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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi friends I am back with the next chapter of SS . Sorry for being late I am looking for a job now so it's tiring. Okay back to SS.

Suman was very happy and she decided to do something for kanak. Uma said sorry for not doing anything for saras. Saras said it's okay she is not upset with him. But kanak bhabhisa is right we should not blame ourselves for what is happening I will try to move on from this. Uma smiled at her and gifted her Bhagavad-Gita . Saras happily accepted and left for her room. Uma was searching for kanak. Kanak has again put the clothes miserably in cupboard. He again sorted it. Kanak was with Massa sharing this news with her. Though Massa was happy but unable to express but kanak understood. She shared this news with bhabho as well. Bhabho was very happy and blessed her. Suman came there and hugged her and thanked her for whatever she has done. Kanak said it's nothing to be thankful it's a coincidence that I saved Balbrahmachariji and he granted me one wish and I asked him this favor. Suman said you are right now we can also roam in our house freely previously shiv has to check everything if the house is clear than we can step out but now even if Balbrahmachariji see us it's up to us to become his sevika and nobody will want that. Kanak said you are right but still don't forget that not to disturb him. He is here for peace. Suman asked bhabhisa why you didn't touched Balbrahmachariji feet for his blessing. I mean he has done a favor on us. Kanak protested and said he didn't what he was doing was wrong so he corrected it infact he has made his own mother his slave so how can someone respect that person. And I will touch only those person feet whom I respect. Suman said let it be bhabhisa look what I have made for you. She took her in her room and showed her a cup of tea. Kanak was surprised. Suman said I know you like tea very much infact after coming back to house this is the first thing you have asked but you were denied because of shiv so I have made this for you. I close the door before anyone comes you take a sip. Kanak said I will not have it. Suman said why I made it the way you like I have asked bhabho for this. Kanak said Suman it's not like that but if you are doing something hiding that means you consider it's wrong and that's why you are doing this way. If it's not wrong than you should not do it secretly . I could have done this that day itself but I bought the cup in front of everyone because I didn't thought I was doing anything wrong. But I have to leave it. Let it be we will have tea in his house everyone will have their favorite beverage whatever they want and I will have tea sitting next to you in front of uma and Massisa. That day when no girl in this house will force to leave her studies as someone think it's wrong. When no one will be force to live a life which she doesn't want that day we will celebrate. Suman asked you will be there I mean Dadusa has married you forcefully you never wanted this house if given choice would you stay with us. Kanak said I will I came back on my own it's my choice so I will stay here. Kanak and Suman hugged each other.


Uma has bought a gift for kanak he was heading towards his room but a sevak called him and said Balbrahmachariji is calling him so he went towards his room. Balbrahmachariji was waiting for him. Balbrahmachariji said I never thought that a person like you will get married but after seeing your wife I can say you were not wrong I mean anyone can marry her she is the perfect balance of beauty and intelligence she has asked me something which has changed my rules and I can't deny it. Uma said it's your generosity and as far as kanak is concerned I like her selflessness. She always think about others. Balbrahmachariji said and no wonder you love her very much. I want to know how good are your relation with her I mean you worship me but she denied to touch my feet so there must be a lot of arguments between both of you. Uma said you are right we do argue but it happens in every relationship it will take her time to get mould here and one day she will also respect you like others do. Balbrahmachariji said uma I wanted you to perform a special vrat but for this you have to be away with your wife you will not have any husband rights over her do you understand what I mean. Uma said I do but don't worry infact we are husband and wife only for world we are friends in life. And we stay like that. Balbrahmachariji was surprised and asked what do you mean. Uma said that I love her but she doesn't so I am giving her time and I don't want to force this relationship on her. Balbrahmachariji said that means you and your wife both are virgin. Uma said yes but one day she will realize how much I love her and she will reciprocate it back. Balbrahmachariji said but not till I am here I want you to follow this vrat from today itself you will not touch your wife will not come close to her under any circumstances. Uma agreed . Balbrahmachariji said I will tell what's needs to be done now you can go. Uma touched his feet and left. Balbrahmachariji gave a wicked smile.


