Chapter 16

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Kankshita

@Jiah.Angel

Part - 14

Mayank ran towards the car . . . opened it up . . . and saw that Nupur had almost fainted off suffocation . . . Cry He went inside . . .

M - Nupur . . . Nupur . . .

Mayank then put some water on her face . . . she got up . . .

N - Mayank . . . thank God . . . tum aa gaye??

And she hugged him tightly! Embarrassed

N - I was so scared. Ouch

Mayank without saying anything . . . broke up and made her drink some water. Smile He didn't wanna talk to her . . .Confused

N - Mayank?? Why aren't u talking to me??

Mayank made no answer. Ouch

N - Man . . . ab maine kya kiya??

M - Kya kiya?? Meri jaan nikal gayi thi pata hai . . . tum 2 ghante se andar nahi aayi . . .aur yahan . . . grow up Nupur . . . mujhe toh samjh hi nahi aay ki tum car mein lock hui kaise! Stop doing such childish things. AngryOuch

N - Par Mayank . . . tum aise kyun baat kar rahe ho mujhse? Shocked

M - Koi bhi insan jo tumse pyar karega . . . woh tumse yahi karega! Stern Smile

Yeah . . . he atlast said it . . .  Embarrassed but he didn't know that this confession would take place like this. EmbarrassedShocked Nupur on the other hand, was over whelmed . . . she was very very happy! SmileEmbarrassed

N - Kya matlab? Wink

Mayank without wasting anymore time . . . decided to confess as the situation had become "now or never" types. TongueWink

He held her hand . . . and said, "THAT'S BECAUSE I LOVE U. HugTongue"
OuchAngry
N - *aakhir isne keh hi diya . . . he's m life . . . why didn't I understand it Embarrassed*

Nupur was terribly blushing. Embarrassed

Mayank knew her answer . . . Wink

Mayank kissed her forehead . . . and said, "Nupur, ever since I saw  u 4 the first time . . . I've always felt this special feeling about u . . . I love u very very much. U're my life . . . I know it's been only a week that we guys have met . . . but still . . . for me . . . controlling myself was a metter of ages . . . I love so much . . . u're my angel . . . I won't be able to live without u." EmbarrassedSmile

Tears of joy rolled down her eyes . . .

N - Mayank, am so lucky to have u in myself. Embarrassed

They both hugged each other tightly . . . they were unaware of anything and everything else . . . they wanted that moment to last forever . . . Embarrassed

After sometime, they felt that they should go back . . . Big smile They stepped out . . . Nupur was not in a state of saying anything . . .Embarrassed

M - Nupur? In jutoon ka kya karien? Wink

N - Umm . . . tum le jao . . . aur kya! Main bhi kitni stupid hun . . . Jiju k jute unke best friend ki car mein chupaye . . . batao! OuchLOL

Mayank loved the way she talked . . . his innocent  angel. Embarrassed

M - Baat toh tumhari sahi hai! Clap

N - U mean . . . main stupid hun? Angry

M - Nahi . . .woh baat nahi hai . . . accha tum le jao ye jute!  Big smile

N - Nahi tum!

M - Tum!

N - Tum!

Dia entered . . . and saw em fighting! Embarrassed

D - Guys . . . ye jote tum mujhe dedo! LOLLOL

M & N - Shocked

M - Tum kab aayi??

D - Exactly 15 min pehle tumdono ko dhundhne aayi thi . . . aur wahi pillar k peeche tabse tum ko dhundh hi rahi hun!! LOLLOL Well, jokes apart . . . AM REALLY HAPPY 4 U GUYS . . . may God bless u. Tongue

Nupur blushed . . . and ran away . . . while Mayank smiled and went along with Dia. TongueEmbarrassed

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S - Kya Nidhi!! Mere jote de do . . . main aise hi paise de dunga! Ouch

N - Nahi Jiju . . . ye toh possible nahi hai . . . pehle paise do . . . phir denge hum jute, kyun Nupur? Wink

N - Woh . . . actually . . . jute Dia k paas hai. Ouch

S & N - Dia k pass??

D - Ya guys . . . finally maine inhe dhundh hi liya . . . Wink

S - Great!! Lao do idhar . . . aur Nidhi . . . main vade ka pakka hun . . . ye lo tumhare paise . . . WinkTongue

N - Thanks Jiju . . . kya Nupur tu bhi na . . . Mayank ki car koi jagah thi chupane ki! AngryLOL

Dia by that time told all that she saw to Samrat . . .

