Character Introduction
The moment I saw her, I was drawn like a moth towards the flame.
The flame of Anurag Basu’s body camouflaged her face. Even though I was unable to see her properly I was attracted to her mere presence. She couldn’t see me because I was standing outside the burning ghat watching Basu family and mentally celebrating Anurag Basu’s demise.
I had planned his death long back but it looks like Basu family has more than one enemy. I knew it for sure that this is not just an accident. It is a pre-planned murder. But whoever has planned it slow claps to that person. My thoughts were continuously getting interrupted and I was unable to comprehend why I was so very attracted towards that woman in a light blue saree. Who is she? How is she related to the Basu family? But she is not standing with the Basu family. She is standing alone. For a moment she lifted her eyes and those two balls of fire collided with mine. I know she wasn’t looking at me and she was thinking something deeply but I took that opportunity to watch the depth of her eyes and I was thrown off guard. None, I mean it, none in my 53years of life could disarm my composure as she did in just a few seconds and at that moment I made up my mind. She will be mine…very soon. I, Rishav Bajaj get what I want… and I want her.
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Comments (17)
hey lovely concept and interesting start, can't wait to read more.
4 years ago
Interesting story but age thodi kam kijiye na appy ji
4 years ago
53 jyada ho gya yaar...make it 33 something..
4 years ago
Damn interesting concept AppyShe wants to take back what all he took from Basus. Let's see how she will do it going against him.Anurag is no more, the only good thing is Bajaj is not responsible for his death. He is 53 years, I don't mind the age gap between the two. Around 25-30 years of age difference?Their first meet, or should I say when he first saw her and all his emotions looking at herLooks like he is a dark character with his own rulesLet's see how he makes her his nowEagerly waiting to read now, please do update soon.~ RamyaMR212020-01-06 08:33:13
4 years ago
aaahh finally you are here with Prerish fic Anurag is dead... someone probably killed him and Bajaj is 53 .. now that's more intriguing,.waiting for the next.aur plz don't leave it in the middle
4 years ago
53 is elderly may be I will assume you wrote 43 Koeli
4 years ago
Awesome update koeli.. loved it. Bajaj seems to be extremely dark character with intentions to kill Anurag Basu with some justfied/unjustified reason behind it, which I feel would be pretty interesting. But someone else killed him or he thinks he was killed.My only worry here is I will have to imagine a new face and body for this character as the Bajaj we saw in the show won't fit in the imagination while reading. So a little description about the look of the character in coming chapters will be highy appreciated to create an image. I personally enjoy it more when I can picture the character.Will wait for the next update.. Love-Sunshine
4 years ago
introduction is nice...Waiting part 1
4 years ago
Beginning oglf the story is really intriguing. Characters are also very interesting but one thing which is putting me off, it is Bajaj's age. 53 is bit too old esp in Indian circumstances. Pls don't mind my intention is not to age shame or something. I m extremely sorry if I offend you but I can't help to state what I felt. Rest story is good enough to make readers bite their fingers along with their nails.
4 years ago
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