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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mannu the angry bull!!! LOL 🤣
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Originally posted by: Meghateresa

Mannu the angry bull!!! LOL 🤣

He was one when he was a kid. I mean he used to get angry easily. When he was kid before he knew his truth
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Chapter 9

"I hate you!!" Preet yelled at her cousin throwing pillows at her.

"Shhh..Preet, they will hear us" Neha chortled dodging the pillows

Both of them were at the Pahuja residents. In Mumbai!! And it's all cause," It's all cause of you Neha" Preet whined and sat on the bed. Three days before the Pahuja had informed Amba that they had to attend a wedding of an important client; who was also one of Mrs. Pahuja' close friend in Mumbai. During that Mr. Pahuja also received an Anonymous letter from the same -mysterious- lady.So, they all decided one of them will find out about this mysterious lady and the other will keep an eye on the Wedding planner, Rajveer.

Manu took the initiative, to find out about the lady and Sukhi also joined him. He had overheard Mrs. Pahuja conversation with his Mother that she was looking for a Wedding planner to help her friends in the wedding. So Manu and Sukhi went in disguise of a Wedding planner. While Lakhan and Tej spied on Rajveer and the rest of the Bajwas. Everything was going according to plan until now.

"Oh, Come on! It will be fun. We can't let the boys do all the good work and to take the credit for themselves. Besides, we were the one who came up with these ideas in the first place" Neha giggled, grinning cheekily at her cousin.

"But, why did you have to drag me into this" Preet groaned " By now, Papa Ji and Tauji must have already found out that we are not at home or at the village. Rabji ab kya hoga!"

" Don't worry, Preet. Hamre bhai kab kam ayenge? They will handle it " She winked at Preet and lay down on the bed.
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"Where is Preet and Neha?" Balwinder demanded. Tej and Lakhan quietly stood in front of their father, head bowed down, they looked like two kids caught in their mischief and were getting scolded by their parents.

Lakhan nudged Tej with his elbow and asked in a whisper,"Say something. Why aren't you saying anything? You will get both of us in trouble."

" Why me? Why aren't you saying anything!?" Tej bickered

" You are the eldest."

"Oh,so now I'm the eldest. You didn't think that back when sending them out at the market. You didn't even bother to tell me about the Rajveer?!"

"Seriously, you are arguing about that now! Even if I had informed you about it, would have taken it calmly. No! Aap Saand ki taraha mujpar tutth padte !"

" How dare you call me a bull! Mein Saand dikta hu kya tumhe! Cause you they also started to sneak out of the house. Meri dono bholi bhali behno ko begad diya tumne!"

"Excuse me!!"

"Band karo apni kusur-pusur" Balwinder roared at his sons. Both of them immediately stopped there fight. "Tej! Answer me. Where are both of my daughters"

"Why me?" Tej groaned.

"Answer me!"

" They are with Manu!" Tej replied honestly.

'Satyanash.' Lakhan face palmed.

Balwinder stood went quiet for a moment, looking astonished. " With Shah Ji. But Shah Ji is at...Preet and Neha are in Mumbai!!"
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" Why different rooms "Sukhi a.k.a. Bartaj asked Mrs. Pahuja worriedly.

" Now, you can't stay in the same room with a married couple.

"Parchai ji can sleep with my sister..."

" If it's space your are worried about, then worry not. Our mansion has a lot of room. And can contain double time the guest that we have now." Mrs. Pahuja touted, proudly.

Manu just quietly watched as his cousin struggled with the argument. Mannu was astounded to find Preet in the Pahuja Haveli if he can call it that. The place was huge like a castle and was triple the size of his own Haveli. And Aman sleazy friends irk him the most, trying to flirt with Preet. When they question his relationship with her Manu rifled the first thing that came into his mind

"She is my wife damn it! Stay away from her!" He yelled at them, which was quite effective as they backed off quickly. Manu sighed "At least those sleazy bas***ds will stay away from her." He mused rubbing the back of his neck.

"Sartaj Ji" Manu came out of his thought and looked at her. " You and Sohani Ji, both can stay in here." Mrs. Pahuja said cheerfully.

Manu thanked her and gently lead Preet inside the room who had covered her face with a veil. Preet removed her veil when she heard Manu shutting the door. She looked at him worriedly.



