What if zmga's story had gone like this?

I recently gave these suggestions with respect to zmga's story in the episode discussion thread. Yesterday when I saw Gayatri's crazy thought topic on zmga's story, I felt I too should give my suggestions as a different topic

- To start with I want a good brotherly bond develop between the trio Pritam-Angad-Kabir. Earlier @Anu said that Pritam is the zindagi the ray of hope who has entered Sakhujas life so I want the CVs to develop on that concept. Angad and Kabir should be the first ones who start seeing the brother they have lost in Pritam and for that there needs to be a subplot created around the three. For Kabir since he has lost his job and I really don't wish he rejoins Meera's office, there can be a subplot where Pritam like a big bro helps Kabir see some of his inner talent which the other Sakhujas could not see as they always treated him as a "good for nothing". In that way Kabir starts spending more time with Pritam and also start calling him bhai officially. For Angad since Pritam too has also gone through a heartbreak situation, he should be able to help Angad more with that part. He already gave a really good advice to Angad earlier with respect to life's second chance now he should make Angad learn and use it and also give a second chance to Meera. I desperately want Angad-Meera to patch up and don't want Kabir to end up with Meera.

- Second part, since Angad-Meera-Kabir are parallel leads, I want to suggest something on their story. I too have a feeling of a new love angle coming for Angad with Reema. Actually I was reminded of ssk2 listening to this name. Many tanya sharma fans used to say that Reema is a name formed by inverting Meera, haha. Imo, I don't want Reema to be paired with Angad and CVs destroying his character later. Let Reema be paired opposite Kabir and not Angad. I wish the entry of Reema brings Meera closer to Angad with some jealously track. Perhaps, they can take a track where Reema enters into Angad's life and falls for him but he doesn't reciprocate as he still loves Meera yet tries hard to move on from Meera. On the other side Meera-Kabir start a really good friendship but Meera starts missing Angad more and more when she sees certain traits of him in Kabir and starts realizing that the traits she always wanted in her life partner were all of Angad's. Adding on to that situation, there should be some brewing up of jealously in Meera seeing Angad and Reema together and also at the same time there can be an unveiling of KK's truth in front of Meera. Finally, everything leading Meera to go back to Angad when Angad also inspired by Pritam will be ready to give Meera and himself a second chance.

- It would be nice if there is a small track of Soni's story too perhaps along with Navin. Where Soni's offline classes begin and she goes to college which is the same college as Navin. At thce college, Navin under the effect of all the drugs he is taking gets infatuated towards Soni and tries to seduce her or something but when she doesn't give in, he becomes violent. However, by that time Pritam and his team reaches him, saves Soni and sends Navin to some rehabiliation centre. It would be good if it happens because by this way all the sakhuja siblings will be developing a brotherly affection for Pritam.

- Now the most important of all on how I suggest Amritam's story can be. From what we all know about Amrita she will still not be satisfied even after what Pritam does for the three sakhuja siblings and imo she will be even more annoyed that they have started looking upto him as their big bro, while Pritam can be shown to be more pulled towards Amrita seeing the silly yet cute side of Amrita.

- Perhaps after more of Pritam's child Rahul and ex-wife Vishaka's stories are unveiled. There can be instances with more clashes of Pritam and Vishaka for which he brings Rahul to the Sakhujas place, again obviously there will be reactions from Sakhujas, then one day Vishaka lands up in the Sakhujas place. When Pritam asks her to get out, Amrita being a would-be mother will support Vishaka, however that will cost both her and Pritam when Vishaka brings some goons to take away her child. Pritam will try to fight those men but they will sabotage the house and keep Amrita at gunpoint while trying to take away Rahul. Pritam attempts to save both, but there is a gunshot, Pritam manages to save Amrita but unfortunately the bullet hits Rahul killing him (imo, if such scenes are taken, the CVs can't show the child getting hit by bullet but only imply through sound and other effects).

- After the tragedy, as usual Pritam will be completely heartbroken on the other hand the sakhujas will be relieved that Amrita and her baby are safe. Athough from that moment Amrita will start seeing Pritam in a totally different light it will be too late as Pritam losing his last hope will return back to his shell isolating himself from all sakhujas and also mansoor uncle. Vishaka probably can go to jail for a while and perhaps return later. After losing Rahul, Pritam can be shown to trying to move on by trying to focus more on his missions and deciding to move out from the sakhujas place which will dishearten all the sakhujas as all have grown fond to him especially the siblings who will face the same pain of losing their big brother once again but none will dare stop him. Amrita can be shown guilty for having judging Pritam wrong all that while and in a way responsible for his condition too so she will take courage to try stopping him.

- On the day when Pritam is leaving Amrita will deliberately send all away outside Angad-Kabir office, Soni-college, Nimmo-Guneet-to their shop, Dadaji-Beeji to a photoshoot in the next lane and Kamli to get something from the market. Once there is none in the house Amrita will decide to go upstairs and talk to Pritam in person, but while climbing the stairs Amrita gets labour pains and cries out. Pritam and the neighbors get alarmed. Pritam comes out and sees Amrita in that condition and try to call out the elders when Amrita will inform him that none is at home. Pritam as usual will be grumbling and cursing the sakhujas when Amrita will tell him he can better take her to the hospital than grumble, the neighbors will echo. Poor Pritam will have no other go. On the way to the hospital, there can also be some big problem, something like traffic or something else where Pritam will try his best to reach the hospital yet there will be Amritam's banter (like the banter of the episode of "world's best omelette") all throughout the voyage and continue even after they reach the hospital making the hospital staff think Pritam and Amrita to be a "couple". Obviously, the hospital staff will ask Pritam to assist Amrita in delivery thinking him to be her husband, even when he resists. Perhaps they can continue Amritam's banter even in the labor room with Pritam saying he became Amrita's forced husband now and asking Amrita to make it fast as he has other work to do where as we all know of Amrita, she will give him a tight slap (like the scene we had in 3 idiots) and ask him if she is some express train or what to make it fast and Pritam again will grumble saying ye baat madam jasoos always wanted to slap me but was waiting for the right moment. Soon our champ will arrive and the doctor will perhaps place the baby in Pritam's hands. On seeing little champ obviously Pritam will remember his own Rahul, have an emotional moment with our little champ and instantly get attached to him. Soon the sakhujas arrive and all the family moment.....towards the end Pritam looks at champ from far, gets reminded of Rahul again and decides not to leave the Sakhujas house. So finally, Amrita does succeed in stopping Pritam (who is actually a ray of hope, zindagi in Sakhujas house) leaving sakhujas place indirectly with the help of little champ.

