Fierce Taani,Her trust on him

3 years ago

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Tanya see Taani crying and become panick

Tanya is sitting beside Taani in bed

She hardly pick her hand and put on Taani head lovingly.

Taani feel Tanya head and sit

She become happy to see Tanya improvement

Taani with smile di aap thik hone lage ho 

She hug Tanya happily 

Tanya become happy to see Taani happy.

But gave her questioning look 

Taani: di aap janna chati ho me kyu ro rahi hu,to di aap chinta mat karo me samjhdar ho rahi hu na isliye ro rahi h,phle kamre me band thi to duniyadari ki bhar ki samajh nahi thi na lekin ab padhai,likhai ke sath sab samjhne lagi hu ab dimag bhi chalne laga h or kabhi kabhi humara dimag hume us sach ka ehsaas dila deta h jo humara dil accept nahi kar pata bus isliye 

Lekin apko mera rona acha nahi laga na to isliye me kabhi nahi roungi I promise.

They hear his voice 

Taani

She go out and see him

He is holding his ears 

Taani: Rey kya hua.

Rey: aj di ka doctor aaega na toh aj hum bhar outing p nahi ja payenge.

Taani: koi bat nahi Rey di ke doctor se bat karni jaruri h,ab me jati hu di ke pass 

She start going in her room but Rey stop her.

Rey: Taani

She turn back and see him holding chocolate in his hand 

She excitingly go towards him

Rey: Taani ruko nahi to us din ki trh but before he speaks more she fall in him.

 

Her lips again touch his neck 

Same time servants drop some utensil in kitchen by mistake 

With utensils sound she become scared and hid her face in his neck

Thousand of current start passing their body 

Rey control himself 

Rey: Taani kuch nahi hua h utho.

Taani see him 

Her hairs fall on his face 

He remove her hairs from his face look at her innocent face

Rey: Taani utho na .

Taani stand 

Rey also stand 

Rey:bht jyada excited hoti ho jati ho tum chocolate dekh kar lekin itni chocolate kahogi to dant kharab ho jaenge 

Taani: hone dijiye lekin muje khani h

Rey: nhi 

She look at him shock 

Rey hold her hand and say 

Rey: dekho Taani limit me har chij achi h lekin kisi bhi chij ko unlimited khana health ke liye acha nahi hota akhir humari body ko healthy rakhne ki responsibility humari hi hena, me tumhe  khane ka mana nahi kar raha hu lekin limit se 

Taani nodded her head in yes and hug him tight.

He hug him back 

After few minutes they break hug and Taani leave for her room.

Rey thinks y sab kya hone laga h muje than he thinks maybe uski chinta rehti hena afterall usne bht suffer kiya h isliye 

His heart : lekin tujhe uski chinta kyu rehti h

He: insaniyat ke nate by saying this he shut his heart 

 In night 

Tanya doctor come and check her.

Doctor become happy to see Tanya improvement 

He meet Taani and ask some questions to her like how she meet Tanya what she do 

Taani gave him all answers 

Doctor : phle Tanya akeli rehti thi tab wo akelepan me sirf apna past sochti thi  jiske karan uski jine ki icha khtm ho gayi thi lekin ab Taani ke sath uska sara dhyan Taani ke sath enjoyment me rehta h isliye wo past bhulkar khush rehne lagi h or usne jine ki icha jagne lagi h,wo kehte hena bhut bura hota h akelapan khaskar jab past itna bura ho.

Taani: bura past

Rey: kuch nahi tum wo karo jo doctor bol rahe h

She nodded her head in yes 

Doctor: Taani Har insan ko ek dost ki jarurat hoti h or tum Tanya ki wo dost ho tum Tanya ka mental support ho pls use kabhi mat chodna 

Taani: pakka me di ko kabhi nahi chordungi 

After this doctor leave 

Rey hold Taani hand 

Rey: Thanku Taani 

Taani smile and say ab to hum friend hena or friendship me no sorry and no thanks 

Rey: dinner kar le

Taani: ji 

They all ate dinner and goes to their room for sleep.

Next Day

In morning Rey go to office after that Taani attend her online school and after that Taani and Tanya start watching tv.

