Chapter 38

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dinner k baad..Sunil,Harman,Gautam,Karan aur Bhaskar...sab Raj aur Naina ko gher k chal rahe hain.. IMA k main building k saamne se..

har koi sawal puchh raha hai...sab ko jawab chahie..kab hua.. kaise..kab aisa laga..k ab ek dusre k saath k bina zindagi nahi guzregi..etc. etc....


inko dekh kar lagta hi nahi..k thodi der pahle..inke bich itna tensed situation tha...

Naina hans kar har sawaal ka jawab de rahi hai...

Raj--maine apne unit k saare Officers ko alert kia tha..k in Mohatrama se door rahena..par mujhe kaha malum tha..k inke pyaar me main khud ...??

baat puri nahi hui..

Naina--main itni bhi daravni nahi thi..

Raj--nahi aisi baat nahi thi...but..jis tarha ki baatein tumhare baare me..you know what I mean..


Harman--achha..tum log honeymoon pe kidhar gaye the?

Raj--honeymoon manane hi aaye hai..IMA me..

Bhaskar--tu paagal hai Raj..IMA bhi koi jagah hai honeymoon k lia?

Naina--shaadi k 2 din baad..duty orders aa gaye..socha IMA ki duty bhi ho jaayegi..aur Dehradun ghum bhi lenge...


Sunil--not a bad idea....Army life hoti hi hai aisi..par kyaa kare..isike andar hi adjust karna padta hai...


Karan--but Raj..uncle kaise maan gaye..is shaadi k lia?

Sunil Bhaskar k kaan me kahne laga.."yeh sala marvayega Raj ko...sab mamla thanda ho chuka hai..aur isko abhi yeh sab baatein karni hai??"

Raj ne dekha..Naina ki taraf ek jhalak..uska expression zara bhi change nahi hua..

Raj thoda khaansaa..gala saaf kia...aur fir usne kaha, "maine unko sab kuchh bataya..aur Mom aur Dad maan gaye.."


Karan--bas?itna hi?

Naina--haa..itna hi..actually ..humari kahani me itna koi twist and turns nahi hai..

Gautam ne dekha mamla gadbad ki taraf jaa raha hai.. usno baat ko ghuma dia...

Gautam--waise..yeh jo Maj. Gen. Negi ki beti hain.. Nisha.. dikhne me kaisi hain??

Bhaskar--sharam kar..tu shaadishuda hai..

Gautam--nahi..yaar..is Nisha ka naam maine suna hai.. pahle..ek Magazine me padha th a maine..yeh kya wahi hain?

Naina--aapko kitna malum hai??

Gautam--nahi..upcoming writers me unka naam suna hai..kuchh Magazines se..short stories..hmm..kuchh documentaries..wahi hain na??

Naina--yes..wahi hain..bachpan se usme..yeh writting ka bhoot sawaar tha.. abhi UK me hain..isi writting k bare me kuchh aur pata karne..actually woh ek zabardast plot ki talaash me hai..bahut hi jald ek kitaab likhegi woh..

Gautam--UK me..plot dhoondh rahi hain??

Naina--nahi,actually,ek course karne gai hai..Historical writting.. and kuchh Journalism bhi hai uske course me.. usko humesha se writter hi banna tha.. Papa ne..I mean Maj.Gen. Negi ne kaha tha..k Vakalat ki padhai karo.. but usko litterature me bahut zyada interest tha..meri bahut achhi dost hai..


Gautam--yaa..Magazine me padha tha..actually ..meri ek cousin hai..woh gai thi us work-shop me..bata rahi thi..k uske bare me Magazine me chhapa hai... but..usse pahle hi meri shaadi ho gai..waise Meri wife bhi Journalist hai.. abhi Germany gai hai..

Naina--oohh..ap miss nahi karte unko..jab woh aapke saath nahi hoti ..toh?

Gautam--actually..humare bich yeh samjhauta bahut pahle hi ho chuka hai.. hum milte hain..boyfriend girlfriend ki tarha..mujhe yaad nahi padta..k last.. hum kab ek saath..atleast 2 maheene k lia bhi ek saath rahe hain..is mamle me Raj lucky hai..tum saath hi ho uske..

Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..

Raj ki ankhe chamak rahi hai..

