Chapter 6

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Sharmin

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dil tere naam kardiya

 

part 5

 

5 years later

 

in these 5 years angad and kripa have made tons of money so much that it can last them the whole lifetime,they've recently taken a break from acting,the reason for them both is that thye have come to that stage in life where they both require a life partner but not cuz they want to but it will also make there parents hapy,there parents have chosen sum1 for both of them,in 5 years kripa hardly saw angad apart from the awards but when they do see eachother thye try there best to stay out of eachothers way,today was a loveley day and kripa had just woken up,she got a shower and got changed in to this:

 

 

the reason for wearing asian clothes was because she is heading to see her mom in missourie, but before heading to the airport she went to see Rishi and shazmin who r now happily married,she knocks on the door,shazmin opens it

 

shaz-kripa hey come on in

 

kripa-I cant just came to say bye

 

shaz-ur going today u were supposed to be going next week

 

kripa-no mom wanted me there early

 

shaz-u sure u wanna go ahead with arranged marriage

 

kripa-yeah and im not ever going to change my mind so where Rishi

 

Rishi cums

 

Rishi-hey kripa how r u

 

kripa-f9 u

 

kripa tells Rishi and Rishi tries his best to make her change her descion but stubborn kripa didn't

 

shaz-so I suppose the next time ill see u ull be married

 

kripa-I suppose so anyways see you

 

she hugs them both and leaves,she wanted to reach an hur early or the flight just incase she gets l8 and she didn't want to take any chances,she reserved her car which looked like this:

 

 

she drove off passing a black sports car like this:

 

 

the red sports car stops at shaz and rishis house,out of the car comes out angad wearing this:

 

 

he knock on there house shaz opens it and lets him in,he went inside chatted to shaz and Rishi 4 a while

 

Rishi-dude u sure u want an arranged marriage

 

angad-yep

 

shaz-man u and kripa r mad

 

angad-kripa?

 

rihsi-she came jut b4 u came

 

angad-wat 4

 

Rishi-wells hes my best mate and shes also getting an ar………….(bell rang)

 

while Rishi attends the door angad notices the time sayin 11.05,he had 20mmins to reach the airport

 

angad-shit I haft to go my flight

 

shaz-lekin

 

angad-sos shaz cant chat gota go

 

hugs shaz and Rishi and goes

 

Rishi-do u think theyre going to meet

 

shaz-hmm I think

 

Rishi-wat

 

shaz-I think

 

Rishi-kya

 

shaz-theyre gonna meet

 

Rishi-yeah??

 

shaz-totally

 

angad reached the airport to see a back of the girl,the girl was shouting he didn't know why the girls voice sounded familiar

 

kripa-wat da hell do u mean,al flights to missourie are cancelled,wat bout trains

 

airportdesk-sorry mam

 

kripa-shit

 

angad who overheard the conversation

 

angad-so theres no flights

 

kripa turns and is shocked to see angad

 

kripa-angad

 

angad-kripa tum

 

they go outside in silence until kripa breaks it

 

kripa-tum yaha kya kare ho

 

angad-kyon nahin asakta kya yeh jagga mein sirf tum allowed ho kya

 

kripa-u I asked u one question an du uff I dun understand u at all

 

angad-good 4 u babe

 

kripa-what did u just call me,u no wat mr angad khannah I recommend u keep ur mouth shut and DO NOT CALL EM BABE AGAIN

 

angad-why wat do u prefer behenjee

 

kripa-u u u Bandar

 

angad-god u ahvent changed

 

kripa-nor have u

 

angad-now move I need to drive to blimin missourie now

 

the press see them and suddenly start crowdin them,kripa using the advantage of her height does the best thing and ducks down and goes in to the nearby taxi angad was kindve stuck and aw the tai and ran in to there

