PART 53

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Part 53

A dark room,little candle only lighting in room ,one man sitting in balcony with his phone..his eyes starring  phone wallpaper.. a man whisper some thing.. opps whispering about geet .. his phone wallpaper was geet photo.his finger caring her face .


Man : u r mine geet..I love u .. a man turn look at his room,every side turn his head,only geet photo caught his eyes.his room seem like  he crazy about geet .

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Khurana Mansion

Geet enter dadi room  and sit next with dadi ,her hand caring dadi head smoothly..

Geet : dadi,when u wake up from ur sleep ...

Dadi  body connected more machine,huge  machine in room ,her room become like some ICU ward,ECG machine assure she alive .. but why she did not response geet question.

Geet : dadi,everyone saying u went to coma and ur whole body paralysed ..u cannot move from ur bed.is it true dadi..last two months u sleeping ..u sleeping too much..plz wake up from sleep.. I need ur support,u r maan need ur support.people saying my maan died , why I am saying unknown person.. in our home everyone saying my maan not any more.. how they could forgot ,his mishty not alive if he died.if my heart beating means some corner of world,his heart beat also beating.U know dadi,ur grandson playing hide and seek game with me. Each day,he make me realize,his eyes only for me,his shadow not remove from his mishty.everyone said, whatever happening my life,it my destiny only but I know,everything happened because of him.he protective me like always he did.dadi tears flowing in her closed eyes ..geet wiped her tears ..dont cry,ur maan hate ur tears and he always said  me how much  u r  important in his life.. see dadi I  have no tears in my eyes . even people blashing me,after ur husband died,u did not remove ur marriage sign.how could be I remove my marriage sign,I trust  this marriage sign,its protective my maan from every evil things,he left me alone to face this cruel world,I hate him.. u don't worry about me,dadi.I am also seeing how many days he running from me..one day he come infront of me that day I will show him who is geet maan singh Khurana with attitude voice. Geet kissed dadi forehead .

Good night dadi.. geet left to her room.

Servant waiting in geet room with dinner plate.geet come to room .

Servant : mam, u r dinner .. Janu mam send for u with polite voice.

Geet take dinner plate  from servant: u can go..servant left

Geet opened her room through pressed finger prints to biometric machine,yeah no one enter room without her help ..

Geet went inside room ,its not only her room, its maan room also.. every corner of room maan aroma filed  not only aroma, every wall hanging his photo,his memory  their memories  together photos .

Geet : ur mishty hate u ..why u did with ur mishty..today u crossed ur limit,I never forgive u,u taught me everything even how to handled emotion also.

Flashback start ..

Maan sitting in sofa while watching business news channel in room .. geet sit next with him,her eyes only in maan.. but his eyes fixed in TV.

Geet : dush danav..TV is  important than me.. with twisted lips.

Maan hearing her cursing and tried control his smile..geet get up from sofa ,before she go out ,maan held her wrist , pulled her to him.her body fallen to his broad chest..

Maan removed her hairs from her face: where r u going mishty..

Geet : ur eyes fixed with news reader girl right, u see ur short skirt news reader.. I am going with fuming face.

Maan: my mishty so cute with pinch her nose ..

Swara banged maaneet room : bhai...geet get up from maan ..

Maan: pari, why u  tensed with worried tone..

Swara: bhai, Vicky bhai got accident ..with moist eyes ..

Maaneet : what..

Geet : where is he .. how is he ..now with panic tone..

Maan : geet , calm down.. pari come to my side. Maan side hug to swara,he tried to come down.

Geet : Maan, Vicky ..

Maan : pari,say me clearly ..

Swara: bhai, his friend called me, he got accident .

Maan : u called Vicky number .

Swara: yes,bhai..i tried but his phone out of reach.. I scared bhai.

Maan: which hospital..

Swara : oh...i forgot to ask him with  fear voice..

Chandu run to maan room : maan sir.. maan sir.. with panic voice.

Maan : chandu , say what happened .

Chandu : maan sir, Vicky..with panic tone..

Maan :  what happened to Vicky  with calm face..

Geet : chandu bhai..plz tell me..what happened to Vicky .

Chandu : he is in downstairs.. geet run to downstairs  with panic face..

Maan behind her with calm face and swara come behind them..

Vicky sitting in dinning table with one hand wrapped bandage , his right hand hanging in mid of air with support of thread through his neck.

Geet touched his bandage : Vicky, how u got accident.

Vicky : bhabhi,I skipped from my bike..its just small wound ..

Geet : u think this was small wound ..with angry face.

Maan: Mishty,nothing happened to him..

Vicky  shout ..: ahaaa..

