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Masoom (The Innocent) Part 1

I dedicate this SS to my dearest friend Salley who wanted me to write a RuSha SS with Ruhi,Saransh and Sunny taking inspiration from the movies Masoom and Olangal(Malayalam).

Thank you ExoticDisaster for the lovely cover page.




A man is tying his little daughter's hair.

She:Papa...please tie my hair fast.I have to go to school.

He:I am doing it beta.I am not used to tying your hair.So I will take some time.

Slowly he tied her hair in 2 plats.

She looked at the mirror and was shocked to see how badly her hair was tied up by her father.She screamed.Hearing her scream,he also screamed.

She:Why are you screaming papa?

He:You screamed.So I got scared.Why did you scream?

She:I screamed,because I got scared seeing my own look.Horrible hairstyle.I can tie my hair by myself better than you papa.

He was embarrassed:Sorry beta.

She:I have a punishment for you.You should tie your hair and put make up like a girl.Only then I will forgive you.

He:Ok.

He was Rudraksh and she was Ruhi.


Rudraksh went out of the room.Ruhi started combing her hair.

Rudraksh tied his hair and put make up.Then he went near Ruhi.

Rudraksh:Ruhi...please look at me.

Ruhi:No.

Rudraksh:You promised me that you will forgive me if I dress up like this.Please atleast look at me.

Ruhi looked at him.She burst into laughter.

Ruhi:You look so funny papa.

Rudraksh smiled shyly.Ruhi's elder brother Saransh came.

Seeing Rudraksh like this,he also laughed.The trio hugged together.



Rudraksh was ironing Saransh's uniform.

Saransh:Papa,please be fast.

Rudraksh:Yes,I am doing it fast.

Rudraksh murmured:If Preesha is not here,it's so difficult to manage.



In the evening their mother Preesha came to pick them up from the school.

Saransh:Mumma,why did you leave so early in the morning?

Ruhi:Papa was so slow that we were late in getting ready to go to school.

Preesha:Sorry children.Mumma had an emergency case in the morning.So I had to leave early.But I came to pick you both from the school.Right?And papa tried his best to help you both.So you both should appreciate his effort.

They both smiled.



Preesha and children reached home.

After some time Rudraksh reached home.Seeing Preesha in the room his face blossomed.


huzuur is kadar bhii na itaraa ke chaliye

khule aam aa.Nchal na laharaa ke chaliye (2)


Rudraksh:Preesha!Thank God! You are back.Without you,I was struggling hard to manage the kids.Every minute they both were complaining.

Preesha giggled.

Preesha:I know.They told me.

He smiled.

Rudraksh:Seriously without you,I am nothing.I can't manage anything without you.



koI manachalaa gar paka.D legaa aa.Nchal

zaraa sochiye aap kyaa kiijiyegaa

lagaa de.n agar ba.Dhake zulfo.n me.n kaliyaa.N

to kyaa apanii zulfe.n jhaTak diijiyegaa

huzuur is kadar bhii na itaraa ke chaliye.(Masoom).



Preesha:But what to do?I can't be always at home with you as I am a doctor.

Rudraksh:I know that.Still...

Preesha:By the way,our kids want to go for a picnic on weekend.

Rudraksh:Let us plan a picnic.

She smiled.

Rudraksh,Preesha,Ruhi and Saransh were travelling to the picnic spot in the car.Ruhi hugged him from the back as she and Saransh were on the backseat.

Preesha:Ruhi...while driving you should not disturb papa.

Rudraksh:My daughter is expressing her love.How can it be a disturbance?

Preesha:Rudra,but you have to concentrate on driving.There should not be any kind of interruption.

Ruhi:Ok mumma.

Ruhi sat on her seat.


The trio enjoyed a lot on the picnic spot.



Rudraksh got a phone call while working on the laptop.

"Rudraksh Khurana".

Rudraksh:Yes.

"I want to meet you.It's urgent".

Rudraksh:But who are you?

"I am Reema's father".

Rudraksh thought:Reema was my colleague before.Why does her father want to meet me?

Rudraksh went to meet Reema's father Alok in his house.He was bedridden.

Rudraksh:Uncle,why did you call me?

Alok:I am in my last days.My end is near.So I have a request.

Rudraksh:What request?

Alok said something which shocked Rudraksh.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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thank you for the pm

Congrats on the new story


Part 1

Amazing update... greatly written

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I have heard a lot about the movie Masoom...so excited to see what happens in the story

Hope he doesnt have to marry Reema

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Ruhi's hairstyle was funny. Rudraksh looks so funny, nice family moment. Where's Preesha? Oh she had gone due to an emergency. Rudra saying he's nothing without Preesha was lovely. Ruhi hugging Rudra was cute, Preesha's right, there shall be no disturbance. Wonder what Alok said. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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Thanks a lot.But my story is different from the movie.


Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

I have heard a lot about the movie Masoom...so excited to see what happens in the story

Hope he doesnt have to marry Reema

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Very beautiful 😍 start

Just amazing 🤩

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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wow a ff on rusha


interesting

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Part 1

Amazing and Curious Update

Would Rudraksh have to marry Reema in the future

as her father is dying while Rudraksh is alone with his daughter

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Rudraksh is not alone with his daughter.He is living with his wife and children.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 1

Amazing and Curious Update

Would Rudraksh have to marry Reema in the future

as her father is dying while Rudraksh is alone with his daughter

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Thank you so much for the lovely comments.



Masoom (The Innocent)Part 2

Rudraksh got a phone call while working on the laptop.

"Rudraksh Khurana".

Rudraksh:Yes.

"I want to meet you.It's urgent".

Rudraksh:But who are you?

"I am Reema's father".

Rudraksh thought:Reema was my colleague before.Why does her father want to meet me?



Rudraksh went to meet Reema's father Alok in his house.He was bedridden.

Rudraksh:Uncle,why did you call me?

Alok:I am in my last days.My end is near.So I have a request.

Rudraksh:What request?

Alok:Please take care of my grandson Sunny.

Rudraksh was stunned:What?But why are you asking me to take care of him?

Alok:Because Sunny is your son.

Rudraksh was shocked:What?How can Sunny be my son?

Alok:Do you remember the night party you and Reema attended along with your other colleagues?

Rudraksh:Yes.

Alok:You all were drugged.

Rudraksh:Yes.We found out that the next day.Some drug dealers cheated on us and gave us intoxicated drinks at the party without our knowledge.We complained to the police and they got arrested.

Alok:That night you and Reema spend time together in the intoxicated state and Reema got pregnant.

Rudraksh was shocked.

Rudraksh:What are you saying?

Alok:I am saying the truth.Reema did not want to tell you anything as you both did it unknowingly.That's why Reema resigned her job.Reema delivered a baby boy.She married the person she loved.But he did not accept her son Sunny.For a peaceful married life,Reema left Sunny with me and left for US.I don't know for how many days I will live as I am really sick.I have only you to entrust Sunny with with confidence.Because you are his father.

Rudraksh was shocked to the core.

Alok:It is my request.Otherwise Sunny will be alone and he will have to live in the orphanage.

Rudraksh became upset.




Rudraksh was thinking of Alok's words at home.

He was worried.

Rudraksh thought:How will I tell this to Preesha?How will she react?

Preesha went near him.

Preesha:What happened Rudra?Why do you look upset?

Rudraksh:Some work related tensions.It's okay.I will be alright.

Preesha:Ok Rudra.But don't take too much of strain.It will affect your health.I am really worried about your workaholic nature.

Rudraksh:Don't worry Preesha.I am alright.

Preesha:Are you sure?

Rudraksh:Yes.

Preesha was relieved.

Rudraksh thought:Preesha loves me so much.How will she bear it if she comes to know about her husband's one night stand and the illegitimate son?

Rudraksh was going crazy.




Rudraksh got a phone call from Alok's servant that he is no more.Rudraksh was shocked.

He went for the funeral.He went near Reema.Reema was in tears.She was shocked to see Rudraksh.

Without her husband's knowledge she took Rudraksh to a room.

Reema:Rudraksh,if my husband comes to know that you are the one with whom I produced a child,he will get angry.He will doubt that we are having affair.

Rudraksh was shocked:What?

Reema:Papa told me everything.Will you be taking Sunny's responsibility?

Rudraksh:Are you sure that I am the father of your son?

Reema:Yes Rudraksh.When I woke up from the bed,I saw you beside me.

Rudraksh felt upset.

Reema:You maybe thinking what kind of a mother I am to desert my own son.But to save my marriage,I have no other option Rudraksh.I have not even told Sunny that I am his mother.My dad lied to him that his mother is no more.Sunny thinks that I am his mother's sister.So he calls me Maasi.

Rudraksh:But why did'nt you tell me about it when you got pregnant?

Reema:How can I tell you when we both were never a couple?Our one night stand was just a mistake.It was under the effects of drugs.And I was in love with my boyfriend who is my husband now.

Rudraksh:But my married life will get affected.Right?My wife will divorce me.I can't imagine a life without her.

Reema:Please Rudraksh...I request you.

Rudraksh went out of the room silently.Suddenly he saw Sunny crying.He felt sad.

He went near him.

Rudraksh:Beta....

Sunny looked at him tearfully.

Rudraksh:Don't cry.

Sunny wept:I have no one now.

Rudraksh hugged him tearfully.

(Thank you Salley for the edit).


Rudraksh went back home.He sat near Preesha.

Preesha:Where were you?

Rudraksh:I had gone for a funeral.

Preesha:Whose funeral?

Rudraksh told her everything.Preesha was shocked.





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