Chapter 47
Naina apne quarter me chali toh aai..par uska mann nahi lag raha hai...
ab aur taakat nahi hai usme..haalaat se ladhne ki.
kab tak yuh hi ladhti rahegi?aakhir kab tak?kab uski yeh ladhai khatam hogi?ab aur bardasht nahi hota..khushi k chand lamhe yuh hi kyon beet jaate hain?Naina ki kismat ko khushi kyon nahi raas aati?apne kamre me baith kar Naina ro rahi hai..kuchh achha nahi lag raha hai.. mann bahut bhaari hai..kisi se baat karne ko jee kar raha hai.
Naina ne apne Papa ko phone kia.
Darbar--Hello..?
Naina--Papa..?
Darbar--Naina..kaisi hai Beti?
Naina--theek hoon..
Darbar--Beti..mujhe Doctors jaane nahi de rahe hain,par mujhe har baat ki khabar hai..
Naina foot foot k rone lagi...
Darbar--Nainaaa..Beti ..nahi rote...bura waqt hai..aaya hai..guzar bhi jaayega..
Naina--Ohh..Papa..ab aur nahi bardasht hota..main kyaa karoon?
Darbar--Naina..Beti..tu toh bahut Bahadur hai..itne me hi darr gayi?tab toh nahi darri thi..jab ghar se chali gayi thi...
Naina--It is not about me Papa..not about me..it's about Raj..he is suffering.. because of me..I am so helpless..
Darbar--nahi..Naina..rona mat..Beti..aise waqt par rote nahi..Naina..teri tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi...
Naina--Papa..aap ko ek baat bataoon?
Darbar--kyaa baat hai?
Naina--I am going to have twins..
Darbar--bahut achhi khabar hai Beti..suno..main jaise hi theek hota hoon.. main waha aane ki koshish karoonga...
Naina--Papa..I am missing you...
Darbar--I feel guilty Naina..na main waisa karta..naa aaj yeh sab kuchh hota..
Naina--No Papa..kuchh aur hi baat hai..main pata lagane ki koshish kar rahi hoon..but..kuchh haath nahi aa raha hai..I am so helpless Papa...
Darbar--Naina..aisa kabhi mat sochna Beti.Raj ko kuchh nahi hoga.. zaroorat padne par..main apne saare contacts use karoonga..infact maine use karna shuru bhi kar dia hai..you don't worry...
Naina ka rona bandh nahi ho raha hai...
Darbar--Naina..saamne hoti toh tumko ek thappad maarta..samajhdar ho.. jaanti ho..is waqt rona dhona theek nahi...OK..suno..kuchh naam socha hai tumne?
Naina--kiska?
Darbar--Mere Grandchildren ka?
Naina--nahi..abhi tak toh nahi..
Darbar--Yeh zimmedari mujh par chhodo..OK..aur cheer up..meri Bahadur bachchi ho tum..maine toh Secretary se bol bhi dia hai..Office me Mithai baatne ko..main Nana banne wala hoon..kum khushi ki baat hai kya? chalo.. ab rona bandh karo..
Naina--Papa..Raj ko kuchh hoga toh nahi?
Darbar--kuchh nahi hoga...Naina..don't cry..ab main naraz ho jaaoonga..rona bandh karo..
Naina--Yes Papa...
Darbar--apna khayaal rakhna..
Naina--hmm..Bye Papa..
apne Father se baat kar k Naina ka dil thoda halka hua..
par darr dil se jata hi nahi..change kar k bed par let gayi Naina...khana bana hua hai..par khaane ko dil nahi karta..sab kuchh baahar aa jata hai..
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Karwa Chauth ki raat k baad subha...
Naina ne change bhi nahi kia ..usi saree me so gayi..raat bahut haseen thi.. itni khushi Naina ko kabhi nahi mili..Raj k pyaar se Naina ka roam roam bhar chuka hai..koi insaan itna achha kaise ho sakta hai?!!Naina ne subha toh kuchh khaya bhi tha..par Raj ne kuchh bhi nahi khaya tha..usi haalat me Raj ne saari taiyyarian ki..
subha 5 baje Naina ki need tooti..toh Raj ki taraf dekha usne.Raj gehri neend me hai..insaan k dil me jab bahut zyada sukoon ho..tab insaan ka chehra aisa ho jata hai.
