Chapter 1
[MEMBERSONLY]
Link to Thread 2 added to the index below and also at Page No. 144
Hi
I am a hard core fan of Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi.
This is my very first attempt of writing a story. I would love if you guys read it and lemme know how you liked it. I wont be involving too many characters in my story. I've decided to keep my first piece quite simple. I would love it if you guys can give it a chance till 2-3 chapters before deciding its fate. Till then I'll have established characters and a defined writing style.
Should I continue this story? Looking forward to your comments.
Introduction to story line
(Characters are slightly different from the show and shall introduce them as the story goes.)
Arnav Singh Raizada was a bitter man with a lot of money and same amount of pent up anger towards life. According to him life cheated him of happiness and a normal chance at it. He was always the one laden with responsibilities. Every one out in the world seemed to envy his life, in fact they wanted a life like him, except that he had no life. Wary of personal commitments, his life consisted of just work.
Due to very unfortunate situation which life yet again threw at him, Khushi entered his life. And with his mistrust in people below his class along with his aversion to husband seeking females in general, he expected her to be the same, attention seeking, gold digging, manipulative, opportunist girl that he was so used to getting off his back.
But he need not worry about that, he realized in some time. Khushi gaurded her heart with a stronger wall around it than Arnav's. Romance or husband was the last thing on her mind. And Arnav Singh Raizada was the last candidate for the same, if the thought ever sprang up in her mind. She was just like sunshine, but without any intention of gracing Arnav's life with her warmth and brightness.
He slowly gathered that she wasn't playing hard to get, in fact she was not playing at all. And with that she intrigued him. One fine day, he found himself wishing that she would play this game of relationships with him. When did his simple interest turned into romantic one, he did not know. The thing he knew though was that she has become the anchor of his sanity, center of his, Adit and Adya's life. And he has to make her HIS. Only his for eternity.
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PS: I am going to be a pretty regular updater as I have a definite story in my mind and I have time in hand too. Also because this is my first attempt, I'l leave no stone unturned to impress readers. I hope to get your comments regarding story line, writing style or a few words of encouragement in future also.
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Comments (354)
Interesting prologue. Lets see how ASR falls for Khushi despite his bitterness.
1 years ago
This is promising. Already curious how Khushi beats Arnav's bitterness
1 years ago
Diving into this FF…again for nth time!❤️
2 years ago
This is the best story I've ever read '''
8 years ago
One of the most beautiful story I have read.
9 years ago
just completed reading your story.. It was really good and i enjoyed a lot while reading it
9 years ago
I really enjoy reading this story and I like this hardworking Khushi. Arnav is as always unable to express himself :-) I was brokenheart when Nani died :-(
10 years ago
Arnav wow so cute possesive arnav akash seems to b nice but now he's on d way of arnav gr..rrbut i dont understand when he loves her then why he's staying away from her .why he didnt make any move like he did in strting to befriend heris he being egoistic r scared ???????well i'm sure u've given reason in future chaps let me read n know
10 years ago
[QUOTE=dumas]awesome update asr is such an ass and a jerk poor khushi no wonder she does not want to stay anyway near him he insult her and expect her to take it thanks for the pm awesome update [/I like ur pic profile nice amalgamation of rr n arshiQUOTE]
10 years ago
ooph so tragic past of khushi .arnav again here too troublesome for khushi.arrgh...but i love arnav's persona in serial .short tempered but stil kind somewhere cute n handsomehere ur story's arnav i still have to know as i jus read 2 chap.i hope u don't disappoint me yaar .tough it doesnt seem so by khushi's povgud writing .u've got a fan of ur writings.
10 years ago