Edited by rani7131 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh my god they're staying together? Maybe they can say that Neha is scared to sleep alone at a strange place so Preet can stay with her!!! Poor Preet... Maan Singh will kill her if he knows...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meghateresa

Oh my god they're staying together? Maybe they can say that Neha is scared to sleep alone at a strange place so Preet can stay with her!!! Poor Preet... Maan Singh will kill her if he knows...

Lol don't worry. Maan Singh will know nothing about it. 😆. He not a cruel father. He is a protective father who loves his daughter tenderly.

I tried my best to make this a funny chapter but I failed badly 🤣.How do you make funny chapter so easily? Can you give me some tips?
Yesterday I forgot to update, so today I updated two chapters just for you. 😳. Hope you liked it. I'm going to sleep now, feeling kinda down as my Shark Week has started 😭
Edited by rani7131 - 6 years ago
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Preeti di... Can you please stop mentioning Preet as Mannu's friend all the time... She has an identity of her own... It's as if you are trying desperately to prove that they are only friends... Relax...we get it! Instead of saying that they were flirting with his friend you can say they were flirting with Preet... Mannu should be thinking of her as Preet not his friend... Okay, she's his friend but who refers to their friend as 'friend' even when they are thinking? We always use name right? It is kind of weird that Mannu is referring to her without the usage of name... I hope I haven't offended you... It is just the suggestion of a friend!!! 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meghateresa

Preeti di... Can you please stop mentioning Preet as Mannu's friend all the time... She has an identity of her own... It's as if you are trying desperately to prove that they are only friends... Relax...we get it! Instead of saying that they were flirting with his friend you can say they were flirting with Preet... Mannu should be thinking of her as Preet not his friend... Okay, she's his friend but who refers to their friend as 'friend' even when they are thinking? We always use name right? It is kind of weird that Mannu is referring to her without the usage of name... I hope I haven't offended you... It is just the suggestion of a friend!!! 😳

What are you saying? I wrote Preet not friend. Wait let me check.
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I'm so sorry!!!. I was sure that I wrote Preet. Stupid phone. I'll correct it right away.
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Corrected!! I'll check the other chapter now. Next time I'll double check before posting.
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Chapter 10.

In the Pahuja House

Manu sighed, rubbing the back of his neck nervously and looked up at Preet. Preet was sitting on the bed, looking around the room. Both of them were uncomfortable, especially Preet; which was quite understandable as she has never been with a stranger in an enclosed room. Of course she knew Manu, but that still didn't help. Maan Singh and Balvinder only allowed her to meet Manu on their or her cousins' presence. 'Quite typical of them.' Manu thought, leaning back against the chair. Manu came out of thought when he heard his phone ring. Without looking at the ID he answered the call.

" Are you out of your mind." Amba yelled through the other end.

"Mummy Ji" Manu almost immediately stood up from the chair, getting Preet attention. Before Manu could even get a word out. Amba yelled at him again.

" Why did you take those two girls; from Pava house, with you in Mumbai?! How many people do you need to sell a plot. You already have Sukhi" she went on.There was a momentarily pause, after which Amba said again, this time in a suspicious tone " Have you went there to work or to entertain yourself with those girls',"


" Mummy, what are you saying!" Manu exclaimed, shocked. He never expected that his mother would think, that he called Preet and Neha to. God! "You're getting it all wrong. I only called Preet to help me with the paper work. She used to help me in Gaguwal as well. Remember how she helped me out to sell the land in Gaguwal to that guy from Delhi."

" You sure.." Amba asked, sounding suspicious.

"Trust me. That's the only reason I called her here and asked to bring Neha, along to keep her company."Manu lied. He quickly covered his mouth to stop the hiccups

"Ok. Fine. Finish the work there and come quickly. We have to do a lot of preparation for Gunjan wedding." With that Amba ended the call.

Manu removed his hand from his mouth and started hiccuping loudly. Seeing this, Preet quickly handed him a glass of water, which he gulped down in a breath.

" Is everything ok " Preet asked, concerned. Manu just nodded in reply, sitting down in the chair after his fit; of hiccups has subsided. He looked up, and as soon as he did his gaze met with Preets' worried one. He remembered Amba's words and almost suddenly, Manu felt his face heat up. He quickly averted his gaze from her. Manu jumped when he felt Preets' hand on his shoulder.

"Everything will be fine" Preet said in a soothing tone. Not trusting his voice Manu just nodded, shifting uncomfortably. 'What should I do?' Manu thought.


Edited by rani7131 - 6 years ago
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