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Chapter 43

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ANANYA ROY

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1st March ko Trial shuru hoga..

Naina din raat is Case par kaam kar rahi hai..

is bich...9th February ,

Mita Devi ko phone kia Naina ne...

Mita Devi ro rahi hain phone par..

Naina--dekhiye..aise himmat mat haariye..main dekh rahi hoon..Raj ko kuchh nahi hoga.

Mita--par jaisa tum bata rahi ho..

Naina--darr hai..par is darr ko jitna badhava dia jaayega..utna hi bada hoga yeh darr...aap darriye mat..

Mita--hearing kab se shuru hogi..?

Naina--1st March ko..

Mita--kab tak chalega?

Naina--depends,jitni jaldi uske favour me saboot de sakoo..utna hi achha.. main koshish karungi..zyada se zyada 1 maheena..dekhte hain ..kitna time lagta hai..

Mita--main Lucknow aa rahi hoon..

Naina--abhi mat aaiye..

Mita--Raj ko meri zaroorat hai..

Naina--uske lia ..main hoon..Col. Bhatia hain..Maj. Gen. Negi hain..aap yeha aakar karengi kyaa?aapko Raj se milne bhi nahi dia jaayega..bahut jhamela hoga..aur main jo usse mil paa rahi hoon..woh isi lia..kyonki main is unit ki Officer hoon..aur uski Vakil bhi..varna..mera bhi usse milna namumkin sa ho jata..

Mita--main fir bhi aaungi..


Naina--aap thode din baad aaiye..Maajee,main dekh rahi hoon,aap..aur thode din baad aaiye..tab mujhe aapki zaroorat padegi..main yeha akeli..sab kuchh samhaal nahi paaungi..aur..thode dino baad..toh..aur bhi ..

Mita--kyaa bol rahi ho?

Naina--aise waqt par..aapka mere saath hona zaroori hai..main..main..I am pregnant..

Mita--arre ...Bahu..sach hai?

Naina--jee..maine yeha k ek private nursing home se comfirm ki hai..agar Camp k Hospital me jaati toh..sab ko malum padta..aur..main nahi chaahti..

Mita--Raj ko nahi bataya tumne?

Naina--nahi..waise hi bahut pareshaan hai..aur yeh baat pata chalegi..toh.. aur pareshaan hoga..aur ho sakta hai us par pressure dia jaaye..aur woh gunaah kabool kar le..jo usne kia hi nahi..

Mita--matlab?

Naina--bahut si aisi baatein hai..par ..kahi agar Raj kumzor pad gaya..meri pregnancy ki wajah se..toh..main bhi kuchh nahi kar paaungi.

Mita--Raj ko bata do..

Naina--nahi..usko jab tak malum na pade..achha hai..dekhiye..jo meri haalat hai..zyada din chhupegi nahi..zyada se zyada 1 maheena..ya 2 maheena..aur 1st March ko hearing hai..main Case ko ek strong position me le jaaoon..jaha par Raj ko yakeen ho..k usko kuchh nahi hoga..fir Raj ko pata chale..toh koi parvah nahi..par abhi Raj ko nahi batana hai..

Mita--kaunsa maheena hai?

Naina--doosra..

Mita--matlab..jab hearing shuru hogi..tab..teesra..tum samajh rahi ho k tum kyaa kar rahi ho?

Naina--main koi pehli ladki nahi jo Maa ban rahi hai..bahut ladkiaan kaam karti hai aise waqt par..

Mita--par unke upar aisa dabav nahi rehta..Naina..tum..

Naina--dekhiye..aap ko ana hai..tab ..jab main aapko bulaoongi..aur aap meri chinta na kare...aap apne bete ki fikar kijiye..

Mita--Naina..yeh kyaa bol rahi ho tum?..mere lia..tum aur Raj ..dono barabar ho..

Naina--main azad hoon..par Raj jail me bandh hai..aap uski fikar kijiye..aur aapko meri kasam hai,aap Raj ko kuchh bhi nahi batayengi,Unit k kisi Officer ko..toh abhi yeh nahi malum padna chahie..please..

Mita--main ..jitni jaldi ho sake..aa rahi hoon..Lucknow..yeh toh main kar hi sakti hoon..

Naina--kaha na..jab main bolungi tab aaiyega..

Mita--fir se..wahi zid..wahi manmaani..tum nahi sudhrogi..na?

