Chapter 44
Riddima - Please let us go!
Muskaan - Please!
Rahul.- No way! Cooperate with us and you wont be hurt.
Riddima was scared, and Muskaan had tears in her eyes.
Rahul's heart melted seeing Muskaan cry.
Rahul - Muskaan don't cry.
Muskaan looked at him stunned.
Muskaan - How do you know my name?
Rahul pulls his the covering off his face.
Rahul - Its me. Rahul and this is Armaan.
Riddima and Muskaan looked at them stunned.
Rahul hands their bags to them.
Rahul - We were the ones who stole your bags.
Muskaan and Riddima were furious.
Muskaan - How could both of play such a prank?
Riddima - Disgusting!
Armaan - Its just a prank.
Riddima - No its not JUST a prank. You scared the hell out of us!
Muskaan - And we don't want to see your faces from now on.
And saying so Muskaan and riddima stomp away while Rahul and Armaan exchenge worried glances
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THAKUR!!!! Update kar naa! nahi toh yeh Gabbar intezaar mein marr jaayegi!
15 years ago
[QUOTE=AshiYuvi4life] What is your issue? If you have a problem, say it to our freakin faces you understand. Keep ur negativity to ur damn self. I think ur the one who has no life. All u do is complain. Seriously, leave Apoorva alone. She's had enough of your nonsense. Instead of telling others that they're spamming, why don't you take ur own advice and stop posting things that aren't relevant. What does ur comment have anything to do with her ff? we could just as well report you. Don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that. Don't comment if ur ot going to say anything worthwhile. Have some respect for other's feelings. She doesn't write so she can get negative comments from you. There are better ways to tell someone that you didn't like it. You did the same thing in her other ff, some nonsense about copying ideas... if you have such original ideas, why don't you start an ff urself since the rest of us are so 'unoriginal.' Khud kuch karna nahi hota aur behatke doosron ka mood aur dimaag kharaab karte hain.[/QUOTE] i did not say anything to you. appoorva took it nicely so i dont know why you have a problem, komal. and if you did have a problem then you could have pmed me. my comment is trying to be helpful i thought. this is not how ff's are in this section. its hard to follow the story unless you are on 24/7 and keeping up all the time. and by the way. i never said i dont like everyones stories. i actually like yours alot. its my favorite one. and i even mentioned that you were one of my favorite persons on if in a topic on the dmg forum. so like i said. if youhave something to say to me, you can pm me. you are ruining your friends ff thread.
15 years ago
awesome part apoorvaaa!!!!!!!!!!
15 years ago
we caught the two boys or the two boys fuond them..lolgreat part!!!!!!
15 years ago
hahahaha...awesome parts!!...they are not lame!...don't think that...they were so good, and so funny! :D:D...please update soon! :D
15 years ago
Hey Apoorva, Wow that was fab,lol oo the girls are pissed at the guys!But guess they really did deserve it.Wonderful! lol way to go in spoiling their fun day!
15 years ago
[QUOTE=stellarwind][QUOTE=I-luv-Mayank][QUOTE=stellarwind] i was going to read this. i love ishq vishq. but its too hard to read even with an index. each page takes ages to load. thats why when people write ff's they write long parts and update once. every pages has a small part. sorry. [/QUOTE] Lolz...No one elz seems to have a problem..and if u dont wanna read...Its okay...[/QUOTE] thats because they are on 24/7. some ppl have a life. and it would be nice to read it if it was formatted better. [/QUOTE] What is your issue? If you have a problem, say it to our freakin faces you understand. Keep ur negativity to ur damn self. I think ur the one who has no life. All u do is complain. Seriously, leave Apoorva alone. She's had enough of your nonsense. Instead of telling others that they're spamming, why don't you take ur own advice and stop posting things that aren't relevant. What does ur comment have anything to do with her ff? we could just as well report you. Don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that. Don't comment if ur ot going to say anything worthwhile. Have some respect for other's feelings. She doesn't write so she can get negative comments from you. There are better ways to tell someone that you didn't like it. You did the same thing in her other ff, some nonsense about copying ideas... if you have such original ideas, why don't you start an ff urself since the rest of us are so 'unoriginal.' Khud kuch karna nahi hota aur behatke doosron ka mood aur dimaag kharaab karte hain.
15 years ago
Appu awsome parts!!!! Bechaare guys. They totally had it coming!
15 years ago
heyy appy!! awesomee parts!! soo evil rahul and armaan are haha cant wait for the next parts
15 years ago