Geet : he shouting because of pain but u saying nothing happened to him..look at Vicky u cannot drive ur bike properly .

Maan : mishty,better,u get his bike key back  from him..if he  ride his bike only  he get any wound so better get bike from him with smirked face.

Geet : u r correct,Maan.. where is ur bike key ,Vicky..

Vicky horror face : No bbhahi.. bike ride my hobby .. plz don't take my bike key.

Geet : no way.. where is ur bike key ...vicky pout face & give his key to geet ..

Maan : good mishty ..

Geet : maan,give ur car key to Vicky.. he used ur car ..

Maan: why  I give my car,he can use other cars , why my car with fuming face.

Vicky (mind) : wow bhai car super...but I want my bike ,next week I have bike race ..vicky do something ..

Vicky : bhabhi,why u compelling bhai.. bike enough for me.

Geet  angry glare to Vicky  and Vicky closed his mouth.

Maan : mishty,first listen me.. Vicky ..with angry glare to vicky.

Vicky : bhabhi..i am hungry with stammering voice ..maan rolled his eyes ..

Geet : I serve ur food,Vicky ignore maan angry glare ..

Vicky (mind): Vicky u start  ur drama,continues otherwise not only maan bhai,ur sherni bhabhi also not leave u alive.. but my right hand have bandage,yeah fake bandage .. how can able eat my food ... everything my favourite food because of my drama, I cannot touch my food ..

Vicky jerked up from chair and geet confused look at Vicky..

Geet : why u get up from chair,u said hungry,eat ur food and then take ur medicine ..

Vicky  show his bandage hand to geet : my hand ..with pout face.

Geet  make sit Vicky in chairs and she sit next left side of  him and take food morsel from his plate and show her food filled morsel hand infront of his mouth.

Vicky : bhabhi ..with shocked face.

Geet : yes , ur bhabhi..open ur mouth..vicky open his mouth with tear eyes .

Vicky eyes starring geet face & geet feed him through her hand .

Vicky choked and maan rubbed his back and give water to him ..

Geet : its paining so much with concern voice .

Vicky nod his head negatively : thanks bhabhi ..

Geet  wiped his tears : shhh..eat ur food..swara side hug to maan and he held her even maan eyes moist

Choti enter in mansion with happy moods, she mouth open widely seeing geet feeding Vicky through her hand .

Choti : why angel feed him with fuming face.. I have only right except maan jiju ..

Choti : di...with angry face.

Geet : why u shouting , choti  while give one food morsel to Vicky.

Choti : why u feeding him..he  not baby  with angry glare to Vicky.. he show his tongue to choti

Maan : now u gone,Vicky .. with smirked face.

Vicky : she is my bhabhi..feeding me..what ur problem .

Choti : u ..her eyes searching  in dining table  something for throw to him..one hand give big apple to her hand ..without look at who hand say thanks.. she throw apple to vicky.. his mind forgot drama, his hand caught apple with both hand ..

Maan: Nice caught Vicky .. with smirking face.

Vicky : thanks bhai..

Chandu : Vicky baba..why u caught apple.. u got accident ..place apple in table otherwise u have more pain..with concern voice

 Vicky sheepish smile to everyone,girls fuming face to Vicky and maan smirked  face.

Geet : Vicky ...with grinned teeth.

Vicky jerk up chairs and  walk back wards ..he turn run out from place.. swara & choti run behind him with fuming face

Geet  look at maan : he prank with me.. with fuming face

Maan side hug to geet : u not heared ur hubby words so u deserve it .i tried to say nothing happened  with him but u r not listening my word .

Geet : u already know ,his doing  fake drama.. with surprised face.

Maan: when pari (swara) said,his friend informed her, he got accident .. I  have doubt .when I saw him in dinning table, I confirmed he doing some prank .

Geet : but why..

Maan: next week, he have bike race but I said go to Mumbai for college intership .he don't want go for college trip  so he did drama.. with shook his head.he forgot,everyone trust his drama not MSK with proud tone.I am not mishty easily fallen to his prank with teasing tone.

Geet mouth open widely :u saying I am stupid .

Maan : no I am not saying,u r stupid,but u r over senti person.ur emotion not allow to realize is it truth or fake.u only seeing his bandage because of ur emotion,u forgot see his whole body, he don't  have any  single scratch in his body anywhere except bandage even he don't have any blood cot in bandage , blood stain in his shirt or pant .he wraped big bandage but he wore same shirt & pant which dress early morning he wored but his shirt not mud of sand or dress not teared anywhere .. u forgot noticed everything..

Geet pout face: emotionless humanbeings similar to dead person , I don't want zombie  person.

