Chapter 11

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Part-11

Sujal aur Kashish Garewal Manstion ki andar dakhil hote hai aur Kashish sirf dekhti hi rehti hai ghar ko. Sujal Car se neche utarta hai aur doosari aur aakar Kashish ka darwaza kholta hai. Aur Kashish bahar aati hai.

Sujal: To Kashish aajse yeh tumhara ghar hai. Kaisa Laga?

Kashish: Achcha hai.

Sujal: Chale andar. and Kashish just noddes her head.

Sujal rings the bell and Veena and Charu comes with arti. the whole house is decorated as Akshat told them earlier about marrige.

Veena: Aa gaya tu. Tujse main bahot naraz hoon. jo tune muje bina pooche shaddi kar li. Ab yeh to bata ki meri bahu kaha hai.

And Kashish comes forward behind Sujal.

Veena: Are wah! Sujal meri bahu to badi sundar dhundke laya hai. Bilkul chand hai.

Charu: Waise Bhaiyaa, Mom bilkul thik keh rahi hai kyunki agar hum bhi dhundne ke liye jate to bhabhi se khubsurat nahin dhundh pate.

Sujal (looking at Kashish): Yeh to sach hai aur waise bhi tumhi to kehti ho " what is Best has to be Sujal Garewal's" .So here she is.

Veena: Ab tum dono yeh sab baatein chodo. Aur muje meri bahu se baatein karne do. Tumhara naam kya hai.

Kashish: Kashish...Kashish naam hai mera.

Veena: Bahot hi pyara naam hai bilkul tumhari tarah aur tumhare bol bhi bahot meethe hai.

Charu: Mom yahi per baatein karongi yaa bhabhi ko andar bhi aane dogi.

Veena Sujal aur Kashish ki aarti karti hai aur phir Kashish Chaval wala kalash girake ghar me grahpravesh karti hai. Kashish apne pair kanku bhare thal me rakhkar ghar ke andar aati hai aur Sujal aur Kashish Veena ke pair chute hai.

Veena: Kashish, yeh hamare khandani kangan hai jo meri saas ne muje diye the aaj me tumhe de rahi hoon aur iske saath Garewal khandaan ki maan maryada bhi. Main janti hoon ki main tumhe bahot badi zimedari de rahi hoon lekin muje yakeen hai ki tum ise bahot achchi tarah se nibhaungi. and Veena hand over the keys of the house.

Kashish (lookes at sujal) : Nahin, mera ispe hakk nahin hai. ispe pe hakk bado ka hota hai. Muje khushi hogi agar aap yeh chabiyaan apne pass rakhengi. Aur zaroorat padne pe main hamesha aapki saath hogi mama.

veena: Kya kha tumne.

Kashish: Kya main aapko Mama keh sakti hoon. woh main apni mama ko bulati hoon na is liye. kyunki muje aapme unki parchai dikhai deti hai.

Veena: Kyun nahin. Aaj se tu meri bahu pehle aur yeh mera beta bad me. Waise agar yeh mera beta agar tujse kuch bhi kahe to bejijak tu muje aakar bata dena.

Kashish just looks at Sujal in angar in her eyes.

Veena: Waise raat kafi ho gayi hai aur tumdono safar se thak bhi gaye honge. tum log jake aaram karo. hum log subaah beth ke baatein karenge.

Sujal and Kashish goes to their room.

Sujal: Kashish yeh hai hamara kamra. i hope ki tum comfortable feel karo kyunki agar nahin bhi tab bhi tumhe yahin rehna hai.

Sujal washroom me kapde change karne chala jata hai aur Kashish khidaki ki aur jakar bahar chand ko dekhti hai tabhi uske kandhe pe Sujal apna haath rakhta hai. Kashish Gusse se uska haath hatati hai.

Sujal: Yeh kya hai Kashish.

Kashish: muje chune ki ya mere pass aane ki koshish mat karna.

Sujal: Main tumhara pati hoon.

Kashish: Pati. Pati ho tum mere lekin is kamre ke bahar. Tumne mujse shaadi karne ko kaha tha nahi ki rishta nibhane ko.

Sujal (shocked): Lekin Kashish. Meri baat to suno.