Uma kept the gift on the table and started changing. Kanak entered the room and saw the gift and opened it. It was a very beautiful maang tika she liked it. Uma came out of washroom. Kanak said thanks for the lovely gift it's very nice. Uma welcomed her . She asked him to put it on her. Uma hesitated . Kanak asked why he is hesitating . Uma said Balbrahmachariji wants me to do a special vrat and for that I cannot touch you infact no husbandly rights on you so you call saras she will help you with this. Kanak said that's weird have you ask which vrat is this and why he wants you to do this vrat I mean there are his other sevaks as well who can do this but why you ? Uma said I don't ask questions just follow his orders . kanak said but you are my friend as well so till you can put this maang tika. Uma said but I see you as my wife so I will not. Kanak was surprised that why Balbrahmachariji gave such orders to a married man.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice lovely👏oh god, this bb is so dangerous kanak will teach him a good lesson waiting for it😊.& All the best for ur jobsearch.Hope u get good one soon👍🏼.. Thanks for this story lovely inbetween ur busy schedules..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi friends I am back with the next chapter of SS and happy to see you melody after a long time. And guys do vote maybe nota but please go as it your right and responsibility. And thanks for best wishes. Okay now back to SS.

Kanak was surprised but let it off . She showed the gift to Suman . Suman was happy and said that Dadusa really loves you I think you should also reciprocate him. Kanak said it's not possible now as he is doing some vrat and we will be strangers till that vrat finish. Suman said that's strange. Saras was passing by with shiv and saw Suman and kanak she also joined them . Suman asked to saras that Dadusa has gifted this to bhabhisa but bhabhisa is unable to think of any idea to thank him. Shiv said what's a big deal just go and thank him. Suman said shiv you will not understand. Saras gave her idea to make something delicious for him he will be happy. Anyways you are a great cook. Kanak liked the idea. They all were happy. Palomi was standing outside angry and jealous. She immediate went to Massisa room. Massisa saw her and said what happened. Palomi said everything is ruined. You told me that kanak will be sevika but now it will not infact Suman who was with me is now her close confide. They all are celebrating in other room and we are mourning here. Massisa said don't worry I know that this plan is flopped but look at the brighter side my saras is saved. And as far as kanak is concerned remember we have her signature if anything happens to her we will not be blamed . So relax and let me think of something . Palomi said yes think of something or else kanak will win. Massisa said I will not let it happen.


Kanak made a halwa for uma in dinner. A sevika came there and said that she has to make food for Balbrahmachariji. Kanak made the dinner quickly and left the kitchen. Everyone was sitting at the dinner table and Uma and Balbrahmachari were sitting in the other room. Shiv asked when will Balbrahmachariji will leave and Dadusa will join us on the dinner table. Saras said don't say this he is a guest and guest is next to God so behave. Uma and Balbrahmachari opened their plates and there is a halwa served in his plate. Balbrahmachariji asked what is this ? Uma replied that maybe kanak has made this specially for me sorry for having it now I will eat it later on. Balbrahmachariji said no problem infact I would like to taste it . Uma offered halwa to Balbrahmachariji and he was delighted by its taste. He said kanak makes delicious food. Uma said it's her speciality . Balbrahmachariji said to uma I have not tasted such delicious food he exchanged the plates with uma and ate food which is made by kanak. After dinner he said she is really good tell her that from tomorrow she will make food for me. And tomorrow I will be preaching so everyone in the family can attend it. Uma said yes I will inform everyone and left the room.


At night uma shared the news with everyone and everyone promised to attend it . In the room kanak asked Is it important for me to attend I mean I find it very boring and I am afraid that I will sleep. Uma laughed and said hope it doesn't happen. It's just because of you that saras is saved and Balbrahmachari changed his rules now he wants to give his wisdom to all . And one more thing he wants you to make his food he was very impressed with your culinary skills . Kanak said but when he tasted it . Uma replied today when you served dinner he exchanged plates. Kanak said but I had made it for you. And you have not tasted it . Uma said I am here forever but he will go in next few days so he can have it. Kanak said that better he leaves early. Uma made a grumpy face. Kanak said sorry. And asked are you really going to do this vrat I mean if I do anything it will not affect you. Uma said yes and don't try anything on me. Kanak sat very close to him and said uma how are my earings just have a look. Uma tried to move she again came close to him okay look her near my neck it's paining will you massage me. Uma was feeling awkward and said I will give you a painkiller. Kanak mischievously said uma that will not work okay do you know I have a mole on my back. Uma said okay show me. Kanak was shocked. Uma smiled and said show me now what happened let me help you. Kanak said no need just sleep. Uma smiled and slept. Kanak also slept on the other side.


Guys please tell me how it's going and please do comment as it's important for me.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely don't have words to say how much joy this ss bringing me. Tq very much.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This ss is more interesting than yrhpk 😆 I look forward to this more... thank you so so much Lovely!! ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely you are killing me yaar awwwsumm dear BBG is creep 😲why on earth this uma shares their private matters to guruji omggg what this criminal bbg is going to do yaar he is more dangerous than massisa 😕ayee hayee mole scene was the highlight 😉 naughty uma 😳 Thank u sweet heart for bringing back our fantasy couple again ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasleen-tsmsp

This ss is more interesting than yrhpk 😆 I look forward to this more... thank you so so much Lovely!! ❤️

Absolutely cent percent right Jas 👏😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi friends I am back with the next chapter of SS and please don't compare it with YRHPK as that is a very good show and cast is very good and mine is only imagination.