D - Sammy, aren'r u happy??

S - Happy?? AM ON TOP OF THE WORLD!! Tongue

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Everyone got up . . . to bid the bride a goodbye forever . . . CryCry

Gunjan was terribly crying . . . her sister, mother, father and Dadi were also crying!! She hugged em all . . . she was really very sad . . . CryCry

GuPur's Dad - Samrat beta . . . meri beti ka khayal rakhna . . . SmileCry

S - Dad, don't worry . . . main use bahut khush rakhonga.

He held Gunjan's hand . . . and walked away. Smile

The bidaai took place . . . Nupur was still crying. TERRIBLY! CryCry Mayank couldn't see her like that.

M - Nupur, rona band karo . . . please!!

N - Mayank . . . rona kaise band karoon main, meri Di chali gayi! CryCry

M - Kahan gayi?? Wo toh humesha tumhare aas paas rahegi! wo konsa South Pole pe rehne chali gayi hai . . . cheer up. Tongue

Nupur rested her head on his shoulder . . . irrespective to the fact the her parents and Tamanna were standing there only. Embarrassed

M - Aur waise bhi . . . aisa ek din tumhari life mein bhi aayega! (in a teasin tone) Wink

N - Shut up! Embarrassed

Tamanna was astonished to see all that . . .Mayank winked at her . . . she understood and came up to em. Tongue

T - Am very happy 4 u guys. SmileSmile Nupur, Bhai . . . go and take some rest. It's too late now. Smile

Tamanna went back . . .

M - chalo terrace pe chalte hai . . .

Nupur nodded.

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They went up . . . hand in hand, they sat on a bench . . . Embarrassed

M - Nupur, tumne abhi tak mujhse  ILU nahi kaha . . . WinkAngry

N - Toh? Har cheez bolni zaruri hai . . . aise hi samjh jao! Wink

M - Main samjh chuka hun lekin . . . please tum khud bolo na . . . PLEASE!!

N - Mayank . . . it's too late now . . . go to sleep. GOOD NIGHT! ClapClap

She went back . . .

Mayank was very angry . . . he terrbly wante to hear those words. EmbarrassedBig smile

Nupur came up to him . . . and whispered in his ears, "I love u" . . .Embarrassed and ran away . . .

Mayank was very happy . . . his angel belonged to him now . . . that's what he wanted. Tongue

            *FLASHBACK ENDS*

G - Nupur, I don't believe this . . . u're getting married to Mayank!! Am so happy for u . . . Tongue

N - So am I Di . . . u're an expecting mother . . . main masi banne wali hun . . . double khushi! Clap

They hugged each other.

To Be Continued . . .

So, here . . . the flashback ends . . . and now MayUr are getting married . . . how's tha part guys?? Please let me know. TongueTongue

Special thanks to Shinella . . . the confession scene was enitirely her idea. Tongue



Kanky2009-07-24 05:19:01

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hey kanky when r u updating next part gal? update soon.

15 years ago

wat 2 say yaar..!! m speechless...!! such a gr8 FF..!!! i think u shud write 100 parts..!!!vadda hi changa FF likha si..!! sanu bhi todi vahot punjabi aati hai..

15 years ago

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15 years ago

kanky.....muaaaaaaaaaaaaaahs n muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahs 2 u!!!! luv d way nups said I LUV U 2 mayu...i jst hope ki serial mein v woh aisi bol dale...hai....jst mar jaawan on ur ff dear!!!! luv u re.....i ha 2 read so many parts...missed dem all....but managed 2 read d pending parts thnkfully...yeay so now d marriage cums.... cant wait!!!!god bless u dear...n thanxxxx 2 shinella 2 4 her confession idea.... luv mayur always!!! luv mjht...

15 years ago

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15 years ago

[QUOTE=surbhi123]ok please next update , eagerly waiting for it
[/QUOTE] oh sorry it ends . but you really give it a beautiful end love you

15 years ago

ok please next update , eagerly waiting for it

15 years ago

Superb jus superb
End was suprise
Flash5acks
Do update next part soon
Cant wait to watch their marriage
Plzzzzzzzz update soon
Do pm me also

15 years ago

amazing part kanky!!
finally he confessed!!
now happy mayur going!!!
continue when u want!
u rocked!!
see yaaa
love uuu

15 years ago

u totally rocked kanky...! loved it cheersDivya

15 years ago

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