Kashish (in Angar): Yeh meri majburi hai ki muje tumhare saath is kamre me rehna padta hai kunki main nahin chahti ki Mama ko yeh baat ka pata lage ki hamara rishta kis zabarzasti se joda gaya tha. Hum pati patni zaroor banke rahenge lekin duniya walo ki nazar me. Is kamre me sirf do anjaan banke. Yeh baat tum achchi tarah se samaj lo. kyunki yeh tumhare liye bhi achcha hoga aur mere liye bhi ki tum aage se meri life me koi aur musibat na lao.

Sujal: Lekin Kripa ne bataya ki tum mujse pyaar karti ho.

Kashish (Bitterly laugh): Pyaar ka matlab bhi tum samjate ho..Aur Pyaar karti thi lekin woh pal to kabka chala gaya. aaj karti hoon to sirf nafrat aur itni nafrat karti hoon ki muje pyaar shabd per se yakeen uth gaya. yahaan tak ki apne aap se nafrat hoti hai jab khud ko tumhare saath pati hoon. kyunki agar ek pal ke liye bhi main yeh bhul jau ki tumne mere saath kya kiya. main kabhi nahin bhul sakti ki tumne mere parivar ko kitne aanshu rulaye. Tumne ek pal me mujse mera sabkuch chin liya. Mera naam, meri pehchaan, mera parivar. Aur jante ho main chahkar bhi tumhare saath aisa nahin kar sakti kyunki me ek maa ki nazar me apne bete ko girana nahin chahti aur Mama tumse bahot pyaar karti hai. Mama ko lagta hai ki uska beta duniya ka sabse achcha insaan hai lekin use nahin pata ki is masoom chehre ke piche kitna gira hua insaan hai.

Sujal wahaan se jane ki koshish karta hai tab Kashish use rokti hai.

Kashish: Ruko, ek baat to main tumhe kehna hi bhul gayi ki Congratulatios. Aaj tumhare best chizo ke list me tumhari biwi ka naam bhi samil ho gaya. jise tum sajake sirf ek khone ki sundarta badha sakte ho. Aaj to tumhe jasn manana chahiye. Jo tum jeet gaye lekin tumne jeet kar bhi apni puri zindagi ke liye haar payi hai. kyunki main tumse sirf nafrat karti hoon.sirf nafrat suna tumne.

Sujal: Yeh mera tumse vaada hai ki ek din tum khud chal ke mere pass apna pyaar leke aaungi kyunki Sujal Garewal ke aage koi nahin jeet sakta. Ab yeh jung tumne chedi hai aur tumhi puri karogi. mere samne zuk kar. tumne abhi meri nafrat aur mera junoon dekha hi kaha hai.

Sujal apna blanket aur pillow leke samne sofe pe sone keliye chala jata hai aur Kashish sirf bed ke pass zameen pe bethi roti hai.



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Comments (5)

ohhhhhhh kashish.... kya zabardast part tha yaar .it was rocking .what kashish did to sujal was right .i mean how can you forgive that person who takes away all our happiness from you jane-anjanne mein aur tumhare apno ko rulata hai . nooo wayyy....that's not acceptable .what he did was wrong .kashish is right on her side .i mean what can be expected from her ki woh sab kuch bhul ke sujal ko apne kareeb aane de, usse apnaye .bilkul nahi .it's sad too ki they are not close now.nafrat hai lekin it's allright because what sujal did was a sin .heyyyyyyy......... but goshhhh!!!man sujal ka attitude .it's just the best !!!i am crazy about his attitude and the way he plant up the things for others .when he said that 'tumne SUJAL GAREWAL ki nafrat aur junoon abhi dekha hi kaha hai' tab my heart skipped a bit yaar .u know his toning,his style of saying that is sooo exclusive and different .hmmmm... i loved it .i am sure that woh kashish ko apne kareeb lane mein aur usse apne paas lane mein koi kasar nahi chodega .he will indeed make her fall for him kaise bhi because yeh sab padne ke baad i know that he loves kashish too but is not able to tell her right now as even he hasn't realized yet . lekin he will for sure .ufff!!! aaj ka part bohot bohotttttt acha lika tha .extremely well written and had lot of meaning to it .the part was great !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.

17 years ago

very nice part yaar,i can't understand sujal at all.

17 years ago

WOW Good going interesting plssssss cont.soon

17 years ago

awesome part.......the countdown begins !!!

17 years ago


very cooll....bohat hii mast zabardast part likha hai... kashish's interaction with veena was very sweet... aur end mein akhirkaar sujal,kashish ke beech jung chid hii gayii... ab aayega mazaa...keep up the good work going... do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... sun_42339373.0993865741

17 years ago

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