Naina mehsoos kar rahi hai..k Raj ko paa kar usne kyaa paya hai..apne ek pal k samarpan se Raj ko usne zindagi bhar k lia jeet lia hai..Raj apne haath se Naina ka kamar pakad k so raha hai..in baahon me koi bandeesh nahi..par mazboot bandhan hai..Raj ne usko apne pyaar k bandhan me baandh lia hai ..gale me Raj ne kal raat ko Mangalsutra pehnaya tha,usko haath me lekar bar bar Naina apne maathe par lekar pranam kar rahi hai..shaayad Bhagwan se prarthana kar rahi hai..k yeh pal humesha k lia thaher jaaye..yeh khushi zindagi bhar ka ho..ankho se ansoon nikal rahe hain..Raj ki taraf dekh rahi hai..kitna sataya usne Raj ko..fir bhi Raj usse itna pyaar karta hai..
Naina uthne ki koshish kar rahi hai..par Raj ki pakad se baahar nahi jaa paa rahi hai,itna kas k pakda hai Raj ne usko,neend me bhi nahi chhodna chaahta.Darta hai..k fir se agar Naina usse door chali gayi ..toh?Raj toh Naina k bina jee hi nahi paayega..par ab Naina ko lag raha hai..k woh Raj k bina nahi jee paayegi.Yeh jo bandhan jood gaya..ab toh maut hi is bandhan ko todh paayegi..par ab aisa lagta hai..k maut bhi beech me nahi aayegi...
Raj,mujhse pahle mat marna..main seh nahi paaoongi..main pahle marna chaahti hoon..fir us doosri duniya me tumhara intezar karoongi..tab tak..jab tak..tum aa nahi jaate..maine apni zindagi k 6 saal yuh hi gava die..ab aisa lagta hai..kaun sa wada..kaun si zimmedari..?main nahi maanti..koi nahi sochta itna kuchh.Main jeena chaahti hoon..tumhare saath..pareshaan hoti hoon..toh bharosa hai..k tum apne baahon me mujhe samet loge..geerne ka darr nahi..kyonki main jaanti hoon..tum ho..mujhe samhaalne k lia..I feel so pampered when you touch me..I feel so much protected when you hug me..I feel so alive when you kiss me..I feel so blessed when you make love with me..main tumhe khona nahi chaahti Raj..I love you...I love you so much.. mujhse door mat jana..please..khwabon me main tumse door nahi jana chaahti..
apne soch k ghere me Naina gheerti jaa rahi hai..aise me usne mehsoos kia.. Raj ki pakad aur mazboot ho rahi hai.
Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..Naina k maang ka Sindoor Raj k chehre par laga hai..Naina k hontho ki laali Raj gaal aur honth par hain..pillow cover par bhi Sindoor laga hai..Raj k safed kurte par bhi laal rang hai..kal raat ko Raj pura paagal ho gaya tha..paagalon ki tarha Naina ko chum raha tha..par pure din ki thakaan ki wajah se dono so gaye..bahut jaldi..
Yeh kisi ek ki baat nahi hai..yeh puri kaayenat ki baat hai.Jaise aasmaan aur zameen k bina kahani puri nahi hoti..usi tarha..ek mard aur ek aurat k bina zindagi puri nahi hoti.Zindagi k paida hone k peechhe wajah hoti hai Mohabbat..gehri Mohabbat.Mohabbat koi zid nahi..jisse puri karne k lia ek aur zid ki zaroorat padti hai..Raj k har dhadkan par Naina apna naam sun sakti hai..yeh koi zid nahi..yeh woh ehsaas hai..jiska armaan har insaan ko hota hai..kisi ka armaan pura hota hai..kisika nahi..Rajveer aur Naina..sunne k lia sirf do naam..par saath me ..ek puri duniya..puri zindagi..
Naina yeh sab soch rahi hai..aur ansoon baha rahi hai..
"Naina..kyaa hua?"
Naina chauk gayi..Raj jaag gaya hai..aur usko dekh raha hai..
Naina uth kar baithi..saree theek kar rahi hai..
Raj bhi baitha.."Naina..kyaa hua??bolo..."
Naina--kuchh nahi..
Raj--kuchh kaise nahi?ro rahi ho..
Naina--aise hi..ansoon nikal aaye..
