Chapter 23
Last Part
Aaj phir se ki tarah khushiyaan charo aur bikhri padi hai.........aaj phir se Garewal house pehle ki tarah jine laga hai.........aaj phir se khushiyaan ghar me wapas aayi hai.........Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi thi jab Sujal aata hai............Kashish kab se apne necklace ka hook bandh karne me lagi huyi hoti hai........yeh dekh ke Sujal ke chehre pe ek muskaan si aa jati hai..........Sujal dheere se Kashish ke pass aata hai......aur uske haath ko durr karke hook bandh karne lagta hai........phir woh kashish ke neck pe kiss karta hai.......
Kashish: Sujal yeh aap kya kar rahe hai.........
Sujal: kya karoon aaj bhi tum Dulhan ki tarah khubsurat jo lag rahi ho.........
Kashish: log kya sochenge.......
Sujal: yahi ki ek pati apni patni se pyaar karta hai..........
Kashish:kuch to apni umar ka nihaz kijiye..........do ghante bad aap ka beta ghodi chadne wala hai aur aap hai ki.........yeh koi umar hai pyaar karne ki.....
Sujal: kyun umar se pyaar ka kya naata......main aaj se pachis saal bad bhi apne pote ki barat me aise hi tumse romance karunga..........aakhir itni pyari biwi jo mili hai pyaar karne ke liye........
Kashish: pata hai.......aaj hamari shaadi ko shayad pachis saal ho gaye lekin aapka pyaar hamare liye kabhi kam nahi hua.........
Sujal: janta hoon.......lekin in pachis saaloin me aisa bahot kuch hua jise nahi hona chahiye tha..........
Kashish: ab khushiyaan ghar aayi hai to kyun ateeth ke pano pe aap jana chahte hai.............
Sujal: sahi kaha.......janti ho main aaj jo kuch bhi hoon sab tumhari waje se........aise hi zindagi ki aakhri saans tak muje pyaar karti rehna........
Kashish: kehne ki zaroorat hai.........
Sujal Kashish ko apne gale se lagata hai.........jab Ayan aata hai......
Ayan: mom.........sorry maine kuch nahi dekha.........
Sujal: Ayan.....tu her waqt galat waqt pe hi kyun aata hai..........
Ayan: Mom .........dad ko kuch kahiye........
Kashish: Sujal aaj ke din to ise aise mat kaho..........bata beta kya hua.........
Ayan: mom..........yeh sehra kaise bandhte hai..........meri madad kijiyena...........
Sujal: ab to apno mom ka pallu chod.......jana teri biwi Suhana ke pass........teri mom ko main sambhal lunga.........
Ayan: jee nahi........mom hamesha meri side pe rahegi..........right mom.....
Kashish: bilkul.......mera beta......kitna pyara lag raha hai.........
Sujal: is ghar me meri koi sunta hai........
jab do ladki andar aati hai........woh Ashi aur Aaska hote hai..........
Ashi: Chachu...........aap ke side pe hum hai na.........
Aaska: haa Sujaluncle.......hum bilkul aapki side pe .......
Sujal; dekha Ayan....tumse jyada meri in do betiyon me akal hai.........agar tum jaisi beti na ho to muje to koi samjta hi nahi.....
Ashi: chachu agar aap mere chachu na hote na to main aapse shaadi kar leti...........kitne handsome hai aap..................
Kashish Ashi ka kan chichti hai..............
Ashi: chachi kan chodiye.....main to mazak kar rahi thi.........
Kashish: mazak me bhi mere sujal ke bare me mat sochna........woh sirf mere hai samji tu..........
Jab Prachi aur Anjali aate hai...............
Anjali: haa baba hum sab jante hai ki aap dono sirf ek dusre ke liye bane hai.........
Everyone: Sujal and Kashish are made for each other.........
Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai.........
Ayan: mom..........aapka romance khatam ho gaya ho to yeh sehra bandhenge aap...........
Kashish Ayan ko sehra lag deti hai...........
Prachi: dekhna kahi Suhana bhaag na jaye.........
Ayan: mama kya main itna bura lag raha hoon....bataiyena.........
Kashish: nahi mera beta to rajkumar lag raha hai.........
Ayan: bua aap bhi na........kuch bhi.........
Anjali: ab bahot mazak ho gaya neeche chalo barat nikalne ka waqt ho gaya hai........aur kavya abhi chikhte huye aayenge.........chaliye aap log..............
sab log barat leke Suhana ke gahr pahunch jate hai............
