Sukor TS: Hold on to me, new part up on pg 3

Hello everyone I'm back with a Sukor TS 😄 Here's the sneak peak

Hold on to me

Before moving to the story I have a very simple question to you all

Whom would you choose as life partner... A perfect person or an imperfect one ? 🤔

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Tough isn't it?

Its said U fall for someone whom u think makes your life perfect... The ideal one who stands by you no matter what!

I say love is not finding a perfect person.... It's finding a imperfect person who craves to make everything perfect just for u... Bcz u hold a special place in their heart

What happens when two imperfect individuals cross each other paths?

Would love mend its way to their hearts? 🥺

Can they find solace in each other's arms?

Are they destined for each other?

Or is it a perfect plan by someone not so perfect 😈

If u like it Plz do comment sharing your views 🙂

Hi good to see you back

Interesting... Go ahead

Request complete your other story too👍

Interesting concept. Looking forward to the story.

I agree with you, for me perfection is an illusion and seeking it in others or in life stops us from living life to the fullest.

Any relationship should have balance, two people ready to adapt to each other, I may not be the perfect person to my perfect person, so it isn't finding the best, it's about understanding and feeling comfortable and safe.

Originally posted by: Krupy

I believe there's nothing such as perfection when it comes to human nature.. that's why this sneak peak makes me eager to read the story.

That's true... There's no perfect person.... Everyone have flaws..... It's our trust on the other person that makes us believe they are perfect being imperfect

Also am posting for the first time on new version of IF. That's how much this post (the title ❤️) made me happy. 

Thank you so much I'm so glad that I'm going bonkers knowing it 😊 I feel my work is worth it when it makes someone smiles reading it ....... It really really means a lot to me :)

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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Hi good to see you back

Same here🤗

it feels so good reading from u dear

Interesting... Go ahead

Thank you so much for the support

Request complete your other story too👍

It's currently on hold.. I will let you know about it sooner

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Hello everyone here's the first chapter :)

Part 1:

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"Love is not finding a perfect person.... It's seeing a imperfect person perfect
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Kolkata's top rated company "K&B chain of Industries" had taken a 300 crores turn over early this year,well it's not surprising considering the fact that the leading lady is Chakor Lal the only heir of late Chairman Mr. Bhuvan Lal who invested every single minute of her life building this powerful empire which earns millions every year

Unlike her father she's a cold women,she is egoistic, dominating and a moody person....Just a mere thought of her gives nightmares to her employees, people say she turned arrogant because of the new found prestige,no that's not true.... It's apparently because she hates the outer world with a passion after losing her father.

Unlike every other day K&B's most trusted employee Mr. Chagan is looking so worried

Chagan: "Mr. Rawat...Have u seen my red file around which I brought from branch 2.....hoity-toity is goona review it today.....what am I supposed to tell her, she can be here any time soon" 😖

(chakor is popularly known as "hoity-toity" among her employees😂)

Adi: "Well i have no idea about it.....however I can understand what u are going through,I rather advise you start searching for another job "

Chagan: "That's so mean of you Mr. Rawat... I need to figure a way out"

Adi: "Ab daak baba bhi kuch nahi karsakte, look who's here"

Obviously it's chakor!!!!!

Chagan:"Oh noooooo"

Adi:"Good Morning Ms. Lal"

Chagan: "Good..Good Morn...inggg Ms. Lal", he said hesitantly

Hoity-Toity smelled something fishy with chagan

Chakor: "Are U alright Mr. Chagan?" She asked

Chagan:"yes mam, all good" he started sweating

Chakor:" Meet me in my cabin, I need to review the file"

Chagan:" Mam... I... I need some time....the thing is..."

She cuts him off saying "Oh really! How much time u supposedly need Mr.chagan ?Umm A day, no a month....no no u are actually so talented ...U need an year right...don't you? Needless I will fix the appointment with Mr. Sudesh the later year...... In the mean time lets enjoy watching the self-destruction of our company with a popcorn and you...you people are free to join us " She said pointing the staff

Chagan:" I didn't mean it mam... I can explain"

Chakor: "Don't you dare utter another word Mr. Chagan, u are fired...... I just hate irresponsible bugs like u...........Out!!! " Her voice echoed in the office making the chills run through the spine of every employee

Feeling humiliated chagan silently took his belongings, leaving his Id on his table and stepped out without looking back

Chakor: "Tina, Tina!!"

