Chapter 43
Part-42
Armaan:hi Jassi
Armaan:how r u doing?
Jassi:I'm fine
Armaan:great
Jassi:don't you have to go to work today
Armaan:today I got off from job
Jassi:oh really
Armaan:why you don't belive me
Jassi:anyway
Armaan:What are you doing today?
Armaan:if you are not busy then we can go out for lunch
Jassi:no thank's
Jassi:I have to do lot of work at home
Jassi:maybe some other day
Armaan:come on Jassi
Jassi:I say no i can't go today
Billu:Jassi you can go with him and have fun
Jassi:But Papa i have to clean my room and do some other work
Billu:do when you come back home
Amrit:your papa say you can go
Jassi:ok mom
Armaan:Thank's Uncle & Aunty
Billu & Amrit:it's ok
Jassi:now happy
Armaan: 
To be continue.....
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Mehvish dear, u are no less of a writer than I am, and like I say to everyone, don't let anyone else tell you otherwise..ok chica? I think everyone got excited 'cuz I haven't posted a part in a while....speaking of writing....are u gonna post a part up today, hmm??
19 years ago
thank's guys for relpying for this story and yes she is great writer
19 years ago
Aabhaaaaaaaaaa... u made me melt tooo!! ......How cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Cont soon!
19 years ago
you were exelent... Abha cant you make make you own fan-fiction cuz you are very good at this things... plzzz Abhaa... you will be the best--- :D hehe... plzzz... i m not gonna force you but PLZZZZZZ
19 years ago
wow ladies!!!...I'm glad you all liked it and yes....I agree with you Mehvish....that if more ppl want to write a part...don't hesitate, just ask Mehvish dear...I know she won't say no...but it's always polite to ask .....I had a blast writing it guys...it was very therapeutic for me...these college textbooks are so nasty and BORING to read after a while....Thank God for I-F!!!! Thanks Didi, Chocolate, JK, Mehvish, Clana, and Shereen(Hrithikluvr)...she read it but didn't comment here...I really appreciate the compliments and the positive response from you guys....and from anyone else in the future who reads this fan-fic!!! You guys ROCK!!!!
19 years ago
oh my god i love this story! u guys are so good at writing this! please continue!
19 years ago
anyone else like to write for this story do tell me or write it
19 years ago
Thank's Abs for wonderful part and I really like it.Whenever you have free time do write for me.
19 years ago
Aabha Di That was so chweettttttttttttttttttttt I didn't know u can write so well Please continue with this fanfiction It was so good How come u don't write anything u r so good U should write more fanfics u know
19 years ago
...Oh Man....I'm melting over here myself!!!! very good!!!
19 years ago