Chapter 8

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It was nearly evening. Everyone was home except Raj, Abhi and Naina. Abhi had gone to check out the haunted house while Naina and Raj were still in the village. Khushi was eagerly waiting for her mom to come back.

At the haunted house:

Abhi was near the house when he saw two people coming out of there. They didn't look local villagers.  Abhi couldn't see their faces in the dark but he could hear what they were saying. Abhi hid behind the bush to hear their conversation.

One man was talking on his phone. Abhi could hear only one sided conversation.

The man- Boss, humne sari taiyaariyan kar di hai' Ab hum sirf aap ke signal ka wait kar rahe hai'

Other person said something and The man answered, "Haan sare log agle 10 dino main yahan pe aa jayenge aur phir hamara mission shuru hoga' Indian army walon ko pata bhi nahi chalega ki is baar hum kya karne walen hai."

Then he laughed and ended the conversation.

The second man who was standing asked the first man, "Hum ko ab chalna chahiye'. Teen din baad aa kar hum sab kuch wapas check kar lenge. Waise bhi ab yahan koi nahi aayega."

The first man nodded and they both locked the front door and went in village's direction. Abhi waited for sometime there and when they were out of his sight, he decided to check the house. He picked the lock and went inside. He was shocked to see weapons, grenade etc.

Abhi took out his cell and called Raj.

Abhi- Raj, tu kahan pe hai'

Raj- Hum Ghar jane walen the'

Abhi- Tu ek kaam kar, Village ke south side pe ek haunted house hai wahin pe aa ja Naina ko lekar' Main Gunny ko phone kar ke yahin pe bulata hoon'

Raj- Ok, we will be there.

Abhi also called Gunny to come there. And after half an hour, Raj, Naina and Gunny were there.

Abhi showed them weapons and told everything.

Raj- Iska matlab, hamara shak sahi nikla' Ye log already yahan pe aa chuke hai aur kuch bahut bada karne walen hai.

Gunny- Abhi, kya tune un logo ki shakal dekhi thi'.

Abhi- Nahi' wo main nahi dekh paaya'.

Raj- Hum ko ye saara saman military base pahuncha dena chahiye'.

Naina- Nahi'

All three looked at her with confusion'.

Naina- Hum agar ye saman base pe pahuncha denge to un logo ko pakdne ka mauka kho denge' Jaise ki Abhi ne suna tha ki wo log teen din baad phir se aayenge'  Hum tab un ko pehchaan lenge'

Gunny- Lekin wo to sare weapons le kar bhi hum unhe pakad sakte hai unko thodi na pata chalega ki weapons humne gayab kar diye hai'

Naina- Hum unko teen din baad pakdenge nahi sirf pehchaan lenge' Phir hum un par close watch karenge' Taki 10 din baad, hum unke baki saathiyon ko pakad sake aur shayad unke leader ka bhi pata chal jaaye'.

Raj- Plan main thoda risk hai, lekin hum is raaz ki jad tak pahunc h sakte hai'

Abhi- Naina ki baat main point hai'

Gunny- To theek hai, main aaj raat yahan pe rukta hoon.

Abhi- I will be staying with you'

Naina- No gunny, tum nahi' Vidya may need you at anytime' Aise waqt main usko raat ko akela chodna theek nahi hai'

Raj- I will stay with Abhi'

Abhi- No Raj, you had been in town the whole day' I will call Ali tonight and from tomorrow, we will take turns.

Gunny- Ok, I will call Ali.

They called Ali and he said, "I will be there." Both Aalekh and Huda wanted to come also and so were Shikha, Pooja and Aditi. But Abhi said that they will take turn every day.

Gunny waited for Ali to come while Raj and Naina left for the house.

Both Raj and Naina left for the house. When they were about to enter the house, Naina remembered something.

Naina- Oh no'.

Raj- Kya hua?

Naina- In sab main, main ice cream pick karna hi bhool gayee'.

Raj- Ek kaam karo , tum andar jao' Main le kar aata hoon'

Naina- But?

Raj- No buts' Just go' I will be back in half an hour'.

Raj left to buy ice cream while Naina went inside the house.

As soon as Khushi saw Naina, she ran towards her.

Khushi- Mama hum ne aap ko bahut miss kiya' Pata hai aaj humne school main bahut fun kiya'

Naina(smiles)- Acha' Hum ne bhi aap ko bahut miss kiya'

Khushi- Mama dost kahan hai? Wo bhi aap ke saath the na'

Karan- Aunty, Raj chachu kahan hai?

Naina- Wo aap dono ke liye ice cream lane gaye hai'

Khushi & Karan- Yayyyy

Nandini- Lekin aap dono ko icecream tab hi milegi jab aap dono ye milk khatam karenge'

Both Khushi and Karan made face as they didn't like to drink milk'

Naina- Baat to bilkul sahi hai ab chalo dono apna apna milk khatam karo'

Khushi- But I don't like milk'

Karan- Me neither'

They were arguing when Raj came back with ice cream.

