Chapter 50

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ANANYA ROY

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7th April,2006,0900 hrs..

Court of Marshall..


Negi--Defence may commence..

Naina--Thank you..Your honour..I want to call Inspector Ingle as my witness.

Negi--Granted..

Senior Inspector Ingle witness box me aaye..

Naina--Inspector Ingle..Arbaaz Ali Ibrahim k case k baare me zara humen bataaiye..kis binaah par aapne unko arrest kia..detail me bataiye..


Ingle--Arbaaz ko arrest karna hi tha..kyonki Darbar saab ki beti ki shaadi thi.. aur Arbaaz is shaadi me badha daal sakta tha..isi lia..hum usko arrest karne gaye..socha ek Gun plant kia jaayega uske ghar me..par humen zaroorat hi nahi padi..ghar me pahle se hi RDX tha..bahut zyada amount me..humen hairani hui..humne Ibrahim Raza Noor ko arrest kia..baad me uska Beta Arbaaz aaya..usne ilzaam khud par lia..par yeh baat sach hai..k us ghar me bahut zyada RDX tha..National Security ka sawal tha..yeh mumkin tha..k agar us waqt hum woh RDX zapt naa karte..toh Mumbai me ek aur blast ho hi sakta tha..

Naina--Aapko bura nahi laga..k aap bina wajah ek ko arrest karne gaye the..?

Ingle--Jee nahi..kyonki..Darbar saab ki Beti bach gayi..varna aise ghar me.. jaha par RDX milta ho..us ghar me uska future kyaa hota?Uski zindagi barbad hone se bach gayi..


Naina--Court ko bata dena chaahti hoon..k woh Darbar Saab ki beti main hi hoon..Naina Darbar..now Naina Shekhawat..anyways..aapke paas..Arbaaz ka koi record hai?


Ingle--Dekhiye..case file yaa charge sheet banne se pahle hi ..Arbaaz farar ho chuka tha..ek primary record hai humare paas...

Naina--RDX ..jo mila..us ghar se..uske details aap de sakte hain?Koi report..?

Ingle--Jee..woh toh maine is Court of Marshall me pesh kia hai...

Naina--yes..I can see that..Defence yeh chaahti hai..k us details ko ek baar fir se court k saamne laaya jaaye..


Negi--Proceed..

Naina--Defence will have to make a projection..

Negi--Granted..

Projection start kia gaya...Arrest karne k waqt jo photos lie gaye the..unko hi slide show me dikhaya jaa raha tha..

RDX box par jo projection hua..us par Naina ne kaha,"FREEZE.."


waha par roka gaya...

Naina--NOW ZOOM..

Slide ko zoom kia gaya..jo dekha gaya..usse yehi pata chalta hai..us RDX k box ko bahut pahle hi baramad kia gaya tha..aur Army k ek operation me hi usko zapt kia gaya tha..


Naina--Court is baat par ghaur kare..is box ko bahut pahle hi Army ne zapt kia tha..seal hai Army ka..aur jo chalan ka paper hai..us par bhi ghaur kia jaaye...Date hai 5th January,1999 ka..is ka matlab toh yehi nikalta hai..k is RDX ko Army k search party ne 1999 k January me hi zapt kia tha..

Menon--Objection..irrelevant..matters are being raised..

Negi--Sustained...Defence..come to the point..

Naina--Defence is baat par roshni daalna chaahti hai..k..1999 k 5th January ko..jo box zapt kia gaya ..Army ne zapt kia..woh box..Maahim k Ibrahim Raza Noor k ghar kaise pahooch gayi?Iska matlab toh yehi nikalta hai..k Army k kisi Officer k saath mil kar yeh conspiracy ki gayi thi...Mumbai me ek aur blast karvane k lia..

Menon--Objection..

Negi--Sustained..Defence..come to the point..

