Chapter 26

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Kashish tali bajati huyi andar aati hai..........

Kashish: wah Archie wah.........kisi ki zindagi ka tamsha karna koi tumse sikhe...........

Archie: main yaha pe koi tamasha nahi kar rahi..........sab ko sach bata rahi hoon........tumhara asli chehra.............

Kashish: tumne apni aur se sach bata diya ab main baki ka sach batati hoon.........yeh tasvir joothi nahi hai..........yeh sach hai ki main Sagar se pyaar karti hoon..........lekin aap logo ne yeh jaane ki Koshish ki ke Sagar kaun hai.........

Archie: Ab itna bataya hai to yeh sach bhi tum hi bata do ki kya rishta hai tumhara Sagar ke saath.......

Kashish: jaisa tumhara rishta hai Piyush ke saath..........Sagar aur Vidya bachpan se mere saath pale bade huye hai..................Woh log muje Badi Dii kehte hai.......Maine aur Sameer ne milke Sagar aur Vidya ki shaadi karayi hai............Sagar aur Vidya dono shaadisuda hai..........Maine un dono ko apne bacho ki tarah chaha hai...........inhe behat pyaar diya hai to kya galat kiya hai...........

Archie: Kashish kitnaa jooth tum aasani se bol leti ho..............Joothi kahani banana koi tumse shikhe...........

Kashish: aur ristoin me kaise darar karna koi tumse shikhe.........

Archie: Sujal ke saath shaadi karne ke baad bhi tumne Kabhi Sujal aur Sujal ke pyaar ke saath wafai nahi ki.........kitni afsoos ki baat hai...........

Kashish: Sach kaha tumne.............Ek premika apne premi se bewafa ho sakti hai..................ek Patni apne Pati se bewafai kar sakti hai.........yaha tak Ek aurat khud se bewafa ho sakti hai lekin ek Maa kabhi apne bache se bewafai nahi kar sakti............

Sujal: Kashish.........

Kashish: Haa Sujal..............meri anadar hamare pyaar ki nishani janam le rahi hai..........

Sujal: sach.........lekin yeh sab kab..........

Kashish; muje kal raat ko hi pata chala ki main preganant hoon................

Sujal: Archie.......aur bhi kuch kehna chahti ho............

Kashish: Archie........maine kitni bar tumse kaha ki tum muje aur Sujal ko alag nahi kar sakti..........ab to dekho.....muje aur Sujal ko jodnewali yeh kadi janam le rahi hai...................muje laga tha ki shayad ek aurat ka dard hi dusri aurat samaj sakti hai...........lekin main yeh bhool gayi ki ek aurat hi hoti hai jo dusri aurat ka ghar todti hai..........Archie.....tumne jab jab hume dur karna chah hum dono pass aate gaye...........ab to tum samaj jao ki main aur Sujal sirf ek dusre ke liye bane hai...............main tumhe sirf itna hi kehna chahti hoon ki tum bahot hi samajdar ho aur samajdar logo ke liye ek ishara hi kafi hota hai...............

Kashish yeh kehke apne kamre me chali jati hai aur Sujal bhi Kashish ke piche chala jata hai..............Archie aur Piyush bhi apna saman leke neeche aate hai...........

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Veena: Archie aaj jo tumne kiya uske liye main tumhe kabhi maff nahi kar sakti............

Archie: janti hoon..........is liye to yaha se hum log ja rahe hai..........kyunki ab kabhi bhi aapse ya Sujal se nazare uthake hum baat nahi kar sakenge............lekin ho sake to hume maaf kar dijiyega..........

Veena: Jis din Kashish tumhe maff kar degi us din hum sab tumhe maff kar denge..................lekin is waqt main tumhe rok nahi sakti..........

Piyush aur Archie dono ghar chod ke wapas apne ghar chale jate hai.........

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Kashish khidki ke pass khadi bahar dekh rahi hoti hai jab Sujal uske pass aata hai...........

Sujal: Kashish..........i am sorry..........ple ho sake to muje maff kar dena..........

Kashish: isme tumhari koi galti nahi...........tumhare samne halat hi aise banaye gaye............

Sujal: Kashish........tumne itni badi baat mujse chipayi........

Kashish: main tumhe surprize dena chahti thi..............

Sujal: wake me tumne muje meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi di hai...........main bahot khush hoon..........aur yeh sab tumhari waje se...........thank you Kashish..........

Kashish: sukhriya to muje tumhara karna chahiye...............tum jo meri zindagi me aaye aur meri zindagi ko itni khubsurat banane ke liye.......

Sujal: Ab dekhna Kashish hamari zindagi me sirf aur sirf khushiyaan hogi..............main is bache ko itni khushi dunga ki uske aaspass kabhi dukh aur dard use chu bhi nahi sakenge....................

Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai.........

Kashish: I love you Sujal..............

Sujal: i love you too Kashish..........

Sujal kiss Kashish's forehead..........

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AFTER 9 MONTHS.........

raat ke kareeban do baje the.........

Kashish: Sujal utho........utho.......

Sujal: Kashish...........kya hai..........raat kafi hai so jao.........