Naina--jee nahi,is janam me toh sudharne ka koi chance nahi,ab jo bhi hoon ..aaphi ki Bahu hoon..aapko aise hi mujhe accept karna hoga..main bata rahi hoon..aapko..bahut jaldi aapko bula lungi..aap fikar mat kijiye..please..main samhaal lungi..

Naina ne phone rakh dia..

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Naina apnne andar  ek bechaini ..ek badlav sa mehsoos kar rahi thi kai dino se..

usko samajh me aya tha ..k kuchh irregularities toh hai..uske system me..

humesha ek chidhchidha pan..khana hazam nahi hona..aur bhi kuchh aise disorders the..jo Naina ne kabhi mehsoos nahi kia ..isse pahle.

January me bhi jab uska date paar kar gaya..tab usne itna kuchh socha nahi..

usne socha duty k pressure aur tension me aisi gadbad hui hai..


par..jab usne dusra period bhi miss kar dia..tab usko shak hua..k actual me baat toh kuchh aur hai..shaadi k baad se..ab tak uske aur Raj k bich jo bhi hua..aise hi hua..koi bhi precaution ya protection k bina hi hua.


Naina apni bewakoofi par pachta rahi hai..usko savdhaan hona chahie tha.. abhi din hi kitne hue hai ..shaadi ko..aur ..yeh jo musibat aai hai..Naina kaise iska muquabla karegi?

aur ..agar kisi tarha Raj k kaano tak yeh baat pahuch gai..woh kisi bhi tarha Naina ko pichhe hatne par majboor zaroor karega..

Base par kisiko pata naa chale..isi lia..woh Lucknow k ek private nursing home me gai thi..apna test karvane..uski yeh dil se tamanna thi..k uska darr sach naa ho..par wahi sach nikla..ab jo hua ..usko Naina badal nahi sakti..ab har kadam bahut savdhaani se rakhna hoga..Kukreja se bachna hai..aur Raj se bhi sachchai chhupani hai..


Naina ne kabhi nahi socha tha..k usko is tarha Raj se chhupani hogi..itni badi baat..

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udhar Mita bhi soch me pad gai..kyaa karena hai..kyaa nahi karna hai..Darbar Saab ko bataya nahi jaa sakta..aise mauke par yeh khabar ..unki tabiyat yaa toh bahut zyada sudhar sakti hai..yaa toh tension ki wajah se aur kharab ho sakti hai.

Raja Jagat Singh Shekhawat ..woh apna har contact use kar rahe hain..par mamla ab unke haath se bhi nikal raha hai.

aur sab se kharab yeh hua hai..k Human Rights walo ki wajah se yeh khabar aur bhi uchhaali jaa rahi hai.

Mita--main isi lia mana  kia tha..yehi khabar thi ..jisko istemal kar k..tum Vote jeetna chaahte the..ab dekho,jo mudda tumne uchhaala hai,wahi ab tumhare bete k khilaaf jaa rahi hai..ab kyaa bologe?

Jagat--mera kyaa dosh hai?maine toh Raj se kaha bhi tha..k transfer leke kahi aur chale jaao..par nahi..Naina se shaadi karne ka bhoot jo sawaar tha janab par..ab bhugat raha hai..sab kuchh Naina ki wajah se ho raha hai..

Mita--bahut bol lia tumne..ek aur labz mat kehna Naina k bare me..gunah tum log karo..aur saza woh ladki kyon bhugte..?kyon sara dosh uspar daal rahe ho?Darbar Saab ne us Arbaaz ko fansaya tha,isi lia,Naina gai thi ghar chhod kar..aur tumne yeh Arbaaz ka mamla itna uchhala..ab dekho..tumhara apna beta fansa hua hai..jo jaal tumne bichaya tha..tumhara beta fansa hua hai us jaal me.gunah tum log karo..aur dekho..dono bachche bhugat rahe hain...aur Naina k bare me bolne ka tumhara hak nahi banta koi..

Jagat--kyon?

Mita--tum toh isi baat ka faida uthana chaahte the,k Raj aur Naina ka sahara lekar tum apna Political Career aage badhao..yaad hai na?toh ab kyon usko kos rahe ho?tumko malum nahi hai..k woh ladki kis daur se guzar rahi hai.. actually..Naina is suffering every moment..Raj jail me hai.. Naina kaise sab kuchh kar rahi hai..par tumko bol kar kyaa faida..main bahut jald Lucknow jaaungi..tum yeha par..Darbar Saab ka khayaal rakhna..