Tina is chakor's childhood friend whom she trusts more than herself, Tina is her secratory and the ultimate saviour

Tina:"Coming babes" She came hurriedly from her cabin
Chakor gave her a *how-dare-u-call-me-babes-in-public* Look

Tina bit her tongue and said: "yes Ms. Lal"

Chakor:"Tina just fix whatever the mess created by Mr. Chagan and make sure we impress Mr.Sudesh pandey...okay"

Tina:"Trust me, I will handle it Ms.Lal" assured tina

Chakor : "And u Mr.Rawat.... As Mr. Chagan is out of the picture u will be leading branch ||....I hope u will not disappoint me"

Saying so She rushed to her cabin leaving a shocked Adi behind

Soon the news of chagan's dismiss spread like a fire to all the branches expect........ Branch 2
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Branch 2

There is a huge crowd surrounding table 5........regards the arm wrestling match held between the marketing manager and project manager

Girls were going crazy over the handsome guys while on the rest were cheering the both contenders

U might wonder what the heck is going on......isn't hoity-toity being so generous on them? 🤨

Well not at all...... It's the opposite as Hoity-Toity isn't aware of any of these developments......hell yeah they are too smart get caught😋

First man is in his formals stretched over the muscled biceps,his signature smirk was playing on his face.....It wasn’t that he had a five o’clock shadow at nine-thirty in the morning that screamed “bad boy"......rather he finds himself a little scruffy

"Well brotha get ready to lose" He said
"U know what.....Over confidence sucks " Said the another

A women rushed through the crowd and said
" May I have attention your please"

The first man turned to her, taking this as an advantage the other one taped the first one's hand onto the table declaring himself a winner

"What the f*** Vivaan" He barked turning back

"Suraj I clearly said over confidence SUCKS.... Guys listen I'm throwing a party tonight... even u are also invited" He said pointing suraj

Now the women has completly lost it and shouted " Wow.... Well done guys Mr. Chagan is dismissed and u people are planning for a party "she clapped

Suraj and vivaan: "Whaaat! "

Suraj:"Are u out of ur mind Ms Ragini"

Ragini: "No its not me....its hoity-toity who has completly lost her senses.... Mr. Rawat will be leading this branch from today "

Suraj:"Would u mind explaining how the hell did this happen"

Suraj's blood started boiling when ragini explained the entire drama happened early this morning

Suraj:"This women is getting on my nerves....he deserved a chance for explaination,she is setting bench marks for hitting a new low every day"

Vivaan :"calm down man, we will find a solution "
Suraj:" I will be confronting her before I lose my sanity " He said sternly

Vivaan:"No u are not doing anything, U are well aware of the consequences right"

Suraj:"I don't care vivaan and u are not going to stop me,we can't afford to lose Mr. Chagan"

Ragini:"I completly agree with you Mr. Suraj "

Suraj:"Then let's go Ms. Ragini.... Hoity-toity I promise, I will make you regret for what happened today "

Vivaan:"Guys wait"

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Suraj stromed into chakor's cabin with blood shot eyes in spite the security stopping him, he saw her walking to and fro giving instructions to Tina, its the first time he saw her closely,She was so little...like a bird.... Yet she is a striking beauty ,her elegant personality took his breath away for a second

Now Chakor's huge eyes focused on him

Chakor :"Woah! Hold on Gentleman "

Tina:"Tameez naam ki cheez hai ki nahi aapko"

Their words striked him back to reality,he cursed himself for getting carried away

Suraj:"I need to talk to Ms.Lal and I MEAN IT"

Chakor: " Do I know you gentleman?.... Look the problem is I don't interact with unknown people.....annndddd I also don't have enough time wasting to know the unknown people.....so technically u may leave now and ya when u drop here next time make sure u have an appointment.... Have a nice day" She said faking a smile

Suraj:"Ms.Lal u mean your employees need an appointment to meet their boss"

Tina:"How dare you to enter Ms. Lal's cabin without a mere permission"