Kashish: Sujal......hume isi waqt hospital jana hoga............chalo isi waqt........

Sujal: kya..........iska matlab......

Kashish: haa......Sujal meri delivary ka waqt aa gaya hai tum Anjali ko phone karo..........aur use kaho jaldi se Hospital pahunche........unhe yeh kehna ki mera labor pain shuu ho gaya hai....................Sujal jaldi karo...........

Sujal jaldi jaldi me Anjali ko phone karta hai.........

Sujal: hello.......Anjali.........

Anjali: itni raat ko phone kiya........Kashish ki tabiyat thik to hai...........

Sujal: Kashish ko main abhi isi waqt Hospital leke ja raha hoon.......tum jaldi se aa jana..........

Anjali: main abhi aati hoon........

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Sujal aur Veena kashish ko leke hospital phunchte hai.........jaha pe thodi dair bad Kavya aur Anjali aate hai...........

Anjali: Sujal.........tum bilkul pareshan mat ho..........ab main aa gayi hoon............sab kuch thik hoga.........

Sujal: janta hoon ..........

Anjali Kashish ke room me jake use dekhti hai.............waha bahar Kavya Akshat aur Charu ko phone karta hai..............Thodi dair me woh sab log bhi aa jate hai............

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After 2 hours.......

Anjali bahar aati hai.........

Anjali: bahot bahot mubarak ho........ladki huyi hai.......

Sujal: sach.........kya main Kashish se mil sakta hoon.........

Anjali: kyun nahi.......

Sujal kashish ke pass aata hai ..........kashish ke haath me ek nanhi si pari hoti hai..........Sujal kiss Kashish's forehead.......

Sujal: thank you Kashish..........aaj tumne mera parivar pura kar diya..........

Kashish: Sujal apni beti ko apne haath me nahi loge.........

Sujal takes a baby in his hands and kiss her on her forehead.........

Sujal: Kashish........yeh to bilkul tumhare jaisi hai..........wahi aankhein..........wahi hoth.........wahi muskaan...........

Veena: Ab tum dono hi baatein karte rahoge ki hamari bhi bari aayegi.............la muje de...........main bhi to dekhoon apni pauti ko.........

Charu: Iska naam kya socha aapne............

Kashish: iska naam "Saakshi" hoga..........kyunki yeh mere aur Sujal ke pyaar ka gawah hai........

Sujal; Saakshi..........Saakshi Sujal Garewal......welcome to Garewal family..........

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Aise hi haste khelte Sujal aur Kashish ki duniya chalti rahi...........Saakshi ke teen saal baad Kashish ne ek bete ko janam diya............jiska naam Laksh hai...........aaj kal pure ghar me Saakshi aur Laksh ki shor gunjati rehti hai.........jaise jaise din bitte gaye Kashish aur Sujal ka pyaar gehra banta gaya................aaj sirf hai to un dono ke beeche beimtihaan Mohabbat.............

"THE END"

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Comments (13)

kashish your story was really good.

15 years ago

da story was gr8 n da endin was perfect n sweet

15 years ago

nice di very nice me lyk da happy happy parts da best n u r da best di so keep rockin

15 years ago

omg...tht was the bestest end tht coulve happened......ure a really very nice writer......seriously......ive read ur other ffs too.......

16 years ago

i would love to thanks my friends who have always supported me in my fan fictions........i really appriciate their support and love......i wish to have their love and support in other 4 fan fictions.....i didnt want to drag the story so i just made it shore but memorable........i hope you all enjoy it......thanks one again for everything and special thanks for comments......... love kashish

16 years ago

i am extremely sorry kashish that i didn't comment from so long. i think you know the reason for it. anyways......hey the story is finished ohhh myy godd....itne jaldi khatam ho gayi .but that was a fantastic ending . i knew it ki kashish kabhi archie ka plan kamyab hone hi nahi degi .gosh......that was sooo awesome when kashish enters while clapping her hands . wonderful twist . mujhe laga ki abb sujal kashish duur hojayege and then rona dhone but this was completely opposite and i seriously loved it . believe it or not it was a short, sweet and memorable fanfic .awww....archie and piyush itne sharafat se ghar se nikal bhi gaye . can't believe it . chalo kaam se ismein toh akal aayi ki khud hi nikal gaye warna woh hai na ki "laato ke bhoot baton se nahi mante" . yeh dono waise hi hai .yessss.....sujal aur kashish ko beti hogayi sooooo sweet.....very nice . now it's a perfect family .the part was great !!! i really enjoyed reading this story, totally differnt from other ones and really authentic bye.takecare.

16 years ago


a very nice ending..just too good..i completely loved it... you have written it very very very damn well...just amazing..awesome...superb...too gooddd....very cooll.... i can't say continue soon now.. all i can say is i'll miss your this fanfic... but anyway a beautiful way to end the story.... sun_42339515.3978819444

16 years ago

very well done yaar, loved the entire story, u have really potraiyed the emotions very well.

16 years ago

awesome part and grt ending lekin buhat jaldi ending kar di anyways SUPERB STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

16 years ago

hey yaar sorry 4 not commenting n congratulation on the end it was a nice story loved it sachh keep writting

16 years ago

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