Everyone got up in the morning. Uma was doing his pooja and after that Suman seeked his blessing. Uma said don't be late as Balbrahmachariji will start preaching so we should all be here. Suman said I will come early. Kanak hugged Suman and wished her all the best for her last exam. Saras also wished her than uma went to drop her to school. Everyone was busy. Sevika was guiding kanak to prepare Balbrahmachariji food as per his taste. Massisa got the idea . She gave sleeping pills to palomi and said add it to kanak's food she will sleep in between and this will upset Balbrahmachariji and Uma both . Palomi asked but what will happen uma will forgive her. Massisa said just do as I say. Palomi agreed and added it to kanak's plate. Uma came back and sat with Balbrahmachariji for food. Kanak was serving both of them. She said Balbrahmachariji I have made food today if there is anything missing please forgive me. Balbrahmachariji was looking at her while serving with a lustrous eyes. They both started their food. Balbrahmachariji said you are a very good cook I have never tasted such a good food in my entire life. Kanak thanked him. Balbrahmachariji said I am very happy with you again you can ask something from me. Kanak was surprised and said just bless me nothing else. Balbrahmachariji said I will do it but still I have everything just ask gold money property whatever you want . kanak said I am not interested in material things I just want everyone should have their respect I mean your mother she is living a life of sevika I agree it was her choice but you can respect her give her a better life . You are eating here and she is waiting outside that after you are done she can clean it . I mean she is also hungry . I think you should call her here and thank her for everything she did for you. Balbrahmachariji said you are right. Balbrahmachariji called his mother and said mother I am sorry I was thinking women is distraction for men but now I have realised that women is the most beautiful gift for man. And from today onwards you will not stay with me as sevika but my mother. She was very happy and thanked kanak. Balbrahmachariji said thanks is not enough you have told me to bless you so I bless you may you have a very good child in future. Uma was very happy and shiv saras Massisa also smiled.


Suman came back from exam she was relaxed today and kanak was tensed. Suman hugged her from behind and said I am very happy and this is all because of you but you look tensed what happened. Kanak said Balbrahmachariji is very strange on one side he tells uma to behave with me like stranger and other side he is blessing me to have a child I mean how is this possible. Suman said bhabhisa Balbrahmachariji will not stay here forever he will go and after that Dadusa will be free and you both can have a child. Are you thinking about it. Kanak smiled and said not now. I have to do many things here. Yours life is on track but what about saras . Suman asked why don't you say saras to start her studies again. Kanak said that is not enough saras doesn't have her voice her opinion. I want she should decide what she wants to do either studies or something else and it will take time. Suman said but you will do it I am sure. Palomi came inside with the glass of milk. She said kanak didn't have lunch I had prepared plate for her but she didn't had it so I have brought milk for her. Kanak thanked palomi but said she will not have it as she is on fast today. Palomi said I know hence I bought this milk for you. Suman also persuaded kanak to have it so kanak drank the milk.


In the evening everyone sat in front of Balbrahmachariji and Balbrahmachari was looking at kanak who was with shiv. Uma was reading Ramayana and was explaining his phrases. Kanak was feeling sleepy. Shiv asked her what happened. She said nothing but she cannot hold and just fall asleep. Saras and Suman tried to wake her up but all in vain. Uma came and checked her and again try to wake her up . Balbrahmachariji got up and tried to touch her but didn't he said to uma to take her to room. Uma obliged . Sevika saw what Balbrahmachariji was doing. Balbrahmachariji said it's over for now we will continue it someday again. Everyone left from there. Balbrahmachariji was in his room. Sevika entered in the room and asked is kanak is the reason for your change behavior. He said yes and why not she is beautiful attractive why not. Sevika said she is married and love her husband and her family and moreover uma is your bhakt he respect you a lot. Still you are thinking like this. Aren't you ashamed ? Balbrahmachariji violently hold her neck and said I get what I want and who knows it better than you and if you try to be a huddle in my path I can do worst for you and nobody will believe you I am God here . Sevika said you are not God and God will never forgive you for this and left the room. Uma was concerned for kanak he thought this is not natural and discuss it with Suman. Suman said but why would bhabhisa take anything which cause her sleep. Uma said don't know but bring some hot water I have to massage her feet. Suman went to kitchen and saw a paper which had sleeping pills in the dustbin and realised that palomi had bought milk for kanak.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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My face throughout the update 😲
EPIC writing and imagination Lovely 👏 truly you have thought out each part so well omg especially this Balbrahmachari character keeps getting more and more dangerous and intruiging... poor Uma is still a bhakt of this man... 😒 also Kanak doesnt suspect anything...
Do update soon I'm very eager for this!! 😳 and I hope your job search goes well Lovely!! 😃
As always, thank you for bringing back TSMSP ❤️
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Originally posted by: lovelycolour

Hi friends I am back with the next chapter of my SS and sami asps melody missing you. And thanks jasleen for your continuous support. Okay back to SS.