Jagat--Lucknow..main bhi chalunga..

Mita--nahi..main jaaungi..akeli..Naina ko meri zaroorat hai..tum nahi aaoge mere saath..

Mita Devi ..achhi tarha se samajhti hai..k Naina uske Sasoor ko dekhte hi chidh jaayegi..unko akele hi jana hoga..Lucknow.

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Mess me baithe the..4 Officers..

Sujaat,Pandey,Gill aur Yadav...

thodi der pahle inke bich kaafi bahes ho chuki hai..Ibrahim Ali k murder case k bare me..par thodi der baad..sab ne realise kia..k aise bahes ka koi matlab nahi banta..Raj agar begunaah hai...toh usko is Case se baahar nikaalna hai.

Sujaat--Naina ko jo bhi papers chahie honge,usko immidietly humen provide karana hai..hum log directly kuchh nahi kar sakte..par Naina ki madad zaroor kar sakte hai..this is a real trouble..

Gill--par Col. Kukreja toh determined hi hai..Major Shekhawat ko..

Yadav--mujhe tum logo ka pata nahi,par mujhe aisa lagta hai,k kahi na kahi,is Kukreja ne bahut bada jhol kia hai,jiska pata humko lagana hai,.....waise Pandey Sir aur Gill Sir..toh witness hai..par ..main aur Sujat Sir toh nahi..thik hai na?

Sujaat--par..indono k gavahi par bahut kuchh depend karta hai..

Gill--jo humne dekha..humlog wahi batayenge..par kuchh toh hai..aur agar Kukreja ne jhol kia hai..toh ..aisa woh kyon karega?kyaa dushmani hai uski Major Shekhawat se?

Pandey abhi tak chup tha..sab kuchh sun raha tha..

ab usne muh khola..

Pandey--Kukreja jis wajah se aisa kar raha hai..woh wajah isi Camp me hai..

Gill--matlab?

Pandey--Major Shekhawat ki patni..Captain Shekhawat..

Sujaat--kyaa?

Pandey--kabhi aaplogone socha hai..jab yeh dono gaye IMA..uske baad hi Kukreja yeha par aya..aur bhitar ki jo khabar hai..woh yeh..k Kukreja ne apna sara contact istemal kia hai..Lucknow me transfer k lia..ab baat samajh me aai?

Yadav--ohh..

Pandey--tumlogo ko kabhi dikha nahi?Kukreja kaise paani paani ho jata hai.. Captain Naina ko dekh kar..yeh Kukreja ko is umar me ishque ka bukhar chadha hai..jis tarha woh Naina ki taraf dekhta hai..uski niyat thik nahi lagti mujhko..

Sujaat--iske lia woh Major Shekhawat ko is tarha fansa dega?

Pandey--bhai mere..pahle k zamane me aurat ko haasil karne k lia Raja- Maharajon k bich jung chhid jaati thi..aur yeh toh sirf ek Trial hai..tujhe kyaa lagta hai..woh itna kachcha khel khelega?bahut taiyari kar raha hai..

Yadav--agreed..agar Naina Madam k lia Kukreja aisa kuchh kar bhi raha hai.. lekin agar Naina Madam khud hi usko lift naa de..toh Kukreja kyaa kar sakta hai?

Pandey--beta..tune Kukreja ki taraf dekha nahi ghaur se..kameenapan uski shakal se tapakti hai..kuchh bhi kar sakta hai..

Gill--par..mujhe yakeen hai..is zaher ka todh Naina k paas hai...varna..itne confidence k saath..Naina aage nahi aati..dekha jaaye toh..yeh Ibrahim Ali ek terrorist k ilava kuchh bhi nahi...asani se is case se chhutkara mil sakta hai.. agar Naina zara koshish kare toh..par yeh Trial jo hoga..I think..kuchh toh pak raha hai..

Yadav--sab k bich..hum jisko bhul rahe hain..woh hai Captain Varun Menon.. jo Major Shkehawat ko guilty saabit karne pe tula hua hai..

Sujaat ek dum chup ho gaya tha..

Sujaat ko dekh kar Pandey ne kaha,"Sujaat..dekh ..naye Love Birds.."

Sujaat--kaha?

Pandey--arre udhar dekh...us table me..

Sujaat--woh toh Col. Kukreja aur Captain Menon hain?