- Subsequently there can be a father-son bond between champ and Pritam which will slowly pull Amrita towards Pritam and the story can continue in that way.

- These are purely my thoughts/suggestions on how the story can be because imo the current tracks of emotional family drama, meera-kabir cringe office nok-jhoks and also Amrita's non-stop spying, criticizing and scolding Pritam is quite draggy. If the CVs really want to add up drama I wish they take it the way something like I have written or if they have something else better then even that way but not really a bhabhi-devar romance. I know such track brings trps but then it has become very frustrating and depressing lately to watch it in every other show. Also, I don't feel it was really working in zmga.

Seeing the recent tracks of zmga on how Pritam is already falling for Amrita and yet to realize his feelings. I got a lot of muddled thoughts in my head with respect to how Pritam will realize his feelings for Amrita and how Amrita will fall in love with Pritam and also realize her feelings. I felt I must write them and share it here:

– Once our little champ arrives which I likely feel is going to be a “baby boy”. I am assuming it will be a boy because Pritam’s first born is a boy and the Sakhujas are expecting their Karan through the baby. Anyhow be it boy or girl, I feel the baby and Pritam will have a strong father-child bond which will surprise all the Sakhujas and most importantly it will undoubtedly surprise Amrita. There Amrita will gradually start seeing the real goodness and kindness in Pritam’s heart and will realize she had been so wrong about him all along. Frankly I really wish it goes in this way with a slow pace for this part because I disliked how the CVs made Amrita turn a 360 when she learnt that Pritam runs a NGO and turned all goody goody to him all of a sudden. Given how rude, arrogant and nosy Amrita has always been to Pritam. I feel it is better if Amrita’s attitude towards Pritam takes a gradual change, not really a sudden change.

– So, when Amrita starts to learn and understand more about the goodness and kindness in Pritam, there will develop a slow “friendship” between AmRitam. I am talking about friendship because I feel friendship is absolutely necessary to develop and produce “love”.

– Obviously even in friendship there will be banters of Amritam and it will be nice with something like Amritam trying to patch up Rangad with the help of Soni, Kabir and also perhaps Reema. When Rangad start with a small banter, Amritam will budge in and try to stop them but start their own banter surprising everyone. Finally, Rangad will say you brought us here to make us patch up first you both have to patch up.

– Then one day Pritam while having beer with Angad-Kabir on terrace, will complain to them on how arrogant and nosy their “bhabhi” always is to him. At that time, Angad-Kabir will tease Pritam saying that he is really scared of their bhabhi. Obviously, Pritam will chide away that comment saying he is not scared of her, when both the brothers will play with him calling out “bhabhi” as if she is standing behind him, which will undoubtedly scare Pritam. Angad and Kabir will laugh at him. Pritam annoyed will scold them and continue complaining about Amrita when she really comes there. Angad-Kabir will motion him but Pritam will say that he is not going to believe them this time which is when Amrita will budge in. Pritam will obviously became a scared puppy in front of Amrita. Angad-Kabir will giggle and slowly make an escape with their beer downstairs, while Nitin-Monty will come upstairs to meet Pritam when Amrita will be confronting Pritam asking when was she nosy, arrogant and rude? That time Pritam will stutter reminding her of all the times she has been really nosy, rude and arrogant to him which will embarrass her. She will quietly leave without replying anything yet giving her usual grudgeful looks at Pritam. Pritam will smile seeing her.

– Once Pritam-Nitin-Monty go to the room, Nitin-Monty will tease Pritam saying he is such a courageous cop in real life yet scared of a girl? Pritam will chide them too saying nothing like that she is something “special” which will shock all the three of them. That will be the moment when Pritam realizes how important Amrita has become in his life. Nitin-Monty too after coming out of their surprise will tell Pritam that he has moved on and changed a lot after meeting Amrita. Before leaving, Nitin-Monty being Pritam’s good friends, will advise him to accept his feelings. After they leave, Pritam will remember all the moments when he got pulled towards Amrita and gradually fell for her. Yet having lost all his loved ones and knowing that Amrita loves Karan even now, Pritam will fear that he will lose Amrita too, so he will decide not to reveal his feelings to her and keep them to himself.

– With respect to Amrita obviously she will start understanding and respecting Pritam more when there starts a “friendship” between them. Pritam after realizing his feelings towards will turn a bit sober again with the memories of losing his loved ones haunting him. Amrita will see the change in Pritam and one fine night without letting anyone notice go to his room and strongly confront him about his change in behaviour. Pritam will not be able to confess his feelings yet out of pain hug her, keep his head on his shoulder and reveal how his lost his family. Amrita will get moved, hug him back and cry along with him without noticing the time. Next morning, Amrita will wake up in Pritam’s room and realize that she dozed off consoling Pritam. She quickly gets up to leave yet before leaving she will look at Pritam sleeping peacefully, smile at him and rub his head before turning to leave. Once Amrita reaches her room, she looks at her mirror, sees her bindi and smiles thinking about Pritam. Just then her eyes fall on Karan’s photo kept behind and realizes that she has developed feelings for Pritam. On realizing her feelings, Amrita will feel that she is cheating Karan and decide to fight her feelings for Pritam which will make her start avoiding Pritam and fight with him every time when he tries to talk to her. Pritam will obviously be surprised and disappointed and ask her again and again what wrong did he do?

– So, there will be a rift between Amritam with both having issues with their feelings for the other. Pritam trying to hide his feelings while Amrita trying to fight her feelings.

– Obviously when both can’t easily talk out their feelings there should be someone who should push them do that. Consequently, at that moment, Vishaka will re-enter Pritam’s life which will make Amrita jealous and helpless being not able to fight her feelings, while Pritam in an effort to distance himself from Vishaka becomes helpless unable to hide his feelings towards Amrita. Finally, both ladies will start fighting with each other with Pritam stuck in the middle, where he will be left thinking, “Are all women in the world same or the items in my life special?”

