Chapter 11
Holi sequence
Everyone is in full swing xcept mayank....He's waitin 4 nupur at da gate.Wen he sees her enterin...He goes to her
Mayu:itni dair laga di..Kab se wait kar raha tha...
Nup:Sorry..dair hogaye.Chalo chaley...
Mayu:?.before we go ?rang nahi lagaogi mujhe.
A stunned Nupur looks at him.
Nup:itni jaldi kya hai...Lagate ho..ander tou chalo
& she turns around....
Mayank, turning her around and looking intensly at her:yeh lo.
Nupur realizes that he looks serious?"par kyun.??"
She takes the gulal he is holding out to her and says : Thik hai...tum bhe naa////////
she dips her hand into the gulal.& applied a sort of tilak on mayank's head
Mayu*thinkin* tumhara ye haq hai nupur....
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Later:
Finally the BHANG got to mayank..
He went to Nupur...
*all dis talk of mayank is coz of nasha*
Mayu:NUPUR!!!!..Tu...Tum na mujhe bohat ache lagte ho...
& he looses balance..So nupur grabs his rite arm to support hym.
Mayu:Aur tumhey pata...Pata hai... DAT I LOVE U....
& he said it!!He said da 3 magical words
The 3 words echoed in Nupur's mynd...
Widout lookin back at Mayank-She turned around & started walking....
Nupur was dumbfounded.
The wind was strong buh it didnt matter.She kept walkin until she reached her home....
Nupur*dekh nupur-Is baat ko yahi khattam kardey.Hosakta hai mayank ne bhang ki wajah se.....
Leken bhang peene ke baat insaan wohi keh deta hai jo us ke dil mein hota hai...
Leken mayank aur mein..PYAAR
Aisa kaise hosakta hai...
Mein us se pyaar nahe karte...
Mein kisi se pyaar nahe karti....Kisi se naye...Mayank se bhe nahe......
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Next day:
Nupur keeps avoidin mayank da whole day.
Mayank on da oder hand-is unawre of da fact dat he had blabbered abht his luv to nupur..All he knew was dat he drank too much of bhang yesterday
After last period:
Mayank:Wats wrong wid u nupur??Tum mujhe avoid kuon kar raye ho?
Nup:xcuse me
Mayank:No nupur:teme wats wrong..Y r u behavin so strangely?
Nupur:MAYANK!!let it go..
Mayank:No nup...
Nup:okay-u wanna hear it.Den fyn I knw dat u luv me.Kal bhang peene ke baad u blabbered stuff.
Mayank bit his lower lip In embarrasment & finally
Mayu:& now dat u knw wats ur reply?
Nup:my reply..My reply is dat I DUNT LUV U MAYANK!!!
Mayu:Ye tum..Ye tum kya keh rahe ho??
Nup:yes mayank!!i dunt luv u!!!I love NOBODY!!Do u understand??
& she left infuriated.
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Comments (49)
new reader.COOLohh-its truly a compliment..Thanks 4 readin yaar...i'll definately continue soon.Keep likin my workthnx again
15 years ago
hey muneefah ...am sorry i didn't read this FF earlier!...Actually am not an avid FF reader...But I liked your FF very much!....I have read all the parts now!....And i must say, u have written a mindblowing FF.....The last part(Part-10) proved a "sting in the tail"...!!!!.....Wow...loved the twist that Nupz rejected his proposal!....This will be more interesting now!....Plz muneefah ...do continue soon!
15 years ago
awww dats reeli sweet of u fatimah Luv ya i will continue soon
15 years ago
Hey Muneefah........ dekh maine comment kiya....... Plz continue soon.......
15 years ago
its okay..np..Ohh-dun worry-MAYUR will definatelly b 2geder.Bus thora sa wait...DATS ALLthnx
15 years ago
everything will turn out 2 b fyn..dun worry.np..pmin is my job.. :)
15 years ago
new reader..Dats coolk-i will
15 years ago
hey muneefa so sorry for the late reply, but what an awesome update, i know there must be some deeop dark secret or reason why nupur is saying this that she doesn't love mayank, we are up for a big twist and i am sooo eager to know what is that, i can't bear mayur not together man, but excellent job, keep it up man.
15 years ago
wow...yeh kya ho gaya ?? nupur ne manna kyun kkar diya ???....nahiiiinnnnnn cool update , thanx for the pm
15 years ago
hey awesome ff....plz update soon...
15 years ago