Naina ne nazar hata lia...

Sunil--achha..Naina..ek baat batao..tumko ..Army Lawyer ban k koi afsos nahi hota?


Naina--afsos kyon?

Bhaskar--nahi..agar tum ek Law Chember ko join karti.. toh kai zyada tankha hoti tumhari..life kuchh aur hi hoti...

Naina--tab aaplogo ko afsos hota..kyonki tab toh aap logo se mulakat nahi hoti..yeh toh me Army ki vakil hoon..isi lia..


Karan--par ..abhi thodi der pahle tumhi ne kaha..k jinko milna hota hai.. zindagi unko kisi na kisi modh par milvati zaroor hai..

thodi der k lia Naina hichkichai..pehli baar..usko jawab dene k lia sochna pada..


fir dhire dhire usne kaha,"thank God Major Prabhakar, aap Army Lawyer nahi hain..varna tough compitition dete aap mujhe... haa.. maine aisa kaha tha...k jinko milna hota hai..abh bhi main wahi kahungi..par maine kaha jinko milna hota hai..aapse meri meri mulakat honi thi..isi lia toh main aai Army me..agar kudrat ne is mulakat ko tai kia hi nahi hota..toh main nahi banti Army ki vakil.. agar ban bhi jaati..toh is tarha milti..ho sakta hai..k Raj se meri mulakat nahi hoti..agar ho bhi jaati toh Raj mujhpar interest nahi leta..humari shaadi nahi hoti..yaa fir main aapke unit me posted hoti..tab aapko kaha malum padta k main hoon kaun..hai k nahi?


Karan--Point accepted...par fir bhi..jo Sunil ne puchha.. jo Bhaskar ka sawaal hai..tumko afsos nahi hota..?


Naina--afsos toh bahut si baaton ka hota hai..par unko lekar rone baithne se zindagi nahi chalti..hai k nahi?


Karan--tumhe kis baat ka afsos hai..?zara hum bhi sune...

asal baat yeh hain..k karan 6 saal pahle us shaadi me maujood tha..jo ho nahi pai..puri tarha se Naina ko maaf karna uske bas ki baat nahi...Raj k lia chup hai..Naina ko kuchh ghalat nahi bol raha hai..aur yeh Raj ko kyaa hua hai?uske andar ka wooh headstrong mard..kaha gaya?jo Raj apne self respect k saath kabhi koi samjhauta karne ko raazi nahi tha kabhi..woh Raj..ek aisi ladki k lia..yeh baat naa Karan ko hazam ho rahi hai.. na Harman ko.. normal baat hai..us sharmindagi ko woh bhul nahi pate...na Harman ..naa hi Karan.. apni ankho se dekha tha usne..Raj ka woh jhoonka hua sar. usko yeh baat zara bhi achhi nahi lag rahi k.. Naina ka sar itna uncha uth sakta hai Raj k saamne...kyon nahi woh Raj k saamne sar jhoonkati hai?aur kyaa wajah hai.. jo Raj usko itna lift deta hai..Officer hogi ...Office me..court me..par..Raj yeh kaise bhul gaya..k yeh wahi ladki hai..jisne zamane bhar ki zillat di hai.. Raj ko aur uske parivaar ko..Raj ki ankho me tab ansoon nahi aaye.. jab IMA me unki Commando ragging hoti thi.. khane k baad..unko sar k bal latka dia jata tha...aur fir peeta jata tha..Raj k muh se ek 'uff' nahi nikli kabhi..par 6 saal pahle..Karan ne dekha tha..Raj k ansoon se bhare un ankho ko..sharmindagi k maare..uska jhoonka hua sar..Naina ko Raj maaf kar sakta hai..par Karan nahi..

Karan k is attitude ko dekh kar..sab pareshaan ho gaye..

Raj kuchh samajh nahi paa raha hai...k ab woh kyaa karega..Naina.. bahut der se bahut kuchh sun rahi hai.. aur agar Raj ne dukh jhela hai..toh Naina ki zindagi k raaste bhi phoolon se saje hue nahi the..

ankho k saamne..interrogation room ka woh manzar aaj bhi saaf nazar aata hai..jab Arbaaz ne kitni ghatia baatein.. oohh..no..us bar Naina ne handle kia tha situation ko..par..ab Raj kuchh nahi kar paa raha hai.. Karan shayad puri taiyari kar k utra hai..