These were some random thoughts on the storyline which popped in my head when I was watching the current track

Originally posted by: myselfriya

Seeing the recent tracks of zmga on how Pritam is already falling for Amrita and yet to realize his feelings. I got a lot of muddled thoughts in my head with respect to how Pritam will realize his feelings for Amrita and how Amrita will fall in love with Pritam and also realize her feelings. I felt I must write them and share it here:

– Once our little champ arrives which I likely feel is going to be a “baby boy”. I am assuming it will be a boy because Pritam’s first born is a boy and the Sakhujas are expecting their Karan through the baby. Anyhow be it boy or girl, I feel the baby and Pritam will have a strong father-child bond which will surprise all the Sakhujas and most importantly it will undoubtedly surprise Amrita. There Amrita will gradually start seeing the real goodness and kindness in Pritam’s heart and will realize she had been so wrong about him all along. Frankly I really wish it goes in this way with a slow pace for this part because I disliked how the CVs made Amrita turn a 360 when she learnt that Pritam runs a NGO and turned all goody goody to him all of a sudden. Given how rude, arrogant and nosy Amrita has always been to Pritam. I feel it is better if Amrita’s attitude towards Pritam takes a gradual change, not really a sudden change.

– So, when Amrita starts to learn and understand more about the goodness and kindness in Pritam, there will develop a slow “friendship” between AmRitam. I am talking about friendship because I feel friendship is absolutely necessary to develop and produce “love”.

– Obviously even in friendship there will be banters of Amritam and it will be nice with something like Amritam trying to patch up Rangad with the help of Soni, Kabir and also perhaps Reema. When Rangad start with a small banter, Amritam will budge in and try to stop them but start their own banter surprising everyone. Finally, Rangad will say you brought us here to make us patch up first you both have to patch up.

– Then one day Pritam while having beer with Angad-Kabir on terrace, will complain to them on how arrogant and nosy their “bhabhi” always is to him. At that time, Angad-Kabir will tease Pritam saying that he is really scared of their bhabhi. Obviously, Pritam will chide away that comment saying he is not scared of her, when both the brothers will play with him calling out “bhabhi” as if she is standing behind him, which will undoubtedly scare Pritam. Angad and Kabir will laugh at him. Pritam annoyed will scold them and continue complaining about Amrita when she really comes there. Angad-Kabir will motion him but Pritam will say that he is not going to believe them this time which is when Amrita will budge in. Pritam will obviously became a scared puppy in front of Amrita. Angad-Kabir will giggle and slowly make an escape with their beer downstairs, while Nitin-Monty will come upstairs to meet Pritam when Amrita will be confronting Pritam asking when was she nosy, arrogant and rude? That time Pritam will stutter reminding her of all the times she has been really nosy, rude and arrogant to him which will embarrass her. She will quietly leave without replying anything yet giving her usual grudgeful looks at Pritam. Pritam will smile seeing her.

– Once Pritam-Nitin-Monty go to the room, Nitin-Monty will tease Pritam saying he is such a courageous cop in real life yet scared of a girl? Pritam will chide them too saying nothing like that she is something “special” which will shock all the three of them. That will be the moment when Pritam realizes how important Amrita has become in his life. Nitin-Monty too after coming out of their surprise will tell Pritam that he has moved on and changed a lot after meeting Amrita. Before leaving, Nitin-Monty being Pritam’s good friends, will advise him to accept his feelings. After they leave, Pritam will remember all the moments when he got pulled towards Amrita and gradually fell for her. Yet having lost all his loved ones and knowing that Amrita loves Karan even now, Pritam will fear that he will lose Amrita too, so he will decide not to reveal his feelings to her and keep them to himself.

– With respect to Amrita obviously she will start understanding and respecting Pritam more when there starts a “friendship” between them. Pritam after realizing his feelings towards will turn a bit sober again with the memories of losing his loved ones haunting him. Amrita will see the change in Pritam and one fine night without letting anyone notice go to his room and strongly confront him about his change in behaviour. Pritam will not be able to confess his feelings yet out of pain hug her, keep his head on his shoulder and reveal how his lost his family. Amrita will get moved, hug him back and cry along with him without noticing the time. Next morning, Amrita will wake up in Pritam’s room and realize that she dozed off consoling Pritam. She quickly gets up to leave yet before leaving she will look at Pritam sleeping peacefully, smile at him and rub his head before turning to leave. Once Amrita reaches her room, she looks at her mirror, sees her bindi and smiles thinking about Pritam. Just then her eyes fall on Karan’s photo kept behind and realizes that she has developed feelings for Pritam. On realizing her feelings, Amrita will feel that she is cheating Karan and decide to fight her feelings for Pritam which will make her start avoiding Pritam and fight with him every time when he tries to talk to her. Pritam will obviously be surprised and disappointed and ask her again and again what wrong did he do?

– So, there will be a rift between Amritam with both having issues with their feelings for the other. Pritam trying to hide his feelings while Amrita trying to fight her feelings.

– Obviously when both can’t easily talk out their feelings there should be someone who should push them do that. Consequently, at that moment, Vishaka will re-enter Pritam’s life which will make Amrita jealous and helpless being not able to fight her feelings, while Pritam in an effort to distance himself from Vishaka becomes helpless unable to hide his feelings towards Amrita. Finally, both ladies will start fighting with each other with Pritam stuck in the middle, where he will be left thinking, “Are all women in the world same or the items in my life special?”

These were some random thoughts on the storyline which popped in my head when I was watching the current track.

Loved this version 👌😍 hope the story pans out something like this ❤

Pritam-Vishaka Love Story

I always wanted a sweet love story of Pritam-Vishaka just like the way we saw of Amrita-Karan yet all the CVs are showing us is Vishaka's never ending hatred for Pritam. I feel to "hate" someone that deeply that person is to be "loved" first deeply which means Pritam-Vishaka were deeply in love. So I'm writing a small excerpt which shows a glimpse of Pritam-Vishaka's love life before they called it to the splits.

Part-1

The beginnings of Pritam-Vishaka’s love story

Summer 2011, Vivekanada Institute of Professional Studies, Delhi

- Vishaka a final year graduate student of Journalism is seen coming out of the gates in a hurry as she is on her way to complete one of her most important assignments which will win her the best student award of Journalism department of that particular academic year.She runs to get her scooty and as she is taking it out she accidently bangs her scooty onto Pritam's open jeep. That was the first time when Pritam-Vishaka came face to face with each other. Vishaka shouts out, "Where the hell were you looking while driving?" Pritam asks her, "Madam Wai Guru has given two eyes to you too then why you did not see the no parking sign before parking your vehicle here?" Pritam signs Vishaka towards the no parking sign board behind her. Vishaka turns back, sees it and lets out a disappointed expression realizing her mistake. She awkwardly turns back towards Pritam. Pritam asks her, "Now what? Will you pay me my compensation for leaving that scratch on my jeep or should I take you to the police station?"Vishaka glances at her watch and realizes that she is getting late. She quickly takes out her purse to pay but finds out she doesn't have a single penny. Without thinking twice, she removes the ancestral silver ring from her finger and places it on Pritam's hand saying "This is more than enough to pay for the loss I have done to you now let me go!" after saying that she quickly leaves without saying anything else to Pritam while Pritam confused by her actions tries to stop her but in vain. Once Vishaka leaves, Pritam sits in his jeep and quickly drives off to his station.