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ab Suhana aur Ayan saat phere lete hai.........Sujal aur Kashish ek dusre ke saath khade hote hai...........
Sujal: khush ho.........
Kashish: bahot.........aap khush nahi...........
Sujal: sabse jyada khush hoon ..........yahi sapna dekha tha na humne..........
Kashish: yeh sapna aapne pura kiya hai.........
Sujal: nahi kashish yeh sapna humne pura kiya hai............
Kashish: ayan kitna khush hai na aaj...........
Sujal: haa......aakhir Suhana uska pyaar hai..........
Kashish: Ayan bahot lucky hai na........use aap jaise papa mile..........
Sujal: nahi usse jyada tumhare jaisi maa mili hai use..............
Kashish: suhana ayan ka khayal to rakhegi na.............muje uspe pura yakeen hai lekin kya karoon Ayan ki maa hoon na.........
Sujal: Suhana ko tumne pasand kiya hai Ayan ke liye.........Suhana Ayan ka pyar hai........ab woh bada ho gaya hai khud ki zindagi hai ab..........waise ab hume retire ho jana chahiye...........
Kashish: kyun......
Sujal: ghar chal ke bataunga.........
Kashish: aap bhi na.........
Jab Ayan aur Suhana unke pair chute hai aur woh log phir se wapas ghar aa jate hai............
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Sujal aur Kashish apne kamre me Khidki ke pass khade the..........
Sujal: kya dekh rahi ho.......
Kashish: zindagi ke pachis saal is khidki se us chand ko dekha lekin kuch bhi to nahi badla usme...........
Sujal: badli to tumhari khubsurati bhi nahi..........aaj bhi utni hi khubsurat...........
Kashish: beta shaadi karke ghar wapas aa gaya hai aur aapko yeh sab baatein suj rahi hai.........
Sujal: kyun........lagta hai tumhe umar asar kar rahi hai......muje nahi..........aaj bhi koi bhi ladki mujpe mar sakti hai.......
Kashish: jaiye jaiye........aapko mujse behtar kaun sambhal sakta hai..........
Sujal: woh to hai.........haa tumhe woh baat batana bhool gaya.......kal se hum log chuti pe ja rahe hai...........
Kashish: kal se........lekin kal to Ayan aur Suhana apne honeymoon ke liye London ja rahe hai..........
Sujal: to hum bhi apne dusre honeymoon ke liye wapas mauritius ja rahe hai..........
Kashish: aap pagal ho gaye hai.......bache sunenge to pagal kahenge..........
Sujal: pagal nahi balke kahenge ki pyaar karo to sujal aur kashish ki tarah........
Kashish: ek baat kahe aapse........hum kismatwale hai ki hume aap jaise pati mile.........maine pichle janam me moti dan kiye honge...........
Sujal: haa tumhe mujse jyada chahnewala deewana kahi nahi milega..........
Kashish: isi liye to aapse bahot pyaar karti hoon........
Sujal: main bhi........I love you Kashish.........
Kashsih: i love you too Sujal.........
Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai..............
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Comments (12)
nice but i wanted 2 c how suhana n ayan looks like i mean i do hav a fair idea abt sujal n kashish n anjili n kavya n prena n rishab anyawayz it was nice
15 years ago
awesome w=ending yar................................................... the story was superb & concept was new and energetic aboviously sujal, kashish and ayan................... fav scene .......................jab kashish wapas athi hai ............................ yeh very one............................ 10/10
16 years ago
kashish dear me here with my comments on the last part of mehr.. well the end was very beautiful... it was very wonderful.. a beautiful end to a beautiful fanfic..this fanfic of your's is so heart-touching..the emotions are portrayed very well.. tho ab ayan ki shaddi ho rahii hai... sujal , kashish kii zindagi mein pachees saal guzar gaye hai.. you know dear mujhko ek baat kii bohat khushi hai..aur woh yeh..with so many years passing by , sujal ,kashish getting old.. lekin unke ek dusare ke prati pyaar , unki mohabbat , unki understanding aaj bhii waise hii hai.. and i liked this very much.. unhone dikhaya diya kii waqt ke saath pyaar never dies down..it only grows and grows.... waise i'am in complete awe of your writing.. you have written the part very damn well..every emotion was there and it was portrayed perfectly.... i completely love this fanfic of your's.. it is just superb , excellent , mind-blowing , great , lovely , wonderful , mast , zabardast , ek dum dhassu , raapchik , bindaas , super-duper cool... i love it totally.....you have done a commendable job....Now dear coming to the questions you had asked.. my reply on them.. 1. how do u feel about story and concept? The story is very beautiful...the concept is great... it teaches us the value of relationships... and it is scripted very beautifully.... 2, your favorite character? Well i like all the characters but my favorite character would be our sweet heart Sujal... 3. your favorite scene? My favorite scene was the scene between Sujal & Kashish , before kashish's shaddi joh woh dono baat karthe hai na.. aur phir jaise Sujal sabke saamne Kashish ka haath thaamtha hai aur usse shaddi kartha hai.. and all the sweet , cute moments between them.. i love all of them... 4. it is what you like to see in the future? ell main future mein kya dekhna chahthi ya kya nahii does not matter.. main sirf itna jaanthi hoon kii at any age Sujal ,Kashish ek dusare ke saath rahe...