Karan- Yay' Raj chachu aa gaye'

Nandini- Ab ye dono milk peene se rahe'.

Raj- Kya hua?

Nandini told him about milk issue'

Raj- To rehne do na Nandini, waise bhi milk kis ko pasand aata hai'

Actually Raj didn't like milk either. Naina saw that and she went into the kitchen and came with one more glass of milk.

Naina- Karan & Khushi, aap ko pata hai milk peene se taakat aati hai' is liye to aap ke ye dost(pointing at Raj) roz subah shaam ek glass milk peete hai, right Raj?

Raj looked at Naina with confusion while Nandini tried to hide her smile.

Raj- Main lekin, main to nahi'.

Naina(innocently)- Are Raj, bachcho ko milk peena chahiye aur wo apne favorite friend ke saath beth kar peena chahte hai to unko company nahi doge?

Both kids looked at Raj while Raj glared at Naina but then he sighed as he didn't have any choice but to drink milk.

He took the glass in his hand while Nandini gave glasses to both Khushi and Karan. And all three of them drank their milk while making faces at Naina and Nandini.

Everybody else witnessed the scene and started to laugh.

Nandini(to kids)- Ok let's go and change while I will bring your ice cream. Both Khushi and Karan went to change into their night suites.

Nandini- Tum dono bhi dinner kar lo'

Naina- Mujhe bhookh nahi hai Nandini'

Vidya- Are Naina, aise kaise bhookh nahi hai' Tum hamesha aisa karti ho'

Naina- But'.

Vidya- No buts' dekho mujhe bhi thodi bahut bhookh lag rahi hai'now go and change phir hum teeno dinner karte hai'

After a while, they had their dinner and they talked about the case's progress and then went to their room to go to sleep.

Naina was having a hard time putting Khushi to sleep as she didn't want to sleep.

Naina was tired too and Raj noticed that and he came there.

Raj- If you don't mind, I will put Khushi to sleep'

Naina- No it's ok'

Nandini also came there and said, "Let him do it Naina, he is really good with kids' Karan bhi abhi abhi uski wajah se so gaya hai."

Naina- Ok go ahead and try.

Raj took Khushi to the terrace and Khushi was happy to get out of the bed as she wasn't sleepy at all.

Raj- Khushi beta, aap ko neend nahi aa rahi na to hum aap ko ek kahani sunate hai'

Khushi- kaisi kahani?

Raj- Ek princess ki kahani'.

Khushi(smiled)- I love princess' story but Mom always tells me about prince's story.

Raj(smiled)- There was a most beautiful princess in the world. She loved to sing and dance and she was very brave. She had a brother and her enemy army took her brother away and now princess was all alone but she didn't lose her hope or bravery. She started to look for those enemies so she can punish them. When she was looking for them, she met her brother's friend. He promised her that he will help her to find those enemies. They both started looking for their enemy together. One day, they fall in love with each other and everything is beautiful around'..

Suddenly he saw that Khushi had fallen to sleep in his lap so he picked her up and went to her room so she can sleep comfortably. Naina who had heard his story from the corner was in tears as she knew that he was talking about them.

Naina(to herself)- Raj, I don't understand you. You were the one who broke every relationship with me and still you are telling stories about us to everyone why?

She was in her thoughts when Raj spotted her so he called her out but she didn't hear him so he tapped her on her shoulder. Naina suddenly looked around and she slipped but Raj was quick for her and he took her in his arms before she fell. They both were lost in each other's eyes. Few minutes passed and suddenly Raj realized what he was doing so he helped Naina up and said, "Sorry, I didn't mean to startle you. I just came to tell you that Khushi is asleep."

Naina- Thanks'

Raj-  No need to say thanks' I liked spending time with her'.

Naina just looked at him and went to her room. Raj also went to his room but sleep was eluded from his eyes.  He just remembered moments with Naina few minutes ago and smiled to himself.

(Flashback:

After his confession of feelings to Naina, Raj was on the 9th cloud and so was Naina. They were happy even though there were problems all around them.  Raj decided that he will fight against Major Niar and Major Bhargav's evil plans so they can't harm either Naina or cadets. 

Raj had a drill with second year cadets next morning.

Raj( to cadets)- So do you want to learn anything cadets today?

Cadets- Yes sir'

Raj- What do you want to learn?

Cadets- Whatever you will teach us next'

Raj- But are you sure that I am teaching you right things?

Cadets were confused at Raj's question.

One cadet- Yes sir, because you are our teacher and you know better than us'

Raj- well I don't know' May be tomorrow, you find some truth about my personal life, and you won't find me worthy enough to be your teacher.

Everyone was quiet as they understood what Raj was referring to'

Raj- Why are you quiet today cadets?

One cadet- Sir, how can you trust who betrayed your country'.