Raj kuchh der dekhta raha Naina ko..aur fir Naina ko apni baahon me bhar lia Raj ne..Raj Naina k ansoon pochh raha hai..Raj ki unglian Naina k gaal par ghoom rahi hai..aur Naina k hontho par aakar rook gayi..Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..dono ki nazre mili..Raj kuchh der rooka..aur Naina k hontho par apne honth rakh kar..Naina ko aur kareeb khinchne laga..
Naina ne khud ko chhoda lia..
Raj--kyaa hua?
Naina--I love you..
Raj chauk gaya..bola,"Naina..yeh ..sab..."
Naina--I love you a lot..
Raj--tum bata chuki ho...
Naina is baar Raj k apne kareeb khinchti hai...aur kehti hai,"haa..bata chuki hoon..par is tarha nahi..aaj jis tarha bata rahi hoon..I love you..I can feel your love.."
Raj k hontho par muskurahat..Naina aur kareeb khinchti hai Raj ko.."I love you.."..yeh kar Naina ne Raj k maathe par chuma.."I love you.." keh kar Raj k gaal par chuma.."I love you"..keh kar Naina Raj k hontho par apna honth rakhti hai...
ab Raj bhi khud ko rok nahi pata...Raj Naina ko apni baahon me jakad leta hai.."oohh..Nainaa..I love you ..I love a lot..I feel so happy ..ahh..Naina..."..yeh keh kar Raj apne hontho se Naina k hontho par dabav daalta hai..aur Naina ko leta deta hai..aur khud uske upar geerta hai..
Naina ki ankhe bandh hai..Raj usko smootch kie jaa raha hai..aur Raj k haath Naina k jism par ghoom rahe hain..Raj k haath Naina k blouse k less khol rahe hain..
Naina--Raj..kyaa kar rahe ho..subha ho gayi hai..
Raj--You are my wife..please..mat roko...
Naina ne surrender kar dia..
Raj ne apna kurta utara..aur Naina ki saree bhi..Naina ko kiss kar raha hai.. Naina k haath..Naina ka breast..Naina ki peeth,har jagah par.Naina ka blouse aur inner zameen par hai ab..Raj k honth ab Naina k breast par hain.Raj chum raha hai...the inner fire has been ignited ..
Naina--ahh..Raj..ohh..nahi..aahh..chhodo...
Raj--nahi..ab nahi..abhi toh bilkul nahi..Naina..mujhe fir kabhi chhod kar mat jana..
Naina--I am sorry..for that..Raj..
yeh kahte kahte Naina k ankhon se fir se ansoon bahne lage..
Raj ne apne hontho se un ansoon k boondon ko pee lia.."Naina..I love you.."
Naina--main bahut kharab hoon Raj..maine..
Raj--hmm..par mere lia bahut achhi ho..aisi hi rehna..Naina...
Naina puri tarha se Raj k kaboo me hai...
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wall clock me subh k 7 baje hain..
Naina leti hai..Raj usko pakad k usike paas soya hai..Raj apni unglian fira raha hai..Naina k hontho par..
Raj--Naina..
Naina--hmm..
Raj--mujhe ek bachcha chahie..
Naina--kyaa?
Raj--I want a child..humara bachcha..
Naina--shaadi ko ek maheena hua hai Raj..abhi?
Raj--hmm..kyaa harj hai?
Naina--hmm..mujhe koi problem nahi hai..
Raj--pahle ek beta ..for ek beti..theek hai na?
Naina--do bachche?
Raj--kum hai kya?
Naina--nahi..theek hai..
Raj--toh kyaa samjhoon?agle saal k andar..humara bachcha tumhare goad me hoga?
Naina--tum chaaho toh hoga..main nahi rokoongi..haa..duty ka pressure..
Raj--toh..is beech..agar tum pregnant hui..toh..terminate karaaogi?
Naina--nahi..bilkul nahi..duty hai..karni padegi..par iska matlab yeh nahi..k hum apni zindagi jeena chhod de..
Raj--hmm..tumko pahle Beta chahie..yaa Beti?
Naina--kuchh bhi ho..tum jaisa ho...bas..
Raj--mere jaisa?
Naina--hmm...tumse achha koi hai?is duniya me?mujhe nahi lagta..
Raj--achha?kyaa baat hai..aaj bahut taarif kar rahi ho..
Naina--hmm..meri marzi...abhi chhodo...der ho jaayegi...please..
Raj--I love you...
Naina--jaanti hoon...