Naina ko bura laga..k Raj k saamne..koi is tarha usko itna kuchh keh raha hai..par Raj kuchh nahi bol raha hai..


Karan--Naina,I am waiting,kis baat ka afsos hai tumko? aur afsos kisko hai?Naina Darbar ko..yaa Captain Naina Darbar ko..yaa Captain Naina Singh Shekhawat ko,yaa.. Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ki patni Naina Singh Shekhawat ko..??kisko hain afsos..aur kis baat ka afsos hai?

Naina--maine humesha apne dil ki suni..jo mere dil ko sahi laga... maine wahi kia..humesha nateeje k lia taiyar rahi main..us din bhi nahi socha tha..k ghar se bhaagne ka anjaam kyaa hoga..kis andhere me meri zindagi ghoom ho jaayegi..na Raj se shaadi karne se pahle maine socha..kyon ki mere dil ko sahi laga..apne dil ki awaz ko maine kabhi ansuna nahi kia..nateeja chaahe jo bhi ho.. mujhe kisi baat ka afsos nahi...I have no regrets..

Bhaskar--Karan..you are overdrunk...chal..bahut raat ho chuki hai..chal abhi... Raj..Naina..Good Night..raat k 2 baj chuke hai....jaao tum dono..

5 Officers gaye Guest House ki taraf...


Raj aur Naina chal pade..apne quarter ki taraf..

Guest House pahuch kar..

Bhaskar ne Karan k sar par ek jug paani udhel dia.. usko hosh me laane k lia...


Sunil--Karan..is baat ki ummeed nahi thi tujhse...is tarha kisiki insult karna.. kaha se sikha tune?

Harman--yaar..Karan thoda bahek gaya tha....

Gautam--yeh koi wajah nahi..aur Raj ko jab Naina se koi problem nahi..toh fir hum hote kaun hain..is tarha dakhal dene waale..


Bhaskar--yaar..hum dost hain..par humko bhi ek had se aage nahi jana chahie..Karan..tune kyaa soch kar..Naina se yeh sab kaha?


Karan--arre..woh ladki hain ..bahut zyada chaalu..jab usko yeh pata chala..k uska so-called loveer ban gaya terrorist..tab usko darr laga.. k itne din padhai likhai sab bekar ho jaayegi..she is using both of them..Raj ko bhi.. aur us Arbaaz ko bhi...bloody hell,is Naina ko sab kuchh chahie..gracefully har ghalat kaam ko sahi saabit karne pe tuli hui hai..ghalati kare ..aur sab ki zindagi me uthal puthal ho,aur Madam ki demand hai..k sab kuchh justified samjha jaye..Raj ko hua kyaa hai?Naamard ban gaya hai sala...jo Naina kahe..wahi janab karenge.. puri duniya me Naina k ilava aur kuchh nahi dikhta unko..arre..Raj ka ehsaan manna chahie..us ladki ko.. aur aise dikha rahi hai..k usne Raj par ehsaan kia hai.. usne..Raj...Bakra ban gaya hai... pura...tum sab hazam kar sakte ho..main nahi..Harman aur maine dekha tha.. k 6 saal pahle Raj par kyaa beeti thi.. DAAYAN  hai puri...

Sunil--please..abhi chup ho jaao..please..waise bhi bahut tamasha ho chuka hai..aur..please..kal sab ko apne unit waapas jana hai.. jaane se pahle is tarha..please..Karan.. jo hua so hua..aur Raj khush hai..bhul ja..yaaron ki baat maan..

udhar..Quarter pahuch kar..

Naina chali gai Bathroom...


Raj ko samajh me aa rahi hai yeh baat,k Naina ko bahut bura laga hai...par.. us waqt..jab Karan yeh sab bak raha tha..pata nahi kyon Raj kuchh keh nahi paya... kahi na kahi Raj ko yeh lag raha hai..k jo bhadaas woh Naina par nikaal nahi paya..Karan ne woh kaam kar dia..

woh chup chaap baahar khada hai....bathroom ka darwaza khulne ki awaz aai...

Naina baahar  aai hai fresh hokar..Raj gaya andar... almari se nightsuit nikaal kar bathroom me chala gaya...