After that Rey come and to home and pick her to her personality development class and in evening he pick her from class

Rey: Taani aaj mujhe office me jaruri kam h to office chale phir ghar chalenge.

She nodded her head in yes

They go in his office 

Rey start checking his files and told his secretary to take care of Taani

He told Taani to watch tv in his personal room.

His secretary : mam,aap aj bhi sir ke sath

Taani: ab to unke sath hi rehti hu,wo na bhut ache h unhone mujhe job bhi di h di ki care krne ki

Secretary in mind matlab y sir ke ghar me servant h or sir mujhe iski care karne ko keh rahe h

Taani start changing channel 

After few minutes Rey come and say 

Rey: chale Taani

Taani excited nodded her head and they leave for his home 

They pick Tanya from home and 

Than they go for their outing, enjoy and come back in home.

In night 

 Taani and Tanya room

They are watching tv but remote stop working 

Taani: di lgta h cell dead ho gye me abhi Rey se mangkar lati hu unke room me honge 

She goes in rey room and see room is open 

She enter inside room.

Rey become shocked to see her 

He is shirtless

He tried to pick his shirt but before that Taani go towards him and poke his chest with finger which shock him 

Taani: apki body to bilkul salman khan jesi h hena 

She ask innocently but poor Rey sparks  start in his body 

He remove her finger from his body and say

Rey: Taani dusre ke kamre me knock karke ana chahiye

Taani: ha lekin apka room open tha apko bhi to band rakhna chahiye tha 

He wear his shirt and say is shirt ka button bhi na 

She see his shirt  broken button and say 

Taani : me laga deti hu sui dhaga kha h

Rey: uski jarurat nahi 

Taani: jarurat h

In her mind she thinks koi or ladki apki itni achi body dekhe y mujhe acha nahi lagega ap bhar gye kisi female servant ne dekh li toh 

Taani: ap btao na kha h sui dhaga 

Rey: waha drawrer me 

She start stiching her button 

She is very close to him,her breath fanning over him giving him sensations and peace same time 

After few minutes 

Taani: ho gya

Rey: Thanku,wese tum yaha kuch kam se aai hongi kya hua 

Taani: are ha me to bhul hi gayi thi remote ke cell chahiye 

Rey: abhi deta hu

He open his cupboard.

All his clothes come out on floor 

He gave cell to her

Taani: aap ese apna cupboard lagate ho sab ese hi isme thus dete ho.

Ruko me lagati hu

Rey: Taani pls meri cupboard mat chedo nahi to mujhe kapde dhunde me problem hogi 

Taani: jab isme dhunde me problem nahi hoti to manage me kese hogi.


Tum itna kyu sir ki life me interfere kar rahi ho,ho kon tum sirf ek servant 

She hear a voice and see Rey secretary 

Her eyes become watery by hearing her.


Rey to his secretary: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho

Secretary: sir is file p aap sign krna bhul gye the or y male karni jaruri h aaj hi 

Rey angrily shout y tumko office me yad nahi aya agar tumko ese carelessly kam krna h to chord do job

Than he look at Taani who is standing their with down head and teary eye.

Rey to his secretary: say sorry to Taani

Secretary look at him shock 

Rey: Taani yaha servant nahi h wo meri friend h or mere liye bhut important h tumko koi haq nahi h uski insult krne ka dubara esi galti kabhi mat krna now say sorry to her.

Secretary : sorry 

Rey sign file and say to secretary: now leave or ha aainda usko mam kehna 

Secretary leaves 

He see Taani who is standing sadly with teary eyes.

He goes towards her cup her face in his palms 

Remove her tears.

Taani: unhone sach hi to kaha na akhir hu to me servant hi

Rey nodded his head in no and say

Rey: tum servant nahi ho,tum to meri friend ho na

She look at him innocently 

To calm her he hug her

After few minutes they break hug 

Rey: ab almirah laga hi do

She become happy after hearing him and manage his cupboard

After this 

Rey: ab jakar so jao subh classes attend bhi karni hena .

She nodded her head in yes 

Rey: or ha abse mera cupboard roj tum hi lagana

(He said this to make her happy )

She become happy after hearing him

Taani: Good night 

Rey: Good night 

She go in her room for sleep 

He also sleep in his bed .