Naina--Yes your honour..I am coming to the exact point..Maharashtra yaa uske aas paas...us waqt..matlab 1999 ,5th January ko..ek hi aisa search opeartion hua tha...aur jiske baare me yeh baat pata chali thi..k zapt kia gaya ek box..kho gaya tha..is search opeartion k Officer In-Charge the Major Manjeet Kukreja..jinko show cause letter bhi bheja gaya tha...yeh opeartion hua tha..Bhusawal district k ek jungle me..Bhusawal..ek aisi jagah..jo Madhy Pradhesh aur Maharashtra k ek dum border par hai..is baare me jab Defence ne chhaan been ki..tab pata chala..yeh RDX zapt kia gaya tha Major Kukreja k dekh rekh me..1999,5th January ko..aur yeh box ghayab hua tha 1st of March,1999 ko..aur baad me Police ne is box ko baramad kia..23rd of March, 1999 ko..Ibrahim Raza Noor k ghar pe...iska Defence kyaa matlab nikaale..? Yehi matlab nikalta hai k Major Kukreja bhi us conspiracy ka ek  hissa the..

Menon--Objection..

Negi--Over-ruled..Defence may continue..

Naina--yeh hai woh saare papers..us search opeartion k details..Major Kukreja ko bheja gaya show cause letter ki copy..Defence yeh bhi batana chaahti hai..k Major Kukreja ka baad me promotion bhi hua...pahle Lt. Col. Kukreja..and now..Col. Kukreja..jo is waqt court me haazir hai..Arbaaz Ali Ibrahim and Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat..dono me do baatein common hain...pehla pehloo..ek insaan..Naina..aur ab yeh baat ab court me aa gayi...k doosri baat kyaa hai..Defence ne yeh baat saabit kia hai..abhi abhi..k Col. Kukreja ka naam in dono jagah par aate hain..us waqt bhi Col.Kukreja wajah the..Arbaaz jab fansa tha..aaj Major Shekhawat bhi fanse hain..yeh link..jo hai..Defence khud confused hai..apna confusion Defence court ko bayaan kar chuki hai..

Negi--Inspector Ingle se aur kuchh poochhna  chaahengi aap?

Naina--No more questions ..

Negi--OK..continue your pleading..

Naina--Ab..doosra pehloo..jo baat bahut pahle aa jaani chahie thi..Major Shekhawat...un par aarop hai..k unhone Arbaaz ALi Ibrahim urf Ibrahim Ali ko maar dala...gala daba k..yaa kisi aur tareeke se..toh kuchh photos ko..special exhibit k taur pe Defence pesh karna chaahti hai..

Negi--Granted..

Naina--Yeh woh photos hai..scene of crime k..jab Arbaaz urf Ibrahim ki laash mili thi..photos par yeh jo chees dikh rahi hai..ek star..jo Officers k kandho par sajti hai..Arbaaz k laash k paas ek start mila..par saath hi saath..Major Shekhawat  ki bhi photo li gayi..accused k taur pe..ghaur is baat par kia jaaye..k inke kandhe k stars toh kandhe par hi hai..agar hum maan le..k Arbaaz k saath Major Shekhawat ki haathapai hui thi..toh yeh jo star mila hai ..Arbaaz k laash k paas..yeh star toh Major Shekhawat k kandhe se geerni chahie thi..par yeh kaise mumkin hai..k Major Shekhawat k kandhe k stars sahi jagah par hain...jungle me unhone stars ko kaise manage kia?Iska matlab toh yehi hai..k Arbaaz k sath kisi aur ki haathapai hui thi.....

Court me shorgol shuru ho gaya...

Negi--Order..Order..please..silence..


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Col.Bhatia--Kukreja..next Court Marshall..tum par hi report karoonga main..


Maj. Gen.Narendar Negi--Naina..you did a brilliant job..


Major Kashmira Kaul Khurana--My God..this is so dangerous!!Baat yeha tak pahooch gayi..but this Naina...has a great mind..such a sharp brain..

Brigadier   Danesh Rehman--Col. Kukreja..nothing but a black spot on Indian Army..

Brigadier Suresh Achrekar--Captain Naina..you are brilliant....

Brigadier Sarandeep Singh Sodhi--I am stunned...I think..Captain Naina k service period k baad..inko RAW k lia recomend karna chahie..

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Menon--I knew it...Naina..I am proud of you..Army k Lawyers ka sar ooncha kia tumne...brilliant..