Kanak was shocked what she heard . She asked again are you sure that you are not taking saras as your sevika. Balbrahmachariji smiled and said you are right saras will not be a sevika. Uma begged Balbrahmachariji to not to take kanak with him. She is ignorant doesn't know what she is doing. Balbrahmachariji said I am not taking her either. Uma was also surprised. Kanak said but how come I mean you have only told that saras will be your sevika and now you are leaving her so easily what is this. Balbrahmachariji said you have saved my life so I will grant you a favor if you don't want saras to be a sevika than she won't. Kanak said it's a favor right so let me ask you something. Balbrahmachariji said okay go on you can ask for whatever you want. Suman shiv Massisa palomi all were standing outside. Palomi said kanak is inside and now she is in front of Balbrahmachariji so she also has to become a sevika. Suman told her to shut up already we are tensed for saras and now you are telling about kanak bhabhisa as well. If this is the punishment I will also become a sevika. Massisa yelled at her and told to think before speaking you don't know what are you saying. Suman argued that you are not telling anything to palomi . Massisa said it's happening all because of kanak who told her to go inside now she has to bear the consequences. Kanak opened the door and came outside. Suman and shiv were waiting for her. She told Suman to call saras. Shiv ran to call her. Suman asked what happened. Kanak said nothing but today saras will decide her life. Saras came in front of her. Uma also came outside and asked saras does she want to become sevika. Saras didn't answered. Kanak asked once again do you want to leave us and want to become a sevika. Saras cried and hugged uma and said I don't want to leave you but I have committed a sin. Kanak console her and said it's not your fault you didn't knew it. Saras said you don't know bhabhisa what has happened I understand that I didn't knew the truth but still it happened to me. Kanak said even God can't punish someone who is pure at heart and you are the purest and Uma saras has given the answer she doesn't want to go and as far as guilt is concerned she will forget about it. Go and tell to Balbrahmachariji. Uma agreed and went inside.


All were waiting outside for him. Massisa didn't understand what's going on. Uma came back and said that Balbrahmachariji has fulfill his promises saras will not go anywhere . Suman shiv kanak and saras were happy. Massisa was also happy but she asked uma what happened inside. Uma said kanak had saved Balbrahmachariji life so he granted her one wish. And kanak asked that he will not force anyone to become his sevaks or sevika if he/she doesn't want. Kanak said that yes and saras denied so she is not going anywhere. Suman hugged saras. Massisa said that means anyone who will come in front of Balbrahmachariji if she doesn't want to become sevika Balbrahmachariji will not take her with him . Uma smiled and said yes Massisa. Uma said what happened inside. Kanak said it's my wish and I can ask for anything right.Balbrahmachariji said yes you can ask me anything. So I want a promise that you will not compel anyone to become sevaks or sevika against their wish. Balbrahmachariji argued but this is a punishment for ladies if they come in front of me they have to become my sevika. Kanak said it's wrong you are Balbrahmachari so you should have that patience in you and it's a your problem that you don't want to see any female why should others suffer. Balbrahmachariji thought for a moment and said okay as you say. Go and ask her if she wants nobody can stop her. Kanak agreed and went outside. Balbrahmachariji asked who is she ? Uma answered she is my wife kanak. Balbrahmachariji said this name suits her.


Uma continued so saras doesn't want she will not be one. Kanak and Suman were very happy. They did a hi five . minutes later Balbrahmachariji opened the door so all the ladies got scared but Balbrahmachariji said it's okay if you all don't want I will not give you a life of my sevika. This is your house you can live freely here. Uma touched his feet. One by one all of them proceed . Kanak was standing she didn't came. Uma signalled her to go but she said for blessing I have to touch his feet will Balbrahmachariji will be comfortable. Balbrahmachariji said you have already touched me while saving my life so that's okay . kanak proceed but later denied saying I have not accept you as my guru so I will not do it . I am sorry. She left. Balbrahmachariji saw her.


Guys please tell me how it's going and please do comment as it's important for me.

Lovely this part is really lovely even i had ths same that someone should give back to balbramachariji👏

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