Naina ne dekha Raj ki taraf,socha k Raj kuchh kahega.. par Raj bina kuchh bataaye..chala gaya bathroom...


ansoon bahana Naina ki fitrat nahi..aur jab rishte me mayusi ka saamna karna pade..aur ansoon bahana manzoor naa ho..tab us mayusi k saath aakar gussa khada ho jata hai...Naina ko bhi gussa aya..Karan ya Harman se woh kyon gussa zaahir karegi?jab uske Husband ne uske favour me ek shabd nahi bola?

bathroom me shower k niche khade hokar..Raj ne bahut kuchh socha..k kaise Naina se baat karega woh..

bathroom se baahar nikla..toh dekha..Naina khidki k paas..chair  me ..baithi hai...sardi hai bahut...par sirf nightsuit me hai...aur aaj kaafi dino k..baad.. Naina k hontho par cigarette hai...

Raj aakar khada hua..Naina k paas...par uske kuchh kahne se pahle hi Naina ne baat shuru kar di..

Naina--abhi bhi der nahi hui hai..chhod do mujhe..

Raj ko bahut bada jhatka laga...Naina yeh kyaa keh rahi hai??!!!

Naina--dekho..humne koi pyaar kar k shaadi toh nahi ki hai..naa tumne mujhse pyaar kia..naa maine tumse koi prem k khatir yeh shaadi ki..aur jis wajah se humne shaadi ki thi..Arbaaz ..ka hum dono ko ek saath Hotel me dekhna..ab us baat se kisiko koi fark nahi padega.. toh bhalai isi me hai k.. tum mujhe chhod do...

Raj-main janta hoon..Naina..Karan ki baatein..bahut ghalat baat kahi usne.. actually 6 saal pahle woh tha ..mere ghar me...

Naina--toh ..tumne sab ko yeh kyon nahi bataya..humari shaadi se pahle..k main wahi ladki hoon..?

Raj--woh log jhamela karte..

Naina--toh nahi karte mujhse shaadi..simple..

Raj--ek minute...main tumse shaadi isi lia karna chaahta tha..k maine tumse pyaar kia ...is lia nahi k..kisi Arbaaz ne mujhe tumhare saath kisi hotel me dekha tha..nahi.. agar main nahi karna chaahta tha tumse shaadi..toh tumhari izzat..yaa tumhari beizzati.. mere lia koi maine nahi rakhti..main chal padta apne raaste... shaadi ki hai tumse..sirf aur sirf isi lia..kyonki maine pyaar kia hai..tumse..

Naina--agar pyaar kia tha..toh dosto ko kyon nahi bataya..k woh ladki dubara meri zindagi me aai hai...aur mujhe usse pyaar hai..aur mujhe usise shaadi karni hai...??

Raj--is baat se kyaa fark padta hai Naina?main tumse pyaar karta hoon..kyaa yeh kaafi nahi?

Naina--tum yeh kyon nahi maante..k kahi na kahi tumne mujhe nicha dikhane k lia,mujhse shaadi ki hai?k dekhlo...Naina..tumne mujhe beizzat kia tha..par maine tumse shaadi ki...

Raj--Karan ko saamne kyon nahi jawab dia tumne..isi andaz se?


Naina--tum khade khade tamasha kyon dekhte rahe?

Raj--main kyaa kehta?bolo..jhamela karta?ladta usse?

Naina--HAAAA....LADHNA CHAHIE THA..TUMKO USSE..KAISE MARD HO.. KAISE RAJPUT HO? TUMHARE SAAMNE TUMHARI PATNI KI KOI BETZZATI KARTA HAI..AUR TUM TAMASHA DEKHTE HO???

Raj ko gussa aya ab...

Raj--Karan ne sirf normal sa sawal puchha tha..it was a normal reaction..jo kuchh bhi hua uske baad..tumko itna bura kyon lag raha hai..main jaanta hoon..

Naina--kyaa jaante ho?


Raj--kyonki..tumhare khud k man me chor hai..tumne samjha jo kuchh kia.. uske baad..mujhse shaadi kar k.. har chees par parda daal dia tumne..par aisa hota nahi.. jo kia tha tumne..itna toh tumko bhugatna hi padta..