Maan : mishty ,I never say,u live like  emotionless person .I trying to say control ur emotion,ur mind become clear,u know what  u will do next.we were human beings,we cannot control emotion everytime but some times emotion take hug stupid step.whenever u have emotion time,don't take any decision.after ur control ur heart and then think & do anything ..u understand mishty .

Geet nod her head with silently : but I am not forgive him with cute angry face.

 maan cupped her cheeks : thanks ..geet confused look at maan.

Maan : I know he doing drama, but I don't want stop ur love to him..i blessed got u,geet

Geet :now  my teacher become more senti person,few sec before only.my teacher teaching about emotion,now he also forgot his lesson with giggling tone..

Maan : no geet, u don't know why Vicky have tears in his eyes ,when u fed him,he saw mother love from u,he craving for mother love. I can bought anything for them but I cannot give mother love today u gave him..thanks .

Geet  : my devil hubby talking so much.i love Devil hubby not my senti hubby with chuckling face.

Maan  smirked face : I show u,my devil face...his hand wrapped her waist and pulled her to him more . other hand caring her hand face sensuously .

Geet pushed him and run out the place.and maan smirked face .

Outside of mansion,geet searching Vicky and sam come infront of geet .

Sam : geet ,what magic u doing with khurana mansion with taunting tone.

Geet glare to sam : what do u mean..with hard voice.

Sam : u already changed maan to ur toy,now ur eyes shifted to Vicky ..why u need Vicky,maan not satisfy..her eyes seeing geet head  to toe ..

Geet slap sam with heavy force : u , ...one more time, u talk with me like cheap way,that ur last word come from ur mouth ..sam placed her hand in her cheeks while patted her foot to ground ..went to inside leaving geet in fuming face.

Swara touched geet shoulder and geet turn look at swara with little smiling face

Swara: why bhabhi, u tolerate her taunt,cheap & shameless talks..if bhai know about her. He will chop her into several  pieces.

Geet : MSK have  more work so GMSK handle sam in her way,where is that idiot ..

Swara: choti punching him like punching bag.

Geet : he deserve it ..with smiling face.

Flash back end

Geet : u changed me, Maan singh khurana,our staff gossip about my character,I am ruthless person,I have no emotion.. if u also think , I changed or u changed me ..

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A dark room,a man doing painting with help of candles.other man come to his room with some packet in his hand .

Other man: why u did not switch on  room light, why using candles glow to draw ur painting.

Man: I  need concentrate only her face, single candle glowness enough draw her picture even I did not want this candles also, I can draw her picture with closed my eyes .

Other man: I know ur crazy love about her.. u know what happen in Kc today.

Man : Mr.sighanania contracts cancelled by GMSK ..MD of KC ..with smirking face while his hand drawing .

Other man: he begged to GMSK with many way  but she was sturbborn in her decision..he accepted his defeat,went out from KC.

Man smirked face : hmmm

Other Man : today..he also visited KC..with dragging tone..

Man : who ..

Flashback start .

Receptionist calling geet P.A .. and geet already ordered don't transfer any call to her cabin,so reception called to her P.A and take her permission sent man to her cabin.

P.A cabin

Man knocked her door and Girl working in her lappy said : come in .

Man enter in cabin and Girl eyes shift from lappy to door side .

Girl jerk up from chairs : what are u doing here ..with angry face.. u gave permission enter KC.

Man : listen , I come for official matter,plz  I help me to meet geet with slow voice.

Girl : don't say in ur mouth her name  with angry voice.

Man : Plz..help me  with guilty tone.

Girl: get lost  from the place ..

Man tried touch her and girl jerk her shoulder to back : don't dare come to near me.. I hate u ..

Man : plz forgive me with guilty tone.

Girl : u seeking forgiveness,u never get forgiveness from me , anyone..u betrayed ur friends,everyone..with angry face.

Man : yes, I accept whole heartly I did sin .. plz give me one chance..

Girl : u asking chance, if we give u chance,u can bring him back ..Man face fell down in sake of his shameness .

Girl : No ..u cannot..

Man tears flicked in his eyes ..

Girl : don't show ur crocodile tears here..dont show ur face infront of me.. get lost ..dont come back my life anymore..i hate u too core..with tears flowing in her angry eyes..

 

man head bow down insake of guilty.. and his leg move out to her cabin.. but he stopped

 

A lady standing infront of him  with attitude face : welcome Ranjith ..opps sorry shivaay singh Oberai ..this is ur real name not ranjith right with taunting tone.

 

Ranjith : geet.. with guilty tone.

Geet : call me mrs. Khurana .. with warning tone.

