Chapter 22

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Ab agli subah Sujal,Kashish aur Angad Shimla me land karte hain...Jaise hi woh teeno bahar aate hain woh Anurag,Kavya aur Anjali ko dekhte hain...Kashish bhaag ke unke paas jaati hai.........Kashish jake Anurag ke pair chuti hai......

Anurag: jiti raho beta...kaisi ho tum..........tumhe bata nahin sakta ki main kitna khush hoon tumhe dekh ke..tumhare bina yahan bilkul achcha nahin lagta tha............

Kashish: main bhi apne dost ko dekh ke bahot khush hoon..........aur bhaiyaa aap se ek sikayat hai .......mere jate hi aap muje bhul gaye........aapne ek bar bhi phone nahi kiya......

Kavya: maine jaan buj ke nahin kiya...muje darr tha ki kahin main tumse baat karke kamzor na par jaaun...tumhari kammi bohat mehsoos hoti hai

Kashish: bhaiyaa.......aap bhi na......

She hugges Kavya.........

Kavya: kaisi ho tum?Tum khush to ho na?

Kashish looks at Sujal.......

Kashish: bahot........

Sujal just smiles and comes upto them...Kavya lets go of Kashish and hugs Sujal...

Sujal: kaise hain aap bhaiyya?...

Kavya: main thik hoon....tum kaise ho?

Sujal: bilkul thik...

Anjali comes upto Kashish...

Anjali: mujse nahin milogi Kashish?

Kashish: aapse to zaoor milungi............bhabhi aapki yaad muje sabse jyada aayi ..aur aap akeli aayi....mera BF kaha hai.......

Anjali: tumhara BF Kripa ke saath market gaya hai...woh dono tumse bahot naraaz hain...tumne aane me itna waqt jo laga liya..

When Sujal comes there...

Sujal: isme Kashish ki galti nahin hai...maine hi usse jaane nahin diya..

Kashish: Kripa aur BF ko kaise manana hai woh muje achche se aata hai.........agar woh mujse naraz hai to main khud hi unhe manungi........aur itni aasani se mafi bhi nahi milegi.........

Anurag: Ab chalo ghar chalke baaki baatein karenge..

They all leave for home ............They are driving toward Anurag's house....Kashish was looking outside and feeling Shimla's air throuth out the cool breeze..........when Kashish saw Kripa and Ayan by the flower shop......

Kashish: Driver gari rokiye.........

The driver stops the car..

Sujal: kya hua Kashish?tumne gaari kyun rukwayi?

Kashish: woh Kripa aur Ayan rahe..........tum bas dekhte jao........ple koi aawaz mat karna..........

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: thik hai...

Sujal, Kashish, Angad come out of the one car and from behind car, Anurag, Kavya and Anjali come out.......they all look at Kashish but Kashish signs them to be quite..........Kashish slowly walks toward Kripa and Ayan who were buying Kashish's favorite flowers............the whole market was so happy to see Kashish...........Kashish stands behind Kripa and Ayan ..........

Kashish: SURPRISEEEEEE........

They both turn around and were so happy...

Kripa: KASHISHHH!...........Tu agayi...

Ayan hugged her..

Ayan: Girlfriend!............maine tumhe bohat miss kiya..

Kashish: muje to laga ki koi mujse naraz hai.....

Ayan lets go and starts to sulk...

Ayan: haa main aapse bahot naraaz hoon..........kyun Kripabua....

Kripa: haa hum dono tujse bahot naraz hai...........

Kashish: abhi batati hoon kaun kisse kitna naraz hai...........

Kashish Kripa ke haath se apne favorite phool ko churake daudne lagti hai.....

Sanju: Kripa Dii rokiye unhe.........

Kripa: haa haa rokti hoon............Kashishhhhhhhhhhh.........Kashishhhhh rukkkk..............

Kashish is still running with the flowers and after Kashish, Kripa and Ayan are both running in the streets of Shimla.........Sujal and Angad are both lost in their love..........Kashish catches a yellow saree which was on the string for drying with her in the open air.......she is still running from Kripa n Ayan........when she meets the Panditjee who is carrying a plate of sindoor............Kashish took it and throw the sindoor in the air........she lets go the saree.........when she bumps to two nuns from Ayan's school......Kashish gives her flowers and start to run before Kripa can catch her..........the whole market is so happy because the old Shimla was back.........when Kashish bumps to Kavya............

