal and kash

16 years ago

awesome dashing part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank god sujal tek hoga con't soon

16 years ago

gr8 parts dear... ..me so glad...sujal is all well now...cont soon..

16 years ago

nice........way to go.....hey pls cont soon i luv ur ff so much its one of my favs....i luv rajeev so much....when i saw his pic in the hosp i cryed so much ........anywayz cont soon and keep up the good work

16 years ago

great sujal theek ho gaya. awesome part.

16 years ago

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