Ranjith /shivaay : sorry ..

Geet : sorry for what,u betrayed ur friends or calling me geet.

Girl :  .. Get lost,shivaay..

Geet : Anika.. why u shouting him. He come for official work ..


Anika : geet, how could u calmly talk with him..he killed our maan with teary face.

Geet smiled weekly : yes, he killed my maan trust but he cannot touch his soul, anika. Mr.Oberai.. I don't need any official or personal work with u.. get lost before I lose my patience .

Shivaay left the place with guilty tone.

Anika : u forgive him  with shocking face.

Geet smirked face and went out her cabin. Anika confused saw her smirked face.

( hey babaji what happening yaar, anika is alive,how,when .. I think someone forgot whose anika right, Anika,maan,adi,sanskar, ranjith (shivaay) were college mate.Anika love with maan but maan rejected her love, some one killed her in their college days ..part 46,47..plz check it , mystery man already revenge with maan ,after anika died , he more angry with maan , mm want maan defeat .. totally MM no one other Shivaay singh oberai or say ranjith.. ..everyone thinking how anika become alive, why she blaming shivaay as he killed maan .. wait for upcoming part  guys..)

 Flashback end

 

Other man : I am saying important matter but u concentrate with ur painting with angry tone.

Man: Adi ,why u shouting .. I am not deaf  with bossy tone.

Adi : wow,u also shouting like ur wife ..she shouting everyone in office. Now u.. with pout face.

Man  smiled : she is GMSK.. with proud tone.

Adi : ur taught not only work ,u teach,how to scare everyone through ur big eyes .

Man: Adi,are u scaring for her angry glare with chuckling face.

Adi : hello MSK , u did not see her angry glare that only u saying in cool way.Are u scaring for her angry glare with imitate voice.. she is sherni with shooking his head .

Maan angry glare to adi : don't call her sherni..she is my mishty  with smiling face

Adi : mishty only for u.. now she changed totally with sad face.

Maan nod his head negatively : never ...

Adi : without u,in our family everyone live like dead soul . everyone missing u ..

Maan sad face: How is dadi..

Adi : she have no improvement in her body. Plz maan come back ..

Maan : i cannot ..Adi ..u knew my suitation more than anyone  then why everyday u insist come back to our family .

Adi: i knew but atleast think about geet , everyone blashing & cursing her but still she said everyone u r alive . now days she stopped talk with everyone even with janu maa also . family worried about her .

Maan hand caring his painting ,its geet picture : sorry , Jaan.. i love u  but i cannot come infront of u ..

( how could u thought,i killed my maan.Angryu knew very well how much i love my maan Heart)

Adi : how many days, u could hide from her, one day she will find ur  truth..then what about her state .

Maan : i am also fearing same thing .. if she will find out,she  will break down .. i cannot see my mishty in that state,its good i stay away from her & family.. i asked detail about them , u found out with eager tone..

Adi : No.. soon i will give their biography ..

Maan: Adi,understand,i have no time in m hand .. i need settle down every thing before.. i am going..

Adi : shout up maan..with angry face..don't say anything wrong..

Maan : some time truth give pain but we never change right .

Adi hugged maan tightly : because of him.. u r suffering.. ..maan held adi tightly,adi get feared sensing  his held..Adi stay away from hug.. Maan biting his lip while trying to control ..

Adi : maan..with fear face.

Maan held his head through his hand shouting vigorously : Ahhh...his voice echoed whole room.. its painful voice

Adi eyes flicked in his tears and tried held maan and pushed away from him ..

Maan pulling his hairs,he cannot bear his pain, he shout like some one pounding  lot of nails in his head through hammer . Adi run to cupboard area.. he take some injection and gave injection in his arms.. his pain reduced little bit insake of drugs..he become unconscious state.. his lip murmuring geet name .. other side geet jerked up from bed & her whispering maan name.. why destiny play with maaneet life .. both cannot live without each other ...

 

Part end ..


                             

Precap :

 

 

Brij : i got proof in my hand ..today Bua praising me...

 

pammi : Geet beta, who u trust blindly  , that person cheated u with  indirectly taunting tone in fake concern voice 

geet eyes look at person , her eyes signed , u too betray me , she got one more heart broken without saying anything left the place .

 

who that person & brij found out what ? ShockedShockedShocked  Keep guessing .. guys.WinkWinkWink

 

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Proposal for geet (  both present & past life )..LOLLOLLOL

 

Past life , we know  that what maan did  with groom LOLLOLLOL and what about present ..WinkWinkWink

 

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I know this part emotional one ..next part more funny and come back with one more twist .. 

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