Kashish: Bhaiyaa......woh...........I am sorry........I am really Sorry...............

Kavya was looking really angry...Kashish was trying not to look at him when he burst out laughing with others..............

Kavya: Welcome back Kashish..........

Kashish: kya bhaiyaa aap bhi.......aur Kripa dekh gussa mat ho......Kripa nahi........Kripa ple ab chod de ab gussa.........

Kripa: Chal thik hai maaf kiya tumhe...

Ayan: aur maine bhi...

Ayan runs back to Kashish and hugs her

Kashish: haye mera BF.......kaisa hai.......koi nayi GF mili ki nahi....

Ayan: nayi GF kaise mil sakti hai...meri to bas ek hi GF hai,jo ki aap hain...

Kashish: really......to woh Mrs. Rai ki beti ke saath phir kya hai...........

Ayan: Woh...GF...nahin woh to aise hi timepass...tum jo nahin thi mere paas..

Kashish: timepass.........tu ghar chal tere ko main dekhti hoon.......panch ka hua nahi aur abhi se timepass...........

Ayan: kya GF aap hi pehle muje chod ke gayi thi uncle ke saath...ab aapko naya BF milgaya hai to aapke aane tak maine bhi Priya ko GF bana liya.........

Sujal: waise Ayan tumhari baat to sahi hai......waise bhi tumhari is GF me rakha kya hai.......

Kashish: Sujalll.....

Sujal: kya Sujal...Sach hi to keh raha hoon main...kyun Ayan...

Ayan: Haan uncle sahi kaha aapne..

They both started to laugh

Kashish: muje tum dono se koi baat nahi karni........chaliye uncle hum ghar chalte hai..........

Sujal: are Kashish suno to...hum mazak kar rahe the..

Kashish: chaliye Uncle......hume dair ho rahi hai...........

Anurag: haa chalo sab log...

Kashish goes and sits in the car without looking at Sujal and he just follows her...: after some time everyone reach Anurag's house.........

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Now they all go inside and sit down...

Anurag: ek baat to batao Sujal...tum yahaan achanak.......aisa kabhi hua to nahin ke tum yahaan aao woh bhi binna kissi wajah ke...

Angad: woh kya haina uncle...woh Sujal koi aur tha magar ab yeh Sujal jo aap dekh rahe hain,yeh Kashish ka Sujal hai...aur jahan Kashish wahan Sujal...kyun sahi kaha na maine...

Sujal: Angad kyun sharminda kar rahe ho muje..kamsekam jagah to dekho......waise uncle is baar hum Angad ke liye aaye hain...

Anurag: Angad ke liye?...main kuch samja nahin...

Kashish: Uncle.........is bar hum apne saath Kripa ko hamesha ke liye lejane aaye hai........

Anurag: Kripa ko le jaane?...magar kyun?...tum sab saaf saaf kaho ke aakhir baat kya hai...

Kashish: hum yaha aap sabse Angad ke liye Kripa ka haath mangne aaye hai...........Kripa aur Angad ek dusre ko pasand karte hai pyar karte hai.........aur dono shaadi karke ek saath apni zindagi bitana chahte hai lekin woh dono aap sab bado ki marzi ke bina kuch nahi karna chahte...........is liye hum yaha sagaai ki baat karne aaye hai.........agar kisi ko koi aitrazz na ho to kal in dono ki sagaai kar dete hai.........

Kavya: Kya!............yeh dono ek doosre se pyar karte hain aur hume pata tak nahin...

Anurag: are Kavya ab pata chala yeh bhi khushi ki baat hai.........hume to is rishte se koi pareshani nahin...

Anjali: lekin ek baar Kripa se bhi puch lete hai.........kyun Kripa.......tumhara dil kya keh raha hai..........

Kripa bina kuch kahe andar sharmake chali jati hai.............

Kashish: Bhabhi Kripa ko yeh rishta manzur hai..........

