Chapter 35

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Mrs. Tansha Sachin Sharma

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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai Part 38

At Uma's House…

Vedika rings the bell and uma comes to see who is it.

Uma: vedika beta tum?

Vedika: haan mummy

Uma: come in.

She goes and puts her bags in her room. Vedika then comes downstairs.

Vedika: maa mein yaha is liya aye hoon Kyunki mein chahti hoon ki hum apna ghar surrogate mother lekar aye aur dhruv nahi maan raha.

Uma: vedika ye tum kya keh rahi hoon? Surrogate mother? Tum kya pagal ho gayi hoo?

Vedika: ma kya apko bhi lagta hai ki mein galat kar rahi hoo? Mummyji aur daddyji ka sapna hai ki humara ghar mein bhi koi bacha hoo aur who sapna mein sach karna chahti hoon.

Uma: beta mein kuch nahi keh sakti. Itna kehti hoon ki tum jo karo soch samaj ke karo. Anyways its very late go and sleep.

She goes and sleeps in her room.

At Raizada House…

Dhruv is really missing vedika and wants her to come back but she doesn't want to. He thinks if he should agree to what vedika wants him to do. He says to himself that whatever vedika is asking for is true and she is doing all this for our family. He thinks that he should agree to this and decides to talk to Kavita about it. Kavita on the other hand is thinking same. She thinks that niharika cannot conceive nor can vedika so she should agree to this.

( seems like both mother and son agreed to vedika. Akir vedika ko kaun tal sakta hai)

Next Morning……

Dhruv gets up and takes bath. He goes downstairs for his breakfast. Everyone is missing vedika.

Viren: ajj vedika nahi hai to maza bhi nahi aa raha.

Titli: ajj min to hoon.

Viren: tum to Hamesha hi hoti ho.

Everyone laughs and titli says " ziyada haso ge to tumhari death ho gayi gi".. dhruv decides to tell his mom that he has agreed to what vedika wants him to do. Kavita is glad that dhruv has agreed . She is also happy now.

In Afternoon…..

Dhruv calls vediak and she picks her phone this time.

Dhruv: vedika I have a good news for you.

Vedika: what is it?

Dhruv: guess karo

Vedika: hmmm. I don't know. You tell me.

Dhruv: I agreed to what you were saying. Now please come home.

Vedika: really? I love you dhruv.

Dhruv: I love you too. I am coming to take you home today at night.

Vedika: ok. I'll be waiting. Thanks a lot dhruv. I am very happy that you agreed.

She hangs up and dhruv seems happy that vediak is happy. His happiness lies with vedika. Vedika is reading a newspaper and she sees a image that is exactly like her.. She is shocked to see that picture. She reads the article and finds out that her name is lali and she is a dancer at night club. She decides to meet her today itself. Infact she goes right now.

At Lali's Place….

She rings the bell and someone receives the door .

Vedika: kya lali idhar rehta hai?

The Women: jee han. App kaun?

Vedika: mein vedika. Kya mein lali se mil sakti hoon?

The Women: haan . Undar aao.

She comes in and the women goes and calls lali. Lali is shocked to see vedika. They are just so similar.

( lali doesn't speak Hindi the way vediak speaks. You know she has tht " taporri" language ..LOL)

Lali: tu yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Vedika: lali mujhe tumhari help chaye.

Lali: meri help. Kayko?

Vediak: kya tum mera ek kam karoge?

Lali: haan bool pehle tu.

Vediak tells her everything and she says she needs some time to think.

Lali: ye karne ke badle tu mujhe kya dege?

Vedika: jo tum maango..

Lali: mujhe tumse pasa chaye ( money)

Vedika: ok agreed.

Lali: mein tumhe phone kare gi kal.

Vedika: theek hai..

Vedika leaves from there and calls dhruv to tell her about it. Dhruv is still thinking if its right or not. Vedika tells dhruv about lali .

At Raizada House….

Vediak is back with dhruv. Vediak goes and talks to Kavita about it. She tells Kavita about lali and she is upset that lali is a dancer but then she says a honored girl would never to what a dancer would do.

At Night…

Dhruv is lying down on his bed and vedika comes to ask him what's the matter.

Vedika: kay baat hai. Aren't you happy?

Dhruv: I don't vedika.

Vedika: come-on chill dhruv. Now everything is set. Don't go backwards now.

Dhruv: ok.

Next: morning..

Vediak wakes dhruv up and makes breakfast for him. He eats his breakfast and goes to office. Vediak is waiting fro Lali's response. She fears that she won't agree. She keeps on checking her cell phone to see if lali has called her or not.

In Afternoon…

Dhruv calls vedika and vediak thinks its lali.

Vedika: haan lali to kya jawab hai tumhara?

Dhruv: vedika mein dhruv bol raha hoon.

Vedika: ok I am sorry. Mujhe laga ki lali hai. Kya kaam hai?

Dhruv: its ok. Nothing. I just called. Anyways don't think so much. Everything will eb okay.

He hangs up . Vediak si thinking why hasn't lali called up. Her phone rings once more and this tiem its lali.

Vedika: hello

Lali: haan maim mein lali.

Vedika: haan lali to kya socha hai tumne.

Lali: mein teribaat manto hoon. mein bacha dene se ziyada kuch nahi karna chahti.

Vedika: ok theek hai. Thanx a lot lali.

Lali: its alright.

Vedika: haan to aajse tum mere ghar ana.

Lali: ok theek hai.

Vediak gives lali her address and hangs up. Vedika tells Kavita about it. Kavita then decides to announce it to her family members.

In Evening…

Kavita calls everyone and tells them that she wants to tell everyone something . Everyone is surprised to know why has Kavita called them here. She then says that vediak and dhruv has decided to bring a surrogate mother. She then calls lali and introduces her to everyone. Everyone is shocked to see lali cos she looks exactly like vedika. Vediak is happy to see lali but dhruv is kind of sad.

Preview: vediak shows lali her room. Lali says she wants 1 laks per week. Vediak agrees..

THE END..

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Comments (17)

ab next part continue karne ka koi irada hai, ya nahi

19 years ago

No worries Tansha we can wait!! Tum apni dost ko help karo, maybe she can get tips off you!

19 years ago

yaar mein apni dost ko help kar rahi ho. she needs idea's of writing a news article so i m helping her. i will soon cont. i am very sorry to have u guys waitig.

19 years ago

cont karna ka kab irada hai???

19 years ago

ya it will be very intersting.

19 years ago

gr8 Tansha.. m gald u chose my idea of choosin Lali as surrogate mother.. its gna b soo interestin.. plz continue.............

19 years ago

i read it n it is awesome!! plz cont both!!

19 years ago

karongi. actually mein ek aur fan fic lek rahi hoon so i am thinkign abou tht. i will soon cont..

19 years ago

kab cont karna ka irada hai?? srry if im being impatient!!

19 years ago


maybe illegitmate child.......................
I guess we have to wait and see

19 years ago

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