Next day 

In morning

Taani wake up take bath and come out

Rey knock on her door 

Taani andar aaiye 

He look at her and become lost in her beauty 

Water dipping from her hairs 

Taani: ji kahiye

She turn to comb her hair and water from her hairs fall on him 

Taani see this in mirror and say

Taani: sorry 

She start removing water from his chest above his shirt  from her hands which start giving different feelings in him 

He hold her hand and say.

Rey: me kar lunga koi bat nahi 

She nodded her head in yes.

Rey: me tumko bolne aaya tha best of luck aj test h tumhara 

She nodded her head in yes and say thanku.

He gave her smile and say ab me office jata hu bye 

Taani: bye jaldi aa jaiyega 

Rey look at her shock but by looking at her innocent face say 

Rey: thik h jaldi aa jaunga.

He leaves for office 

After his leave 

Taani: krishna ji, please aj ka test acha kara dena 

She gave test and get 48/50 marks 

She become sad 

In evening Rey see her sad

Rey: kya hua,

Taani: mujhe 48 marks mile 50 se 

Rey: y to achi bat h

Taani: lekin do marks to kate

Rey smile hold her shoulder gently and say to kya hua 

Rey: Taani life me sab kuch 100% nahi hota agar life me khushi hoti h to dukh bhi hota hena lekin kya iska matlab hum khush rehna chord de 

Abhi tak tum y dekh rahi ho na ki tumne do galat jawab diye 

She nodded her head in yes.

Rey: ab y soche ki tumne 48 sahi answer diye 

Taani: are ha phle to mujhe kuch nahi ata tha ab mene 48 sahi jawab diye 

She become happy and hug him 

Taani: aap bhut ache ho

Rey: tum bhi bhut achi ho.


It's 3 months she is living with him and Tanya

Rey always help her in her homework,queries like a true guide,she daily manage her almirah,they all go for outing and in this time Tanya health improved very much 

One Day

They all are enjoying in beach 

Taani is happily eating golgappe 

Her step mother who come with her bf to enjoy see her and become shock.

She see Taani happily eating golgappe,smiling and Rey smiling with her.

She become angry to see this and say iske jane ke bad mujhe naukar rakhne pade or wo 25 lakh bhi is Rey ne mujhse chin liye.

She remembers 

(Flashback)

Rey told her apko to me bad me dekhoge and take Taani with him 

After that Rey come in night in her home

Rey: shock laga mujhe dekhkar lekin abhi to sirf shuruwat h

Taani step mother: matlab

Rey: mene vakil se bat kar li h itna to me sure hu,apko life time jail hogi human trafficking ki h apne abhi bus F.I.R karane ja  ra hu to socha apko apki barbadi ki information deta chalu or ha yaha se bhagne ki sochna mat mere admi h bhar 

Her step mother start crying and touch his feet mujhe meri galti ka ehsas h pls esa mat kijiye me dubara esa nahi karungi 

Me y 25 lakh rupaye bhi apko de dungi 

Rey thinks for a while and thinks mere hote hue y Taani ko kuch nahi kar payegi lekin y 25 lakh rupees Taani ke kam ayenge bht innocent h wo kese jiyenge is duniya me bin pese 

He take 25 lakh from her mother gave her warn

Rey: Taani se dur rehna nahi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

And leaves.

He make F.D of 25 lakh in Taani name

Her step mother flashback end.


She thinks lekin ab me in dono ko nahi chordungi apna revenge lungi.

She told her bf to go as she have some work and start keeping eye on Taarey and Tanya 

When they start going she go after them and see Rey mansion 

She thinks to y maharani to sach me maharani ki trh kisi mahal me reh rahi h lekin tu chinta mat kar ana wapis tujhe apne us band kamre me hi h.


Next day 

In morning 

Taani step mother  goes in Rey home with police and media

Rey become shocked to see her with police and media 

Her step mother: inhone meri beti ko yaha kidnap karke apne sath jabardasti rakha h

Taani and Tanya wake up by hearing media sounds.

Taani: di me dekhti hu

Taani goes out and see all this 

Taani see her step mother and start shivering because of fear all torture start coming in front of her eyes.