Anurag: to thik hai...Kripa aur Angad ki sagaai kal hi hogi...

Kavya: aur ek baat...yeh sagaai hamare ghar pe hogi...Kripa bhi meri behen ki tarah hai isliye yeh sagaai Sinha House me hogi...

Kashish: thik hai main bhi aapke saath aa rahi hoon Kripa ki sagai ki taiyariyaa karne........

Sujal: nahi Kashish tum nahin ja sakti....hmm mera matlab hai ab tum larke waalon ki taraf se ho...kyun Angad..

Angad: haa Sujal sahi keh raha hai...after all tum meri ek lauti bhabhi ho...

Anurag: aur sagaai ki tayaarian bhi to kisi ko karni hogi na..

Kashish: Angad tum keh rahe ho to thik hai main ruk jati hoon lekin sirf tumhare liye kyunki kal tumhara din hai.........

Kashish gusse me Sujal ki aur dekhti hai...........

Sujal chain ki saans leta hai ke kamsekam woh ja nahin rahi...

Anurag: ab Kashish beta muh meetha nahin karwaogi hum sab ka...

Kashish: jee abhi layi........chale Bhabhi..........

Anjali: Haan chalo...

Anjali aur Kashish dono andar jate hai jaha Kripa mithai ke saath khadi hoti hai...........

Kashish: Bhabhi aapne dekha..........abhi sagai ki baat huyi nahi ki yaha pe madam mithai leke khadi hai.......

Anjali: haa dekh rahi hoon Kashish....Lagta hai Kripa ko badi jaldi hai sagaai ki...Kyun Kripa?

Kripa: kya bhabhi aap bhi.........sab bahar aapka intzaar kar rahe hai.........

Anjali: Sab hamara intezaar kar rahe hain ki Angad tumhara?...

Kashish: ab ise itna bhi nahi chedte .........kuch shaadi ke waqt bachake rakhte hai..............chaliye Bhabhi ..........

Anjali: Sahi kaha tumne Kashish...Chalo chalte hain...Aao na Kripa...

Kashish Kripa ke haath se mithai le leti hai........aur sab log bahar aate hai........... Kashish sabse pehle jake Angad aur Kripa ka muh meetha karati hai aur phir Anurag aur Kavya ka.........jab woh Sujal ke pass aati hai to ladoo Sujal ke haath me pakdake Ayan ke pass chali jati hai..........Sujal pehle hairani se Kashish ki taraf dekhta hai aur phir ladoo ki taraf...Aur phir binna kuch kahe chup chaap Kashish ki taraf dekh ke kha leta hai...aur phir aise hi sab ke beech baatein hoti rehti hai.............

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ab shaam ko Angad aur Anurag kuch khaas logo ko sagaai ka invitation dene ke liye gaye hote hai........aur ghar ke kaka bhi market gaye huye hote hai.........Kashish kitchen me dinner bana rahi hoti hai jab Sujal waha pe aata hai.......woh darwaze pe khada rehke sirf Kashish ko dekhta hai phir dekhta hai ki Kashish ko uske baal pareshan kar rahe hai woh yaha waha dekhta hai jab dusre plateform pe Kashish ki clip hoti hai...........woh clip ko leke Kashish ke pass aata hai............ Woh dheere se uske baal peechay baand deta hai aur phir usse kamar se pakar ke uske kaan me kehta hai...

Sujal: I'm sorry jaan...

Kashish: Sujal......agar tumhe kuch chahiye to bol do main bana deti hoon........

Sujal: banane ki zaroorat nahin...jo muje chahiye woh to pehle se hi taiyaar hai...

Kashish: kya chahiye tumhe.........

Sujal: Tum...

He says tightening his grip on her waist........... She removed his hands from her waist........

Sujal: kya hua?.....abhi abhi to tumne poocha muje kya chahiye...ab maine bataya to tumne aisa kyun kiya?

Kashish: main is waqt busy hoon........agar tumhari baat khatam ho gayi to tum ja sakte ho...........kyunki muje Uncle aur Angad ke ghar aane se pehle abhi bhi dinner banana hai..........