- In the Station, When he tries to enter his cabin, the guard constables stop him asking who was he? Just then Nitin-Monty come there and inform them that he is Pritam Chaudhary IPS newly passed out from Police Academy and joining here as their SHO. The constables quickly salute and apologize. Pritam smiles and replies I liked the honesty that you are putting towards your duty because it is the honesty which makes you good police officers. As the three go in, Nitin-Monty ask him why is he not in uniform on his very first day. Pritam replies unconsciously because of that girl. Nitin-Monty are surprised and ask "Girl?" Nitin "Pritam Chaudhary on his very first day on-duty..." Monty "...found someone for himself!!" Pritam says "Shut up, it was just an unwanted argument on road I got into because of which I did not get time to go back and change. Now is the girl important or our duty important?" Now tell me what is the first mission which DCP has given us?" Nitin-Monty inform him about the deadly dangerous drug racket operating in Delhi.

- On the other side Vishaka reaches the venue where one of the most wanted drug peddlers is supplying drugs to school students. She watches them, listens carefully to whatever they are talking about and records their video while letting out a smile saying now nothing can stop her from winning the best student award. As she turns around to leave she falls down stumbling upon something. The peddler gets alarmed, he tries to catch Vishaka but she runs fast and escapes from the place. In Pritam's station, after Pritam changes and comes, the trio "PriNiMo" talk about the most wanted drug peddler in Delhi(the same whom Vishaka had managed to get information on) just then Pritam gets a call from Mansoor Uncle, after they finish greeting each other. Mansoor Uncle informs him about getting a vital clue on the most wanted criminal and asks him to reach his office right away. Pritam along with Monty-Nitin go to Mansoor Uncle's office. As he is about to enter, he bangs with Vishaka. Vishaka is surprised to notice that Pritam is a cop while Pritam annoyed asks are you blind always or is it just when I'm around? Monty asks Pritam if he knows her which is when Pritam tells them it is the same girl who made him late today.Monty-Nitin laugh. Vishaka asks "So you are a cop?" Pritam replies,"Then why do you think I'm wearing this uniform because I'm a fisherman?" Vishaka annoyingly shakes her head, excuses herself and leaves. Nitin tells Pritam to talk more calmly with women. Pritam tells him that they should focus more on their duty and less on women. They go inside,meet Mansoor Uncle and ask him what is it he wanted to share about the wanted drug peddler. Mansoor Uncle tells them everything he received through Vishaka. Pritam asks him more about the peddler when Mansoor Uncle tells him if you want to know then you have to ask the girl who brought all this information. Pritam hesitatingly asks Mansoor Uncle if it was the same girl who went out of his cabin before they came in? Mansoor Uncle nods. Pritam gets irked while Nitin-Monty laugh again. Nitin tells Pritam now he has to talk and persuade that girl there is no other go. Pritam hits his forehead with his hand.

- Next day, Pritam waits outside Vivekanda Institute saying "Ye baat, myself, Pritam Chaudhary, the Pritam Chaudhary who has never tried to woo any woman all his life is now waiting for a woman and going to woo all for duty!!" Instantly, Vishaka comes out. Pritam tries to talk to her but seeing him Vishaka quickly sits on her scooty and drives off fast. Next day again Pritam tries again to reach out to her but Vishaka disappears the very moment she sees him. The cycle of Pritam trying to talk to Vishaka with her avoiding him and disappearing the very moment he comes near her continues for the next 7 days. Finally, after a week, Pritam gets a bouquet of white roses hides his face behind it, comes near Vishaka, gives her the flowers and before she can run, he catches her hand closes his eyes and vents out, “Unbelievable,you have made an IPS officer into a roadside majnu. For the past one week I was constantly trying to talk to you but all you do is run when I come near you to talk, Madam!! All I want to is your help to catch that criminal who has become the most wanted drug peddler of the city but you always want to be the runaway queen with me running behind and trying to catch you.” After venting out, Pritam leaves Vishaka’s hand and opens his eyes when he sees Vishaka still standing in front of him. This time she does not run but has a hearty laugh saying, “An IPS officer has become a roadside majnu for me? Really? I’m impressed” She continues to laugh as Pritam looks around embarrassingly with everyone staring at them. He shoos everyone away and tells Vishaka, “Listen I need your help to catch that criminal so can you…”he stops himself takes a deep long breath and says “…please help me?” Vishaka widens her eyes in surprise, smiles and teasingly asks “Come again I didn’t understand what you said” Pritam takes a deep breath again and asks, “Madam can you please help me to catch that criminal. Vishaka replies, “Now when you are requesting so much I should help after all it will also help me to better myself in my academics and career. Let’s meet up tomorrow in Café Coffee Day, Pitam Pura to discuss." After saying that Vishaka again leaves, while Pritam flinging his hand says, “Superb,till date I have never asked any woman for coffee and Madam has straight fixed a date tomorrow, women are strange!!” Next day, Pritam dresses himself again in casuals to go to the café. As he is leaving, Nitin-Monty tease him asking, “The Pritam we know has never taken any woman for date and today he is going to drink coffee with a woman whom he just met?” Pritam replies, “Shut-up it’s all for duty” Monty replies, “So when did we say that you are going on a date?” and the duo chuckle together. Pritam annoyingly leaves.

- At the Café, Pritam comes, sits next to Vishaka and tells her. “Next time when you want to discuss something don’t call me to any café come to my station directly. Vishaka frowns and asks “Why are you allergic to coffee or do I look like a criminal for you?” Pritam replies, “I don’t drink coffee and not just criminals even normal people come to the station” Vishaka takes a glance of Pritam from top to bottom and murmurs,“I can see that”. Pritam asks “Did you say something?” Vishaka replies no and quickly changes the topic saying, “Don’t worry there will be no need for us to meet once again, just a few minutes before you came, I got the information on where that peddler is smuggling his drugs today but we need to hurry up and start right now. Pritam shockingly asks, “Right now but I need not caution my men!”Vishaka tells him, “Inform them about the location and ask them to be there on time.” Pritam takes out his phone, calls Nitin-Monty and informs them everything. When he is still on phone, Vishaka tells him, “Hurry up if we don’t start now, we will miss him” Pritam hangs up and goes out to take his vehicle when Vishaka stops him and tells that it is better that they go together on her scooty as the drug peddler will get alarmed seeing a police vehicle. Pritam agrees and asks her to give the keys for which Vishaka replies, “I don’t allow anyone else to drive my scooty so you will have to sit behind me.” Pritam annoyingly gives in and sits behind her.

