Ariya Os The Last Chapter

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey guys! 

I wrote this one because I wanted to give a closure after writing Chapter Two and the good news is that I will be starting Humsafar by next week. 


Here are the links to the previous parts:-

A New Chapter

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5086349

Chapter Two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5172872

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice one. Really loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it Sharvi dear

That was really emotional & beautiful😍✨

I loved the how every one was trying to take care of this little girl 🙂 

Aww finally the case was solved but Arjun lost his life 😣😣 

It really made me emotional 

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing✍️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awsome


Love it


Ye kya Arjun saheed ho gaya..


Sachhi me ..kasam se meine kal iss story ke bare me socha tha ke bhoomi ye story ka next season degi ya nahi..


I hoped ke bhoomi ye next season de..aur last kuch ho riya zinda ho..n arjun firse jine lage usake sath..


Update to mil gaya..but end sad hua..


Par Arjun finally get peace n may be he would rest with riya..


I just love the whole story..


Do write more..


Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Before coming to comments..tum 100 saal jiyogi😆Aaj hi soch rhi thi tumhari koi new story nhi ayi..ab aa bhi gayi..


Awesome ending

Mujhe laga hi tha Arjun apne dard se aise azaad hoga

Emotional but perfect ending


Waiting for more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awsome


Love it


Ye kya Arjun saheed ho gaya..


Sachhi me ..kasam se meine kal iss story ke bare me socha tha ke bhoomi ye story ka next season degi ya nahi..


I hoped ke bhoomi ye next season de..aur last kuch ho riya zinda ho..n arjun firse jine lage usake sath..


Update to mil gaya..but end sad hua..


Par Arjun finally get peace n may be he would rest with riya..


I just love the whole story..


Do write more..


Thanks for pm

are waah! kya intuition hai

Riya ka waapis aana toh possible nahi tha is time but yes he dies happily seeing Riya waiting for him and goes with her. 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: bloomie

are waah! kya intuition hai

Riya ka waapis aana toh possible nahi tha is time but yes he dies happily seeing Riya waiting for him and goes with her. 

Yah intuition toh nahi nikali..


Ya true kuch stories aise hi hoti he jisaka happy end nahi ho sakhta

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Posted: 3 years ago
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ARiya ko market Kya chain mail ta hai?😡four lions to phele market rakh Diya Riya ko.huh.main katti tumse.arranged love ke update doge phir wapas friendship hogi.good bye.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome os

Love it

Thanks for pm