Chapter 3

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Part 3

 

Angad sat on Kripa's bed with Kripa beside him; there was an awkward silence between then. They had no idea of what to say so Angad started talking nonsense. 

 

"So you have a nice room" This was a lie, truthfully Angad hated Kripa's room. It was too pink and girly for his liking. There were books and magazines all over the place and the room as a whole seemed to teenage type.

 

Kripa noticed Angad's tone and knew he was the worst liar in the world. Kripa knew Angad only for a few hours and already she had him figured out from one sentence. She could tell Angad was one of those guys that were WORK head to toe and nothing more.

 

"If you don't like my room just say so" Angad was surprised as to how quickly Kripa was able to figure him out so fast.

 

"Ok then, I HATE your room" Angad said boldly

 

"Thank you for being honest" Kripa was glad Angad wasn't that nice guy that never did any thing wrong or say any thing wrong. Kripa liked guys that were nice but once in a while a little edge to them wouldn't kill them.

 

"So you like honest people?" Angad asked trying to start up a conversation

 

"More then you know it" Kripa said meaning it. Angad gave a grin letting his mind process.

 

"Well, as long as we are into, talk of honesty; then I have to say the truth…you are one beautiful women" When Angad said this, Kripa blushed head to toe. No one had ever said this to her except her mom and dad. When she was in school all the guys would chase the preppy girls with short skirts on and it was the same in collage but for the first time a guy, a very hot guy, said she was beautiful and this made her go crazy form the inside.

 

"Thank you" After saying that Kripa took a pillow from beside her on the bed and buried her face in to it.

 

Angad gave a nice handsome smile unable to believe a girl living in such modern world could blush like the women from the sixties. When Angad looked at Kripa it was like looking at a girl from old, old movies where the women blushed every time a guy gave her a rose or a hug. 

 

"You know Kripa, you look so beautiful when you blush I don't see why to try to hid it by pressing a pillow to your beautiful face." When hearing this Kripa clanked her hands on to the pillow, tightening her grip on it.

 

"Oh come on let me see that blushing face" Angad pulled the pillow off of Kripa's face seeing her face pink red from all the blushing. Angad gave a large smile.

 

"Can you please leave my room" Kripa said with a British voice and a blushing smile.

 

"Your wish is my command" Angad said standing up in his full American boy voice.

 

Angad went to Kripa's balcony and jumped on to his and soon fell asleep

 

*****

 

Next morning when Angad woke up he could see from out side of his window Kripa still sleeping. In a way it almost seemed as if they were sharing the same room or something. Angad got out of bed and went to the washroom to get ready for a meeting; just a few days ago he had taken on a case of a very famous record company president. If he wins this case he was bond to get a few million pound thrown into his pockets.

 

A few hours later Angad was out of the house driving his dads car since his car was still crashed up from yesterday. That's when it happened, this was when Angad's morning when from good to miserable.

 

Angad was at the same street where his car crash happened yesterday stopped at a stop light and his cell phone started ringing, he picked it up to have his little brother, Karan scream through the phone.

 

"ANGAD! You for got my birthday AGAIN!" Karan's voice caught Angad so off guard that he didn't notice the stop light turn green, and a nice black Lexus crash into his car. An old man stepped out of his car in anger and it just happened to be Chiron Sharma, Again!

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hey thanks for the great comment, means a lot

17 years ago

hi i love ur fiction ............ and who is this toking like my grandpa ...."no cell phone while driving amna" lolz .................it is the sweetest coment one can get ... love it amna

17 years ago

I will be posting the next part a soon as i get it typed up, if i get a chance to type it up today that is

17 years ago

hahahaha AgaiN....lol awsome prt

17 years ago

ANGAD!!!!! My darling sweeto angu, yeh tumne kya kiya baba?!?!?! Arre sambhalke rakhna chahiye na, nahin toh ab yeh kripa ke dad jo hai, tumko aur kripa ke beech aayega, and then pyaar kaisa hoga? isliye main hamesha kehti hoon, raaste par handphone par baat karna khatarnak hota hai! Sorry, jus couldn't help being lame..... and pls cont soon, it really is a gr8 ff! ❤️ Anusha

17 years ago



you said it right FROM ALL THE PPL angad had to crash to KRIPA'S FATHER after all i need some story to drag on

17 years ago


oh, when angad finds out who kripa's dad is...iam telling you every one will be shocked from there meeting

17 years ago

LOLLL Out of all the ppl in the world he always gets in an accident wid kripas father loll

17 years ago

very funny. i m wondering what angad's reaction will be when he finds out that the man is actually kripa's father.worth readin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

17 years ago

really cute concept sweet and funny parts just adored it

17 years ago

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