Yadav--Eee..Naina..Madam..bahut pahoochi hui nikli..par Kukreja..yeh itna bada kameena ..!!


Pandey--Hum ka bahut khusi mila aaj..Kukreja ki dhoti utar gayi..aur line maar saale..maja aa raha hai..Kukreja..??

Gill--Captain Naina..aag da gola...dikhti hai shabnam..asal me hai shola..khus kitta...


Sujaat--Well..ab sab theek ho jaayega..Major Shekhawat ko reeha kia jaayega ..I am relaxed..

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Raj--Arre baap re..main jisko Ram Jethmalani samajh raha tha..woh toh Karamchand nikli...James Bond ko bhi iske pair dho kar peene chahie..





Yeh the ab tak ..logo k reactions...


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Naina--Ab ..Major Shekhawat ko Defence witness box me bulana chaahegi..

Negi--granted..

Naina--Thanks you..


Raj witness box me aaya..

Naina--Major Shekhawat...

Raj--Jee..main kyaa boloon?

Naina--Aaap kuchh bhi kahiye..main sunoongi..

Menon--Objection..

Negi--Sustained...Captain..don't redicule the case..

Naina--Sorry..toh ab tak jo aapne dekha...Major Shekhawat..aap bataiye..aap is tarha chup kyon rahe?


Raj--Col.Kukreja ne mujhe dhamki di thi..

Naina--Excuse me?Dhamki..?

Raj--Jee..meri patni musibat me fans sakti hai..aisi dhamki mujhe di gayi thi...

Naina--Aisa kyon?

Raj--Jis din se ..inhone meri patni ko dekha hai..matlab IMA k special duty k waqt..tab se..yeh har mumkin koshish karte rahe..taa k..meri aur meri patni k beech ek communication gap ban jaaye..

Naina--Aisa kyon?

Raj--My wife is very beautiful...aur auraton k lia..Col.Kukreja ki kumzori..court me saabit ho chuki hai..


Naina--Aap kumzor nahi hote..auraton k lia..?


Raj--Jee..main apni patni k lia hi kumzor hoon..as she is my leaglly weded wife..I have every right to be weak..but..yeh Col.Kukreja..humesha doosron ki patnion par dore daalte hain..isi wajah se inhone mujhe threat kia..taa k main chup rahoon..

Naina--Thanks..you can go..

Raj--Thank you..

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Naina--ab baari aati hai..ek kahani ki...

1966...3rd September,Punjab k Ruktapur gaon me Manjeet naam ka ek ladka janam leta hai.Manjeet Kukreja ..usi gaaon me ek ladki thi..jiska naam tha Nadira..Manjeet aur Nadira me bahut pyaar tha..par 1985,jab Manjeet 19 saal ka tha..tab usko jaana pada.. NDA..1988..Manjeet lauta..Gaon..tab tak woh Lt. Manjeet Kukreha ban chuka tha...serving Officer in Indian Army..a permanent commissioned officer..Gaon wapas aa kar pata chala..k Nadira ki shaadi ho gayi hai..woh ab Bombay me hai..Nadira k gharwale the ghareeb..Ibrahim Raza Noor..jiski pehli Biwi ki maut ho chuki thi..aur uska ek Beta tha pehli shaadi se...jab Nadira se shaadi hui..Ibrahim Raza Noor ki..1986 me tab Ibrahim Raza Noor ka beta Arbaaz..kareeb 6 saal ka tha..zaaheer si baat hai.. Nadira is shaadi se khush nahi thi..ek toh Manjeet se juda hone ka ghum.. upar se aise admi se shaadi..jiska beta hai..Nadira ne apne zindagi k saath samjhauta karna shuru toh kia..par..puri tarha se apne man ko samjha nahi paai..

Negi--Defence..come to point..

