Chapter 5
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Part 4
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Maan sits down in his room and re-read the letter from Geet
Letter
Dear sir,
Firt of all, I thank you so much for personally offering me the job . It was a real thing of pride for me. To work directly with you is a kind of dream come true especially for me Sir as I really adore your approach of work.
But sir, I am really sorry to say I am presently not is state to accept this offer as I am bound by some duties as I had already told you.
Please do not take this as any kind of rudeness from my side.
Thanks again for the offer,
Geet Handa
Maan(ST):"do not try to be sweet with me...your pride and false dream will be broken soon when there is no money...But I will be sorry for you at that time...do not expect any opportunities from Khurana Group and it's allies then...well there will be many other
opportunities for you but not a 2nd chance with me..."
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In Hoshiyarpur
Geet's mom is feeding her food with her hand... they have special affection for her. Always the fear of loosing her haunts them which make them to take special care of her...for all of their other child...no one will come to claim them...but for Geet...as she is growing
and after her 20th b'day both Brij and his wife has a strange fear...of loosing Geet any day...
the phone rings...Geet runs to pick the phone...
Geet:"haan ji hello...app kaun bol rahe hain..."
Savitri devi:"Main savitri Devi bol rahee hoon...kya chaudhary Brij singh se baat ho saktee hai hamaree"
Geet sensed she is some very modest women talking on the other side by the way of speaking
Geet:"Sure Mam...pls hold on I will just hand over the phone to him..."
Savitri devi was surprised to hear this way of talking from a village girl
Geet:"Baba...kisi savitri devi kaa phone hai..."
Hearing this the heart beat of both brij and his wife skipped a beat...his hand was shaking while holding the phone
BriJ:"savitri devi ji...pranam...ji...aapne phone kiya..."his voice shaking
Savitri Devi:"aapp achchee tarah se jante hain...humne yeh phone kyun kiya...Geet kaisee hai...naam to nahi badla aapne uska...aisee umeed rakhte hain hum aapse"
Brij:"ji aise gaalti main kaise ker sakte hain...bhot achche hai ji woh...abb badi ho gayee hai..."
his wife ears were alert on phone...her heart is beaing with fear
Savitri Devi:"hum kaal hoshiyarpur aa rahe hain...Geet se milenge hum..."
Brij:"ji...ji...woh...ji bilkul aayiye...aapkee sewa me koi kami nahi hoge..." phone call cuts
Savitri Devi(ST):"Chaudhary Brij singh ji...hum aapke hamesha keliye ehshanmand rahenge...jo apne hamaree di hui amanat ko sambhal ker rakha hai...per abhi agar humne shaktee pesh nahi kee to sabka dil kamzor ho jayega aur yeh Geet ke liye theek nahi hoga..."
Geet's mom is crying whole night on shoulder of Brij...
Brij:"yeh pata to tha haame...aisa din aayega hee...soch le betee ko bida kerne kaa samay aa gaya hai...shadi kerke to use ek din bida kerna hee tha na...aur abhi hame pata bhi kahan hai savitri ji kyun aa rahee hai...ho sakta hai usse milker chalee jayen..."
Geet's Mom:"jhooti tashalee mat do ji hamen"
Brij remembers the day when Savitri devi had come to him with a 6 month old girls...girl was crying with pain...pain of the marks that were made on her shoulder...girl who looked like an angel...
Past
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Savitri devi:"hume jyada sawal jawab nahi chahiye...kya aap iss ladkee ko hamaree amanat samajh ker...apne betee kee tarah paal sakte hain...is laddkee ke jaan khatre me hai aur hum iskee jimedaree aapko dena chate hain...iska namangkaran hua hai abhi abhi...aur iska naam hai Geet...isse aap Geet Handa ke naam se bada karenge...aur iskee achchee se parwarish ho isliye humne iss gaon ke saare jameen aapp Gaon walo ke naam ker di hai...kahiye manjoor hai"
Brij:"Intee pyaree bachchee ko kaun hai jisne chor diya hai...ji jameen kee koi baat nahi...aapp ise hamare pass layeen hain...inta hee kaphi hai...main isse apnee betee se bhi badkar...aapkee amanat samajh ker paloonga...hamara to dil bhar aaya hai"
S Devi:"itnee lagaooo achchee nahi...iske 20 saal ke hone ke baad kabhi bhi hum isse lejayenge...iskee nayee jindagee ke liye...per abhi hum vachan vadh hain...aur iskee jindagee bhi abhi...khair...kya manjoor hai aapkoo...bhoot umeed hain hum aapse kyunkee aaapp hamare purane wafadar hain Hoshiyarpur mein...isse hamare bare me kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye jab yeh badi ho..."
She had given him the locked suitcase which had all her birth related stuff and photos...but they were just suppose to keep it with them safely...when Geet had grown big she wanted to throw that bag and also remove her mark on shoulder but Brij had taken promise from her that she must do nothing like that...
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she never knew she had to go to strangers anytime after her 20th B'day...
2yrs had passed and Geet was now 22 yrs old...Brij had been happy that no one is going to come back and claim Geet...and today the call from Savitri Devi had shattered his hope...Geet was like blessing for the Village...lots of good had happened since she had arrived
Next day Savitri Devi comes to visit Geet in Hoshiyarpur...she meets all village person and talks about there problem and issues...all elders in Village knew she was a very big person and most of their land here was donated by her to them...they made huge welcome of her...