Naina--really...hmm..toh main kyaa samjhoon..Karan ki sirf zuban thi..par baatein sab Raj ki thi..yehi hai na?

Raj--aisa nahi hai...

Naina--aisa hi hai..tum chaahte ho..k har pal us ghatna ko yaad kar k..mera sar tumhare saamne jhoonka rahe.. aur main umar bhar tumhara ehsaan maanti rahoon..hai na?so..Major Shekhawat..thank you..very much..

ab Raj ko bahut zyada gussa aa gaya....Karan ne jo kia.. ghalat kia..bahut ghalat kia..Raj ko kuchh bolna chahie tha..par ab jo Naina bol rahi hai..yeh bhi bardasht nahi hota..sarasar ..bebuniad ilzaam hai Raj par..


Raj bhi chillane laga..


Raj--YES..YOU MUST BE THANKFUL TO ME..TUM KO NAHI MALUM THA?HAA..TUMKO MERA EHSAAN MAANNA CHAHIE.. AUR EK BAAT MAIN TUMKO BATAOON,TUM UNME SE HO..JO MAUKE KA FAIDA UTHANE SE NAHI CHUKTE........JAB TUMKO  YEH DIKHA K TUMHARA ARBAAZ BAN GAYA HAI TERRORIST. TUMNE EK MINUTE KI DER NAHI KI..USKO PAKADVANE ME..

Naina--haa..maine pakadvaya usko..agar nahi pakadvati to mere upar traitor hone k charges lagte..


Raj--TOH LAGTE CHARGES...KAISA PYAAR THA TUMHARA?LOG TOH PYAAR K LIA MARNE SE NAHI DARTE,...AUR TUMNE BHI TOH GHAR CHHODA THA..FIR KYAA HUA?MERE SAATH RAAT GUZARNE SE PAHLE TUMNE EK BAAR NAHI SOCHA...AUR MUJHSE SHAADI KARNE K LIA TUMNE HAA KEH DI..AUR APNE DAD KA BAHANA BANAYA...HAA..TUM YEHI MAUKA DHOONDH RAHI THI..TUMNE SOCHA...ACHHA MAUKA HAI..MAHAAN TOH TUM BAN HI CHUKI THI..CHALO..SHAADI KAR K SETTLE HO JAAO.. NAHI?KYAA GHALAT SOCHA HAI KARAN NE.. AGAR USNE AISA SOCHA HAI..AUR GHALAT KYAA BOLA USNE? ARRE.. EHSAAN MAANNE K BADLE..TUM MUJHE HI ANKHE DIKHA RAHI HO? ITNI HIMMAT?SAR JHOONKA K REHNA CHAHIE TUMKO MERE SAAMNE...TUMNE JO KIA..USKE BAAD..KABHI SOCHA HAI.. K AGAR TUMSE SHAADI NAHI KARTA MAIN,AUR ARBAAZ YEH BAAT FAILA DETA TOH..TUMHARI IZZAT.. KAUDION KI REH JAATI..

Naina--SHUT UP..

Raj--KYON..SACH SUNNE ME TAKLEEF HO RAHI HAI?AUR SUNOGI..TOH SUNO..TUM JAISI WAHIAT  LADKI..MAINE AAJ TAK NAHI DEKHI.. AUR KYAA LAGTA HAI TUMHE..MERE DOSTO K SAAMNE WOH SAARI WAHIAT BAATEIN KEH KAR.. TUM MAHAAN BAN RAHI THI?JAB TAK YEH SACH SAAMNE NAHI AYA THA.TAB TAK BAAT AUR THI..JAB UNKO PATA CHALA.. TAB TUMNE DEKHA NA KYAA HUA?

Naina--Raj..bahut zyada bol rahe ho..