Chakor:"Wait a second! U mean to say that u are a tiny little part of my empire "

Suraj:" Its unfortunately true Ms. Lal.....I believe little things often make big things happen"

Chakor:"I'm impressed! Take your seat Mr. Who ever you are"

Tina:"seriously babes"

Chakor:"Tinzi would you mind sparing us a minute "

Tina:"whatever " Saying so Tina left

Chakor:"What's the matter Mr. Not so perfect employee "she smirked

Suraj:" Ms. Lal I hate going rounds and rounds...so coming to the point will u kindly let me know the actual reason behind Mr. Chagan's dismiss "

Chakor:"If I'm not wrong you are another bug from branch 2 and what makes u think that I would answer your silly question " She said playing with her pen

Suraj:"U have to answer Ms.Lal.... He's our leader... Our idol... We can't afford to lose him just for satisfying your angsty"

Chakor:"U mean I'm egoistic....Uh huh I appreciate your guts"

Suraj:"Well I don't mind to call a spade a spade "

Chakor:"I can suspend you right now for being disrespectful Mr.Impolite Employee "

Suraj:" Why not.... I don't give a damn about it, it's u who will be losing your reputation for firing employees without a reason "

Chakor:"Are you trying threaten me?"

Suraj:"when did I threaten you Ms.Lal? well if u don't answer my questions....... I will conduct a strike with other employees and revolt against you for the injustice happened to Mr.chagan.....Which might turn a threat for u and it's my promise"

Chakor:"well then go ahead "

Suraj banged his hands on her table and left the cabin making her grin saucyly

Tina immediately rushed inside and asked
"What the hell was going on"

Chakor: " Relax Tinzi I was trying to be an armchair critic.......by the way I need all the information about this handsome by evening "

Tina:"why would you want it "

Chakor:" Because I want him to dance on my tunes "😈

Amazing start

I like arrogant Chakor. I wonder why her father's death has made her this way.

Poor Chagan, he was so scared of Chakor 😂

Seems Chagan can't control the employees of branch, all thanks to Suraj and Vivaan.

Like the nicknames Tina and Chakor call each other, it makes them sound like teenagers.

I guess Suraj is the first one to show attitude to Chakor, eagerly waiting to know how the story will progress.

Originally posted by: nemo316

Amazing start

Thank you so much🤗

I like arrogant Chakor. I wonder why her father's death has made her this way.

I'm so glad knowing that u liked this arrogant chakor u know what I was a little tensed whether this characterization of chakor will be accepted or not🤕

Poor Chagan, he was so scared of Chakor 😂

Poor him😂😂

Seems Chagan can't control the employees of branch, all thanks to Suraj and Vivaan.

Like the nicknames Tina and Chakor call each other, it makes them sound like teenagers.

I guess Suraj is the first one to show attitude to Chakor, eagerly waiting to know how the story will progress.

Absolutely.... I highly doubt that she ever came across a sarfira like him🤣

I'm so sorry for the delay in the update, I was a lil busy dealing with my college reopening🤓 I will be updating it now

Thanks again for your valuable feedback

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Hello everyone.... Thank you so much for liking the last update and I'm so sorry for the late update, here's the next part... I tried to make it as long as possible.... Hope you all enjoy reading the update ☺

Part 2:

Branch 2

The atmosphere in the branch 2 is enraging,
The Employees were revolting against chakor since a week.... this strike further lead to gain media's attention,although media questioned her professionalism for firing chagan, chakor didn't pay any attention to them......but one thing that kept haunting her was witnessing her employees turning against her...she never imagined to see this day not even in her wildest dreams... She held suraj responsible for it.

