Suman, first of all a big bow to you dear for this beautiful and gutsy start! The flow, language, dialogues are all beautiful! But as a writer what really blew me away is the conviction with which you have started exploring a storyline so seemingly out of the box.
Yaar, since I read this part, my mind as been buzzing with so many ideas about how this could proceed and am eagerly waiting to find out if any of them turn out right. And that is exactly how you want the readers to feel.
Coming to this specific part, I am pleased to see the equations between Sameer-Rohan and Sameer-Vishakha are more than amicable. And seeing a Vishakha who doesn't let Vivek put down her son at every turn is so refreshing!
Sameer is obviously messed up. Sunaina naam deke tumne ensure kiya ke instantly uss koi pasand nahi karega and that there is no chance of redemption of that character!
Naina seems to have genuine feelings for Rohan... that is a very interesting start. And Rohan seems to be a genuinely nice person too.. so inki story mein kya twist aa sakta hai?!
Lastly, I would like to add that your style of writing has also evolved since the last piece I read from you. Great going dear 👏 And best of luck with this FF
And please don't make us wait a lot for the next part! 😊
Edited by SixteenAgain - 5 years ago
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