Sujal binna kuch kahe wahan se room me chala jaata hai...

Kashish: maine kuch jyada to nahi bol diya..........khair jo bhi ho abhi khana banana hai........

After sometime Kashish finishes making dinner and goes into their room to check up on him...She entered the room and looked around but he was nowhere to be seen...When she hears the door close behind her...She turns around and sees Sujal there who was locking the door...

Kashish: Sujal yeh kya hai.........

Sujal: maine kaha tha na muje tum chahiye...ab main tumhe paake hi rahunga...

He starts moving closer to her...

Kashish: tum aisa nahi kar sakte............

She started to move back

Sujal: main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...aur tum muje chah ke bhi nahin rok sakti...

He continues to move towards her and she moves back when she hits the wall...He stood infront of her and put his hands on the wall blocking her path...

Kashish: Sujal tum......tum yeh kya kar rahe ho.......

He places his finger on her lips...

Sujal: Shhhhhhh...kya maine kabhi tumse kaha hai ki tum is duniya me sabse zyada khubsuart ho...

He removed his finger from her lips and kissed her cheek...

Sujal: kya maine kabhi tumse yeh kaha hai ki tumhare binna meri duniya adhuri hai...

He moved closer to her and kissed her other cheek...

Sujal: kya maine kabhi tumse yeh kaha hai ke main tumhe khud se bhi zyada pyar karta hoon...Meri har saans mein tumhara pyaar basa hai...

He moves his face closer to her bringing his lips towards her lips...He was getting closer and closer to her..They were an inch apart...

She puts her finger on his lips...........

Kashish: maine abhi bhi tumhe maff nahi kiya.......

He kissed her finger and moved it down..

Sujal: kya maine kuch galat kiya?

Kashish: lekin abhi bhi tumko maine maff nahi kiya.........ab rasta chodo aur muje jane do.........

She was about to go when he pulled her back and held her hands against the wall...He slowly moved his face towards her neck and blew the hair sat on her shoulder...As she felt his breath touch her body she closed her eyes...He moved closer and kissed her neck with passion...She closed her eyes even more tightly as his lips ran across her neckline...she moved her hands from his hands and holds his shirt........he moved from her neck to her lips..........he looked at her .......her eyes were closed and it looked like she is ready for it as she was pulling him ......he was about to kiss her when Anurag called Kashish from downstairs.......

She opened her eyes suddenly and quickly let go of his shirt...She moves him back and was about to leave when he holds her hand again...She was looking away from him as she was really embarassed and was trying to free her hand without saying anything...He just smiled and then let go of her hand...She ran to the door and unlocked it and just as she was about to go she turned to look at him and then blushed...She turned around and ran downstairs...He just stood there smiling...

Sujal: yeh uncle bhi na..Kitne galat waqt pe awaaz di unhone...5 minute baad bulate to....

He just smiles while ruffling to his hair and went downstairs........

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Ab shaam ko dinner ke baad sab bohat thak gaye hote hain isliye sab apne kamre me aaraam karne chale jaate hain kyunki kal sagaai ka din hai to bohat saara kaam hoga....ab raat ke 11 baje Sujal aur Kashish so rahe hote hain jab Sujal ki aankh khulti hai...Woh apni ghadi me time dekhta hai aur phir Kashish ko dheere se hilata hai...

Sujal: Kashish....utho...utho Kashish...

Kashish: kya hai Sujal sone dona.....

Sujal: Kashish utho na....muje ussi jagah pe jaana hai jahan hum pehli baar saath gaye the aur mera ice cream khaane ka bohat mann horaha hai...Chalo chalte hai......Kashish......

Kashish dheere se aankh kholti hai aur ghadi me dekhti hai.....

Kashish: tumhe raat ko 11 baje ice cream khana hai.........pagal ho gaye ho tum.........

Kashish yeh keh ke wapas so jati hai......

Sujal: ab ice cream khaane ka waqt thodi na hota hai...jab mann kiya tab kha lo.........kisne kaha hai raat ke 11 baje ice cream khaana manna hai?....chalo jaldi se utho ab...........

Kashish: Sujal......tumhe khani hai na tum jao........muje sone do......