With the situation getting out of hold tina plans to get suraj arrested for brainwashing the employees against chakor, but chakor stopped her

Chakor:"Hold on tinzi, I have better plans for him " 😏
Tina:"I knew it!! U are upto something...aren't you.." She said excited
Chakor:"Do u remember the contract every employee signs before joining our company? "
Tina:"what's a big great deal in it"
Chakor:"What's the terms and condition on page no 3......22nd line? "
Tina:"Elobrate please"
Chakor:"U are sending a mail to branch 2 stating that all the employees will be transferred to our branches present in the South.... And if they refuse they will be fired according to contract"
Tina:"Whattt! Babes are u out of your mind this will make the situation much worser.....they will demand for explanation so will the media....what will u say?"
Chakor:"It's very simple... We will frame that Mr. Chagan hacked branch 2 and stole our valuable information... So we had to fire him and for further investigation we will be shutting down branch 2 ...it will be reopened once the information gets restored, I being a. ..u know....a very kind hearted boss I can't let my employees lose their job 🥴 hence they will be transferred"
Tina:"babes what if it backfires..... our chapter will be closed forever "
Chakor:"No it won't.....trust me in this situation they will turn against Mr.Trouble maker rather than me" she grined
Tina"U mean to say saanp bhi mare aur lakdi bhi nah tute"
Chakor:"U got it right darling" She winked
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On receiving the mail the employees were bewildered.

Suraj:"How can she transfer 300 employees at a time"
Adi:"Haven't you seen the latest news....she revealed that the actual reason for firing him was that he has hacked this branch's information and she also got him arrested"
Ragini:"Oh my goodness "
Suraj: " That's impossible Mr.Rawat neither Mr.Chagan hacked our branch nor nothing such sort happened till now"

Kavya rushed to them saying :"Guys our site's login passwords aren't working... Servers are damaged as well "

Suraj:"When the hell did this happen ? "

Adi:"Are u all dumb or u don't want to understand ...she is seeking revenge on you all"

Vivaan:" Shut the crap Mr.Rawat Who knows she might be right as well... We need to apologize to her immediately and be thankful to her.... Though we revolted against her she never said a word against us, she dealt with the problem alone.....look after all we have done she still cares about our future... I'm with her "

Ragini:"But Mr. Vivaan where have we gotten ourselves into.. If we accept this offer we have to leave our family behind....If we refuse it no other company will hire us for being unprofessional."

Vivaan:"U reap what you sow.....Ab bugtho sab.... we have to face the consequences and u are responsible for whatever happened...u blindly trusted Mr.chagan and in addition to that u have influenced us to go against Ms.lal" He said pointing to suraj who was perplexed... He wasn't expecting this strome...... Slowly one by one started accusing him making him feel more guilty....The Guilt was eating and pestering him. A fire burned in his mind and heart,he could feel daggers aiming at him from the crowd... He needs to fix this situation and he determined to fix this no matter what!
Without saying a single word he left to meet chakor
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Branch 1:

Suraj knocked the door of chakor's cabin, she was on a conference call wondering here and threre in her cabin

"Mr.Khanna I got to do an important work, I will call u within an hour Bye.....Come in Mr.Audacious employee.....How far has the blame game reached? "
"Why are you doing this? I understand that you want to destroy me for going against you but why are you hell bent on ruining the innocent employee's lives and also Mr.Chagan's who isn't really a part of any of these "

"Tell me one thing did my so called employees think twice before getting influenced by an imposter and turned against me? I believe everything is fair in war and love......so I don't think I'm responsible for anything that's happening to them....its their karma which is coming back for letting me down...and I think they deserve this pain"

Suraj's pov

Word after word that flowed from her lips angered me more, I couldn't take it anymore I barely had a chance to think of my actions....I pursed my lips and raised my hand back threwing it forward as hard as I could whipping it across her face. The crack of skin contacting skin echoed off the four walls.My palm was bright red, the same red mark that matched the one on her face. She stared at me with her wide eyes which were turning blood red...as her hand slowly made it to her fire red cheek
"How dare you" She shouted with the blood shot eyes and raised her hand from her cheeks towards me,I caught hold of it before that could hit me
"So u too deserved this Ms.Lal......in your words everything is fair in war and love"
I should've felt some kind of remorse. But I didn't. Not one organ in my body could produce guilt for my action
"Ms.Lal do u know what is it? " I said pointing to my shirt's 3rd button... "It's a spy camera, ur confession has been recorded in it.... If u still care of your reputation accept my conditions"
With no other option left she as asked
"What are your demands? "
"Firstly Mr. Chagan must be honorably released freed from the false accusions, secondly all the transfer orders must be cancelled.... Thirdly u have to apologize to Mr. Chagan and your employees wholeheartedly....lastly u should request Mr.chagan to continue his job...u have time till evening" Saying so I left her hand, she closed her eyes and turned around trying to avoid facing me and said
"FINE!!! but this clip should handed over to me by in the next moment...Deal?"She said sternly
"Deal accepted "
Feeling a triumphant a grin spread across my face, I whirled back ,I never looked back to see her watch me leave.....I'm relived that I have won!!
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Chakor's pov

