Chapter 1

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Part 1
 
On a night in Mumbai students have gathered to celebrate the pre-graduation prom night. A guy enters he just walks in and all the girls are after him.
 
???- Hey girls one at a time, tum sab jante ho ki mein sirf ek ladki ke peeche bhagta hoon
 
The guys shoes are shown then his eyes then his face it turns out to be Angad Khanna (Iqbal Khan)
 
 
Angad goes up to a guy.
 
A- Hey dude, kahan the tum, kabse dhond raha honn
???- Sorry yaar phir se late, har saal late hota hoon
A- Har saal thapad bhi khate ho
???- Tumne kuch kaha
A- Nahin
 
The guys shoes are shown then his eyes then his face it turns out to be Lakshya (Pulkit). The song Voh Kisna Hai plays in the background.
 
 
Angad goes up to a girl
 
A- Hey darling, kaise ho tum
???- Angad dheko tum kuch bhi samajlo lekin mein tumse pyaar nahin karti hoon
A- I don't care
 
The girl goes away Angad keeps following her. She looks back at Angad focussing on her it is Kripa Sharma (Neha Bamb)
 
 
Kripa goes far away from him again and she ends up near a wall. Angad pushes her to the wall.
 
K- Angad kya har rahe ho, sab log dekh rahe hai
A- Tho dhekne dho, mujhe koi sharmindi nahin hai
K- Angad please
A- Teek hai tum ja sakti ho mein Lakshya ke paas jhata hoon
K- Thank you
 
Kripa walks away with a very angry face
 
Angad goes to find Lakshya but he is with a girl
 
A- Mar khaye ga yeh
 
Angad is just smiling watching the fun, meanwhile the camera focuses on Lakshya. Lakshya goes up to a girl he doesn 't know at all.
 
L- Kya aap mere saat date par jaa sakti ho
Girl- Kya batamees sharam nahi ati tujhe
 
The girl gives Lakshya a slap. Angad goes up to him
 
A-Maine kaha tha thapad khakar aye ga
 
A girl enters the room. Lakshya goes up to her
 
L-Arre kyun tharpati ho mujhe kabse tumhari suraat dhekne ka maan kar raha tha lekin as usual tum late ati ho mere tara
???- Lakshya maine kaha mujse door raho i am not interested in you so go away varna mein thake maar ke bheg doon gi tujhe
 
The girls eyes are shown then lips then her face it is Krishna-Tulsi (mouni roy)
 
 
Kripa is walking she sees KT and walks upto her
 
K- Hey KT kaise ho tum
KT- Mein teek hoon, tum
K- Mein teek hoon, yeh jho Angad hai kabse bhagra hai mere peeche
KT- Aur voh chilgo (idiot) Lakshya voh bhi vahi kar raha hai
K-Teek hai mein jaa rahi hoon
 
Kripa goes outside and sees somone
 
K- Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai
 
Coming up- The guy is shown who do you think it is
 
Hope u enjoyed my first part to my first fanfic
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Well done hun xxxx gr8 prt....x

17 years ago

i have a schedule i will do my fanfic sundays and wednesday so it is wedesday this week then the sunday coming up

17 years ago

Gaurav''s Love] coool part anu......found lil mistakes in there.....ill edit it later

dont worry rach i have corrected the fanfic

17 years ago

coool part anu......found lil mistakes in there.....ill edit it later

17 years ago

great part either it's angad or a new character

17 years ago

[QUOTE=Anu1993]I decided to make a new fanfic thanx Sidra 420 for the title
[/QUOTE] Awww howww sweet u used my name !! I Feel Special !! lol

17 years ago

awesome intro!!! cant wait to read the 1st part!!!

17 years ago

soundz interestin start soon gud intro

17 years ago

this seeems kool.. cant wait till u continue and i like the name dhdm..

17 years ago

i like the inro of the characters continue soon

17 years ago

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