Sujal pulls her up...

Sujal: tumhare bigar main kahin nahin jaane waala...chalo jaldi se taiyaar ho jao..........

Kashish gets up and holds her head looking at him............she gets up and takes her clothes and goes to washroom and comes out all change......

Kashish: ab khush.............

Sujal smiles at her...

Sujal: bahot...ab ruko main 5 minute me taiyaar hoke aaya phir hum chalte hain...

He goes into the washroom and comes out changed...They both tip toe out of their room and Sujal slowly closes the door...They look around whilst leaving to see that no one is there...And finally they both leave the house and go towards the ice cream shop....

Kashish: ab yaha to aa gaye ab batao kaun si chahiye.........

Sujal: Hmmmm tumhari favourite...

Kashish: uff.........Kaka ple do chocolate ........

Kaka: Haan bitiya...abhi deta hoon...

He gives them the ice creams

Kashish: ab chale ......waise bhi market bhi khali hai.........tum kabhi pehle Shimla aaye ho.....

Sujal: nahi...bas pehli baar tab aaya tha jab hamari shaadi huyi thi...aur aate hi meri zindagi badal gayi...yeh jagah mere liye bohat khaas hai kyunki is jagah se meri zindagi judi hai...

Kashish: to usi khaas zindagi ke liye main tumhe meri sabse favorite jagah le jati hoon.......

they are still walking with the ice cream eating.........

Sujal: Kyun nahin...main woh har jagah jaana chahta hoon jisse tumhe pyar ho...

Kashish: to chalo....

they were walking when Sujal looked at Kashish.......she has little bit ice cream near her lips.......

Sujal: Kashish...tumhare chehre pe ice cream laggi hai

Kashish: kaha.....dekh kya rahe ho saaf kar dona ple......

Sujal: abhi saaf karta hoon...

He holds her face and moves closer to her,eating the icecream from near her lips...

she just lowerd her eyes......

Sujal: lagta hai tumhari ice cream ka flavour mujse thoda alag tha...tumhari ice cream zyada meethi hai...

She hits her arm on his chest.......

Kashish: besharam....

Sujal: lo...tumhe abhi pata chala......main to paidaishi besharam hoon...par maine to wahin kaha jo sach hai...

He winks at her...

Kashish: ab chale.....

Sujal: haa chalo...aur haan ice cream khaati jao...main hoon na saaf karne ke liye...meri bhi le lena chahiye to...

Kashish: Sujallll.....

She holds his hand and dragges him....He just smiles at her and follows her............After 10 minutes they reach a beautiful hill which was surrounded by pine trees........you can see the moon so clear close to your heart...........and you can also see the little house of shimla from here.........

Sujal was just amazed by the place and looks around...

Sujal: yeh jagah wake me bohat khubsurat hai....

Kashish: muje pata tha tumhe pasand aayegi.........thodi dair yaha pe bethoge mere saath..........

Sujal: kyun nahin Kashish....Ofcourse baithunga...

He sits down below a tree and extends his hand out for her to sit next to him... She puts her hand on his and he just pulls her toward him.........she fells on him and they were lost in their own dreams.........when she realised and makes herself comfortable........she was lying resting her head on his chest and playing with his fingers with hers..........

Sujal: maine kabhi socha nahin tha ki meri zindagi ek din khushiyon se bhar jayegi...aur yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai Kashish...Thanks for coming into my life..

Kashish: thanks kehke paraya banane ki koshish kar rahe ho.......

Sujal: tum mere apno se bhi zyada apni ho mere liye...main tumhe paraya kaise bana sakta hoon...

Kashish: jo maine kiya woh apne liye kiya......kyunki tumhari khushi meri khushi se alag thodi hi hai...........

Sujal: haa yeh baat to sahi hai...hamary khushian to ek doosre se judi hain....waise yeh chand ki chandni aaj kuch kam lag rahi...tumhe nahin lagta?

Kashish: nahi to......aisi chandni to sirf Shimla ki vaadiyon se hi dikhti hai.......

Sujal: muje to lagta hai ke yeh chand jo Shimla ki vaadiyon se dikhta hai uski chandni us chand ke aage kuch nahin jo is waqt meri baahon me hai...

