Chapter 1

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Well finally here is the 1st part of my ff.

well you wil know about the charcters as the story progresses.

 

 

We see a stadium where polo match is going on. Whole stadium is full, when…

 

"You can't miss him, he is with other guys wearing a dark blue shirt, yellow number 9 on his back". A female voice was heard from behind.

The girl turned around and she is none other than kripa. She was wearing a simple white t-shirt with a blue denim Wink.

Kripa – your cousin right?Smile

Well second cousin!! I have barely spoken to him since he arrivedEvil Smile.

Kripa looked at the most arrogant girl mishti.

Kripa was feeling sorry for mishti's cousin CryCry– atleast you contacted him right mishti.

Mishti's cousin in dark blue shirt was always treated badly by his family, kripa hardly remember her cousin as they moved away long back.

Mishti – you know what kripa it was a accident that I contacted him.

 

This was the final match that was being held in Mumbai, where mishti's cousin has also came after a long time. Since it was the final match so entire township of around 3000 have come to see.

Even people from different parts use to come for this match.

thanks for your comments. well its a short part will continue soon.

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nice concept !!
thank god finaally i have a new f-f based on angad and kripa !!

continue soon !!

excited for the 1st part !!

15 years ago

[QUOTE=Angad-Kripa#1]Wow yaar. Great job...i hope the cousin is Angad.
O um u kno ur title, i dont kno if u kno or not but all the letters arent supose to be in capitals cause thts considered shouting on IF.
So u cud change it to: Outback Man seeks Wife.
Just telling..
Pm me wen you update,
Harji[/QUOTE]
hey thankx for informing me about the title, as i didn't knew this .
i guess nw the title is fine

15 years ago

Wow yaar. Great job...i hope the cousin is Angad.
O um u kno ur title, i dont kno if u kno or not but all the letters arent supose to be in capitals cause thts considered shouting on IF.
So u cud change it to: Outback Man seeks Wife.
Just telling..
Pm me wen you update,
Harji

15 years ago

thnkx all for rplying. well kripa and mishti are related in a way you could say.
well the someone will be reveled either in 2nd part or in 3rd part. wait for my next part and ll post it soon.

15 years ago

nice intro....
but sweets i would prefer that u put in small fonts...
this is very pain staking to read.
i hope its Angad who is playing the game
contiue soon

15 years ago

Short n sweet part......bt mak d next part longer plzzzzz........cont soon........

15 years ago

Gr8 but that waz short lol itz k

Let the unknown man be Angad PLEASEEE!!!!

cont. soon


Star

15 years ago

Hi,awesome part! It was short but still you took your time out, so Thanks! Nyways the cousin is Angad, am I rite? And are mishti and Krip[a related???please continue soon,Mona.

15 years ago


yeh its too short actually jus posted it ll post soon n ll pm u

15 years ago

Hun, Its an amazing concept. And the first part is awesome. but guess what I didnt like in it was it was tooooooooooooooooooooo short. i was like abhit oh shuro hua, abhi khatam hogaya. Really cool man. Cont it. I might not reply frequently but i assure you it is awesome. The way Kripa was concerned about someone. I guess its Angad, lets see. Cont soon hun

15 years ago

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