Chapter 24

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Part--24

Day-4

aaj bhi Sujal office se Kashish ko milne ghar aata hai...........jab woh ghar ke andar aata hai to Ria ko dekhta hai...........

Sujal: Hi Ria..............kaisi ho......

Ria: achchi.........lekin Kashishbua thik nahi.........

Sujal: kyun..........

Ria: woh jab se aaye hai tab se rote hi hai.........pata nahi use kya hua hai...........

Sujal: tumhare uncle se ek galti ho gayi hai..............aur iski waje se tumhari Bua ko bahot bura laga hai.........

Ria: galti huyi hai to mafi mang lijiye...........waise meri bua dil ki bahot achchi hai aapko foran maff kar degi...........

Sujal: haa beta........tumhari bua dil ki bahot achchi hai.........yeh baat maine hi dair se jani...........pata nahi woh phir kab razi hogi..........

Ria: mere pass ek idea hai..........aap yahi rukiye main abhi aati hoon.........

Ria thodi dair me aati hai........

Ria; yeh lijiye........yeh Kashishbua ki favorite chocolates hai.........ise woh aapko zaroor maff kar denge............

Sujal: thank you Ria.......waise tumhari bua hai kaha..........

Ria: woh to dopahar se upper chat pe hai..........main jab bhi upper unse milne jati hoon woh roti hi rehti hai...........aap use thik kar denge na...........

Sujal: haa .............main aapki bua ko phir se hasti khelti bana dunga..........

Ria: promise........

Sujal: promise...........

Ria: aap bahot achche hai...........

Sujal: nahi beta.............main achcha nahi...........main bahot bura hoon............

Ria: kisne kaha aisa...........aap bahot hi sweet ho.........ab yaha kya kar rahe hai jaiye na Bua ke pass...........

Sujal: ok baba..............

Sujal Ria ko kiss karke upper chat pe chala jata hai...............

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Sujal jab chat pe aata hai to Kashish kahi dikhai nahi deti...........Sujal idhar udhar pareshan hoke Kashish ko dhundhne lagta hai..........jab kahi se kashish ki rone ki aahat Sujal ko sunai deti hai...........Sujal us jagah jake dekhta hai to Kashish ek khone me beth ke ro rahi hoti hai.......

Sujal: Kashish...............

Kashish jaldi se apne aanshu ponch deti hai.........

Kashish: Sujal tum is tarah yaha............

Sujal: yahi sawaal to muje karna chahiye............tum yaha aise kyun bethi ho.........

Kashish: pata nahi................

Sujal jake Kashish ke pass bethta hai..........

Sujal: Ria ne bataya ki tum dopahar se yaha pe ho..........kyun Kashish khud ko kis baat ki saza de rahi ho...........

Kashish: main kaha apne aap ko saza de rahi hoon.........saza to woh upperwala muje de raha hai.........pata hai Sujal.........jab bhi main tanha rehna chahti hoon tab main akshar is jagah aati hoon.........yaha pe bahot si yaadein jud gayi hai...........yaha pe main khul ke ro sakti hoon.........papa ke chale jane ke bad main aksar yaha pe aaya karti hoon.............lekin.......

Kashish waha se jane lagti hai jab Sujal uska haath pakad ke use rokne ko kehta hai..........

Kashish: Sujal mera haath chodo.....muje dard ho raha hai..........

Sujal jaldi me Kashsih ka haath chod deta hai.............

Sujal: batao............kya hua hai.........

Kashish: kuch bhi nahi...........chalo neeche bhabhi hamara intzaar kar rahe hoge..........

Sujal: pehle betho..........aur batao kya hua.........

Kashish wapas Sujal ke pass beth jati hai...........

Kashish apni sleeve upper karke Sujal ko apni kalai dikhati hai jaha pe kuch zakham hote hai...............

Sujal: kashish yeh sab ..........

Kashish: kuch nahi.......us din apne aapko bachate bachate.........choodiyaan tut ke uske kanch lag gaye hai..............lekin kuch dino me thik ho jayegi yeh chaut..........

Sujal: bahot dard ho raha hai..............

Kashish: nahi........dard muje yaha nahi balke yaha mere dil me hota hai........aur is dard ki koi dawa nahi............

Sujal: I am Sorry Kashish..........ple ho sake to muje maff kar do............agar muje pata hota to main kabhi tumhare saath aisa nahi hone deta...........

