Samaina SS : Jeevansathi Hum( note on pg 41) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Prerana167099

Beautiful do continue

Originally posted by: Samaina_loverzz

Yes dear Plzz continue soon Its an different concept with excited twists... Plzz do continue and let me know via PM plzz pm me whenever uploading/updating it...

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Suman or as I call my Meena 🤗

You know how difficult is to remain unbiased while reviewing one of closest's person's work.Tough job literally. A feeling of biased appreciations and 'apni hi dhun mein' types of words flow.Not many many agree but thats the truth in reviewing world..And I shall try not to fall in that category.

Will try giving a feedback solely based on this update and not mingle our off forum personal rapport and bonds.Hope I succeed 😆

First things first.I give you a standing ovation for the courageous writer you are.With shaadi track of leads on screen,you had the enormous audacity and volumnious courage to show Naina in love with Rohan and going to get married to him also.That was such an unanticipated move...In a moment you threw all of Samaina lovers off balance.

And My! My! The writing had such grip that still it enchants,pulls and prods the reader to read even if the leads are not romancing or busy flirting.Forget romance,they are no where close to each other physically or emotionally.

Meena! I am so cross with you.Ek to you don't write often but when you write with such an intriguing premise,why in TS/FS only.I demand a full fledged FF out of it.May be you can gift me my birthday gift again by turning it into FF.😳

Yes,coming back to the update..I loved each and every scene you have conjured and have put into words and dialogues.You showed no matter what none can beat you when it comes to writing dialogues,mostly of 'dhona'.Taiji's dialogues were lit..I could easily imagine her spewing the venom.All claps for you.👏

And when I thought that you have bowled all of us with a googly,you now came with another swing ball to bold us out again.Sameer and Sunaina..Sameer in depression because of betrayal of Sunaina..There is surely more to this than it meets the eye.And I am waiting with bated breaths for unraveling of the back story.Needlessly,I can say that you are indeed courageous to explore the relationships in such unusual dynamics.👏

And Rohan is such a sweetheart here..Does not want to go without his bro.That was such a heart warming scene.And Naina is another sweetheart here.She is ready to wait.I am loving the character portrayals.This is another reason I want this to be a FF..I want to drown in all feels..☺️

And special mention to the shayaris.. As you have given credits to the original writers,my revered respect and appreciations to the great poetic minds behind these.How beautifully the words have been strung...Best words in best order literally.

But this doesnot take away the brownie points you are receiving.You found the scene and moment to insert them appropriately.Sameer and Shayari is such a nostalgia hitting hard.I love your thought of bringing Sameer's dil ki haal through shayaris...More shayaris on way and I am keen to note down each of them..

The suspense is killing me,there is excitement and anxiety entailed along.And thats the reason I want you to update it soon.I know you are keeping busy,but yeh dil maange more..

And last but not the least Happy Valentine's Day Darling.❤️

Thank you for the PM and keep coming with your best.

With love-

Minu

Originally posted by: doublecross

Am intrigued actually, the concept is quite different! Especially the fact that naina and rohan are a couple and sameer is pyaar mein pagal Devdas, jilted by sunaina, is quite interesting. As a staunch samaina lover it is a bit disappointing for me since am not a big fan of sunaina yet I love the way you have presented the entire plot, giving away a few while keeping in a lot under wraps. My antennas are on high alert and I'll be checking this thread out often to check for updates.

Am glad that you penned this since the forum needs positive and talented people like you to be around and since you are master story teller am sure we are in for some ride since usually your stories are the ones I often love reading. This too shall be one of the best.

Will be waiting for more

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Intriguing start

Looking forward to read more.

I loved your dialogues description

Originally posted by: dhk2311

It's quite different concept... Would love to know more.

What all twists n turns are thr ahead.

Looking forward for next update.

Love DK.

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Suman, first of all a big bow to you dear for this beautiful and gutsy start! The flow, language, dialogues are all beautiful! But as a writer what really blew me away is the conviction with which you have started exploring a storyline so seemingly out of the box.

Yaar, since I read this part, my mind as been buzzing with so many ideas about how this could proceed and am eagerly waiting to find out if any of them turn out right. And that is exactly how you want the readers to feel.

Coming to this specific part, I am pleased to see the equations between Sameer-Rohan and Sameer-Vishakha are more than amicable. And seeing a Vishakha who doesn't let Vivek put down her son at every turn is so refreshing!

Sameer is obviously messed up. Sunaina naam deke tumne ensure kiya ke instantly uss koi pasand nahi karega and that there is no chance of redemption of that character!



Naina seems to have genuine feelings for Rohan... that is a very interesting start. And Rohan seems to be a genuinely nice person too.. so inki story mein kya twist aa sakta hai?!


Lastly, I would like to add that your style of writing has also evolved since the last piece I read from you. Great going dear 👏 And best of luck with this FF

And please don't make us wait a lot for the next part! 😊

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Dekh behen.. Tune mujhe bohot curious kr diya h isse.. Ab jaldi se agla chapter de de

Originally posted by: Labhya

Wait what???? Itna different concept!!!!!!

Curiosity ka level high kr diya hai ...ab to phata phat Dharti phaad update ka intezaar hai hame...

Do update sooon