Pandey--haa..wahi toh bol raha hoon bhai..yeh Menon kitna chikna dikhta hai..Kukreja k saath jodi bahut jamti hai..aur Kukreja..jab se yeh Menon aya hai..tab se iska saath hi nahi chhodta..

Gill--Kukreja toh hai hi tharki...usko sab kuchh chalta hai...

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22nd February,2006..

THE NATION newspaper me ek article,front page par..

ARMY KILLED AN INNOCENT??

Staff Reporter-Arbaaz Ali Ibrahim is dead now,he is killed by an Army Officer, Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.This Arbaaz was missing since last 6 years. Now his Mother got his dead body.Major Shekhawat will have to face the Court Marshall.But has that  any use?Won't the Army protect an Officer? Several months ago the issue of Arbaaz was raised by the Human Rights Commission.Now Nadira Bano,Arbaaz's mother,wants a clear verdict.

It is being said by the Army that Arbaaz became a terrorist,named Ibrahim Ali.He was about to blast powerfull explosives near the Assembly House of Lucknow.But it is the typical nature of the system.The killed person is always a criminal.So ,people will decide..let them decide.Let's challange the system,we have every right to know everything.Right to Information.

The NGOs are pleading to make the Trial and open to press and public.If The Army doesn't allow this..it will be very clear that there is a big fault.



is khabar ne aag me ghee jaisa kaam kia..

Col. Kukreja ko Col. Bhatia ne bulaya apne Office me..

Bhatia--aapki wajah se..aaj Army par yeh sawal utha rahe hain log..Press, Politicians aur Public.

Kukreja--yeh newspaper..aap is par dhyaan mat dijiye..

Bhatia--aapne khamokha Raj par yeh Case uchhala..yeh baat tai thi k yeh Ibrahim Ali Crminal tha..ab is par bhi sawal hai..aap yeh mat bhuliye..k us din incharge aap the..

Kukreja--Court ko apna kaam karne dijiye..

Bhatia--yeh baat ab sirf court me nahi hai..kaafi dino se yeh baate utha rahe hain..Human Rights wale,ab toh Court of Marshall me Public representatives aur Press bhi rahegi..aap samajh rahe iska matlab?

Kukreja--let it be...

Bhatia--yaa..ab jo bhi hoga..sab aapki zimmedari..mind it Col. Kukreja..main aapke lia kuchh nahi kar paaunga..

Kukreja--uski zaroorat nahi padegi..

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Army ki taraf se yeh Order pass ho gaya..Press k kuchh log,1 MP,1 MLA aur Public me se kuchh khaas log rahenge is TRIAL me..NGOs se bhi log aa sakte hai..

yeh ab ek OPEN TRIAL hoga..Right To Information Act k mutabik..jo hoga logo k saamne hoga..taa k dubara koi sawal naa uthe.

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Naina aa rahi thi apne Office ki taraf..

Captain Menon aur Col. Kukreja se uski mulakat..

Menon--ab toh Trial hoga open..kyaa karengi aap?

Naina--jo hoga..hoke rahega..

Menon--waqt barbad kar rahi hain aap..

Naina--mera waqt main jaise chaahoon kharch karoon.aap apne pleading par dhyaan dijiye..

Menon--well..aapki shaadi k lia mubarak baat main de nahi paya..mubarak ho..

Naina--thank you..ab toh aap yeha par atleast 2 saal k lia hain na?

Menon--hmm..let's see..kyaa hota hai...

Naina--agar rahenge toh..ek mubarak baat aapko aur deni hogi..kyonki 2 saal k andar Raj aur mera ek bachcha bhi ho jaayega..kyonki Case toh woh jeet hi jaayega..azad bhi hoga..uske baad..maine decide kia hai..we will start our family..

Menon--all the best..

Naina--same to you..

Menon k lia phone aya tha..

Menon--Excuse me ..

Menon chala gaya..

Kukreja Naina ki taraf dekhne laga....

Kukreja--khwaab aap achha dekh leti hain..

Naina--main khwaab sirf dekhne me yakeen nahi rakhti..bal ki unko pura karne ki taakat bhi rakhti hoon..

Kukreja--abhi bhi surrender kar dijiye..varna Case public me chala jaayega.. toh..

Naina--haa,aapko isi baat ka darr hai na,k agar Public k saamne maine aapka bhanda fodh dia..tab kyaa hoga?hai na?

Kukreja--Public k saamne,Army sharminda hogi. Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ki wajah se...