- As Vishaka starts the scooty jerks forward with Pritam getting displaced and hitting his head onto Vishaka’s helmet. He inches in pain and asks her to drive properly. She again gives the accelerator harshly and takes off rashly with Pritam catching her shoulders this time however he quickly takes them off and murmurs, “Before jailing that peddler I should have first jailed the RTO who issued driving licence to this girl” Vishaka asks did you say something, Pritam tells her to focus on her driving and try to reach the venue not yamlok before that. Vishaka annoyingly and drives even more rashly. Pritam holds on tightly to the back part of the scooty while trying to keep a safe distance from her. When they finally reach the venue, he heaves a sigh of relief saying will never sit behind a woman on a scooty in any condition again. Vishaka catches his hand and signs him not to talk while pointing towards the peddler. The two together move closer to the peddler in slow footsteps. They keep a close eye on every moment of the peddler. When Vishaka turns around to take out her phone to record the event, she finds that Pritam is nowhere there. As she turns again, she sees that the drug peddler is holding a gun onto her forehead. He gives out a nasty smile asking her "So you came once again huh? This time you won’t be able to return because you won’t be alive to go back." Vishaka gets scared, shuts her eyes and folds her fingers tightly into her fist in fear." Just then a bullet sound is heard. She screams on hearing the sound of the gunshot thinking the peddler has shot her but as she opens her eyes, she realizes that she hasn’t got shot anywhere. She sweats profusely checking all over herself and gets relieved. She looks around and sees the peddler lying down wincing in pain, she notices that his hand had been shot. As she looks at the opposite side of the peddler, she sees Pritam standing with a gun in hand and smoke fuming out of it. Pritam had foreseen the peddler coming towards them. So he sneaked around to catch him stealthily. As soon as Vishaka sees Pritam, she runs towards him and hugs him. Pritam is surprised with her gesture just when Nitin-Monty come there and see Vishaka hugging Pritam. They giggle mockingly. Pritam glowers at them and signs them to handle the drug peddler. Nitin-Monty go and catch the peddler, handcuff him and drag him with them. When the peddler comes near Vishaka who is still hugging Pritam tightly, he tells her “You and your boyfriend spoilt my whole game, I’m not going to leave you both” Pritam blushes on being addressed as Vishaka’s boyfriend, while Nitin-Monty have their share of laughter again. Monty bangs on the peddler’s head saying, “Oh Mister he is Pritam Chaudhary IPS, you can continue giving him threats in the station, but his girlfriend won’t be there” Nitin-Monty continue chuckling while Pritam rolls his eyes angrily towards them. As Nitin-Monty take the peddler towards the police van, Pritam keeps shouting behind them, “Oh hello, peddler saheb, this girl is not my girlfriend and I’m not her boyfriend, do you get that?” Vishaka tells him they are gone and can’t hear you. Pritam scowls at her asking, “What was the need to hug me?” Vishaka replies, “Now come off it, I never hugged you because I was so desperate to nor are you very dashing or hot. It was just a reflex action which came out of my fear. Now isn’t your work done? So you don’t have to worry about assuring me, meeting me or getting hugged by me again.” After saying that, Vishaka swiftly turns and leaves from there grumbling. Pritam shakes his head and sways his hands saying, “Women!!”.

In the Station, next day the trio "PriNiMo" discuss cheerfully on their success of cracking their very first task of catching the most wanted drug peddler just then Vishaka’s last words flash in Pritam’s head that "she was neither desperate to hug him nor does he look that dashing." Pritam unconsciously drifts towards a large glass surface, gazes at his reflection and asks Nitin-Monty, “Don’t I look that dashing?” He doesn’t get any response from the other side, so when he turns around towards them, he sees them staring at him open-mouth. He asks them, “What? Why are you staring at me like that?” Nitin starts “Pritam Chaudhary…” Monty continues, “….the Pritam Chaudhary….”, Nitin “….who never cared about his looks….” Monty “….is now wondering whether he is dashing or not…” Nitin “…who brought this idea in his head?...” Monty “…who is she?...” Pritam gets annoyed and tells them, “Shutup! Are you both Inspectors or some news channel reporters?” Nitin goes near Pritam puts his hand around his shoulder saying, “Pritam we are asking because we are worried about you” Monty joins on the other side, “Now tell us who is she?” Just then Pritam’s phone rings, he heaves a sigh of relief and signs Nitin-Monty, it is the DCP calling. Pritam picks up the phone and puts it on speaker, on the other side the DCP congratulates him, appreciates his bravery and talent for catching the most wanted drug peddler. Pritam smilingly thanks him and adds on, “My duty is my first priority Sir but this time there is someone else who has a big hand in catching that peddler Sir” DCP surprised asks him “who it is?” Nitin-Monty curiously look on, Pritam continues with a shy smile on his face, “Sir, if it wasn’t for that girl from VIPS, Vishaka, we could have never got the lead to catch that drug peddler” and with that blushful smile still on his face, he slowly turns around and sees Nitin-Monty staring at him with raised eyebrows. Pritam gets nervous at their glare and forgets to respond to the DCP. The DCP on the other side asks him, “Pritam are you there? What were you saying about that girl?” Pritam coughs and continues, “Sir, I meant that girl helped our department a lot and has a big hand in catching that peddler. I think our department should acknowledge that because it will be a great inspiration for every civilian like her.” The DCP agrees with Pritam and assures that he will do the required. After the DCP hangs up, Nitin-Monty inch closer to Pritam in slow steps. Pritam tries to avoid them by taking out a file from his desk and pretending to read it. As the duo stand besides Pritam, Nitin coughs to get Pritam’s attention but Pritam continues his pretence. Soon, Monty discovers something seeing the file in Pritam’s hand and says, “What happened Pritam did you forget to read too that you have caught the file upside down?” Pritam just realizes that while Nitin-Monty giggle. Pritam coughs and says, “I wasn’t reading this file but looking for some criminal’s photos, why are you both constantly hovering around me? Go do your duty” Pritam continues to avoid them,while they start again, Nitin “Pritam we are doing our duty” Monty “Our first and foremost duty as a friend”. Pritam annoyingly asks them, “What do you both want?” Nitin “We want to guide our friend who has started crushing on a girl” Monty “But does not know anything about love or women”. Pritam shouts, “Shut up there is nothing like that, you both should stop thinking about all this nonsense and do your work, go now and get me all the information of the other most wanted drug peddlers in the city, go!!” The duo try to resist yet Pritam doesn’t let them and pushes them out of his cabin. Once they are out of sight, Pritam ponders all of his earlier moments with Vishaka, how they first met, then got a chance meeting in front of Mansoor Uncle’s office, their further encounters and all of his banters with her. Unconsciously, Pritam lets out a bright smile and unknown to him Nitin-Monty had been peeping inside & quietly watching him with Nitin holding himself over Monty. To his bad luck, Monty trips which makes both fall and let know Pritam of their presence. Pritam scolds them of spying on him, however the duo make an escape. Pritam goes near the door to check once again if the duo mates have gone for real this time. Once he makes sure that they are nowhere near around to spy on.He continues to smile thinking about Vishaka.

