Jeevansathi hum...We are life partners... KalMa TS Last Part pg2 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful

Loved cute KalMa moments

Kalyani will surely save her Malhar

Loved their emotional conversation

thanks for update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It’s beautiful and emotional.....

Loved it .....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank u very much friends 4 the wonderful support.

This TS is ending here.plz write a detailed comment on this part.plz write ur fav character,fav scene and y u like them.





Jeevansathi hum...We are life partners...Part 3

Malhar got discharged from the hospital.But Kalyani started staying there to look after Malhar.
She stood by him always.She looked at him emotionally when he was sleeping.


Slowly he opened his eyes.
He was stunned to see Kalyani near him.
Malhar:Kalyani..you did'nt sleep yet?
Kalyani:No.
Malhar:Why?
She was silent.She lowered her eye lashes.

Malhar held her hand:I know.You are scared to leave me even for a second.Right?

Kalyani was silent.
Malhar:Why are you doing this Kalyani?First of all you shifted to this house just to look after me.You are a doctor.Be practical.I won't survive for long.
Kalyani:Stop it Malhar.I love you.I cannot see you suffer.Yes I am a doctor.That's why I am telling you that you are going to be cured.Believe me Malhar.Through heart transplantation you can be saved.Trust me.
Malhar was scared to believe it.
Malhar:Are you sure Kalyani?You are simply trying to console me.Right?
Kalyani:No Malhar.I studied your case.You will be cured.
A small smile appeared on Malhar's face as he started having hopes about his life.
Kalyani looked at him with teary eyes:Now onwards don't talk about death.I cannot bear it.I want you Malhar.

Malhar felt sad.He wiped her tears.
He cupped her face and said:I promise you that I will not talk like that again.

Tare Hai Barati Chandani Hai Yeh Barat
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Re Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham


She smiled emotionally.

Kalyani saw Arnav in the hospital.She was excited.
Kalyani:ASR!What a pleasant surprise.
Arnav:I felt like meeting my best friend.You are a busy doctor.Once in a while only I can see you.We talk on the phone.But once in a while we should meet each other.Right?
She smiled:Good that you came.I really missed you my bestie.
He smiled.
Arnav:How is Malhar?
Kalyani became dull:He is weak.He had no hope to live.But I have tried my best to boost his confidence to get cured.I promise myself that I will cure Malhar through a surgery.If not I will stop working as a heart surgeon.
Arnav looked at her emotionally.

Arnav:Don't talk like that Kalyani.Nothing like that will happen.
She nodded:Yes..I hope so.
He gave her a form.
Kalyani:What is this?
Arnav:I have donated my heart.After my life gets over let this heart be alive in someone else's body.May be for Malhar.Who knows?
Kalyani was shocked.
Kalyani:ASR,why are you talking like this?Who are you to predict your life time?You are so healthy.
Arnav smirked:Physically I am healthy.But...I feel that my end is near.I don't know why i feel like that.These days every night I dream of uniting with Khushi in heaven.God may be hinting that it's time for me to go to heaven.
Kalyani:ASR...dreams cannot decide your life time.So better you live here itself.Don't be in a hurry to go to heaven.
Arnav:It's not like that Kalyani.I feel that I have no reason to live.I am an orphan.I lost my Khushi.Now I am living like an emotionless machine.I am fed up.Life has become boring.
Kalyani became upset.She remembered how Khushi died.Unfortunately one day slipped downstairs and fell down dying on the spot.
Arnav:Don't worry Kalyani.I will pray for you and your Malhar.
Arnav patted her cheek and walked off.
Kalyani's eyes were full of tears.


Malhar fell down while walking.Kalyani ran towards him:Malhar...
She helped him to get up.
Kalyani was shocked to see a small wound on his face.
Kalyani:Can't you walk properly?See how your face got hurt.
Malhar:It's a small wound.
Kalyani:So what?
Kalyani was wiping the area with the cotton.Her face was full of pain.

Malhar:You look as if it's you who got hurt.The wound is mine.But the pain is yours.

Kalyani:How can I not feel pain when you are hurt?You are my everything Malhar.

Malhar looked at him emotionally.
She put ointment there.Malhar was looking at her deeply.
Malhar thought:Kalyani loves me so much.I want to live for Kalyani.



Kalyani was resting her head on Malhar's shoulder.
Kalyani:Malhar...I can't wait for our wedding.I dreamt of your wedding.It was so beautiful.
He smiled.


Kalyani:Let us get married now itself in a temple Malhar.
Malhar:Kalyani...we will get married.But not now.When I am in this condition I don't want to marry you.
Kalyani:Still you feel that if you marry me I will become a widow.Right?
Malhar:It's not like that Kalyani.But I want to marry you in a grand way.After all wedding is very special.You please wait.After I get cured I will propose you for marriage.I promise.I really feel that it will happen soon.
Kalyani:Sure?
Malhar:Yes.Before that let us have a mini engagement.


Malhar took out a diamond ring from his pocket.
Kalyani:What a surprise!You are so sweet Malhar.
He smiled.
He made her wear it.She could'nt believe it.