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achanak se Naina ki neend toot gayi..woh Raj k bare me soch rahi thi..un haseen palon ko yaad kar rahi thi..jab Raj uske saath tha.
Naina k ankhon se ansoon bahne lage..Raj ka sapna tha..yeh bachcha.,..aaj sapna pura ho raha hai..aur..Raj nahi hai uske saath..Naina apne pet par haath fira rahi hai..Raj is not even able to feel the Baby now..his dream.. Raj.. poor Raj..
Naina aur bhi rone lagi..shaam k 6 baje hain abhi..
aise me..darwaze par knock...
Naina ne darwaza khola..Mita Devi saamne khadi hai..Naina jhat se unke gale lag gayi...
Mita--rona mat..nahi..Naina..
Naina--Ohh..Maa..
Mita--Naina..main aa gayi hoon Beti..ab chup ho jaao..Naina..
Naina--Raj..
Mita--woh theek hai..Naina..maine baat ki hai..Mr. Negi se..woh theek hai..tum baitho...main tumhare lia khana banati hoon..khaane peene ka kaisa dhyaan rakh rahi ho..sab pata chal raha hai..chalo..baitho..
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raat k 10 baje hain..
Naina kuchh files check kar rahi hai..
Mita--Naina..so jaao..
Naina--bas..Maa..10 minute aur..
Mita--nahi..10 minute bol bol k..kitni der karogi..mujhe pata hai,chalo,so jaao ..aur haa..kal mujhe apne Doctor k paas le chalna..
Naina--haa...Maa..aur 10 minute..
Mita Devi aage aai..aur File bandh kar dia..aur Naina ka kaan pakad k le gayi bistar tak..
Naina let gayi...
Mita--koi takleef toh nahi ho rahi hai?
Naina--nahi..aap bhi so jaaiye na..
Mita--main tumhare paas hi so rahi hoon..
Naina--nahi..aap doosre kamre me..
Mita--Raj aa jaaye..fir main doosre kamre me jaakar soungi..abhi tumko akeli nahi chhod sakti..chalo..so jaao.
Naina so gayi...
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggggg
15 years ago
Update was really cool. Naina ki saas aa gayi hain ab vo us ka hope so acche se khayal rakhenge. Mujhe lagta hai Naina ko is time sab se jyada Raj ki jaroorat hai aur isiliye vo sab se jyada us ko yaad kar rahi hai. Karwachauth waala scene kaafi accha tha. want more. update soon.varshita2008-10-11 03:51:25
15 years ago
thanks a lot..wait for the next update..
15 years ago
[QUOTE=Shaina_b]Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!==thanks a lot.. Bechari Naina!!!!! Akhir kab tab haalat se ladti rahegi!!!!! ==haa..poor Naina... Naina ki kismat ko khushi raas nahi aati!!!!! Kitni akeli padh gayi hai woh!!!!!!! ==haa..yaar..kismat ki maari... Naina toh apne papa se baat karke bhi rone lagi!!!!! ==Darbar ..The Great... Naina ne apne papa ko bata diya that she is going to have twins!!!!!! He is so happy to hear that!!!! ==HMM.. Darbar saab ne kaha ke woh Raj ko kuch nahi hone denge aur apne saare contacts use kar rahe hai!!!!!! ==Darbar has to do it.. Darbar saab se baat karke Naina ka dil thoda halka toh huya!!!!! ==naturally.. Karwa Chauth ke baad waali subah Naina kitni khush thi!!!!! == Naina's love was very well and beautifully described!!!!! ==thanks a lot.. Raj toh neend mein bhi Naina ko kas ke pakda tha!!!!! Usse darr hai ke Naina usse phir se chhodke na chali jaye!!!!! ==Raj is little bit insecured.. Raj Naina ke bina aur Naina Raj ke bina nahi jee sakte!!!!!! Maut bhi ab shayad inhe alag nahi kar sakti!!!!! ==arre..itni excited mat ho..tu bahut zyada blush kar rahi hai.. Naina ko Raj se door jaane ka darr hai!!!!! Usse yeh lagta hai ke zindagi ke 6 saal usne yuhi gawadiye!!!! ==ab aisa lag raha hai..waqt bhi kaise kaise din dikhaati hai.. Raj ke pyaar ne Naina ko ehsaas dila diya hai ke woh Raj ke liye hi bani thi!!!! == Naina yeh sab sochke roh rahi thi!!!!! Raj utha toh dekh kar Naina ko hug kiya!!!!! Haaiii!!!! ==yaar..mujhe chane k jhaad me mat chadha.. Naina ne I love you kaha!!!!! Aaj toh Naina apne pyaar ka khul kar izhaar kar rahi hai!!!!! ==khullam khulla ..pyaar karenge..hum dono... Raj toh bahut khush ho gaya!!!! ==tu kyon bhangda kar rahi hai??Raj khush hai..toh Garbe gaaiye Hansa Bhabhi.. Every word is speaking of the undying love of Naina for Raj!!!!!! ==yaaa.......... Raj and Naina are s