16 years ago
1. how do u feel about story and concept? the story line and concept was really nice n different.....u don't see someone marrying a person u never ever met everyday .....how these two unknow people later became everthing for each other n the journey of the love ....cute!!! 2, your favorite character? sujal!!!...coz of him kashish got the happiness in her life ....for his desicion to marry a girl he just met !!!....his relation wt everyone in his family n specially his wife n son !...........ayan n neev are also ma fav character in this story!!! 3. your favorite scene? awww...there are too many !!!...but the most memorable is the family picnic one where the boys n girls are in seperate team n boys trying desasperately to win ...end up going to home in a public bus !!!!....SK romantic scenes .....n the scene where kashish returns home on ayan birtday!!!! 4. it is what you like to see in the future? i don't know...i think a surprise would be better !...lets see what will happen.... 5. rate overall story? overall story is 9\10 A great story...different cocenpt....i was hook to it ........the last part was really nice...sujal 25 saal key baad bhie utna hie romnatic hay jitna pehle tha .....hilarious scene when ayan n kashish ek side pey hojatey hay aur sujal ashi n the other (sorry don't remember the name) in one!!!!.....hilarious!!!!.........kashish got worry sujal sirf tuhara hie hay....ab ashi aesie baat nahie karegie !!!!!!!!!!............great story girl!!
16 years ago
the fic was awesome. wl give the answers to ur ques later just a bit busy these days
16 years ago
wow kashish very beautiful and a happy ending given by u to d story..bt really it was not at alll xpected.bt still its a nice one ple answer those questions... 1. how do u feel about story and concept? very lovely and cute concept specially sk's realationship 2, your favorite character? sujal........ 3. your favorite scene? there r many bt ya sk's marriage was really special one and another wen two luv birds became one 4. it is what you like to see in the future? not xactly...........not in their old age 5. rate overall story? 9/10
16 years ago
Hi ...i just read ur story..i just love the way u have portrayed SK's relationship .1. how do u feel about story and concept? Fantastic.....i love the concept...i love sujal and kashish's unconditional love 2, your favorite character?Any guess...it has to be sujal...and then small ayan 3. your favorite scene?Infact many....when the whole family plan the picnic and the way guys try to cheat girls and end up in bus..whole scene was damn good....i love sk's union also. 4. it is what you like to see in the future?Not exactly...it was hard for me to imagine sujal as a old person...i would have preferred a ending in which sujal was same young and handsome. 5. rate overall story?Hmm....out of 10 i would rate it as 8.5/10yyyy2008-08-11 09:32:22
16 years ago
amazing part i really enjoyed the story it was really good i liked the way u potrayed sujal and kashishs love and what they ment 2 each other.the cioncept was really intresting it was different and it made u want 2 read more. My favourit charachter was sujal because i liked the way u described him and the way u showed his charachter it made u want 2 know him in real after sujal my other favourite charachters were kashish and ayan because without them sujal would be incomplete. My favourite scene was when kashish came back on ayans birthday and met sujal and ayan i really liked the scene because of the way u showed each charachters emotions.Also the last part had many sweet scenes which i really liked one was when ashi said she would marry sujal and kashish told her sujal was only hers that was an amazing scene.i really liked the way u wrote this fanfic it was mind blowing i cant wait 2 read ur other fanfic and without sujal and kashishs love the fanfic wouldnt be the same . overall i rate this fanfic 10/10 because it was really good
16 years ago
hey kool part kashishkeep up the gr8 gud wrk & luv reading ur stories so do keep writing more & more
16 years ago
excellent story wish it did not end so soon luved the way u showed a 25 year leap gr8 job
16 years ago