Raj--EHSAAN MAANO K MAINE TUMSE SHAADI KI..VARNA KAHI YEH BAAT SAAMNE AA JATI..K BINA SHAADI KIE KYAA HUA HAIN HUMARE BICH..TOH TUM ARMY COURT ME NAHI HOTI.. BAL K..KISI CONCENTRATION  CAMP ME HOTI.. AUR COL.MANJEET KUKREJA JAISE LOG.. TUMKO NOCH KHAATE..SHAAYAD TUMKO IS BAAT KA ANDAZA NAHI HAI..BAAIZZAT BIWI BANI HO..USKI KEEMAT NAHI JAANTI..MAIN KHUSHAMAD KARTA HOON..SOCHTI HO BAHUT BADA TEER MAAR LIA HAI TUMNE..PAR ASAL ME TUMHARI AUKAT EK KHOTE SIKKE SE ZYADA KUCHH NAHI HAI................

yeh kahte hue Raj rook gaya....gusse me usne kyaa keh dia Naina ko..usko hosh hi nahi raha..

anaab shanaab bolta gaya Naina ko..usdin ki tarha..jis din..Raj ko yeh pata chala tha..k Naina k dad ne usko shaadi k lia convince kia hain..

Raj ko ehsaas hua..k jo baat sochna bhi Raj k lia paap hai...Raj ne wah baat Naina ko keh dia...

thodi der k lia sab kuchh chup chaap...

Raj ko ehsaas hua..woh kitne zor se chilla raha tha..

Naina chup chaap baithi hai..

Raj ne itna zyada bol dia hai Naina ko ..k ab maafi maangne ki gunjaish nahi rahi..

Naina uthi..aur jaake razai odh kar so gai...bed par..

30 minute baad..Raj bhi so gaya..Naina ki taraf pith kar k...


raat beet hi chuki thi..subha k 4 baj chuke the...

Raj ko mehsoos hua....k..Naina bed se uth kar chali gai..


Raj so nahi paya..

Naina bahar khadi hoke..rone lagi...


Raj ko uski siskion ki awaz sunai dene lagi...par uske paas jaane ki himmat nahi hui..


subha ho chuki hai...


Naina uniform pahen k..duty par chali gai..

Raj gaya ..thodi der baad...saare Alumnites jaane lage... apne apne ghar..yaa apne apne unit..


Bhaskar,Sunil,Karan,Harman aur Gautam..ko see off karne aya hai Raj...

thodi der baad Naina bhi aai..see off karne..

Sunil--so..Naina..time to go..khush rehna...

Bhaskar--pata nahi..agli mulakat kab ho..

Naina--yaa..pata nahi meri agli posting kaha par ho..

Gautam--bye..take care..


Harman--Bhabhi..main apne aur Karan ki taraf se maafi maangta hoon..

Naina--no ..its ok..


Karan--nahi..I am sorry..maine jo kia..

Naina--don't worry..aur Raj k wellwishers hain aap sab.. and ek farewell gift hai meri taraf se..ek news hai..


Karan--kyaa news hain?

Naina--we are getting divorced..


Harman--what?


Naina--yaa...ab..mujhe koi hak toh nahi pahuchta k.. main kisiki zindagi k saath aise khilwad karoon..khas kar..ek baar..toh Raj k saath pahle bhi bura kar chuki hoon....abhi zindagi baaki hai..aage ki zindagi Raj ko sukoon se jeene ka pura hak hai..yeha ki duty khatam ho jaaye..bas..legal process start karva dungi..

Karan--Naina..look..I am really sorry..maine is tarha apna gussa tum par utara..seriously sorry..


Naina--I am sorry..jo maine kia..uske lia...

yeh kehkar Naina sab ko bye bol kar chali gai..

sab log bahut zyada offended ho gaye...


Raj ne Karan ko gale lagaya...

sab ko bye bola usne...

agar usko malum padta..k X-Mass aur yeh Alumnite party..uske lia yeh shaamat lekar aayegi...toh woh is din ko hi taarikh se meeta deta..

usko abhi Naina se baat karna tha..par..nahi kar paya..

Naina uski ankho se ojhal si ho gai....


yakkudimag2008-08-10 14:23:27

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hi anu, yaar yeh kya ho gaya rn ke bich..... yeh toh sab baat bigad gayi... phele naina ne galti ki aur phir raj ne.... yeh joh sharab hai na sab kuch is ki wajah se hota hai ise pk log apne hosh kho dete hai sahi aur galat bhul jaate hai aur us karan ko kya padi hai rn ke bich mai bolne ki ... waise bhi khete husband aur wife ke bich jab koi 3rd person bolta hai toh yeh relationship ka kachra kar dete hai... toh agar apni relationship ko bachana ho toh kisi 3rd person ki na sunte hue apne dil ki baat suno toh sada sukhi rahoge... well nice ud n waiting to know whats going to happen in their life... ud soonbye kads