Her step mother : dekhiye aa gayi meri beti she goes towards Taani hug her and told in her ear : me jo keh rahi hu kar nahi to mar marke tera bhut bana dungi sabko bol de y tujhe yaha kidnap karke laya h.


Taani become scared because of her step mother but than she look at Rey, remember all their moments and break hug with her mother  harshly 

Media asking questions from Rey.

Media: kya yeh sach h Mr.Singhania,apne inki beti ko kidnap kar liya h.

Taani snatch Mike from media person and say 

Taani: me deti hu apke sawalo ka jawab,inhone mujhe koi kidnap nahi kiya me yaha apni marji se rehti hu kyunki me yaha job karti hu jiski y mujhe salary dete h.

Or y aurat jo inke upar iljam laga rahi hena y kehne ko meri maa h sauteli hi sahi maa to thi lekin jante ho inhone mere sath kya kiya she told media everything how her step mother beat and torture her and in last sold her

Taani: kabhi school bhejna to dur kamre se nikalne nahi diya or to or 25 lakhs me bech diya lekin Rey inhone mujhe bachaya us bure admi se 

Phir pta nhi wo admi kha bhag gya

(She hid Rey shoot and kidnapping that bad guy  from media and police, she is educated now, know laws and know that truth can trouble Rey)

Taani to police: apko arrest krna h to inko kijiye she point towards her step mother inhonne human trafficking ki h,child or human abuse kiya h,papa ka ghar cafe mere nam h,y papa ki photo dekhkar bolti thi sab is manhus ke nam kar diya or inhone mere hi ghar me mujhe band rakha,khana bhi thik se nahi diya me above 18 hu or aj apse apna legal right mangti hu mujhe mera sabkuch chahiye.

Or aap bataiye yaha job krti hu to yahi rahungi na

They become agree with her and media praise Rey for saving an innocent girl.

Police arrest her step mother 

She goes towards her step mother and say

Taani(in slow voice): Rey ko nuksan pahuchane ki sochke apne bhut galat kiya agar na krte to esa na hota apke saath unhone humesha mujhe protect kiya h,guide kiya h,respect di h wo mere liye mere sabkuch h.


Taani to police : le jaiye inhe 

After media and police leave .

Rey claps proudly

She see him

Rey: my bravo girl aj to tumne kamal kar diya itna change or confidence.

Taani: y change mujhme apki wajah se hi aya h apne hi to mujhe himmat di, education di life ka matlab samjhaya .

Rey : I m so happy to see you like this,ab me sure ho tum duniya ka samna kar sakti ho and thanku 

Taani: thanku kyu

Rey: wo Suresh p gun shoot or kidnaping wali bat chupane ko 

Taani hold his hand in her hand

Taani: me nahi janti aapne un gande uncle ko kyu goli mari or kyu kidnap kiya or na me janna chati hu,me bus itna janti hu apne agar esa kiya to jarur iska koi bada reason hoga, bina wajah or choti si bat ke karan aap kisi ko tang nahi karoge me janti hu.

Rey eye become watery seeing her trust 

Rey: thanku for trusting me and understanding me,mujhe galat na samjhne ko thanku.

Taani: aap galat ho hi nahi or mujhe apke upar khud se jyada trust h.

After listening her

Rey hug her.

She hug him back and smile 


Ok guys so here is the update lekin me update tabhi karungi jab aap feedback doge agar acchi nahi lagi to bhi btao but atleast btao to taki me khud ko improve kar saku

And pls check next update of kuch to baki h tere mere bich me

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Comments (8)

Wonderful Yaar I love the slow response which coming from Rey on taani's act he is falling for her. And taani wo to already Rey ki deewani h. And one more thing koi jarurat Nahi h khud ki improve karne ki you are perfect.

3 years ago

Taani's step mother learnt a lesson...dusro ka bura krne chali and khud ka hi bura ho gya

3 years ago

Awesome update
Loved taanis reaction
Plz update soon

3 years ago

Awesome update. Loved Taani's fierce side and her trust in him. Taarey moments are so lovely. Eagerly waiting for the next. Do update soon.

3 years ago

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