Chapter 35

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ANANYA ROY

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Town me jaha par Delhi Bus stand hai..uske paas se Raipur Road guzra hai,wahi par survey office bhi hai..aur hai Rosparna River..

22nd November,2005..

Raj aur Naina usi nadi k paas baithe hai...shaam k 4 baje..aaj duty nahi hai.. aur sardi bhi hai..dono dopaher ko hi ghumne nikal gaye..

nadi k paas jaakar Naina baithi...Raj uske paas baitha..

September me Rajveer aur Naina ki shaadi hui thi..2 maheene ho gaye hain..

in do maheeno me..bahut kuchh badal sa gaya hai..Rajveer badal gaya hai..

kabhi socha bhi nahi tha usne..k Naina k dil me itni mohabbat ho sakti hai.. yeh socha tha k kuchh ehsaas chhupe hai Naina k dil me,par itni mohabbat? Raj ne nahi socha tha..

vakei me..pyaar karna aur pyaar nibhana...Naina ko ata hai..

ek din Raj ne Naina se puchha ..."itni mohabbat kaha se laai tum?"

Naina--zindagi bahut chhoti hai..aur mohabbat k lia aur bhi chhoti hoti hai..k ahi padha tha maine..isi lia..

Raj--no offence Naina..Arbaaz se bhi toh tumne pyaar kia tha..

Naina--hmm..par Raj..pyaar koi chees toh nahi k ek se lekar dusre ko de di jaaye..pyaar  raushni ki tarha hai...raushni ko dekh nahi sakte..par mehsoos kar sakte hain hum..bas..ho jata hai..pyaar kia nahi jata..

Raj--jaise mujhe ho gaya tha..tumse..

Naina--thank you..mujhe pyaar karne k lia.. khushnaseeb hote hain woh log.. jinko pyaar milta hai..tumne mujhse pyaar kia..thank you..

Raj--thank you..Naina..meri zindagi me aane k lia..

Naina--achha Raj...ek baat batao..kabhi aisa hua k..main tumse bahut door chali gai..bahut door.. kyaa karoge?


Raj ne Naina k hontho par apna right index finger rakh dia..

Raj--bas..ab..kabhi bhul kar bhi yeh baat mat karna..nahi...

Naina--Raj,.zindagi ka toh koi bharosa nahi..isi lia..

Raj--Naina..bas..bolana?..aage koi baat nahi karni..

Naina--ek baat bataoon?

Raj--bolo..

Naina--tum jitne bahadur dikhte ho baahar se.. andar se utna hi darte ho..

Raj--jo kaheta hai usko darr nahi lagta..yaa toh naatak karta hai.. yaa toh paagal hai..jaha par pyaar hota hai..waha par darr bhi hota hai..k kahi yeh saath chhoot gaya toh?!!

Naina--yeh darr hi hai..jo humen baandh k rakhti hai...taa k hum kabhi door jaane k bare me soche bhi nahi..

Raj--main Lucknow me aya ..uske kareb 4 maheene baad tum aai..main try karunga k humari posting iske baad ek hi jagah par ho..

Naina--hmm..achhi baat hai..

Raj--kyon tum khush nahi ho?

Naina--hoon..par aisa ho sakta hai?

Raj--koshish kar sakta hoon..aur..haa..Maj.Gen. Negi..kab kaam aayenge?

Naina--hmmm...sochungi..

Naina Raj k goad me sar rakh kar so gai...

Naina ki ankhe bandh hai...

Raj Naina k chehre par apni ungli fira raha hai...

aur fir..Raj Naina ki taraf jhoonka..

kuchh der baad utha....Raj muskura raha hai... Naina ko kiss kar k..

Naina ki ankhe bandh..par hontho par muskurahat..

Raj--Ghalib ne kyaa kaha hai malum hai tumko?

Naina--Mirza Ghalib?

Raj--nahi..aur bahut Ghalib the..jo shayar hua karte the..Mirza Ghalibh ofcourse..

Naina--achha kyaa kaha hain unhone?

Raj--ishque hai woh aatish Ghalib..jo lagaye na lage..aur bujhaaye naa bane..

Naina--hmm...ishque ki aag..dil me zinda rehni chahie..pyaar ka matlab hi yehi hai..

Raj--haa..kisiko apna bana lena..yaa kisika ho jana..right?

Naina--tumko toh bahut kuchh malum hai!!!

Raj--haa..par is aag ko jalte rehna chahie...

Naina--main is aag ko jalaaye rakhungi..

Raj ab tak aasmaan ki taraf dekh raha tha..

Naina ki baaton par chauk kar Naina ki taraf dekha usne..

Raj--kyaa kaha tumne?

Naina--yehi k..is aag ko main zinda rakhungi..apne dil me.. humesha k lia.. marte dum tak..aur marne k baad bhi shaayad.. mera dil ek sitara ban jaayega..

Raj--Naina..tum aaj kuchh badli badli si lag rahi ho...kaisi baatein kar rahi ho?