Today I'm feeling so insultated never in my entire life I was humiliated like this......no one ever dared to raise their voice infront of me,I'm feeling so restless and relentless,I'm not able to take it anymore,The need for revenge is growing by every passing second within me I will not spare him...never ever,I will turn his life into a living hell no matter what...and I will not remain quite until I destroy him completely
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Suraj informed the employees that the details about further investigation will be unfolded and chakor will be revealing truth by evening

That evening:

Vivaan:"The police and media has arrived... But there's no sign of hoity toity"
Suraj:"She should have been reached by now... Wait let me check it out"
Suraj was leaving when a women hit him spilling the tea present in her hands over his shirt
"What have you done Ms.Imli...u should have been careful"
"I'm sorry suraj... It wasn't intentional"
"Now would u please mind me leaving me the way so that i can fix this "he said pointing his shirt
"Sure....sure and I'm sorry once again"she said
He rolled his eyes and left to clean his shirt while on the other hand
"Mam aapka kaam hogya" said Imli holding the spy camera which she ripped off from suraj's shirt while spilling the tea
"Let the game begin" declared chakor
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Chakor with Tina entered the venue....with a mere sight of her everyone bent their heads down feeling shameful
"Good evening ladies and gentlemen.... Firstly I'm felling so regreted for inconvenience caused to u all from my side, our investigation proves that Mr. Chagan is innocent and the actual culprit is none other than ......"She turned to imli "....Ms.Imli" leaving everyone stunned
"Here's the proof Inspectior Ajay please arrest her"
Ajay verified the files and arrested imli
"Leave me"struggled imli "I should accept you are very smart Ms. Lal... But I promise I will come back one day and your destruction is in my hands...leave me"
Ajay and team left with imli
"As the information is restored this branch will not be shutting down and I also want to apologize sincerely to Mr. Chagan for the misunderstanding and I request him to lead this branch as before "
Reporters:"But how did you figure out the actual culprit Ms. Lal?
Chakor:" All thanks to my fiance Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi...his absence in my life made me realize how wrong I was in judging people" she sniffed
Reporter :" What happened to your fiance Ms. Lal? "
Chakor:"errr he's absolutely fine I mean to say we broke up🤧....he wasn't ready to accept that Mr. Chagan is guilty which eventually lead us to break our 3 years old relationship 💔..... That's when I started to think in his P.O.V which lead to this revealtion.... I'm truely indebted to him" She said teary eyed
Tina is unable to believe her eyes and started pinching herself to make sure that she is not in an alternate universe
Not only Tina Chakor's confession blew off the minds of branch 2 employees as well.... They all were shocked as hell

Suraj was rushing to the venue after cleaning his shirt who absolutely had no idea about the melodrama happening over there
When people saw him they cleared the way for him,he was feeling wierd....before he could realize anything chakor ran to him in filmy style and hugged him tight leaving him amused!!
"Suraj I love you.... thank you for showing me the right path....maybe we needed to break a little.....so that we can put overselves back together more beautifully than before"
She moves her head closer to him and leans in brushing her lips over his, leaving him frozen
She slowly broke the kiss and bent on her knees saying "Will u marry me Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi "

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Gripping update 👏

The employees remind me of the villagers, they turned against the good guy at the first hurdle.

The spy camera was a good plan, too bad Imli was a traitor. The slap came as a shock but can't blame Suraj, Chakor was playing dirty, I cheered on when he slapped her.

Why did Chakor get Imli arrested? was she really harming the company or did she frame her because she back-stabbed her colleagues?

Chakor pretending that she and Suraj are a couple 😮 and the wedding proposal 😮, I wonder what's her plan. Loved that scene and Suraj's shock at the kiss 😂.

I understand your studies are taking most of your time, so no worries as long as you eventually update it and good luck with your studies 😊.