Chapter 1
my second fan-fic
Kahin Pyaar Na Ho JaayeThe Bushan sisters
Gunjan Bushan: 21 yrs old a very sweet innocent kept away from the real world girl.she lives in a small town with her sister because her parents died when they were young.Her elder sister has kept her away from the real world because she think gunjan won't be able to handle it .she is amazing in studies very shy and reserved girl but.........(reveal later). hates her chachi because she is mean to her nupur didi.
Nupur Bushan: 22yrs old a girl that is too mature for her age. she had to grow up too much for her age when her parents died so she could take care off her younger sis.she is very sweet and nice but only to her sister outside the house she acts as if she is 30yrs old.she is like a mother/sister/father/best friend to gunjan and very protective of her. she is beautiful and a sensible girl.she smiles from the outside but hides all her pain in the inside.(has a secret that will be reveal in 2-3 parts).her aunt hates her but she still reapects her like mother..
*they both are moving in with heer in dehli to go to collage with her.
The Shama Brothers
Mr Alok Sharma: a excellent dad encourages his sons. he loves his wife and son very much. A great husband/father.
Mrs Shriya sharma: loves her sons very much supports them for everything. she is just waiting to bring her bahus home so that she has some females on her side to support her. She is an excellent wife and a triple excellent mother.
Mayank Sharma: The sensible brother in 2nd year of collage he wants to be a business man. he does not believe in love for him love is just an emotion that causes pain. he loves his parents and his younger brother alway helps out smarat when he is in trouble.
Samrat Sharma:The care-free cool dude of the collage all girls are fida on him but he fida on his dream girl just waiting for her to come but, while waiting he does timepass with other girls.He is named the flirt of the collage but is very sweet and caring for people he cares about like his bother and parents and his friends.
Other Characters:
prem: best friend of mayank and smarat like a son to shriya he has no parents so he lives them he like in between of smarat and mayank he is not studiou but he isn't a flirt either he in between somewhere.
heer: best friend of nupur and treats gunjan like little sister. she is the only one that knows how much nupur suffered. she is always there for the sisters. she now invited thme to stay with her in dehli because she came back from london and she doesn't want the sisters to suffer with their chachi.....
Ria Bhushan: chachi of the sisters. is their legal gurdian..she hates the sisters because they are a burden on her. she wants them out of her house. she is sending them to collage in dehli so they leave her house
plzz tell if i should continue or not does this story seem a little different from the one we are seeing or the same,because if it seems same i will change it up.......plzz comment if i should continue with it or not....i will post the first part tomrrow.
Parts
Part1:pg2
Part2:pg4
Part3:pg5
part4:pg6
part5:pg9
Part6:pg11
part8:pg 15
part9:pg17
part8:pg 15
part9:pg17
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Comments (12)
hey yaar now plz continue soon..........
16 years ago
happy birthday gr8 intro continue soon
16 years ago
finally there are mayur and sajan FFs in this section;D loved the concept do cont soon kelly! love tanasha
16 years ago
superb plz continue it soon and thanks for the pm
16 years ago
Do cont sweetz..plzzzzzz dooo... And happy B'day sweetzz...so now u r sweet sixteen..hehe,,sooo vry sweet..save a piece of cake for me too....wish u a yr full of love n wishes cumin true...widh u all the vry vry best for u'r life..enjoy it...n party hard today..coz it's u'r B' day+u r turning tobe sweet sixteen+u've successfully started another FF+U r getting a vry good reponse+ coz U shud always enjoy life..... Love ya sweetzz...n many many happy returns of the day yet again..t.ccc -Ur's Ever Madhu
16 years ago
supercool amzin concept.. literally fida over it..I like sanjan n mayur... It'll be interesting to read tis FF...rilli interesting.... Waitin for u to cont asap..n Do PM me wheneva u update nxt (if possible).....Do cont asap..em vry vry eager to read it..... Love ya sweetz....t.ccccccc -Ur's Ever Madhu
16 years ago
Edited awesome yaar kelly...... i was eagerly waiting for new FF on MayUr n SaJan.........u fulfilled my wish....lol thanx for this FF thanx for pm love u yogithacute_unknown_fr2008-10-05 07:44:25
16 years ago
Thanks for the pm and cont soon...great intro...sorry for the late reply but i didn't use computer yesterday...wish u had a happy bday yesterday...pm me when u post part 1
16 years ago
amazing intro sounds really intresting cant wait 4 u to write the first part continue soon and a very happy birthday hope u have a great day
16 years ago
Great start! Continue soon.
16 years ago