Geet was not nearby when she had arrived...she had gone to visit an elementary school...while returning Home
Geet(ST):"saach baat to yehi hai...paise kahan se aayengee...itna kuch hoga kaise...suru kahan se karoon...bina paise ke yeh sab kerna mushkil hai...pehle paise ka inteam kerna hee hoga...koi source of income nikalna hoga...kisi se baat kernee hogee..."
While she is in her thought...she approaches her home and she that many people have gathered in her home...when she came near she saw that a very modest and a very rich old lady is sitting there on chair and addressing them...
Geet(ST):"lagta hai koi social worker hai...I should talk to her..." when she approaches near
Brij:"Geet puttar...yeh savitri devi ji hain..." he sends all other people to their home
When savitri devi saw Geet she was surprised to see her...a very simple girl but the brightness of her face and eyes were in comparable...a very very down to earth girl...she wanted Brij to talk to Geet 1st and then she would talk...so Brij took her to other room
Brij:"Geet puttar...jo main bol raha hoon shanti se sun...yeh savitri devi hain...yeh bhoot bade log hain..."
He explained her that Geet has to go with Savitri Devi as she is
one one because of whom he got Geet and it's all for her own betterment...S Devi will take her to the place where she belongs...
Geet:"aap kya bol rahe hain baba...aise kaise koi mujhe le jayega...main yahan badee hui hoon...yahe mera ghar hai...mujhe kisi ke saath nahi jana hai"
Brij:"Geet hamen teri shadi to kernee hee hai ek din...woh apne pote ka rishta lekar aayeen hain...abb itne bade ghar ka rishta hai...aur beta...maine unhe wada kiya tha...ke ek din mujhe tujhe unhe saopna hoga...tabhi tu mujhe mili thee...aabb apne baba kee juban
kee baat hai..."
Geet went to talk to savitri Devi...
Savitri Devi:"Geet...you look quite educated to me...kya padai kee hai tumne..."
Geet:"yeah I have just completed management studies from Bangalore...but Mam if you don't mind can I get an explaination of what's going on here...I am sorry to be rude but its my life..."
Savirti Devi is completely impressed by Geet...she never expected Geet to grow up so well...she thinks this girl is really different and pairing her with Maan will be really unique..."main jitna daar rahee thee waisee koi baat he nahi hai...she is a unique
girl...completely beyound my imagination"
S Devi:"Geet...Humne pehle hee aapke baba se yeh wada liya tha aur tabhi unhe aap mili thee...agar aap apne Baba kee baat jhootee kerna chate hain...humne aapke liye apnee saaree jameen gaon ke naam ker di thi...aur shaadi ka rishta hee to laye hain
hum...shaadi nahi kernee aapko..."
Geet:"mujhe abhi shaadi nahi kernee...main apne gaon ke liye kaam kerna chatee hoon...I want to work for the development of this village..."
S Devi:"you want to work for development of village or you want...do you really want the development...main iss Gaon ka development kerwaoongee...It will be completely as you want it to be...and it will be fast...if you do it on your own...it may take several years...think over it...I will meet you tomorrow"
Geet is thinking whole night..."she is promising to develop whole village and what I want...the development of this village...and it will be under my instruction...should I not make this Deal...this village is more important than my life...aur baba ke vachan ke bhi baat hai...abhi mujhse jyada Baba ke baat aur yeh Gaon hai mere liye...per yeh mujhse kyun apne pote kee shaadi kerwana chatee hain...kaun hai woh...khair jo bhi ho...this Deal is I should accept...for my bab and my Village...I will take a written
Deal...completely legal..."
----Next to be continues
Precap:
Talk continues
Geet:"Kya...Maan...Maan singh Khurana????????"
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Comments (28)
awsome part!!y m i so late 2 read this???loved it!!n she will b hell shocked when she comes to know that she is supposed 2 b married 2 maan!!n maan...will he accept geet after all that rejection of job offer n ol??waiting for d next update...love always~karee
13 years ago
Hi Dear... With my each update everyone comes up with so many questions...and I will answer everyone's query in my updates as the story goes on unfolding... This is not an mystery story...just Geet's life is complicated...I will keep untangling it one by one... As far as Geet's curiousity is concerned...I had written in earlier updates...she doesn't want to know about her real family...this family is what she consider as her own... But still I will come up with that in future updates... Thank you again for wonderful analysis... ---Anu
13 years ago
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13 years ago
nice update...Precap is so interesting...Plz update soon...
13 years ago
As always Anu...excellent update...love the pace of the story!! So Geet now knows of the promise her baba made 22 years ago...and she has even consented mentally to this marriage...if only as a means to get betterment for her village. I am sure you will cover this in the upcoming updates...but isn't Geet curious about who she is Biologically...who are her parent, why she was abandoned...why Savitri Devi did not keep Geet with her in her household??Looking forward to Geet seeing the suitcase full of her past...and family. And Pre-Cap...wow...she comes to know that her betrothed is Maan Singh Khurana...THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!! Dying to read the next part...plz update soon!!!
13 years ago
lovely part SD want geet for maan wonder how they react both when they find out so where are geet parent pls if yu dont mind less hindi dear me poor in hindi waiting eagerly ty 4 pm
13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...thnx 4 d pm ...continue soon ...
13 years ago
superb update...loved it...
13 years ago
Great update dear... SOoo nice... waitng for next update...
13 years ago
Really nice part!!Thanks for the PM..Continue soon!
13 years ago