Kashish: janti hoon...........galti kahi na kahi meri hai muje tumhe sachchai bata deni chahiye thi.........agar maine tumhe sach bata diya hota to aaj yeh sab kuch mere saath na hota.........lekin Sujal mere saath jo hua use main bhulna chahti hoon..........lekin yeh jo mera dard hai woh muje kabhi bhulne nahi dega...........

Sujal: Kashish..........main apni galti ko sudharna chahta hoon..........kya hum puri zindagi ek saath nahi reh sakte ............hum khushiyaan........dard sab bat lenge ek dusre ke saath............kya tum wapas nahi aa sakti meri zindagi me..........

Kashish: Sujal......abhi mere dil ne tumhe puri tarah se nahi samja hai........aur abhi teen din baki hai.........main abhi koi faisla nahi le sakti...............muje sochne ka waqt chahiye.............

Sujal: tumhe sochne ka waqt chahiye thik hai.........main tumhe sochne ke liye puri zindagi ka waqt deta hoon.........itna to tumhare liye kafi hoga..........

Kashish: neeche chale..........

Kashish baat ko badal ke neeche chali jati hai............Sujal bhi thodi dair me wapas apne ghar chala jata hai...........

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Day-5

aaj bhi Sujal aise hi office se sidhe Kashish ko milne aata hai..........Kashish apne kamre me hoti hai jab Sujal waha pe aata hai aur dekhta hai to Kashish apni diary me kuch likh rahi hoti hai.............

Sujal: kaisi ho.......

Kashish: thik hoon............tumhara din kaisa raha...........

Sujal; bahot busy............aaj kal bahot kaam rehta hai...........

Kashish: kaam to aakhir kaam hota hai.........tum betho main tumhare liye coffee leke aati hoon...........tum thake huye lagte ho..........

Sujal: nahi uski zaroorat nahi........tum betho...........meri thakan tumhe dekhke hi kahi gayab ho gayi...........lekin tum kya likh rahi thi..........

Kashish; kuch nahi aise hi..........

Sujal: meri burai likh rahi thi jo muje batana nahi chahti.............

Kashish: tumhe kisne kaha ki main tumhare bare me bura likh rahi hoon............kuch achcha bhi to ho sakta hai........

Sujal: agar achcha likh rahi thi tab to woh mere bare me ho hi nahi sakta..............

Kashish: tum aise kyun keh rahe ho.............tum jante ho.....tum bahar se jitna shakht dikhte ho utne dil se nahi.............Sujal tum bahot achche ho.........

Sujal:agar itna hi achcha hoon to phir muje chod ke kyun ja rahi ho...........

Kashish: Sujal..........jane ka faisla maine bahot pehle hi le liya tha...........lekin khushi is baat ki hai ki maine atith me tumhare jaisa ek dost banaya..........jo dil ka bahot hi achcha hai..........

Sujal: maine apni achchai dikhane me bahot dair kar di...........

Kashish: meri ek baat manoge.............mere jane ke bad kisi achchi si ladki se tum shaadi kar lena.........jo khushi main tumhe nahi de payi tum aisi ladki se shaadi karna jo tumhe woh sari khushiyaan de sake........

Sujal: tum bhul rahi ho main shaadishuda hoon...........

Kashish: lekin main bahot jaldi tumhe divorce de rahi hoon.......

Sujal: tum muje divorce de rahi ho............lekin main tumhe kabhi divorce nahi dunga.........

Kashish: tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho..........tum jante ho ki ab hum kabhi saath nahi reh sakte to phir kyun tum mujse chutkara pana nahi chahte...........aur tum to hamesha se yahi chahte the.........

Sujal: chahta tha lekin ab nahi........main tumhe divorce deke itni aasani se kaise apni zindagi se jane de sakta hoon...........agar tum muje divorce deke chali gayi to muje pachtava rahega ki maine apni galti se picha chuda diya ........aur is pachtave ke saath main nahi jee paunga...........is liye tum jaha bh jana chahti ho ja sakti ho.............tum mujse juda rehna chahti ho reh sakti ho lekin mujse tum hamesha ke liye rishta nahi tod sakti.................

Kashish: kyun tum aisa kar rahe ho........apne aap ko kyun taklif de rahe ho..........

Sujal: jo taklif maine tumhe di hai uske samne to yeh kuch bhi nahi...........meri saza yahi hai ki main zindagi bhar tumhara intzaar karunga........lekin main saal me ek bar tumse milne zaroor aaunga..........yeh dekhne ki tum khush ho ya nahi.........kyunki mere liye her pal tumhari khushi sabse jyada mayne rakhti hai...........

Kashish: Sujal yeh sab karke tumhe sirf taklif milegi..........