Naina--Army ko sharmindagi toh uthani hogi..par Major Shekhawat ki wajah se nahi..Col. Kukreja ki wajah se..that is a promise..aur haa..Cell me Raj ko kuchh hona nahi chahie..

Kukreja--dhamki de rahi hain aap?

Naina--samjhaa rahi hoon...dekhiye..Raj ko ek chhink bhi aai..toh main toh bawaal macha dungi..actually..aapne bahut bada plan banaya..par usme chhota sa loop hole reh gaya..

Kukreja--aap bakwas kar rahi hai..

Naina--nahi..dekhiye na..Ibrahim Ali ko Hydrabad le jaane k lia incharge kaun bante hain?Col. Kukreja..aur Major Shekhawat ko arrest bhi Col. Kukreja karte hain..hmm..aur unhike zimme me Major Shekhawat ko rakha gaya hai lock up me..yeh har baat me Col. Kukreja ..ek common factor se bante jaa rahe hain..ab agar..Raj ko kuchh bhi hua..uski ek ungli bhi kat gai..toh main is baat k saath bhi aapka naam jod dungi..arre bhai..itni kaabil vakil toh main hoon..

Kukreja Naina ki taraf dekhne laga..achha socha isne...

Naina--bolti bandh ho gai..?kyaa baat hai?yeha par mujhe blackmail karna.. shaayad Raj ko bhi blackmail kia hai aapne?hmm..arre bhai ..aapse inspired hue hain..aapko toh khush hona chahie..k main blackmail karna sikh gai.. hmm..chalie ek baat toh hain..aap me..sikhne laayak..so..ab tak jo kia so kia aapne..ab ek fair game kheliyega..varna aap khud hi bata rahe the..Public k saamne hoga Trial..hmm..all the best...

yeh bol kar Naina chali gai..





yakkudimag2008-08-20 12:02:08

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[QUOTE=yakkudimag][QUOTE=Mahak Sinha]To Naina is pregnent.
Aur is haalat me case bhi ladna kitna mushkil hai.
Mentally stess, physically stress.
Kya kya nahi saha hai us ne poori life me.
Kabhi apni life apne according jee nahi paayi.

Raj ko agar nahi batana chahti apni pregnancy k baare me to accha hi socha hai us ne.
Raj bekaar me pareshaan hi hoga aur hoga kuch nahi.
Meeta devi ko bhi accha samjhaya ki jab mai bulaoo tabhi aana abhi aa kar kya karengi.
Meeta devi bhi maan gayi ki Naina bahut jiddi hai.

Meeta ji ne accha dose diya Mr. Shekhwat ko.
Sach kaha unhone ki bus apne bete ka istemeel hi to kiya hai unhone aur ab beta hi fuss gaya hai to kya karege.
Accha hai Naina ki dekh bhaal k liye bhi koi chahiye na.
Vo aa jaayengi to Naina ko thoda aaram ho jaayega.

Kukreja ki waat aachi laga di Naina ne.
Yahi baat Bhatia ne bhi ki na.
Officer Incharge to Kukreja hi tha na ab pata chalega.
Bhahut udta hain na vo.
Naina ne accha point pakda us k against.

Pandey , Gill bhi ab lag raha hai shayad koshish karein Raj ko bacahne ki.
Raj ko kuch nahi hoga aisa mera vishwaas hai.

Update was really superb.
update soon.[/QUOTE]thanks for the long comment..tough time for Raj..and Naina.both are suffering every moment.Mita Devi ne sahi dose dia.,.Raja Saab ko..yeh Pandey bahut pahucha hua hai..Naina ne achha kia Kukreja k saath..ab Varun ki izzat ko khatra hai Kukreja sekeep reading..sab malum pad jaayega..[/QUOTE]
ye kameena Kukreja sach me kukur hai.
upadate karo na Anu jaldi.