- A few days later, Vishaka meets her dean to apply herself in the nomination list of the best student of the year award of the Journalism department. The dean informs her that she is not eligible for the same. Vishaka is painfully shocked and asks the reason. The dean reminds her that for becoming a nominee of student of the year, she had to complete a project which would illustrate her talent and provide evidence that she will become a great journalist. Vishaka remembers all the hardwork she had done to collect all the data for her project, however, unfortunately, she lost everything when her phone got dismantled during her tussle with the drug peddler. She comes out of the dean office and tearfully thinks, “All this happened because of that idiot Pritam Chaudhary. I shouldn’t have agreed to help him” but then soon Pritam’s loyalty towards duty and hatred towards drugs flashes through her mind, she then remembers how she started crushing on him from their very first meeting. The day they first met, while she was drove off she had checked him out through her rear mirror. Next, in front of Mansoor Uncle’s office, Vishaka turned back to check out Pritam while Nitin asked him to talk more calmly to women. Later, everytime, Pritam had been trying to woo her, she would make her run but later checked him out from a distance with a smile. It makes her forget her pain and she smilingly saying, “Although that Pritam is an idiot, his loyalty towards his work and hatred towards drugs is something common which he has with me and there is something about him which makes me not to get angry on him” She then sadly looks at her application form and says,“Anyhow this is of no use for me now”. She tears the application form and flings the pieces of paper in the air, sadly watching them floating in the air as her dream of winning the student of the year award vanishes in those pieces of paper.

Student of the year award day

- Vishaka is sitting at a distant corner from the stage. Her friends ask her to come forward. However, Vishaka shakes her head signalling no. Soon, the student of the year award function with the dean welcoming the chief guests, introducing them and inviting them to give a speech. Vishaka in her grief does not pay attention to anything that was happening. After the chief guest’s speech. The award distribution begins with the dean announcing the names of the winners of various departments, Vishaka keeps her head down without taking much notice to who all are the winners. As it comes to Journalism department, Vishaka feels her heart thump hard but does not lift her head. Soon the dean pronounces the winner’s name and Vishaka gets startled on hearing her name. She looks upto the stage and sees Pritam holding her trophy.She blushes in both happiness and shyness. Before Vishaka gets up, Pritam asks the dean to hand him over the mike. Once, the dean hands over the mike, Pritam speaks, “Vishaka is one those students who deserves a bigger award than this we are cops, this country’s civil servants who vow to protect the nation from all impending dangers so for us it is our duty to catch criminals but for a civilian like Vishaka it is always a choice to take the risk or not to catch criminals.…” while he is still speaking, Nitin-Monty mumble behind, Nitin “Isn’t our boy complimenting that girl a little too much”, Monty, “True bro as you know everything is fair in love and war”, Pritam, “….in that case,Vishaka fulfilled all her responsibilities as a true citizen of the country by helping me and my team catch one of the most wanted drug peddlers in the city right now and I’m sure she will become one of the best journalists of the country soon, so I kindly request Miss. Vishaka to come on stage to receive this award” Vishaka gets absolutely delighted on hearing Pritam’s words and quickly gets up. As she walks towards the stage everyone applauds for her. Vishaka was on cloud nine on seeing all the appreciation she had been getting.She walks up the stage and receives the trophy from Pritam’s hands with beaming smile. As she catches the trophy her fingers collide with Pritam’s which produces a wave of emotions in both of them. Both of them could feel their hearts beating fast at that moment. Nitin-Monty look on. After receiving the award as the two pose for photographs, Vishaka whispers, “Thank you for making that dream come true which I thought was lost forever. Frankly, you aren’t that bad as you thought you to be.” Pritam asks, “Well how bad did you think I was” Vishaka replies, “Seeing your reserved behaviour I felt you are one of those angry hot blooded young men but when I saw how loyal you were towards your duty and how much you hated drugs, I realized there is something very common between us.” Pritam lifts his eyebrows questioningly and asks, “Really?” Vishaka replies, “Yes for me my career is my first love and the biggest ambition of my life, nothing was, is or will ever come before that.” Pritam is impressed with Vishaka’s ambitious approach to life and continues to ask, “What about drugs? Why do you hate drugs?”. Vishaka becomes sad in her thoughts says with a sad smile“I am an orphan and I lost my dear ones, my family because they had consumed wrong and poisonous drugs unknowingly. I wish that no-one else should have my same fate” Pritam is struck with wonder after hearing that and unconsciously he was getting pulled more towards Vishaka. After the photographs were taken, Vishaka starts to leave, when Pritam quickly asks,“Coffee?” Vishaka gets surprised, so are Nitin-Monty. Nitin murmurs, “Isn’t our boy progressing too fast with his love story?” Monty, “Really fast and we thought he was an amateur in love when he turned out to be a pro”. Vishaka with a sly smile asks Pritam, “I thought Pritam Chaudhary is allergic to coffee and cafés.” Pritam replies, “When I have a good company to drink coffee, I don’t mind forgetting my allergies.” Vishaka is impressed with his answer yet hides her smile, turns around and smilingly says, “Tomorrow evening at 5:00 same coffee shop” Pritam swings his hand as he got some big victory saying “Ye baat” . Vishaka slowly leaves after saying that, while Pritam turns around and sees Nitin-Monty staring questioningly at him with raised eyebrows. Nitin, “Pritam you need a good company right?” Monty,“Then why don't you drink coffee with us tomorrow?” Pritam blushes at their questions however cleverly chides them saying, “Just look at yourselves in the mirror, seeing your faces will anyone want to drink coffee with you both?” Nitin-Monty get ambushed with Pritam’s reply but before they could say or ask anything else. Pritam shoos them away saying, “Now go quickly and take out the van, we have to reach the station asap” Nitin-Monty still ambushed swing their hands and leave. Pritam too starts to leave yet before that he looks towards Vishaka who had now become into a thin line to his vision and smilingly leaves. On the other side, as Pritam leaves, Vishaka stops at her position, turns around to catch a last glimpse of him and smiles watching him go.