Raj- There is no proof that Captain Naveen had betrayed his country and Captain Naina is his sister so she becomes wrong person. You know her for last few months and she had become the best teacher to you guys. She helped you through your every problem and she listens to you but today you are just rejecting her because Major Bhargav's influence. I am not going to tell you anything else but think for yourself. What is right and what is wrong and then make your decision.

After telling them, Raj continued with his drill. Every cadet was thinking and they were ashamed of their behavior. They decided to apologize to Naina, so in the lunch time, they went to find Naina. Naina was in the mess and as soon as she saw the cadets, she decided to go but cadets stopped her and apologize for their behavior earlier. Naina was happy and she forgave the cadets.

All the other cadets and most faculty members were with Naina so Brigadier had to stop his request for her transfer. On the other side, Vidya had become successful as her request to re open Naveen's case had been passed and they had given three months of time to find enough evidence and everything to fight the case.

Everyone was happy except Major Bhargav, Major Niar and Dr. Mishra but nobody cared for them anyways. After that day, both Naina and Raj became busy so they didn't have any time alone for themselves. Raj wanted to spend time with Naina badly. He really wanted to know her feelings after their confession.

He asked her out for dinner and she said, "Yes."

Raj took Naina to the point 1857. Naina was confused as why he was taking her to point 1857 instead of dinner but she kept quiet. She was speechless when they reached there. Raj had arranged their dinner up there. There was a picnic met and everything was laid down there. There were her favorite flowers, bottle of champagne, and her favorite food.

She looked at him with surprise. He gave her his hand and leaded her to the place.

Raj- Naina, I know how both of us feel about each other and I promise you that I will bring every happiness back in your life. We will prove naveen's innocence and we will be always together.

Naina just looked at him with love and Raj was so absorbed in her and soon he closed the distance between them kissing her lips. They drifted apart after some time to catch their breath. They both had a wonderful evening with each other. They talked about their life, their interest and other things.

The few more days passed like that. Raj and Naina always found to go out and Raj had taken Naina to movies, dancing, dinner and their life was just wonderful. On the other hand, they were also making progress to find more evidences about Naveen's case.

Flashback ends.)

Raj (to himself) - Naina, I have broken my promise. Please forgive me. If I had a choice, I would have never left you.

Precap:  The identity of two terrorists is recognized.

 

shayona182009-03-25 15:04:38

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Comments (8)



the update was too good....

Abhi has found out about the terrorist's hide out and also the weapons that had been hidden there....They all accept naina's suggestion to wait and watch....feels like action is just around the corner...

Raj and naina come home...and raj, kushi and karan are forced to drink milk...bechaare sab fas gaye...this was a very cute scene...

Raj is great with kids...karan raj ke pas hi sota hai...and now even khushi....
Raj tells kushi about his and naina's past in form of fairy tale...naina hears is and is confused why raj has held on to the past when he pretends that he has moved on with time...

The flasback was rocking...raj and naina were not only making progress in their investigation but thier personal relationship was also growing...they both love each other soooo much...

Please update the next part soon.

15 years ago

Another good update on pg. 9:-
Alekh aur Aditi bhi thak gaye hain aur Pooja n Ali bhi. Pooja ko kaam karne se jyada aadat mobile pe baat karne ki hai to obviously thak hi jaayegi vo . Raj n Naina to saath hain par baat bahut kam karte hain. Accha kiya Raj ne ki no bola baccho k baare me Naina ko aakhir us ko Ritu se koi rishta to rakhna nahi hai. Naina sach me baccho jaise baat karti hai Khushi k saath. Abhi n Shikha ko shayad kuch clues mile hain may be un se koi fayda ho. Mahak Sinha2009-03-27 02:42:54

15 years ago

Thank you all for your comments....I am quite busy this weekend so the next update will be on Monday evening.....I am sorry for that but I try to post as soon as possible....

15 years ago

Hey ye pg. 8 vaala update bhi kaafi accha tha.
Naina ko pata tha ki Raj ko aloo k parathe nahi pasand hain n so as Khushi. To papa aur beti ki pasand itne milti hai, so nice. Ritu ka to humesha se hi kaam raha hai do logon k beech missunderstanding create karna. Chain se nahi baithne degi na vo kisi ko bus jaa k sab doc's BC ko mail kar diye us ne. Flash back was beautiful when Naina n Raj confessed their love . Raj n Naina ko hubby n wifey bana diya kis ne? Par jo kiya accha kiya mujhe to maza aa gaya. Huda ko bhi tabhi cough karna tha.
Mahak Sinha2009-03-27 02:20:26

15 years ago

the update was cool ,especially the part whn naina traps raj into drinking milk which he hates...the flashback was also good
ud soon.

15 years ago

that was really nice
plz continue soon

15 years ago

Nice part. I really like the way u portray thier life. Actually I like to hav this sort of flashbacks. Well Now I'm really desparate to knw more abt RN. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

15 years ago

it was really gud plz contd soon

15 years ago

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