Naina--Your Honour..aise me...Ibrahim Raza Noor k ghar par Manjeet Kukreja kyun rakhvayega..RDX??Motive kyaa hai?Motive humen khud hi samajhna hoga..motive yehi tha..Ibrahim Raza Noor ko raaste se hatana..ishque bahut zor par tha Nadira aur Manjeet ka..par isse unko doogna faida hua..Arbaaz ne ilzaam apne sar par lia..Ibrahim Raza Noor..mar gaye..heart fail ho gaya tha unka..par fir bhi Manjeet ka sapna pura nahi hua..Arbaaz ek mujrim ban chuka tha..duniya k saamne Nadira ek dukhiyaari Maa ban chuki thi..samaj, kanoon..Nadira aur Manjeet ko is baat ki ijazat nahi de rahe the..k woh ek ho sake...par dono ka meljol kaayam tha..us waqt bhi..jab Arbaaz Army k cell me bandh tha..jis baat ka saboot is Court of Marshall me pesh kia jaa chuka hai.. par aise me scene me change...Lt. Kukreja se ab Col.Kukreja ban chuka tha Manjeet..aur ab uski mulakat hui Captain Naina Singh Shekhawat se..jo IMA gayi thi special duty par..par waha par bhi rukavat..Captain Naina ka pati ..Major Rajveer..Nadira aur Manjeet ki umar same thi..par Naina thi jawaan.. Manjeet ko zindagi me doosra maksad mila.Naina ki jawani aur uski khubsurti..Manjeet k dil me ghar bana gayi..wapas woh wahi karne laga..jo usne Nadira k Pati k saath kia tha..ab raasta mushkil tha..kyonki Naina ka Pati..Major Rajveer khud ek Officer hai Indian Army me..jiski bahut izzat hai unit me..aur Rajveer k Dad..ek King Maker hain..isi lia jaal bahut gehra buna gaya..ab tak ki saari ghatnaaye..isi baat ki taraf ishara  karti hain...Motive.. Col.Kukreja ka motive hum isi baat se samajh sakte hain..par itna toh humen pata hai..aur jo Defence court me bataya..us baat ko saabit karne k lia.. Col. Kukreja k gharwalon ko..yaa..Ruktapur gaon k logo ko bulaya jaa sakta hai.. jo gavah the..Nadira aur Manjeet k pyaar k..par beech me jo hua..woh abhi bhi ek missing link hai..us baat ka pata humen lagana hai...

Court me fir se shorgol...

Negi--Silence...

Menon--Saari baatein theek hai..par mamla hai murder ka..aur Major Rajveer ne khoon kia hai..is baat ka pakka saboot hai..marne k waqt..Arbaaz k saath hathapai hui thi.Arbaaz k kapdo me..khoon k chhente the.Arbaaz k nails me khoon lage the..Arbaaz ne nakhoon se nocha tha..apne khooni ko..woh khoon..jiska blood group hai..B+..Major Rajveer ka blood group bhi hai B+....

Naina--DNA test hua?DNA test se pata chalta..k Arbaaz k nakhoon me jo khoon tha..woh kiska tha..sirf blood group se kisiko khooni saabit nahi kar sakte...iska matlab B+ positive jiska blood group hoga..wahi Arbaaz ka kaatil hoga..us waqt..Officer In Charge Col.Kukreja agar DNA test karvate..toh aaj is Court Of Marshall ki zaroorat hi nahi padti..par unka motive kuchh aur hi tha...woh chaahte hi the k..Major Rajveer fanse..buri tarha se..iske lia.. unhone Major ko dhamki bhi di..



Negi--Defence..aur kisiko cross question karna chaahti hai?

Naina--Defence Nadira Bano ko sawal karna chahti hai..

Negi--Granted..

Naina--Nadirajee..ab toh sab aapke saamne aa hi gaya..ab toh bataiye..aap me zara bhi self respect hoga..toh aap sach zaroor batayengi..

Nadira--Jo kuchh bhi kaha gaya..sab sach hai..main aur Manjeet ek doosre se pyaar karte hain..par meri shaadi Arbaaz k Abba se kara di gayi...main khush nahi thi..aur mere Shohar ko pat chal gaya tha..humare rishtey k baare me..unhone Manjeet ko dhamki di thi..mujhse door rahne ko kaha tha..aur usika badla lia maine aur Manjeet ne..RDX rakhva kar..par Arbaaz pakda gaya..mujhe naatak karna pada...ek Dukhiyari Maa banna pada..


