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A/N : The title is inspired from the vaults song : one last night from fifty shades of grey. Do hear it.
Hi peeps! I'm new here though I've been a silent reader for a while.
I'm a total mad shaheer fan and I'm here for him.
Well i hope that you guys can tell me what you feel about this piece.

PROLOGUE

Morning rays crept in. Something about the atmosphere was giddy, overwhelming.
Mishti stirred in her slumber.
She felt peaceful. For once she slept contently.
Sun shone from the window, but
she was reluctant to open her eyes.
She felt giddy yet a little tired . . . like she's been exercising the whole day.
And hell her head was feeling so heavy, like someone attacked it with a hammer.
Suddenly she felt something warm over her.
Mishti sighed heavily, relishing the feeling of the mild heat of the soft blanket. Mishti thanked the hotel in a heartbeat for the heavenly blanket. On an impulse she tried to pull the blanket but it felt something weird to her. Soon she felt tightened by a strong grip and Mishti jolted.
She opened her eyes and sensed someone's hand curling her from behind again and realization struck her. A man was engulfing her with his humongous arms. Mishti tried to recall what happened last night but nothing came to her. She panicked when she sensed she was naked.
Crazy thoughts ran through her mind when she finally decided to woman up and face the stranger she probably slept with last night.
She turned around and was shocked to see Abeer.
Suddenly, things got a lot more complicated.

This is actually the prologue of my old story in two different forums which i wrote through my old id. If anyone has any doubts please pm me. I'm writing my own story again and not copying anyone. Hope i made that clear.
Thank you.


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So far so good, I'm intrigued. This was really well written
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Interesting! Please do continue..
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Nice concept👏
Continue soon😊
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please please update this. i really want to read!!

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Interesting concept

Update soonish

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Loved it. Please write more. waiting what happens next

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Awesome ff..plz update soon..

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That’s super complicated. Waiting for more!

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Please write part 2 soon. Cannot wiat to read what happens next. Its so good to see fanfictions on Mishbir finally. Loving all of them

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