Naina--ek Romantic novel me padha tha maine..

Raj--aaj bhi yaad hai tumhe?

Naina--bilkul...

Naina uth kar baith gai...

Naina Raj ko dekh rahi hai..aur..Raj Naina ko...

Naina--ek gana gaaona..

andhera ho chuka tha...aasmaan me sitare bhi chamak rahe hai..

Raj--abhi gaanaa?

Naina--haa..please gaaona..achha gaa lete ho..


Raj ne gaana shuru kia..

 

"bade achhe lagte hai...

yeh dhartiiii..yeh nadiyaaannn..

  yeh rainaaaaa...."

Naina--aur?

"aur tummmmmmmmm.."

Naina--sach?

Raj--bilkul..

"hum tum kitne paas..hai ,kitne..door hain chaand sitare..

sach puchho toh..mann ko jhoote ..lagte hain yeh saare...

magar sachche lagte hai...yeh dharti...yeh ambar..yeh raahen.."

Naina--aur?

"aurr tummmmmmm.."

Naina clap karne lagi.."very good..its superb.."

Raj sharma gaya..."thank you.."

Naina--ab chlao...andhera ho gaya hai...baki ka gana quarter me..

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raat k 10 baje..Quarter me..dinner k baad..

Raj--aaj mujhe zara drink karna hai..

Naina--toh?

Raj--tumko problem toh nahi?

Naina--itne shareef kab se bane?

Raj--bachpan se..

Naina--I see..

Raj--haa..achha tumko chahie?

Naina--nahi...subah tak hang over nahi utrega.. class lene me problem ho jaayegi..

Raj--hmm..achha..chalo Rajveer..apna saath khud hi do...

Raj ne ek peg peea...

kuchh der baad..

Raj--Naina..yeh Varun Menon ..jaanti ho isko?

Naina--tumko kisne bola..haa..main jaanti hoon Captain Menon ko...training me saath the mere..

Raj--tumse toh khaas dosti hai unki...

Naina muskurai...

Naina--jo hain woh  court me hain..actually..we are very good friends..dusre logo ki baat par mat jaao, kabhi mauka mile toh milvaungi Menon se..achha khasa admi hai..bahut rasik hai..

Raj ne dekha Naina ko..Raj ki ankhe zara chamak rahi hai..jaise puchh rahhi hai Naina..k chakkar kyaa hai??

Naina samajh gai...

Naina--jaisa tum samajh rahe ho waisa kuchh nahi hai..waise Varun kuchh dino baad..Northern region me transfer honewala hain..

Raj--really?

Naina--haa..kal uska mail aayaa tha...

Raj ko kaafi chadh gai hai..5 Peg k baad..

Raj--is he in love with you?

Naina--he has already a beloved..

Raj--achha?kaun hain?

Naina--Army ki nahi hai...ek Civilian hai...

Raj--achaaa..toh fir mujhe koi khatra nahi....

Naina--yaa right...

Naina ne apna drawer khola...

ek Pistle nikala usne...

Raj--yeh kyaa hai?

Naina--Pistle hai...mujhe recently iska lisence mila hai..dekho...

Raj ne Pistle ko dekha...Prajjio Company ka hain... Italy ki Company hai...

Raj--kab lia tumne?

Naina--Gift mila hai...Dad ne dia hain...

Raj--mere sasoorjee ne?yaa Mej.Gen. Negi ne?

Naina--second option...

Raj--oohhh...tumse bahut pyaar karte hain na?

Naina--puchhne ki baat hai?aasaan nahi hai ek ladki ko us tarha sahara dena..Dad mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain...

Raj--you are very lucky Naina...

Raj Naina k paas aayaa...."bahut log aise hain jo tumse behad pyaar karte hain..."

Naina--haa..ek toh saamne hain..Major Shekhawat..

Raj--really?

Naina--bahut zyada...

Raj--nahi..bahut zyada nahi...bas thoda sa...

Naina ne hans kar Raj ko gale laga lia...

Raj Naina ko le kar bistar me geer gaya...

aur saari raat.....

 

subah jab Raj ki neend tooti...tab usne kaha, "Naina..yeh subah itni jaldi kyon ho jaati hai?"

Naina ne jawab me sirf muskurai..

yakkudimag2008-08-10 14:15:22

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hmm..thode dino baad Raj kahega yeh romance session itni jaldi khatam kyon ho jaati hai...

and Naina and Raj..they are truly in love..

Arbaaz k lia jo tha Naina k dil me..its clear that it was an imfatuation..and about the injustice on Arbaaz..thats all..

Raj and Naina..sach me pyaar me hain..

bahut jaldi Varun ki Entry hogi..and
Maj. Gen. Negi bhi aayenge..