15 years ago
[QUOTE=dazzling_glory]AMAZING...SUPERB.....very emotional update....==thanks a lotleft me completely speechless. The way in which you have described Naina's emotion is simple brilliant and very touchy....loved every part of it....==thanks again.. Now that Mita devi has come, Naina will have some support==yaa..good for Naina..hope that raj is proved innocent soon....==I hope so.... Waiting for your next update eagerly.==wait...I want to give my best ..so relax..[/QUOTE]
15 years ago
[QUOTE=Mahak Sinha]Mai kya bolon bahut dino baad aaj phir se Raj aur Naina ka pyaar feel kiya hai.Sach yaar dono ek doosre se door acche nahi lagte hain.Mai un dono ko humesha ek saath dekhna chahti hoon. Naina kitna miss kar rahi hai na Raj ko, aaj pehli baar maine Naina k pyaar ko mehsoos kiya hai ki Raj k liye Naina k dil me kaise feelings hain. Koi bhi aurat ek baar jab kisi aadmi se emotinally attach ho jaati hai to us ko hi vo apna sab kuch manane lagti hai wahi aaj Naina ne bhi mehsoos kiya hai. I am happy k Raj k pyaar ki depth ne Naina ko ehsaas dila diya ki shayad vo Raj k liye hi bani hai. Sach socha us ne ki 6 saal ka waqt us ne aise hi gawan diya , Raj agar tabhi Naina ki zindagi me aa gaya hota to aaj Naina yahan na hoti. Choti si Naina ki zindagi me us ne jitne gum dekhe hain shayad itna to koi nahi dekh sakta hai, sach kaha us ne ki har baar khushiyon k pal kyoun us ki hi zindagi se chin jaate hain na;kya us ko khsuh hone ka adhikaar nahi hai? Raj kitna chahta tha na papa banna par jab Naina aaj is condition me hai to Raj us k saath nahi hai us dauran jab ek aurat ko apne pati ki sab se jyada jaroorat hoti hai.Chalo accha hua us ne apne papa se baat kar li man halka ho gaya kuch us ka. Ab Meeta Devi bhi aa gayi hain to umeed hai ki kuch nahi hoga Naina ko aur us ki dekh bhaal k liye koi hai us k paas. Raj theek thaak se vapas aa jaaye bus itna jaroori hai. update was terrafic Anu and update soon.[/QUOTE]Yes..Naina is missing Raj ..but kismat ka likha kaun kaat sakta hai? Waqt..kabhi dard hai..kabhi dava bhi..Raj aur Naina ..bahut mushkil daur se guzar rahe hain..bura waqt hai..guzar jaayega.. Naina ko ab lag raha hai ..k Raj se us waqt shaadi naa kar k usne ghalati ki thi.. par usne jab ghar chhoda tha..woh us waqt k tarazoo par aur insaaf k tarazoo par sahi tha..aur UD k lia jaldbazi main nahi karoongi..kahani jis stage par hai.. bahut sadhaani se likhna hoga..taa k..itne dino ki mehnat par paani naa fir jaaye..kahani ko ek zabardast endi
15 years ago
mujhe aisi bhayaanak feeelings kyun ho rahi hain ki talaash jald hi khatam hone waali hai.......................plzzzzzz dont end it soon...we all luv it.......and plzzzzzz mention d date of ud............and ud u other rn fics toooooooooooo
15 years ago
wait..sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...
15 years ago
See..fic ki ab jo position hai..soch samajh kar likhna hai...ab tak jo standard raha hai fic ka usko maintain karna hai..so..time toh lagega hi.
15 years ago
ud sooooooooonnnnnnnn plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
15 years ago