Pritam-Vishaka’s love story had begun to blossom.

Originally posted by: myselfriya

Seeing the recent tracks of zmga on how Pritam is already falling for Amrita and yet to realize his feelings. I got a lot of muddled thoughts in my head with respect to how Pritam will realize his feelings for Amrita and how Amrita will fall in love with Pritam and also realize her feelings. I felt I must write them and share it here:

– Once our little champ arrives which I likely feel is going to be a “baby boy”. I am assuming it will be a boy because Pritam’s first born is a boy and the Sakhujas are expecting their Karan through the baby. Anyhow be it boy or girl, I feel the baby and Pritam will have a strong father-child bond which will surprise all the Sakhujas and most importantly it will undoubtedly surprise Amrita. There Amrita will gradually start seeing the real goodness and kindness in Pritam’s heart and will realize she had been so wrong about him all along. Frankly I really wish it goes in this way with a slow pace for this part because I disliked how the CVs made Amrita turn a 360 when she learnt that Pritam runs a NGO and turned all goody goody to him all of a sudden. Given how rude, arrogant and nosy Amrita has always been to Pritam. I feel it is better if Amrita’s attitude towards Pritam takes a gradual change, not really a sudden change.

– So, when Amrita starts to learn and understand more about the goodness and kindness in Pritam, there will develop a slow “friendship” between AmRitam. I am talking about friendship because I feel friendship is absolutely necessary to develop and produce “love”.

– Obviously even in friendship there will be banters of Amritam and it will be nice with something like Amritam trying to patch up Rangad with the help of Soni, Kabir and also perhaps Reema. When Rangad start with a small banter, Amritam will budge in and try to stop them but start their own banter surprising everyone. Finally, Rangad will say you brought us here to make us patch up first you both have to patch up.

– Then one day Pritam while having beer with Angad-Kabir on terrace, will complain to them on how arrogant and nosy their “bhabhi” always is to him. At that time, Angad-Kabir will tease Pritam saying that he is really scared of their bhabhi. Obviously, Pritam will chide away that comment saying he is not scared of her, when both the brothers will play with him calling out “bhabhi” as if she is standing behind him, which will undoubtedly scare Pritam. Angad and Kabir will laugh at him. Pritam annoyed will scold them and continue complaining about Amrita when she really comes there. Angad-Kabir will motion him but Pritam will say that he is not going to believe them this time which is when Amrita will budge in. Pritam will obviously became a scared puppy in front of Amrita. Angad-Kabir will giggle and slowly make an escape with their beer downstairs, while Nitin-Monty will come upstairs to meet Pritam when Amrita will be confronting Pritam asking when was she nosy, arrogant and rude? That time Pritam will stutter reminding her of all the times she has been really nosy, rude and arrogant to him which will embarrass her. She will quietly leave without replying anything yet giving her usual grudgeful looks at Pritam. Pritam will smile seeing her.

– Once Pritam-Nitin-Monty go to the room, Nitin-Monty will tease Pritam saying he is such a courageous cop in real life yet scared of a girl? Pritam will chide them too saying nothing like that she is something “special” which will shock all the three of them. That will be the moment when Pritam realizes how important Amrita has become in his life. Nitin-Monty too after coming out of their surprise will tell Pritam that he has moved on and changed a lot after meeting Amrita. Before leaving, Nitin-Monty being Pritam’s good friends, will advise him to accept his feelings. After they leave, Pritam will remember all the moments when he got pulled towards Amrita and gradually fell for her. Yet having lost all his loved ones and knowing that Amrita loves Karan even now, Pritam will fear that he will lose Amrita too, so he will decide not to reveal his feelings to her and keep them to himself.

– With respect to Amrita obviously she will start understanding and respecting Pritam more when there starts a “friendship” between them. Pritam after realizing his feelings towards will turn a bit sober again with the memories of losing his loved ones haunting him. Amrita will see the change in Pritam and one fine night without letting anyone notice go to his room and strongly confront him about his change in behaviour. Pritam will not be able to confess his feelings yet out of pain hug her, keep his head on his shoulder and reveal how his lost his family. Amrita will get moved, hug him back and cry along with him without noticing the time. Next morning, Amrita will wake up in Pritam’s room and realize that she dozed off consoling Pritam. She quickly gets up to leave yet before leaving she will look at Pritam sleeping peacefully, smile at him and rub his head before turning to leave. Once Amrita reaches her room, she looks at her mirror, sees her bindi and smiles thinking about Pritam. Just then her eyes fall on Karan’s photo kept behind and realizes that she has developed feelings for Pritam. On realizing her feelings, Amrita will feel that she is cheating Karan and decide to fight her feelings for Pritam which will make her start avoiding Pritam and fight with him every time when he tries to talk to her. Pritam will obviously be surprised and disappointed and ask her again and again what wrong did he do?

– So, there will be a rift between Amritam with both having issues with their feelings for the other. Pritam trying to hide his feelings while Amrita trying to fight her feelings.

– Obviously when both can’t easily talk out their feelings there should be someone who should push them do that. Consequently, at that moment, Vishaka will re-enter Pritam’s life which will make Amrita jealous and helpless being not able to fight her feelings, while Pritam in an effort to distance himself from Vishaka becomes helpless unable to hide his feelings towards Amrita. Finally, both ladies will start fighting with each other with Pritam stuck in the middle, where he will be left thinking, “Are all women in the world same or the items in my life special?”

These were some random thoughts on the storyline which popped in my head when I was watching the current track.

@myselfriya

You have penned it so well.