Kashish turned and looked at him and smiles.....

Sujal: lo ab mere chand ki chandni aur bhi bhad gayi...

He moved forward and kissed her forehead

Kashish: tumhare chand ki chandani tumse judi huyi hai........I love you Sujal........

Sujal: I love you too

without saying anything she went into his arms.......and he just held her close to himself and closed his eyes living the moment....... after some time she opened her eyes.......

Kashish: Sujal kitne baje.......

He looks at his watch...

Sujal: 1 baj rahe hain..

Kashish: kya ek baj gaye........Sujal ab to bahot dair ho gayi.......chalo wapas ghar chalte hai........agar kisi ko pata chalega to......chalo.....

Sujal: Tum darti bohat ho...Chalo chalte hai.........

Kashish: chalo.....

They both leave from there hand in hand....... they are walking on middle of the streets when Kashish sees something and just stop walking.........he turned back and looked at her with question..........

Sujal: kya hua?tum ruk kyun gayi?

Kashish: woh samne dog hai......main nahi chal sakti is raste se.....

Sujal bursts out laughing...

Sujal: tum is kutte se darr gayi?...isko to tumse darna chahiye...

He continues to laugh...

Kashish: pata hai muje......ab tum dekh kya rahe ho bhagao na ise yaha se..........

Sujal: Kashish main kaise bhagaun isse...tum darr kyun rahi ho...main hoon na tumhare saath...ab chalo kuch nahin karega woh.............

one of the dog barks at her and she got so scared......she closed her eyes and hugges him so tight.......

Kashish: Sujal muje is kutte se bachao.......sujal ple.....

He held her in his arms and slowly moved her hair back which had fallen on her face...He seperated her and looked at her...He moved forward and picked her up in his arms and starts to walk...

Sujal: Ab to nahin darr lag raha na?

Kashish: nahi...

Sujal: Mere hote huay darr tumhe chu bhi nahin sakta...yeh mera tumse vaada hai...

He smiles at her and she hugs him tightly with her arms around his neck and her head resting on his shoulder...He continues to walk when they reach home...

Kashish: Sujal ab ghar aa gaya ab to neeche utaro muje......

Sujal: Itni jaldi kahan...ab too main tumhe bed pe hi utarunga...

Kashish: koi dekh lega......

Sujal: to dekh lene do...tum meri biwi ho...muje kissi se bhi darr nahin lagta

Kashish: lekin.....Sujal.....

Sujal: Shhhh...maine tumhe uthaya tumhari marzi se tha lekin main tumhe apni marzi se utarunga...

Kashish: jaisa tum chaho......tumhe kabhi mana kar sakti hoon....

He smiles at her

Sujal: I love you...

Kashish: I love you too.......

He starts walking towards the door unaware that Anurag was seeing all this from the window smiling.............Sujal slowly carried her into the room without making any noise...He slowly made her lay on the bed and kissed her forehead...She just smiled at him..He lied down next to her and pulled her into his arms and both fell asleep after spending some beautiful moments together

 

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Hey chinmayi dear!! first of all welcoem 2 our FF!!!....we are seriously honoured that being a silent member, this part made u comment!!!...it really means a lot 2 us...well this is the first FF we have done n partnership and feels gr88 that ppl are liking it....but yes Kashish's individual FF's are superb 2 no doubt in that!!!....we are more than happy that u liked this part and thought it was cute....and soo sweet that u always look 4ward 2 us updating....hpe we luve up2 ure expectations in the future 2...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago



hey samrah sweetheart...thanx 4 ure comments...we are glad u liked this part!!!!....yes this part was full of almost evry emotion....we are glad u liked hw Kashish suprised Kripa and Ayaan...aur Sujal aur Angad tho humesha hi apne pyar mein khoye rehte hain!!!....we are glad u liked all the masi and hw Kashish was naraaz with Sujal.....haan bohat hi alag idea socha usne Kashish ko manane ka we are glad u liekd the room scene!!!....yes AK will soon be gettign engaged....thanx 4 liking the ice cream scene 2 and thinking it was cute...we wll surely update soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago

[QUOTE=seher]
hey both of u here i;m back again , that was such a wonderful update yaar!!! specially last part jab dono ice cream kay liye jatay hain, ore phir hill wala scene love it yaar kia nazara hoga chandi raat main dono shimla ki khubsoorat waadi main chal rahay hain sab say alag apni he dunya main madhush kia baat hay yaar, ore jis tarah say tum lugu nay discribe kia hay mujay tu aysa lag raha tha jasay main be us pal ko mehsoos kar rahi hun, even every time jab be new update parti hun bas khu jaati hun usi dunya main kia jadu hay tum lugu kay haath main hamaray dilun ko khush karna hoob aata hay......keep it up... waiting for next part............[/QUOTE]

hey sweetheart!!!! no thanx once again 4 such wonderful comments...u praised us more than required dear seriously!! thats really sweet of u 2 appreciate our work...and all we wanna say is the magic is not ours but SK's...we are just more than happy that we manage 2 entertain u n keep u guys happy...we are glad u liked the ice cream scene and the hill scene 2....waakay mein atmoshpere kaafi romantic tha wahan kaupar se apni jodi wahan thi tho romance was in the air....and if u cud feel that moment and visualise it then samjho humara kaam hogaya bcoz we always try n give as much detail as possible so you guys can visualise it....once agen so sweet of u dear!! no thanx 4 making us feel soo very special!!!...we will surely keep updating...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago



hey swetha dear thank u sooo much 4 ure lovely comments!!! we are glad u liked this part.....yes it was cute how Kashish was running aroudn teh streets of Shimla...it seemed as though the life of Shimla is back......we are glad u liked SK's convo in the room....well the convo they did actually have there...yes it was a very unique way of manofying her....we ae glad u liked the ice creampart...yes it was a mixture of romance and comedy so basically romantic comedy....we are glad u thought him carrying her back hme was sweet....yhhthey didnt realise Anurag was atching....and ure most welcoem 4 the update dear...thanx 2 u 4 commenting!!!....we'll surely update agen soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago

[QUOTE=togepe30]Okk....!
Ab ye mera second comment hai...! I just read it the 2nd time !!
Taras khao merepe..Mere exam chal rahe hain....And I'm sitting n reading ur ff two times a day...
To zyada wait mat karana for next part....!
Kal chahiye...coz i know ki aj toh nahi milega !!

Luv,
Vandu[/QUOTE]

once again thank u 4 ure comments vandu!!! aur yeh kya u shud be revising ure work not Saajhi....tum yeh din mein do baar parogi tho kaise chalega!!!....yaar tum humpe taras khao hum kaise har roz naya part likhe!! waqt tho chahiye na!!!....but we will try our level best n update 4 u 2day seen as though u have been so sweet and even though ure exams are oing on u are readign our FF hum koshish karenge ke tumhe zyada wait na karaen but have patience dear...sabar ka phal bohat hi meetha hota hai...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago



thanx 4 ure comments dear!! we are glad u liked it...keep reading and commenting....luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago



hey jyothi sweetehart no thanx 4 the comments!! we are more than happy that u liked this part....we are glad u loved teh SK romance....yhhh we guess Sujal will have 2 tell Anurag 2 improve his timing..poor Sujal...we will cont soon...keep reading and commenting..luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago

[QUOTE=kvn1983]
woah really a nice one superb mind blowing one both parts r awesome plz continue it soon & thanks for the pms
"Kash mere wajud me aap utar jaye, Dekhu aaina aur aap nazar aaye, Aap ho samne to waqt thaher jaye, Aur aapko dekhte dekhte zindagi guzar jaye."

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hey dear thank u soo much once agen 4 ure lovely comments!!! we are more than happy that u liked both parts!!!...we will surely continue soon and ure most welcome for the pm, its our pleasure......once agen absolutely beautiful lines...we loved reading them...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago



hey dear thank u soo much!!! we are glad u liked it n thought it was sweet n romantic!!!...we will surely cont soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago



hey tanu we wnt 4get u next time jaan ok!!.....luv Kashish and Summi

15 years ago

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