16 years ago

[QUOTE=Shaina_b]Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Sab janna chahte hai ke Raj aur Naina kaise mile!!!!!
Honeymoon manane IMA aagaye!!! Yeh sunke chauk gaye!!!!!!
Yeh Karan kitne ulte sidhe sawal puchta hai!!!! Sunil sahi keh raha hai!!!!! Yeh Marwayega Raj ko!!!!
Gautam ne accha ghumaya baat ko!!!!! Nisha ke baare mein puchne laga!!!!! Bhaskar bhi usse ish baat ko lekar tease karne laga!!!!
Toh Nisha is an upcoming writer!!!! Aur hamesha se wahi banna chahti thi!!!!! Great!!!!!
Gautam ka accha hai!!!! Apni biwi ke saath girlfriend boyfriend ki tarah milta hai!!!! Usne sahi kaha ke Raj bahut lucky hai ke Naina uske saath hai!!!!!
Bhaskar ne yeh kya puccha!!!! Naina ko afsos hai yaa nahi!!!!!
Karan ne toh issi baat se Naina ke peeche hi padh gaya!!!!!
Bechara Raj!!!! Kya beeti hogi uspar 6 saal pehle!!!!! Kitna dukh huya hoga usse!!!!
Par jab Raj Naina ko maaf kar sakta hai toh Karan ko kya problem hai!!!!! Uska male ego ko itni problem kyun hai!!!!!
Naina ko bura laga!!!! Zahir hai!!!! Akhir Raj ke saamne Karan yeh sab bol raha hai aur Raj chup hai!!!!!
Naina ne accha jawab diya!!!! Usne hamesha apne dil ki suni hai!!!!!
Bhaskar ne sahi kiya jo Karan ko le gaya!!!!!
Gautam aur Bhaskar sahi keh raha hai!!!! Jab Raj ko koi problem nahi toh phir woh hote kaun hai!!!! Aur dost hai unko ek hadh se aage nahi jaana chahiye!!!!
Karan yeh kya kay bol raha hai!!!! Raj kaise bhi rakhe apni biwi ko usse kya problem hai!!!!!!
Uska kya khud ki biwi ke saath problem ho raha kya??
Kuch log aise hote hai!!! Dusro ki khushi dekh nahi sakte!!!! Aur Karan unhi mein se ek hai!!! Aise dost ho toh dushman ki kya zaroorat!!!!!
Sunil sahi kehta hai ke Raj khush hai toh bhul jaa!!! Aur Harman bhi toh tha par usne toh aisa behave nahi kiya!!!!!!
Raj Naina pe bhaadas nahi nikaal paya aur yeh kaan Karan ne kar diya!!!! To

16 years ago

hey today i will not say it was nice update
i hate the arguement between Raj and Naina
Akhir me Raj aur Naina ka jhagda ho hi gaya
aur Naina ne Raj ko divorce dene ka faisala kaise kar liya i know Raj ne gusse me jyada keh diya par shanti se baith ke baat bhi to kar sakte the
plz RN ko alag mat karna
kuch to karo unka jhagda khatam karvao plzzzzzz