16 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! Raj aur Naina ghumne gaye!!!! Wow!!! Nadi ke kinare dono baithe hai!!!! How romantic!!!!! Raj ko ab ehsaas hai keh Naina usse kitna pyaar karti hai!!!!! Naina ne padha hai yeh sab!!! Yeh Naina abhut kuch padhti hai novels aur love stories mein aur unhe use bhi karti hai daily life mein!!!! Naina aur Raj ki baatein were so romantic!!! Wakai mein Naina ke dil mein bahut pyaar bhara hai bas woh ab tak izhaar nahi kar paa rahi thi!!!! Naina baar baar dur jane ki baat kyun karti hai?? Raj ghabra jata hai!!!!! Raj ne sahi kaha!!! Jahan pyaar hota hai waha darr bhi hota hai ke kahin yeh saath chhut naa jaye!!!!! Naina Raj ki goad mein sar rakh ke soh rahi hai!!!! Raj ne usse kiss kiya!!!! How romantic!!!! Raj ne Ghalib ki jo baat kahi woh bahut acchi thi!!!! Waah kya baat kahi hai!!!! Waah waah!!!! Naina ne wakai mein aaj apne pyaar ko lafzon mein bayan kar rahi hai!!!!! Waah kya kaha usne!!!!!! Marne ke baad bhi yeh ishq ki aag jalti rahegi!!!! Raj aur Naina dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe hai!!! Haaiii!!!! Raj ka gaana was too good!!! Its one of my favourites!!!!! Aur ish situation pe suit bhi hota hai!!!! Kitni gehrai hai Raj aur Naina ke pyaar mein!!!! Raj usse apni zindagi se bhi zyada pyaar karta hai!!!! Raj sharma gaya Naina ke tareef karne par!!!! How cute!!!! Naina is again teasing him!!!! I loved her itne shareef kab se ban gaye!!!!! Varun Naina ka friend hai!!!! How nice!!! Raj toh jealous ho gaya!!!! Ab jahan pyaar hai wahan jealousy toh hogi hi!!!! Warna pyaar poora nahi hota!!!! Maj General Negi Naina se wakai mein bahut pyaar karte hai!!!! I loved Raj and Naina's dialogue on usse bahut log behad pyaar karte hai!!!! Naina ne toh keh hi diya ke ek toh uske saamne hi khada hai!!!! Haaaiiii!!!!! And she hugged him!!!!! Raj phir se chalu!!!! Great!!!! I loved Raj's dialogue ke subah itni jaldi kyun ho jati hai!!!! Naina and Raj really d

16 years ago

wowwwwwwwww thats such a sweet and romantic update........and the one more romantic this time s naina..........she has got so much depth in her.......she really loes him a lotttttt, just cd nt express it properly for such a long time............ohhhhhhh, its beautiful...... raj and naina do deserve each other...............

16 years ago

hi anu, bahut hi payara ud tha............. well new entry is love story mai koi lafda toh nahi hone wala na....... i think woh toh hoga hi........ well raj ne sach kaha yeh subah kyun jaldi ho jati hai....... lovely ud.......bye kads

16 years ago

It was absolutely rockingThe understanding between Raj and Naina is beautiful.The choice of song was great it is one of my very favourite.A very good update as usual.Continue soontake careriyaa_198539640.5430324074

16 years ago

Ok now there is again a new entry Varun. Who is playing this role aur Naina ko kaise pata ki vo yahan aa raha hai? Raj ne Naina k liye gaana gaya vow g8. Ye Naina baar baar door jaane ki baatein kyoun karti hai? Bechara Raj pareshaan ho jaata hai na. Novel aur love stories me bahut kuch padha hai Naina ne aur sab kuch use bhi kar rahi hai daily life me. Kitni gehrai hai dono k pyaar me Raj bhi Naina ko apni zindagi se jyaada pyaar karta hai aur Naina bhi. Accha hua Arbaaz k peeche apni baaki ki life waste nahi ki Naina ne varna haasil hi kya hota us ko. Varun k baare me Naina k muh se sun kar Raj confuse jarror ho gaya tha. Jealousy jealousy hmmmmmm good thoda jalan honi bhi chahiye na varna pyaar poora nahi hota hai. Update was jhaakas. Raj ka ye dila. bahut accha laga ki Naina subah itni jaldi kyoun ho jaati hai. Update asap.

16 years ago

hi anu, well maine tumahara fic bahut dino baad padha hai pure 3 days lage mujhe saare ud padhne mai.... and yeh fic bhi ekdum mast hai n uds as usual ekdum mast hai..... first ki story ekdum alag toh nahi hai tumahari last fics say.... start toh tumne love triangle se kiya phir triangle ko ache se break kiya fhir love story dali woh bhi ekdum HOT uds ek saath fhir ab yeh kukereja joh kuch bahut bada lafda karne wala hai...... well i think asli twist story mai agale kuch uds mai aagye ga aur woh kuch aisa hoga jise hum sab mai se koi expect nahi kar sakta....... b/c tumahara toh writing style hi ki sabko ekdum alag sa surprise dena so i am waiting for that surprise n going read this fic regurarly.... all the best for this... bye kads

16 years ago

awsome loved the convo between RN superb update outstanding great going waiting for u'r next update

16 years ago

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