Naina--isi lia..aapne paper me woh article chhapvaya tha?

Nadira--Haan..jis din Arbaaz ko Hydrabad le jaa rahe the..us din ki khabar bhi mujhe thi..Manjeet ne bataya..Arbaaz marega..maine poochha.."tum par ilzaam aayega.."..usne kaha nahi..kisi aur ko hi jhelna hoga sab kuchh.. Manjeet ne..Arbaaz ko maar dala..Arbaaz jungle k raaste bhaga..aur Manjeet ne usko doosre raaste se follow kia..bas..Major Rajveer fans gaye..mujhe dukh hai..k jinhone mere bete ko..sahi insaaf dilana chaha..maine unko fanste hue dekha..par main majboor thi..Manjeet k lia..apni mohabbat ko nikaal nahi paai dil se..

Naina--Ab aap unse mohabbat nahi karti?

Nadira--Woh mujhse Mohabbat nahi karta..


Naina--Aisa kyon lagta hai aapko?

Nadira--Ek baar nashe me usne Naina ka naam lia..aur bahut kuchh kaha..k Rajveer ko beech me se hatna hoga..Naina k bachche ko Manjeet apna naam dene tak ko taiyyar hai..bas..usko Naina chahie...maine khud bahut baar mehsoos kia..k kuchh toh badla hai..Manjeet ki zindagi me..aue woh wajah hai Naina..isi lia..sara khel khela Manjeet ne..mujhe dukh hai..apne aap par sharam aati hai..k meri wajah se..kai begunaaho ki jaan gayi...Ibrahim Raza Noor..aur Arbaaz..dono ki jaane gayi..


Naina--That is all..your honour..The Defence rests the case..



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"Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat is released from every charge and he is found not at all guilty in this case..he is re-established with his current post and seniority with full dignity,pride and honour.He can resume his duty with his full authority..Col.Manjeet Kukreja is to be taken under immidiate custody of Army with immidiate effect.A parallel Court of Enquiry is to be set up against him..and he is to be sent under Lie detection and Narco Analysis test with immidiate effect..This Court Of Marshall is dismissed.."


Jury Board k faislon ko mila kar yehi tha final verdict..Maj.Gen. Narendar Negi ne is baat ka ailaan kar dia..



Naina ko Army hospital me shift kia gaya..bahut zyada stress tha us par.. blood pressure zara high ho gaya tha..Naina ko jab hosh aaya..tab Raj uske saamne tha..aur sab koi the..Mita Devi thi..Maj.Gen.Negi the..Varun tha..aur Nisha bhi thi..

Varun se Raj ki mulakat hui...Negi ne milvaya...Raj ko pata chala..Varun Nisha ka mangetar hai..Raj ko 440 volt ka jhatka laga..Raj Varun ko dhone k chakkar me tha..par uski bolti hi bandh ho gayi thi..





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[QUOTE=varshita]Again a huge applause for u Anu.
Mujhe lagta hai ki tum se acchi fic vo bhi bilkul alag plot n story waali koi itne acche se nahi likh sakta hai yaar.
Really hat's offto u darling.==Thanks..
Naina ne aakhir apne pati ko us kameene Kukreja k changul se chuda hi liya na, she is really amazing .Raj ab us k paas aur us k saath hai aur humesha rahega.==Haa..woh toh hai..
Kukreja itni jabardast planning kar sakta hai mujhe nahi pata tha aur jab us ka man bhar gaya Nadira Bano se to Naina par itna jyada fida ho gaya. Bhagwaan ne hi bachaya Naina ko us k haatho se varna vo poori tayyari kar chuka tha.==Kukreja..Tharki No. 1 hai..is baat me koi shak nahi..
update soon.[/QUOTE]