16 years ago

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[QUOTE=Shaina_b]Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
Naina pregnant hai!!! Thats great news!!!!
Accha huya jo Naina ne Mita Devi ko yahan nahi aana diya!!! Unhe milne bhi nahi diya jayega to aake kya karengi!!!!
Poor Naina!!!!! Usse apni pregnancy Raj se chupani padh rahi hai!!!!
Par usne sahi socha hai!!!! Raj bekar mein pareshan hoga!!!!!
Sahi bhi hai Raj par pressure diya jaa sakta hai aur woh kumor padh sakta hai!!!!!
Waise Naina ne accha kaha!!! Ish janam mein woh nahi sudarne waali jaisi bhi hain usse accept karna hoga!!!!!
Mita Devi ne accha sunaya Jagat Shekhawat ko!!!! Sab unhi ki wajah se huya hai!!! Gunaah kare woh log aur bhugte unke bacche!!!!
Unhone bus apne bete ka istemaal kiya hai!!!! Aur ab unka beta hi phaas gaya hai!!!!!
Woh yeh bhi samajti hai ke Naina ape sasoor ko dekh kar chidh jayegi!!!! Kitne acche se samajti hai Naina ko!!!!
Mita Devi bahut acchi saas hai!!!! Saas ke saath toh banti hai magar sasoor ke saath nahi!!!!!
Sujaat ne sahi kaha ki Naina ki madat karni chahiye unhe, agar directly kuch nahi kar sakte toh yehi sahi!!!!
Pandey has hit the nail on the head!!!! Kukreja Naina ko dekh kar pani pani ho jata hai aur yehi wajah hai Raj ko fasane ki!!!!
Kya kaha usne ki pehle ke zamane mein toh aurat ko haasil karne ke liye jung chhid jaati thi yeh toh sirf trial hai!!!!!
Pandey is right!!! Bahut taiyaari kar raha hai Kukreja!!!!
Sahi kaha!!! Kameenapan toh uske shakal se tapakta hai!!!!
Pandey is just too much!!!! Usne Captain Varun Menon aur Col.Kukreja ko naye lovebirds kaha!!!!!
Pandey ne kaha Varun kitna chikna dikhta hai!!!! Haan soh toh hai!!! Varun is really very handsome!!!!
Gill ne kaha ki Kukreja ko sab kuch chalta hai!!!! Aisa Naina ne bhi pehle kaha tha!!!!
Kukreja tharki hai yaa admi hoon admi se pyaar

16 years ago

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thanks a lot..good to know that you liked it..keep reading..keep loving..my fic...

16 years ago

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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
Naina pregnant hai!!! Thats great news!!!!
Accha huya jo Naina ne Mita Devi ko yahan nahi aana diya!!! Unhe milne bhi nahi diya jayega to aake kya karengi!!!!
Poor Naina!!!!! Usse apni pregnancy Raj se chupani padh rahi hai!!!!
Par usne sahi socha hai!!!! Raj bekar mein pareshan hoga!!!!!
Sahi bhi hai Raj par pressure diya jaa sakta hai aur woh kumor padh sakta hai!!!!!
Waise Naina ne accha kaha!!! Ish janam mein woh nahi sudarne waali jaisi bhi hain usse accept karna hoga!!!!!
Mita Devi ne accha sunaya Jagat Shekhawat ko!!!! Sab unhi ki wajah se huya hai!!! Gunaah kare woh log aur bhugte unke bacche!!!!
Unhone bus apne bete ka istemaal kiya hai!!!! Aur ab unka beta hi phaas gaya hai!!!!!
Woh yeh bhi samajti hai ke Naina ape sasoor ko dekh kar chidh jayegi!!!! Kitne acche se samajti hai Naina ko!!!!
Mita Devi bahut acchi saas hai!!!! Saas ke saath toh banti hai magar sasoor ke saath nahi!!!!!
Sujaat ne sahi kaha ki Naina ki madat karni chahiye unhe, agar directly kuch nahi kar sakte toh yehi sahi!!!!
Pandey has hit the nail on the head!!!! Kukreja Naina ko dekh kar pani pani ho jata hai aur yehi wajah hai Raj ko fasane ki!!!!
Kya kaha usne ki pehle ke zamane mein toh aurat ko haasil karne ke liye jung chhid jaati thi yeh toh sirf trial hai!!!!!
Pandey is right!!! Bahut taiyaari kar raha hai Kukreja!!!!
Sahi kaha!!! Kameenapan toh uske shakal se tapakta hai!!!!
Pandey is just too much!!!! Usne Captain Varun Menon aur Col.Kukreja ko naye lovebirds kaha!!!!!
Pandey ne kaha Varun kitna chikna dikhta hai!!!! Haan soh toh hai!!! Varun is really very handsome!!!!
Gill ne kaha ki Kukreja ko sab kuch chalta hai!!!! Aisa Naina ne bhi pehle kaha tha!!!!
Kukreja tharki hai yaa admi hoon admi se pyaar karta hoon type