Again she laid her head on his shoulder.



Slowly they faced each other and locked their lips.

Kalyani embraced him:I love you Malhar.
Malhar embraced her back:Love you too Kalyani.

Tare Hai Barati Chandani Hai Yeh Barat
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Tare Hai Barati Chandani Hai Yeh Barat







Kalyani took Malhar to hospital for some tests.
There she happened to see somebody being brought to hospital after an accident.Seeing him she was shattered.It was Arnav.
Kalyani cried:ASR!
Malhar held her hand:Kalyani...What happened?


Kalyani:Malhar...ASR....he met with an accident.
Malhar was shocked.
Malhar cupped her face in his hands:Kalyani..control yourself.Nothing will happen to your best friend ASR.

Kalyani was so weak that Malhar embraced her to console her.

Kalyani ran towards Arnav and cried.Seeing is condition she knew that he was not going to survive.Se cried bitterly.Suddenly she remembered Arnav deciding to donate his heart.She remembered Arnav hinting that his heart can be alive on Malhar.
Kalyani:I won't let you go away like that ASR.You will live near me...in my Malhar's body.

Finally Kalyani did Malhar's heart transplantation with Arnav's heart.
The surgery was successful.
Malhar regained his consciousness.
Kalyani said tearfully:You are perfectly alright Malhar.
Gunjan and Malhar smiled with tears in their eyes.
Kalyani embraced him crying.
Malhar:Kalyani..I want to attend ASR's funeral.
Kalyani:But in this condition...you just had a surgery.
Malhar:I owe my whole life to ASR.I have met him only once.At least in his last moments I want to be with him.Please...
Kalyani nodded tearfully.

Arnav's cremation...

Kalyani embraced Arnav's body crying:You proved that you are my best friend.You gave life to my Malhar to give me a happy life.
Arnav's cremation was done.

After a month....

Malhar blindfolded Kalyani's eyes and brought her to a decorated room.


Then he unfolded her eyes.


She was surprised to see Malhar kneeling down before her with a ring.




Malhar:Will you marry me Kalyani?

She blushed nodding:Yes.
He slipped the ring onto her finger.

Ganga Jamuna Se Bhee Pawan Teraa Meraa Bandhan
Teraa Prem Hai Phulvari Aur Meraa Mann Hai Aangan
Janmo Janmo Kaa Hee Sajanee Teraa Meraa Sath
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath



They shared a romantic eye lock.


Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham




Very soon they got engaged in a party.
Suddenly Kalyani became sad.
Malhar:You are thinking of ASR.Right?
Kalyani:Ya.I wish he was there with us here on this important day.


Malhar:ASR must be witnessing it from heaven.
Kalyani said emotionally:Yes.I hope so.


They had a grand wedding.

Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham


Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham

At night in their bedroom...

They shared a deep eye lock.

They embraced each other emotionally.

Too Hai Jivan Me Jo Pritam Sukh Nahee Mangu Duja
Aarti Nayno Se Karti Hu Mann Se Teree Puja
Me Toh Dharm Hee Samjhun Teree Kahee Hui Har Bat
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath


Kalyani:The most awaited day has come.You have become my husband.We got married.
Malhar:Yes Kalyani.I thought that this day will never come because of my health condition.Thank God.God gave me you as my life partner.


Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Tare Hai Barati Chandani Hai Yeh Barat (Virasat).





Malhar:Kalyani....as we both are tired let us sleep.
Kalyani:Yes Malhar.I feel sleepy.
They lay on the bed cuddling with each other.

The next night....

Gunjan went near Malhar:Go to your bedroom.I have decorated the room for first night.
Malhar blushed.
His eyes searched for Kalyani.
Gunjan:Be patient.Kalyani will come now.I am dressing her up for suhaag raat.
Malhar was shy:Gunjan...you...
Gunjan giggled.
Gunjan gave him a white shirt:Wear this and be ready for first night.
Malhar blushed.
Gunjan thought:Both Kalyani and Malhar will be in white.Perfect match.
Gunjan:Get ready fast.Otherwise the first night will be delayed.
Malhar blushed.
Malhar wrapped her shoulder with his arms:You are the naughtiest cutest best sister anyone can get.
She smiled.


In the bedroom....

Malhar was waiting for Kalyani in the bedroom.The room was decorated with lit candles.She came wearing a beautiful white saree.Malhar was mesmerized by her beauty.
Malhar:You look so beautiful Kalyani.
Kalyani blushed:It's Gunjan who gave me this saree.You look so handsome.
Malhar smiled

Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat ho gayi hai tumse
Meri jan mere dilbar,
meraa aitbar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaarar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo


Malhar:It's Gunjan who gave me this shirt.
Kalyani:It means purposefully Gunjan made both of us wear white.
Malhar:So that we will match each other in colour too.
They both giggled.
Kalyani:I am so happy that finally we are one.You are the best thing which happened to me Malhar.
Malhar:You are the best life partner I could dream of.

Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat ho gayi hai tumse
Meri jaan mere dilbar,
meraa aitbar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaarar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyar karlo
aa. aa aa aa aa.aa.....
aa. aa aa aa aa.aa.....





Kalyani smiled emotionally.

Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se,
mohabbat ho gayi hai tumse





Malhar:I still can't believe that I am back to life.I was not sad about losing my life.But I was sad that when I will lose your life I will lose you also.I was really scared to lose you Kalyani.
Kalyani was touched by his words.
Kalyani:Once I lost you.I cannot lose you anymore.
Malhar cupped her face in his hands:We both won't lose each other as even God wants together.That's why he united us.


Tum jo kehdo toh chaand taron
ko tod laaoonga main
Inn hawaon ko, inn ghataon
ko mod laaoonga main
Ho..Tum jo kehdo toh chaand taron
ko tod laaoonga main
Inn hawaaon ko, inn ghataon
ko mod laaoonga main




They shared a romantic eye lock.

Kaisa manzar, hai meri
aankhon me, kaisa ehsaas hai
Paas darya hai door sehra
hai, phir bhi kyoon pyaas hai



Malhar held her hand.


Then he pulled her closer romantically.
He pecked her palm softly.She blushed showing her cute dimples.


Kadmo mein jahan yeh rakhdoon,
mujhse aankhen char karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyar karlo




Malhar rubbed her nose with hers making her blush more.

Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se,
mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse
Hey hey hey hey ..aah ha ha ha ha ha..2x
Hey hey hey hey ..aah ha ha ha ha ha..2x





Malhar:You look more beautiful when you blush revealing your dimples.
She smiled.

Meri yadoon mein, mere khwabon
mein roz aate ho tum
Iss tarah bhala, meri jaan
mujhe, kyoon satate ho tum.
Aa ha ha aa aa ha ha ha
Aa ha ha aa aa ha ha ha




He pressed his lips on her dimples.

Ho.... meri yadoon mein, mere
khwaabon mein, roz aate ho tum
Iss tarah bhala, meri jaan
mujhe, kyoon satate ho tum


She embraced him due to shyness.


Teri bahon se, teri rahon
se yun naa jaaoonga main
Yeh iraada hai, mera
waada hai laut aaoonga main




She moved away in shyness.Malhar went behind her caressing her hand to the shoulder.She blushed.

Duniya se tujhe churaloon,
thoda intezaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo


He lifted her up in his arms and placed her on the bed.

Meri dhadkano ko samjho
tum bhi mujhse pyar karlo
tum bhi mujhse pyar karlo
tum bhi mujhse pyar karlo





Then he moved towards her romantically.

Kaise aankhen chaar karloon,
kaise aitbaar karloon,
Apni dhadkano ko kaise,
itna beqaraar karloon,
Kaise tujhko dil main dedoon,
kaise tujhse pyaar karloon.




They explored each other with burning passion.



Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat ho gayi hai tumse
Meri jan mere dilbar,
meraa aitbar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meree dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo(Dhadkan).


After a few days...

Kalyani went near Malhar.
Kalyani:Malhar..I know that you must have seen a lot of dreams about our honeymoon.But I don't think it's possible now.I am sorry.
Malhar stared at him.
Kalyani:I know you are angry.But...
Malhar:Who said that I am angry?I know that you are a doctor and you need to attend a lot of heart patients now.I was a heart patient.So I know what your patients must be feeling.I know that you can't come with me for honeymoon as you have many pending surgeries.Go and do your surgeries Kalyani.Save all your patients and give them life.It is more important than honeymoon.I can wait for honeymoon.I will be proud to say that my life partner is a doctor who saves thousands of lives.


Kalyani smiled:Thank you so much for understanding my condition Malhar.You are the best life partner I can get.
He smiled:We are life partners..the best life partners.
She smiled nodding her head.

Tare Hai Barati Chandani Hai Yeh Barat
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Saato Phere Honge Abb Haato Me Leke Hath
Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Re Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham


They got into a sweet embrace.

Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham
Re Jivan Sathee Ham Diya Aur Bati Ham(Virasat).


The end

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

A very beautiful and romantic ending.

Thank you for writing.

Favorite character - Kalyani

Favorite scene - Malhar falls down, Kalyani tends to his wounds, he senses the depth of her love and wants to live for her.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very beautiful ❤️

I like ASR character

Beautiful ending

Thanks for the update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Aww

So cute

Felt bad for ASR and Khushi😭

Finally Malhar ji recovered 👍🏼

KalMa married❤️

Their union 😳

Ending was beautiful

Favourite character - Kalyani (because she believed in her love and cured him)

Favourite scene - Where Kalyani got to know the truth and she assured him that she will live with his memories. It was so touching!

Songs were apt

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Wow

It is beautiful ending

Great part is ASR i luv him

Finally they get married 😍

Thanks for the lovely ❤️ update

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Lovely update....

The ending is beautiful....

Fav character- Malhar n kalyani (I liked both to choose karna thoda muskil hai )

Fav scene- Mini engagement

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