15 years ago

[QUOTE=Mahak Sinha]Awesome part Anu,
dil khush kar ditta tussi.==Thanks..
Raj finally bahar aa gaya apni Naina k paas aur wapas apni duty usi honour k saath join ki us ne.==Yeh toh hona hi tha..
Naina ne jo bhi kiya patni ka farz to tha hi par shayad us ne apne farz se kahin jyada kiya Raj k liye. Mai Major Kashimira se agree hoon ki Naina ko retire hone k baad RAW join kar lena chahiye.==Yeh Major Kashmira ne nahi kaha..
Is move k liye Varun ne bhi kitni tareef ki Naina ki aur sab k sab khush to the hi surprise bhi hue the Naina k is sudden move se.==Naina.. Jhansi ki Rani..
Mujhe lagta hai ki agar Naina na hoti to pata nahi Raj kabhi is jaal se bahar aa bhi pata ya nahi.==Nahi..Raj ko bahut pahle hi baahar nikaal sakti thi..par usko puri tarha se..Kukreja ko todna tha...
Mera man kar raha hai Naina ko ek jadoo ki jhappi dene ka.==Yeh kaam Raj kar dega..
Kukreja is kadar gira hua hai koi bhi nahi soch sakta tha ki ek Armuy officer jis k liye us ka desh hi sab kuch hota hai vo aisa bhi ho sakta hai. I don't believe.==Hota hai..
Kukreja Raj k baccho ko bhi apnane ko ready tha my god kitna jyada soch liya tha su kameene ne us ki himmat ki to mai dad deti hoon.
I think ab fic finish hoga na? Par start another soon.==Haan..khatam hoga...I am feeling bad..

update soon.
Hat's off to Naina.==Yes..that is for sure..[/QUOTE]

15 years ago

@desaiprachi07Thanks a lot..you take your own time..@gazal_sameerThanks..for your comment..keep reading..@digimon_pockemonthanks sarah..yaar..itna bura lag raha hai...last part baki hai sirf..@sweta2005I will update..waqt aane do..

15 years ago

[QUOTE=dazzling_glory]WOW'.FANTASTIC'EXCELENT ''SUPERB'..FABULOUS''MINDBLOWING'..TOOOO GOOD'.ROCKING'LOVED EVERY PART OF IT==Thanks..

How do you come up with such a fantastic story'.one that brings an the story to its perfect climax''tumne kamal kar diya'==I know..

Naina was very bold and confident from the beginning making it clear that she is here to openly challenge everyone'==Haan..Naina ,Jhansi ki Rani ki Modern version..

Arbaz ke ghar pe RDX plant ki gait hi'.who RDX army se churai gayi thi aur ye chori kukreja ne kit hi'..jiske liye use show cause bhi diya gaya tha'.this was our first shock'==Hmm..dia na..zor ka jhatka zor se..??

Kukreja ne kitne logon ko fasaya hai'.==Maine count nahi kia..2 cases humare saamne hain..baaki ka pata nahi..

Where and how did naina find all these evidences'.she is just brilliant'..There is no way that any one could challenge any of it'.she is thorough'
And the most shocking was the past shared by Kukreja and nadira'.he did all of this so that he could get nadira back'==Yaar..agle ud me padh lena..

All of this was preplanned and nadira was involved in it'.i am glad that she finally admitted everything'.kureja has no character at all'he just keeps falling for toher peoples wives'..==Full on tharki hai..aadat se majboor..

Everyone is praising naina'. Brigadier Sodhi's dialogue ke service period ke baad Naina ko RAW ke liye recomend karna chahiye was indeed a good suggestion'.==Haan..itni achhi Officer jo hai.,.,

Even Varun is praising her'she has indeed restored the armys homour'.. Pandey and Gill reaction are too funny==Thanks..

Raj's reaction is the best of all'.. where he says' James Bond ko Naina ke pau dhoke peene chahiye..tooo good.==Abhi James Bond ko khabar bhejna chahie..

RAj has finally declared innocent and has been returned his honour'.==Yes..yeh toh hona hi tha..

Par is sab ke bad naina ko hospital jana pada'.she has been through a lot'.==Yeh bhi ..hona hi tha...

