Chapter 8

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Part 8

Time passed and now its the tym for Maaneet’s birthday…yup u hear it right maaneet’s birthday…wht a co-incidence na boths birhdays are on same date…and this day maan turns 29 and geet 21…

Full day they celebrate their birthday’s in their room…u know*wink wink*…

At evening they go for the romantic dinner date…in the 5 star restaurant

Maan booked full restaurant…for their date…

and this is the first tym geet wore suit…

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First they cut the cake…and then they ate dinner while teasing eachother with hot hot kisses…

here they enjoying their romance unaware that may be this is the last tym they are with eachother…

They reached mansion after the romantic dinner…they go to their room…and maan go to the washroom for shower…and geet goes outside the room for some work…

After some tym maan came from the washroom in vest and tracks…and at the same tym geet enters the room…

M :Geet tum kahan gyi thi…

G :Maan mere saath terrace pe chalo na plz

M :terrace par kyo…

G :aapke liye ek surprise hai…

M :surprise wow…fir toh chalna padega…(.he slid his one hand on her waist and start walking but she stop him)

G :aise nhi…aise…(she blindfold him)

M :geet ye kya kar rhi ho mujhe kuch nhi dikh raha…

G :na deekhe isliye toh aapko blindfold kya hai…ab chalo…

they reach in the middle of the terrace…and then she removed the blindfold…

(terrace is fully decorated with red and white balloons and red roses…)(and then his eyes goes towards the cake and I love u written on it…)

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(maan is totally shocked after looking at this and look towards geet)

M :ge..geet ye ye sab.(he fumbles with his words )

G :(with a sweet smile)ha maan I love u…I love u I love u I love u i love u…I LOVE U sooo much…pata nhi kab kaise- aapse pyaar ho gya…par main bas itna jaanti hoon  ki main aapse bohot pyaar karti hoon…aur main ye bhi jaanti hoon…aap bhi mujse utna hi pyaar karte hai…jitna main karti hoon…

M :NHI…nhi main tumse pyaar nhi karta…main tumse kya kisi se bhi pyaar nhi karta…Maan Singh Khurana ko pyaar karna nhi aata…(she is shattered after hearing this…her whole world came upside down…and tears flowing down from her eyes)

(maan turns to leave but geet hold his wrist)

G :maan maan aap jhooth bol rhe hai na…aap nhi mujhse pyaar karte hai na…

M :nhi geet main tumse pyaar nhi karta…

G :nhi maan aap jhooth bol rhe hai…aap mujhse pyaar karte hai…main jaanti hoon aap mujse pyaar karte hai…

(maan felt irritated with geet’s continuously blabbering same words and then he screamed)

M :GEET MAIN TUMSE PYAAAR NHI KARTA…SAMJHI TUM NHI KARTA MAIN  TUMSE PYAAr…and this pyaar vyaar is all rubbish…filmo aur kitabo main hote hai pyaar real life main nhi…)(first geet is scared with his voice then came to normal)

G:real life main hota hai pyaar…mujhe hua hai…aapse…

M :OH GOD geet maine tumse kitni baar keh choka hoon main pyaar vyaar main belive nhi karta…(silent for some time)…abhi tak sab theek hum log khush the jaise the…lekin tumne is pyaar ka naam leke sab khatam kar diya…sab kuch…ab humare beech main kuch nhi hai…kuch nhi…

(and after saying this words maan left…and geet broke down crying…after sometym…she wipes her tears)

G :(with determined voice)aap mujhse pyaar karte hai maan aap ki aankhon main maine apne liya pyaar dekha hai…aapko abhi iska ehsaas nhi hua…par jaldi hi…main aapko pyaar ka ehsaas karwake rahungi…

and here maan came in room very angry

and in anger he throws and break things in his room…

and screams

M :main geet se pyaar nhi karta…nhi karta main usse pyaar…

(maan geet se pyaar karta toh hai…par woh abhi pehchaan nhi paya hai…use abhi bhi yahi lagta hai…ki playboy cassonova maan kaise kisi se pyaar karta hai…par use ye nhi pataa ki pyaar ne use badal diya hai…ab woh cassonova maan kahi peeche chooth gya hai…aur ye maan sirf geet ka maan hai…sirf geet ka )



 

-kriti

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9 years ago

Hi kirti Thanks for adding me in ur pm list

9 years ago

m waiting for next update...

9 years ago

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9 years ago

Thanks for adding my name much appreciated

9 years ago

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9 years ago

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9 years ago

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9 years ago


1st page pe note read kiyamaine kya likha hai full detailed comment

9 years ago

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good update...yeh to hona hi tha...they both fall in trap of their lust without thinking of consequences...here one thing is making me confuse that how Geet realized that she loves Maan...thanx for pm...comment cannot be posted in blog it is showing error...[/QUOTE]
thank u so much dear

9 years ago

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