You're command over English is stupendous. ⭐️

- This time I'm not really going to post here suggestions/ideas but rather stories/tracks which are of "Pritam-Vishaka", "Rangad (Angad-Meera)" and "Kabirima (Kabir-Rima)".

- Each of the pair tracks are divided into three parts which will depict three phases in their lives.

- I will give an "introduction" on the three parts before writing the tracks here.

- I know many people won't be interested in the tracks of these pairs because they are neither leads except for Pritam nor main couple although "Angad-Meera-Kabir" are also "parallel leads".

- I have come across many fans screaming out we want to see only main lead track in many shows and also in this show which in this case is Amritam. Imo, it is a very "strange witless demand".

- Imo, every character has it's own significance and needs a proper track atleast a "small one". It's like saying every flavor be is "salt, sweet, bitter, sour gives a different aroma to the food to make it special" same is the role of "every character" in a show in particular if it is a "family show" as zmga.

- Which is why I am writing tracks for these three pairs using my imagination and also a few real life incidents I have seen. (in case of "Rangad" and "Kabirima" tracks)

Request to the CVs

- Before posting my stories/tracks, I'm writing this here because I don't know why I have a very deep gut feeling that the CVs have made the whole delivery week drama using the suggestions I had put here.

- I'm not trying to accuse anyone because frankly, I had put them only for the CVs to use it.

- Yet, imo, the way CVs used it was really very "disappointing" atleast for me it was. I don't know how to say perhaps like this , "Aap logon ne mere ideas/suggestions ke bahuteen waiyaad dajiya uda diya"

- I mean I have a lot emotions attached to each and every suggestion/ideas/stories/tracks I write here. Imo, a part of me lives in them and frankly, I'm a person who really hates the "disgraceful" methods of ITV among which I dislike the most "the flaunting of FLs"

- And that's what hurt me the most, the CVs used my ideas to execute the method of "flaunting the FL". To be very honest, the way my "idea" got executed in the show was absolutely "off-putting".

- Frankly, ITV has "very wrong conception of strong women". Imo, strong women are not at all like Amrita. Someone who abuses, torchers and turns violent on a stranger man all because she cannot do it on any of her family member and has to show off that she is great in front of them. Imo, this sort of attitude is called "using someone" and not the "strong" yet the "weakest human beings" depict such attitude.

- Imo "feminism" is not about "doing all the evil/abusive/violent things to men which they once did or are doing to the women". Neither is "feminism" about "women" becoming very "superior controlling and suppressing the men with men acting absolutely submissive" because that is what is happening between Amritam here. Amrita is being "over-superior" over Pritam and Pritam being "over-submissive" in front of Amrita.

- Frankly, I don't understand why is ITV trying to promote such wrong concepts because it is happening in every other show atleast for the past 4-5 years. If "business" and "trps" are the only answers then I have nothing to say.

- My only request is I'm again writing few stories/suggestions. I know I'm nothing or not even equal to the dust under the feet of any CVs yet if it is "my ideas" then it is a humble request in other words "main haath jodkar 🙏 winti karti hoon" Please do not twist my "ideas/suggestions" into the "dirty ITV manner."

- I have absolutely no issues if you completely copy-paste them into the show yet please do not "twist them in the wrong manner" please. If you are feeling that I will come and ask for credits, name, fame whatever for copy-pasting them then I promise you can have my word I won't ask anything. If there is some other issue with "copy-pasting" them then "don't twist them also". Let them just stay in the posts here. I'm more than happy if someone just reads them.

- So again I am requesting don't use my ideas in a wrong ITV manner. I'm saying this because I'm going to also add a track of "Kabir-Meera-Angad-Rima" here and according to my ITV knowledge since you want Kabir-Meera pair to be justified no matter what, you will make Angad grey at first and then a complete vamp.

- I have no issues with what you do in "your show" because it's your show, you can do whatever you wish yet please don't take any track ideas of "Rangad" & "Kabirima" story/suggestions I write here and twist it in the "dirty ITV way" to do that. I wholeheartedly am requesting again and again because the "Rangad" and "Kabirima" track I'm going to post although is written in a fictional manner yet is based on "real life stories of real people I have lived with and it has a very close place in my heart". Also please don't try to twist the Pritam-Vishaka story track too in the "dirty ITV way" to create your Amritam track or whichever track.

- Believe me, you people are the "kings" and "queens" in ITV which is why you are the "CVs" . Although, I disagree with many thing shown, I truly value the hardwork and efforts put in by the CVs be it any show. Imo, that's what's is making them "kings"/"queens" and the "CVs" in ITV. I'm nothing but just a "viewer". I'm sure you won't need any help from an insignificant ITV viewer like me yet I don't know why after seeing that "delivery track" I have a very strong gut feeling it was twisted from my idea. Frankly, I had written that track as a "comedy track" but it was twisted and made into a "tragedy track" with a very wrong message. On a serious note, comedies brings a smile to your face and make you feel light which is positive while tragic dramas depresses and frustrates you which is absolutely negative

- I strongly feel that being writers, you will understand the emotions being put in someone's writing. So please try to understand this request of mine and do not twist any ideas or suggestions given here for gaining trps or executing any disgraceful ITV tracks. "This is my most humble request from the bottom of my heart."

Pritam-Vishaka Love Story

Introduction

Part 1:

It has the beginnings of their love story: How the two met, get to know about each other and finally fell in love

(P.S. I have posted this part in the 4th post of this thread, please check the post below Ramona.G's post in this page for this part)

Part 2:

It will show how the love story progressed to marriage and Rahul’s birth yet they fallout because of misunderstandings.

Part 3:

This part will have the incidents post Rahul's death which I mentioned in the first post here. Vishaka now in a mental hospital will have a redemption after her son's death and Pritam's sympathy for her condition.

I'll read ek do din baad! 🤗

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

I'll read ek do din baad! 🤗

- No issues @Neha. Frankly, I would say you need not read at all if you are not interested which is why I tagged people only in the introduction of the stories and not the stories itself, if you feel interested after reading the intro, then you read otherwise leave it, don't feel pressurized at all to read if you don't wish to.

- Also, don't feel pressurized to like every part of the story and comment for them because I'm not really someone who believes in being showered with likes and comments for my stories. It was more than enough that you gave your words of encouragement. That was really sweet of you.

- I also know that I write very long essays which many people don't have the patience to read and the stories I'm writing are on the side-couples not the main couple, so obviously many people won't have interest in them.

- So don't worry at all of reading my stories. Read them only if you wish to.