Chapter 29

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          Angad was shocked. He closed his eyes in pain and turned around. Everyone just stared at him and Kripa. Karan just stood their, confused. Kripa slapped him so hard, you could see her finger marks on his cheek. He held onto his cheek with his hand in anger and even more confusion. Angad had heard the slap, but he had not witnessed it. He just left from there. Kripa ran away, crying. School was not over yet, but both left from different doors. Angad got into his car and drove away. Kripa just sat in her car for a while and cried. Then, she started it and began to drive, not sure where to go. Both drove around in their separate cars and ended up at the beach. Both sat at opposite ends, so they didn't see each other. They just stared at the gentle waves of the lake and shed silent tears.

 

The song played in the background:

Bejaan Dil Ko

Bejaan Dil Ko

Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya

Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

 

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

 

Ajab Hai Ishq Yaara

Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyaan

Gam Ke Khazaane Milte Hain

Milti Hai Tanhaiyaan

Kabhi Aansoon Kabhi Aahein

Kabhi Shikve Kabhi Naalein

Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye

Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye Mujhe Din Ke Ujaalon Mein

Teri Yaadein Tadpayein

Teri Yaadein Tadpayein Raaton Ke Andheron Mein

Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye

Machal Machalke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Agar Mile Khuda To

Poochhoonga Khudaya

Jism Mujhe Deke Mitti Ka

Sheeshay Sa Dil Kyon Banaya

Aur Us Pe Diya Fitrat

Ke Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat

Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat

Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Us Pe De Diya Kismat

Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat

Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat Hai Yehi Kya Vo Mohabbat

Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat

Sisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

 

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai

Mujhko Saza Di pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

 

They both left the beach and approached the parking lot. Angad spotted Kripa's car before she spotted his and he turned around to see her right behind him with tear stains on her cheek and read and puffy eyes. She bumped into him by accident and then looked up and their eyes met. He forced a smiled, "Hey, what are you doing here?" he asked. She was shocked. He looked so careless. She had expected something totally opposite. "I can ask you the same question" she said. Now she looked closely at him and saw his red and puffy eyes.

He realized this and quickly looked away. "Hey Kripa?" he asked.

 

"Hmm" she said. They both were walking together now. "I considered you my best friend and I thought I was your, if not best, then atleast friend."

"Of course, you are my best friend along with Prithvi!" she said.

"Then, how come you never told me about you and Karan?" he asked.

She stopped walking and turned to face him. "What about me and Karan?" she asked.

He avoided her eyes. "You know…about you two…your feelings towards each other"

"Who said I had feelings for Karan?" she said, angrily.

He still avoided her, but was a bit confused. "Well, anyone would assume that…after.." he paused. "After what we saw in the janitor's closet today."

She moved his face so she was staring right into her eyes. Then she told him the whole story about how she thought it was a note from Angad instead of Karan, and etc. At the end, Angad was ashamed and embarrassed. He didn't have faith in his love. He has just believed anything without even letting Kripa say anything. "I…I am sorry Kripa…really sorry" he said.

 

"Its ok" she replied. There was an awkward silence. "Angad?" she asked.

He looked at her, "hmm?"

"Remember that day, of Aryan's accident?" she began slowly. He nodded his head. "When we were at the beach, you were going to say something…" she drifted off.

He was quiet. Finally, he said, "I was going to tell you that you are truly the best friend in the world." Kripa was disappointed. From what he said that day, it didn't seem as if this was what he would say next.

"Oh" she said. "Well, I'll see you later" She walked away, sadly.

Angad himself didn't know what prompted him to say what he said. Why couldn't he just confess his feelings? He went on home, lost in thoughts.

 

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          Very short and retarded part but next ones will be better. I just wanted to clear this misunderstanding!! Before you guys killed me!! Lol….So…Shocked???? I wanna know what u thought about the part!! Please comment and tell me any suggestions…i.e do u think I am stretching these parts too much and should just get a-k to confess their love?? Do you think I need to write better and longer parts??? Please tell me if I need improvement and any advice u may have. Because I know these parts aren't as good as u make them sound. I would be delighted to hear some suggestions. How about, if I get atleast 2 honest comments that tell how my parts are really…cuz I know they aint awesome..lol..so if I get atleast 2 comments/suggestions, you can expect the next part very soon!!

 

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Comments (11)

wow 5 years leyt me guess both get shocked seeing eachother after five years cont soon

17 years ago

awsome just no clues why they left for 5 years and never expressed their feelings

17 years ago

Awesum! plz continue...im dying to know wht happens next!!!

17 years ago

GREAT promo!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!

17 years ago

ok lemme b da first lol!!! angad nd kripa sumhw split upp...den both of den leave da country...nd now dey r back nd da love is gna b in da airrrrrrrrrr agen lol!!!

17 years ago

PROMO
Five Years Later
The airport was full of people. After all, it was July and everyone wanted to be home for Independence Day. From Door A, a pretty, young lady comes out with her carry-on luggage and takes out her shades. We see the brown hair and brown eyes and then the whole face. It is Kripa. She looks around and starts moving towards the exit. At the same time, From Door E on the other side a handsome young man comes out with his luggage. We see his well-built body, brown eyes and brown hair. It is Angad. He smiles as he looks around the airport. Chicago. He takes his luggage and exits from the same door as Kripa. We see her talking on her cell phone right outside the doors. Angad comes out and bumps into her.
Any Predictions??

17 years ago

really nice part!!!! continue soon

17 years ago

omg awwwwwwww im sooooooooooo glad the misunderstandins bin cleard, n awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i hope angad confesses soon - n kripa aswel lol about sugggestions wel, ummmmmmmmmmm... the parts r briliant, but i want longr parts!! xxMWAHxx xx Saz xx

17 years ago

why didnt agnad tell... wat is he afraid of.. i think u need to make the parts longer.. i dont want them no to be riends cuz of this.. and dont bring in an ex to stretch it cuz then i'll get mad!!!k otherwise its awesome and hope u continue sooooooooonnn

17 years ago


my thoughts exactly and it wasnt retarded maybe angad is lol

17 years ago

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