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hi anu, how r u yaar...... nice ud's.... again sorry that i have not commented on previous ud's... but the fic is going very nice... n the most important n exciting part of the fic is going now... so waiting for whats going to happen next... n happy to know that naina is pregnant but i wish b/c of this no problems gets created... n kukreja ko na end mai ek thapad jarur marna naina ke hatho se...bye kads

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hmm..tough time indeed..Raj..and his suffering..yet to be described.Naina and Raj..poor people..and Kukreja..the ********..must be hanged till death.. bloody***********

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update was fantastic..jhakaasomg naina is pregnant ..i can't believe this...this is such a good news but she can't even share it with her husband...so sad..i feel sorry for her...and i love her confidence...I hate this kukreja...why is he doing all this....i just want him to suffer in jail forever....I hope raj gets his freedom back ...i can't see him in a jail....waiting for the trial....i hope raj doesn't get hurt when arbaaz things comes out..i know it's diffcult for him .continue soon

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[QUOTE=Mahak Sinha]To Naina is pregnent.
Aur is haalat me case bhi ladna kitna mushkil hai.
Mentally stess, physically stress.
Kya kya nahi saha hai us ne poori life me.
Kabhi apni life apne according jee nahi paayi.

Raj ko agar nahi batana chahti apni pregnancy k baare me to accha hi socha hai us ne.
Raj bekaar me pareshaan hi hoga aur hoga kuch nahi.
Meeta devi ko bhi accha samjhaya ki jab mai bulaoo tabhi aana abhi aa kar kya karengi.
Meeta devi bhi maan gayi ki Naina bahut jiddi hai.

Meeta ji ne accha dose diya Mr. Shekhwat ko.
Sach kaha unhone ki bus apne bete ka istemeel hi to kiya hai unhone aur ab beta hi fuss gaya hai to kya karege.
Accha hai Naina ki dekh bhaal k liye bhi koi chahiye na.
Vo aa jaayengi to Naina ko thoda aaram ho jaayega.

Kukreja ki waat aachi laga di Naina ne.
Yahi baat Bhatia ne bhi ki na.
Officer Incharge to Kukreja hi tha na ab pata chalega.
Bhahut udta hain na vo.
Naina ne accha point pakda us k against.

Pandey , Gill bhi ab lag raha hai shayad koshish karein Raj ko bacahne ki.
Raj ko kuch nahi hoga aisa mera vishwaas hai.

Update was really superb.
update soon.[/QUOTE]thanks for the long comment..tough time for Raj..and Naina.both are suffering every moment.Mita Devi ne sahi dose dia.,.Raja Saab ko..yeh Pandey bahut pahucha hua hai..Naina ne achha kia Kukreja k saath..ab Varun ki izzat ko khatra hai Kukreja sekeep reading..sab malum pad jaayega..

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[QUOTE=fanatic 21]maza aa gaya......kya halat kardi naina ne kukreja ki.......

tooo good........[/QUOTE]thanks ..keep reading.

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To Naina is pregnent.
Aur is haalat me case bhi ladna kitna mushkil hai.
Mentally stess, physically stress.
Kya kya nahi saha hai us ne poori life me.
Kabhi apni life apne according jee nahi paayi.

Raj ko agar nahi batana chahti apni pregnancy k baare me to accha hi socha hai us ne.
Raj bekaar me pareshaan hi hoga aur hoga kuch nahi.
Meeta devi ko bhi accha samjhaya ki jab mai bulaoo tabhi aana abhi aa kar kya karengi.
Meeta devi bhi maan gayi ki Naina bahut jiddi hai.

Meeta ji ne accha dose diya Mr. Shekhwat ko.
Sach kaha unhone ki bus apne bete ka istemeel hi to kiya hai unhone aur ab beta hi fuss gaya hai to kya karege.
Accha hai Naina ki dekh bhaal k liye bhi koi chahiye na.
Vo aa jaayengi to Naina ko thoda aaram ho jaayega.

Kukreja ki waat aachi laga di Naina ne.
Yahi baat Bhatia ne bhi ki na.
Officer Incharge to Kukreja hi tha na ab pata chalega.
Bhahut udta hain na vo.
Naina ne accha point pakda us k against.

Pandey , Gill bhi ab lag raha hai shayad koshish karein Raj ko bacahne ki.
Raj ko kuch nahi hoga aisa mera vishwaas hai.

Update was really superb.
update soon.Mahak Sinha2008-08-21 00:26:33

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