16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Sab janna chahte hai ke Raj aur Naina kaise mile!!!!!
Honeymoon manane IMA aagaye!!! Yeh sunke chauk gaye!!!!!!
Yeh Karan kitne ulte sidhe sawal puchta hai!!!! Sunil sahi keh raha hai!!!!! Yeh Marwayega Raj ko!!!!
Gautam ne accha ghumaya baat ko!!!!! Nisha ke baare mein puchne laga!!!!! Bhaskar bhi usse ish baat ko lekar tease karne laga!!!!
Toh Nisha is an upcoming writer!!!! Aur hamesha se wahi banna chahti thi!!!!! Great!!!!!
Gautam ka accha hai!!!! Apni biwi ke saath girlfriend boyfriend ki tarah milta hai!!!! Usne sahi kaha ke Raj bahut lucky hai ke Naina uske saath hai!!!!!
Bhaskar ne yeh kya puccha!!!! Naina ko afsos hai yaa nahi!!!!!
Karan ne toh issi baat se Naina ke peeche hi padh gaya!!!!!
Bechara Raj!!!! Kya beeti hogi uspar 6 saal pehle!!!!! Kitna dukh huya hoga usse!!!!
Par jab Raj Naina ko maaf kar sakta hai toh Karan ko kya problem hai!!!!! Uska male ego ko itni problem kyun hai!!!!!
Naina ko bura laga!!!! Zahir hai!!!! Akhir Raj ke saamne Karan yeh sab bol raha hai aur Raj chup hai!!!!!
Naina ne accha jawab diya!!!! Usne hamesha apne dil ki suni hai!!!!!
Bhaskar ne sahi kiya jo Karan ko le gaya!!!!!
Gautam aur Bhaskar sahi keh raha hai!!!! Jab Raj ko koi problem nahi toh phir woh hote kaun hai!!!! Aur dost hai unko ek hadh se aage nahi jaana chahiye!!!!
Karan yeh kya kay bol raha hai!!!! Raj kaise bhi rakhe apni biwi ko usse kya problem hai!!!!!!
Uska kya khud ki biwi ke saath problem ho raha kya??
Kuch log aise hote hai!!! Dusro ki khushi dekh nahi sakte!!!! Aur Karan unhi mein se ek hai!!! Aise dost ho toh dushman ki kya zaroorat!!!!!
Sunil sahi kehta hai ke Raj khush hai toh bhul jaa!!! Aur Harman bhi toh tha par usne toh aisa behave nahi kiya!!!!!!
Raj Naina pe bhaadas nahi nikaal paya aur yeh kaan Karan ne kar diya!!!! Toh Raj ne kya bha

16 years ago

Oh!God!!This was soooooooo veryyyy much unexpected.Raj has once again blabbered nonsense to Naina.They looked so much in love.Don't do this to them and I know you will have to carry on with the story..But why only Raj even Naina was wrong this timebut this was least expected.But the update was superb,really rocking dearcontinue soon.great piece of workBut......please.......do clear all the misunderstandings between them.

16 years ago

Waah waah Naina kya baat hai.
Har baar Raj hi Naina k aage jukhega kya.
Sach to ye hi hai ki galat kar k bhi Naina ka sir ucha hai garv se aur accha kar k bhi Raj humesha Naina k aage peeche ghoomta rehta hai.
Karan ne galat to bhaut kiya ye sach hai.
Us ko koi hak nahi tha Naina se is tarah se baat karne ka.
Jab Karan ne sach keh diya aur Raj ne bhi apne dil ki bhadaas nikal li to seedhe seedhe divorce par utar aayi vo.
Naina samjhti kya hai divorce dena shaadi karna kya ye sab ek mazak hai.
Pyaar nahi hai to shaadi nahi karni thi Naina ko.Kitni aasani se vo keh deti hai mujhe chod do aur divorce de do.
Sach hai Raj se vo pyaar hi nahi karti hai.Kyounki jo pyaar karta hai vo is tarah k vahiyaat decision ek baar me nahi le leta hai.
Kuch had tak mujhe nahi lagta ki galti Raj ki hai poori tarah se kewal ye chod kar ki Raj ko itna jyada bolna nahi chahiye tha.
Sach kaha Raj ne aur karan ne to bardast nahi hua na.Abhi bhi in dono k rishton me gehrai nahi hai reason ye Karan nahi balki ek doosre se pyaar nahi hai ye hai.Raj ne kaha bhi to ki vo pyaar karta hai Naina se isiliye us ne shaadi ki par vo ajeeb hi hai.
Rishtey mazak ban gaye hain Naina k liye.Mahak Sinha2008-07-25 01:02:15

16 years ago

how much i hate raj right now............how dare he repeat the same mistake and say those horrifying things to naina............and he doesnt even have the guts to say sorry and go to her make things right.................he made her cry.............where has that loving, caring raj gone........


and that *** ** * ***** karan...........i feel like kicking him.....................apni life ki koi thikana nahin chala naina ko baatein sunane ke liye!!!.............banne aya accha dost aur dost ke life ko barbad kar diya..............divorce tak baat aa gayi uske waja se!!


but gr8 update.......what a turn of events when i ws least expecting it.........toooo good!!!

16 years ago

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