Sujal: achcha hai.............hum rishtey me kuch nahi to dard hi bat lenge..........

Kashish: tum meri muskeli ko aur badha rahe ho...........

Sujal: aaj tak yahi to kiya hai aur shayad aage bhi yahi karta rahunga...............maine apni sari zindagi tumhare saath bitane ka faisla kar liya hai............baki ka faisla tumhare haath me hai...........haa main tumse yeh yakeen dila sakta hoon ki mere saath mera haath thamogi to kabhi main tumhari ankhoin me aanshu aur dil me dard ko chune nahi dunga...........tumhari zindagi me sirf khushiyaan hi khushiyaan hogi..........tumhare jawab ka muje intzaar rahega.............

yeh kehke Sujal waha se chala jata hai.........Kashish khadi hoke apne dressing table ke pass jake drawer me se apna mangalsutra leke use apne haath me leke samne apni aur sujal ki tasvir ko dekhke kuch sochne lagti hai................

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Day-6

Kashish ghadi me dekhti hai...........

Kashish (to herself): ek ghanta ho gaya...........yeh Sujal ko to abhi aa jana chahiye.......kahi woh kisi kaam me to nahi fas gaya...........nahi agar aisa hota to woh ek bar muje phone karke zaroor batata.............kahi woh kisi musibat me..........nahi muje aisa sochna bhi nahi chahiye............kya karoon kuch samaj me nahi aa raha.......bhabhi se puchti hoon agar use kuch pata ho to..........

Kashish neeche aati hai to Kripa hall me bethi huyi hoti hai.........

Kripa: kya baat hai pareshan lag rahi ho...........

Kashish: bhabhi............ek ghante se Sujal ka intzaar kar rahi hoon lekin abhi tak woh aaya bhi nahi aur phone bhi usne nahi kiya..................kahi woh kisi musibat me na ho..........

Kripa: to tu use phone karke puch le..........

Kashish: lekin main.........

Kripa: Kashish..........tumhara yun Sujal ke liye pareshan hona bata raha hai ki tumhe uski kitni parwaah hai............aur parwaah hum unki karte hai jinhe hum pyaar karte hai...........man lo Kashish meri baat Sujal hi tumhara asli pyaar hai............jitna tum usse dur jaogi kismat tumhe aur bhi kareeb layegi..............ab yeh sab sochna bad me pehle Sujal ko phone karke dekho ki woh hai kaha.........

Kashish: jee bhabhi........

Kashish Sujal ke cell pe phone karti hai lekin woh uthata nahi...........

Kashish: bhabhi woh apna phone nahi utha raha....................muje bahot fikar ho rahi hai uski............pata nahi kaha hoga..............

Kripa: ek bar ghar pe phone kar le............shayad aah pehle ghar chala gaya ho............

Kashish: aap thik kar rahi hai............

Tringgggg................Tringgggggg............

Maid: hello.......Garewal House.........

Kashish: Hello..........maria.........main Kashish bol rahi hoon.......Sujalsir hai ghar pe.........

Maid: mam........woh sab hospital gaye hai..........

Kashish: hospital...........lekin hua kya..........sab thik to hai..........

Maid: woh Dadijee ko dil ka dora pada hai isi liye aadhe ghante pehle sab unhe leke hospital gaye hai.............

Kashish: kaunsi hospital gaye hai kuch bata ke gaye hai...........

Maid: Kavyasir St.Martin ke bare me bata rahe the...............

Kashish: thik hai...........

Kripa: kya hua sab thik to hai............

Kashish: nahi Bhabhi............Dadi ko heartattack aaya hai aur hume foran St. Martin hospital jana hoga............

Kripa: ha jaldi chalo hamare pass waqt bahot kam hai............

Kashish aur Kripa jaldi me nikal jate hai................

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Yaha Dadi ke kamre ke bahar Prerna, Sujal, Kavya aur Anjali pareshan hoke bethe huye hote hai.............jab Doctor bahar aata hai.................

Prerna: Doctor............maa kaisi hai.......

Doctor: I am sorry Mrs. Garewal............lekin unke pass waqt bahot kam hai............woh aakhri waqt apne parivar ke saath rehna chahte hai..........unhone aap sab ko andar bulaya hai...........

sab log andar aate hai..............Dadi ki ek taraf Prerna aur dusri aur Sujal bethta hai................Prerna ke pass Anjali aur anjali ke pass Kavya khada hota hai..............sab log ke aankhoin se aanshu rukne ka naam hi nahi lete............

Dadi: Prerna.........yeh kya...........tu hi rone lagi to tere bacho ko kaun sambhalega...........