And

15 years ago

[QUOTE=Shaina_b]Too good!!!Awesome!!!!==Thanks a lot..
Naina is now openly declaring she was that girl without any hesitation!!!! ==Karna padta hai..aisa..zaroorat hai..
Arbaaz ke ghar jo RDX ka box mila tha usse Army pehle hi kisi operation mein zapt kar chuki thi!!! Thats shocking!!!! ==Shocking indeed..
Kukreja ne Raj ko hi nahi fasaya balki Arbaaz ko fasane ke peeche bhi uska haath tha!!!! Kukreja seems to be the root of all trouble!!!! ==That for sure..
Naina toh saboot pe saboot pesh kar rahi hai!!!! She is too good!!!! Just brilliant!!!! ==Haan..saare saboot ek hi baar me..Kukreja ki kamar todne k lia..
Sab Naina ki tareef kar rahe hai!!!! Aur Kukreja ko gali de rahe hai!!!! ==Aisa hi hona chahie..
I liked Brigadier Sodhi's dialogue ke service period ke baad Naina ko RAW ke liye recomend karna chahiye!!!!! ==Haan..itni kaabil Officer jo hai..
Even Varun is praising her!!!! Pandey and Gill are too funny!!!! ==Haan..Pandey aur Gill..cartoon network ki paidaish..aur Varun..achha insaan hai..
Raj's reaction is classic!!! He is right James Bond ko Naina ke pau dhoke peene chahiye!!!! ==Haan..yeh baat ab James Bond tak kaun pahoochaye??!!
When Raj came into the witness box Naina's dialogue was quite funny and cute!!!! ==Haan..last din me..Naina relaxed ho gayi thi..
Accha huya Raj admitted ke Kukreja had threatened him!!!! ==Rak ne bhi mauka dekh kar mara chauka..
Naina question ke aap kamzor nahi hai auraton ke liye and Raj's answer to it was awesome!!!! ==Haan..Raj bhi kum badmaash nahi hai..
Kukreja hamesha doosro ki patnion par dore dalta hai!!! ==Aadat se majboor hai..kameena..
What a story!!!! Nadira and Kukreja's history really stretches far back!!!! ==kahani puri filmy hai..
Nadira ke saath jo huya tha theek nahi huya tha!!!!! Magar Kukreja ka dil bhi usse nahi bhara aur woh Naina ke peeche padh gaya!!! ==Kukreja..the eternal t

15 years ago

@ritukaThanks a lot..I am very grateful..to readers like you@fanatic 21Yaar..main kuchh bhi nahi..tum logo k bina..tum jaise loyal readers hi humari taakat hain..@prerna1Thank you very much..actually..I used all the words in my fic..so you could not find them

15 years ago

so finally raj is released
khuraja to gaya
maza a gaya

15 years ago

Hello Ananya dear,
It's really a awesome fic . I read it's three parts today.
Naina aur Raj ab milenge itne saalo baad aur Naina ko to pata bhi nahi hai ki ye vahi Raj hai jis se us ki shaadi pehle fix hue thi.
Dheere dheere mai comment doongi jab padh loongi sab.

15 years ago

Again a huge applause for u Anu.
Mujhe lagta hai ki tum se acchi fic vo bhi bilkul alag plot n story waali koi itne acche se nahi likh sakta hai yaar.
Really hat's offto u darling.
Naina ne aakhir apne pati ko us kameene Kukreja k changul se chuda hi liya na, she is really amazing .Raj ab us k paas aur us k saath hai aur humesha rahega.
Kukreja itni jabardast planning kar sakta hai mujhe nahi pata tha aur jab us ka man bhar gaya Nadira Bano se to Naina par itna jyada fida ho gaya. Bhagwaan ne hi bachaya Naina ko us k haatho se varna vo poori tayyari kar chuka tha.
update soon.varshita2008-11-14 22:56:24

15 years ago

Hello!! Anu!!!Sorry for the late reply...Wow!! what a great update....Finally sachhai ki jeet hui...Aur Naina ne kar dikhaya....apne pati ko bachake...Finally that hopeless moron Kukreja is going to punished...great...He is such a.......(mere dictionary mein words kam pad rahe hai)So at last Raj will be able to join his duty with honour.....Lovely.....Anu, thank u so much for this lovely update......You are fantastic no doubt.....It's awesome......absolutely......take care...Continue soon...loveRiya.

15 years ago

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