 

angad-bhai sab start the car

 

the taxi started and angad looked beside him to find kripa in the taxi

 

angad-stop the taxi

 

he gets out

 

angad-noways yeh kya bhai saab

 

kripa gets out

 

kripa-bhai sab yeh is taxi mein nahi btega

 

driver-dekho ap kaha jaarahe ho

 

kripa/angad-misssourie

 

driver-so mein tum done saath saath chordunga so just zip it and get in da cra

 

angad-no she goes

 

kripa-u go

 

that's when they see press cumin they both gte in to the taxi

 

angad-chaliye bhaisab

 

kripa-stupid duffer Bandar

 

angad-chipkali

 

driver-omg u 2 fight so much when I watched ur filmwhat was it called ha kaisa yeh pyar hai u ha dsuch good chemistry lekin in real life ure ver different

 

kripa-very true I h8 him

 

angad-I h8 u and plus when did is say I luv u

 

kripa-(thinks)I cant believe I slept with him

 

angad-(think)how did I manage to sleep with her

middle of the journey

 

driver-(stiops the car)well im hungry ill go eat sumthing

 

kripa-ok till then ill go make a phone call

 

she gets out the car and walks towards the phone bhooth angad follows kripa stops and turns to angad

 

kripa-tum mere peeche peeche kyon areho

 

angad-im not following I need to phone my mom

 

they both make theyre way to the phone bhooth,after doing there phonecalls they head bak to the the taxi,kripa puts on her ipod and starts watching a movie,angad does the same but his battery is dead

 

angad-shit

 

kripa-u wanna share mine

 

angad-honestly

 

kripa-yes now hurry b4 I change my mind

 

he plughs one head phoe in his ear

 

angad-so wat u going to watch

 

kripa-all my films

 

angad-erm u got our one kyph

 

kripa-I think so u wanna watch it

 

angad-yea

 

kripa-ok

 

she play kyph

 

they watch half the film and the driver still hasn't cum back theres a steamy part of anagd and kripa playing kripa starts to feel uncomfortable so she switches it off

 

angad-hey band kyun kiya my fav part was cuming

 

kripa-eww angad vaise angad pura ghanta hogaya yeh driver kaha margaya

 

angad-pata nahin lets go check

 

they look aroundbut don't find him they ask a person they say the police took him 4 stealing food,angad and kripa go back to the taxi

angad-ab kya

 

kripa-u drive

 

angad-noi not a taxi driver

 

kripa-u got a betta idea

 

angad-no

 

kripa-so shut up

 

kripa sits at the front with angad

 

preview- a taxi ride with angad and kripa

             the taxi breaks down wat can happen

 

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Comments (9)

[QUOTE=pink sky]
awesome up till now, you should have made the night a bit more romantic (The apartment where kripa and angad slept for one night) it was very stagnate just like a normal scene
didn't get what does 18er mean
the spelling of few words:
lave-leave
khannah-khanna
noi-no
ahvent-have not
I am sorry if you are hurt in any way
[/QUOTE]
thanks for the suggestions and theres no need to be sorry id prefer u tell me my mistakes u no on the comp i type really fast so i normally miss out letters and anotha thing i use alot of slang like l8ers means later and another bad thing i neva proofcheckbut ill try my best to proofcheck and use less slang in the next partand thanks for ur comment

17 years ago


hmmm good guess lets see wat happens

17 years ago


good prediction lets see if it cums trueand thanks for ur comment

17 years ago

awsome part shaz! u rocked

17 years ago

awsum part very funny.superstar driving a taxi...

17 years ago

awesome up till now, you should have made the night a bit more romantic (The apartment where kripa and angad slept for one night) it was very stagnate just like a normal scene
didn't get what does 18er mean
the spelling of few words:
lave-leave
khannah-khanna
noi-no
ahvent-have not
I am sorry if you are hurt in any way

17 years ago

oh i think they are both getting married to each other

17 years ago

o oo!!!! the taxi scene was total yes boss!!! theyre getting married to eachotherrr!!!ritee?? predictionn: they'll fall in luv during the road trip but wont accept it.. and when they get to missouriee... they'll be sad cuz they think they're marrying others but truly its them... continue soooooooonnn

17 years ago

awww such a cute part!!! Cont soon....

17 years ago

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