Prerna: yeh maa kya baat huyi..........main aapse bahot naraz hoon........pehle Anurag aur ab aap.............main to bahot akeli pad jaungi...........aap muje aise chod ke nahi ja sakti..........

Dadi: upper tere buvji aur Anurag mera intzaar kar rahe hai.........aur tu akeli kaha hai tere yeh bache tere saath hai.................

Kavya: lekin dadi is tarah aap hum sab ko..............

Dadi: are bhai jana to sabhi ko hai..........lekin aaj se Garewal khandan ki jimedari tuje sop ke ja rahi hoon......bada hai na sab ka khyal rakhna............

Kavya: jee dadi...........

Dadi: aur Anjali.........ved ko jyada datna mat..........aur use marna to bilkul mat...........dil ka bahot achcha hai.............aur mere jane ke bad prerna ka khayal rakhna.............

Anjali: nahi dadi.........main kisi ka khayal nahi rakhungi..........aapko rakhna hoga .........mera khayal kaun rakhega...........

Dadi: tera pati hai woh tera khayal karega.............aur tera yeh pagal dever hai..........

Sujal: Dadi.........muje aapse baat nahi karni.............bahot naraz hoon me.........

Dadi: oye Chote............tu aise rote huye bilkul achcha nahi lagta..............aur yeh Kashish kaha hai.............kahi dikhai nahi deti.........

Sujal: Dadi woh.........

Jab Sujal ke khandhe pe koi haath rakhta hai............Sujal apni palke upper karke dekhta hai to Kashish hoti hai................

Kashish: main yahi hoon..........hum sab yaha hai lekin aap hume hi chod ke ja rahi hai............

Dadi: main ja rahi hoon lekin tujse kuch mang ke ja rahi hoon..........vaada kar main jo mungugi woh muje degi na..........

Kashish: haa Dadi main aapse vaada karti hoon jaisa aap kahenge waisa hi main karungi..............

Dadi: mera sujal dil ka bahot hi achcha hai.......woh kabhi tujse kuch kahega nahi lekin tujse bahot pyaar karta hai......her waqt uske pass rehna.........use khub pyaar dena..........aur haa mere jane ke bad tumhe hi use sambhalna hai..........to dogi na tum Sujal ka saath zindagi bhar ke liye.......mere Sujal ka saath kabhi mat chodna..............

Kashish Sujal ki aur dekhti hai aur phir Dadi ka haath apne haath me leti hai..........

Kashish: haa dadi...........main aapse vaada karti hoon ki main zindagi ke her kadam pe Sujal ke sath rahungi..............sujal ko khush rakhne ki puri koshish karungi.........aur aap yahi chahti hai na ki main Sujal ko sambhalu .......thik hai main Sujal ka pura khayal rakhungi............

Dadi: yeh hai meri achchiwali bahu.........aur chote tu bhi vaada kar ki......Kashish ko hamesha khush rakhega..........usse tu apna pyaar dega..........kar vaada.........

Sujal: main vaada karta hoon ki Kashish ko woh pyaar aur khushi dunga jispe uska hakk banta hai.........lekin ple dadi muje chod ke mat jaiye.................

Dadi: are main to khush hoke ja rahi hoon ki mere bache khush hai...........muje ab koi sikayat nahi.................sukun ki zindagi ji li maine.................ab tere dada ke pass muje jana hai.................woh muje bula rahe hai...........tere papa mera intzaar kar rahe hai............bahot intzaar karaya maine...............ab muje jana hai.............................jana haiiiiiii............

aur yeh kehte hi Dadi apni saans chod deti hai...........Prerna wahi Dadi ke pass rone lagti hai.........kripa aake use sambhalti hai........Anjali Kavya ke sine se lagke rone lagti hai..............Sujal abhi bhi aise hi Dadi ka haath pakde betha hua tha........aur kashish uske piche khadi hoti hai.......jab Kashish uske kandhe pe apna haath rakhti hai..........

Kashish: Sujal..........

Sujal piche mud ke aise hi Kashish ko pakad ke rone lagta hai.....................kashish ko kuch samaj me nahi aa raha tha lekin Kashish bhi Sujal ko apne kareeb aur karke uske bal sehlate huye ro rahi thi.................

 

 

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hey dear the part was very interesting.. every time tum joh bhi likhthi ho it is so different.. har baar joh main sochthi hoon uska total ulta, opposite hii hotha hai.. what ever you write is just beyound my imagination.... and tum joh bhii likhthi ho itna achcha likhthi ho.. kashish dear main tumhari writing kii kitni bhii tareef karoon kum hii hoga... every single time tumhare story mein kuch naya hotha hai... every time you write you add a new flavor to your writing... woh aise-jaise khane mein the taste gets better and better na waise hii the same case is with your fanfic also.. i totally love it... seriously yaar i'am in love with this story of your's... it is just fabulous... sujal itna pyaara hai.. woh bechara har woh mumkin koshish karr raha hai kashish ko manane kii.. lekin kashish tho sujal ke efforts ko dekh kar bhii undekha karr rahii hai... kashish yeh tho dekh sakthi hai kii sujal usse manane ke liye kya koshish karr raha hai, kashish yeh bhi jaanthi hai kii sujal is guilty for what he has done.... lekin ab bechari kashish ka dil bhi tho dhuka hai, because of sujal.. i'am sure the answer to all kashish's pains is only sujal... sujal jaise kehthe hai na kashish kii chot par marham hai... agar kashish ko koi uski zindagi mein woh khushiyaan, woh pyaar koi de saktha hai, tho woh bas sujal hai aur koi nahii.. aur jahaan thak mera khayal hai, i think kii kashish bhii yeh baat jaanthi hai.. lekin woh sujal se durr jaana chahthi hai, kyunke she thinks kii sujal uske saath khush nahii rahega.. what kashish has not yet realized is that like her, even sujal has started having feeling for her.. sujal has also fallen in love with her.. jis din kashish ko yeh patah chalega na, kashish sujal ko chod kar kahiin nahii jaayegi.. she can't go leaving sujal...waise sujal jis tarah kii koshishen kar raha tha he is very adorable... mera jee karr raha hai kii i pull his cheeks,he is sounding so sweet and cute... i liked sujal's confidence very much..and sujal ka confiden

16 years ago

awesome part...................................kya likha hai zabardast.......................mindblowing..................sujal kitna change hoga hai i can't believe it................plz plz kashish sujal ky pas ajao......................dadi se dono ne promise kia for taking of each other.....................waiting 4 next part ...........................eagerly

16 years ago

hi Kashish

1st of all I am really sorry for late comment..i was so busy with my work....

Great part....Excellent writing ...I'm enormously impressed by the wonderful work u are doing....."I completely enjoyed both parts WOW

I feel very bad for dadi.. and so happy for Kashish and S..ujal...dono ab bahut karib aagye hain...and Kashish has feeling for sujal thats great..emotional and very touching part I love each line of this part...yeh jo aapne 7 dino ke bare mein likha bahut he acha likha...

Thanks for such a great part

Dear Keep up the good work...cant wait for next part

Please do continuee soon

take care

16 years ago

i can't believe i missed two wonderful parts of this fic....but don't be angry as i will comment for both the parts here....ok so now sujal is all set to win kashsih's trust back...good for him...i loved the fact that they still care for each other and knew when they were lying(about the food)so kashish diary bhi likthi hai and she is worried ke sujal ne kuch aur tho nahi pad liya...i am so sure she had written something sweet about himkashish remembers his taste and trusts him with the deal papers too how sweet.the meeting with nandini was sweet too....now for the next part...this was a twist in the tale...i mean kashish has now developed feelings for sujal but is not able to make a decision...poor dadi...jaate jaate she blessed all of them and was successful in uniting sk too...i liked the way kashish comforted sujal.....good going and keep up the good work...

16 years ago

Very sad for dadi.............. But she finally united them.... I luved the convo between Sujal n Kashish..it was very touching..............Thanx a ton Kashish for the wonderful part.....PLzz continue soon......

16 years ago

amazing part
i liked the way sujal has proved to kashish he has changed and all because of dadi they will stay together.
dadi going will really effect the garewal family but she has told them her wishes hope they fullfill them.
the scene between sujal and ria was really cute were ria was telling him how nice he is.
the way kashish was worrying about sujal shows how much she loves him hope kashish excepts this fact soon.
Iqbal Neha12008-09-14 09:29:05

16 years ago

nice part kashish........awww...sad one...[:((]...but well written..

16 years ago

hey kashish it was nice part.........really very beautifully written...............finally sujal has proved himself in front of kashish............n now coz of dadi's promise now sk is gonna take care of each other bt not just coz of that promise now they r luv wid each other.i luved d last scene ver much.............on one side it was a n emotional one n on d other kashish was supporting sujal........was a cute one.plz continue soon

16 years ago

Nice part.....Now kashish will take care of sujal !!

16 years ago

hey lovely part me feelin very bad 4 dadi cont soon

16 years ago

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