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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaps

Read the story today. Liked the concept.

Sending you buddy request. Please PM me when you update.


Thanks! :D

I have accepted your buddy request, so will be sending you PMs from now on. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sj236

The story is really well written!
Especially d start, it was just awsumm... D way u described d cars(i just love cars) and shashi's emotional blackmailing!!
So both of dem like each other, bt are hiding dat under der 'so called fights'!!
And loved ur imagination, i actually thought u wer an architect!
And also fabulous portrayal of fights ;)
waiting for d update eagerly.


Thanks! And glad you liked the cars bit...complete novice there. :p
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jakhushi

Arnav is really clueless... I guess guys at the age can be a little self obsessed... But still

Bechari Khushi..hating herself for the way she is behaving...yet unable to controlher behavior driven by her broken heart.

The way things are in the present...the intervention obviously didn't work.


Finally someone connects the past and the present but dont connect them too much just yet! ;) :D

Thanks for your feedback! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa

absolutely beautiful!
you penned their respective povs so brilliantly as if i was the one in place of that person!
i cannot handle so much grief and pain in love and hats off to varun who put khushi's needs before his. he readily put his love on the back-burner and tried to reconcile arshi. such an amazing person he is! :)

and now im curious like hell what actually happened between arshi??!!!
next update, pls put that part up! :P :)

i toh never ever going to be in a relationship.let my parents decide for me!
its such a stress and full of heartbreaks and pain. people who find true love are really really lucky! :)

can you pls write something in the "present" , a little yet funny fight or jealous much arnav? even a small part will be ok. im missing it. :P :D

loved it FP(yeah, thats your name from now. lol. i dont know your real name naa!)😊


Haha! Dont let this madcap ArHi deter you from relationships! ;) :D

About the present...lets see...the past is being unravelled right now, we shall come to the present soon enough :)

Thanks for your feedback! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mpuhan

seemed like real life ... it was so beautiful. Khushi becoming bitter and hating herself and Arnav too engrossed in his lovelife to get a hint about Khushi. Avery positive character Varun.


Thanks! I wanted it to not look artificial or fake, so am happy you thought it resembled what could happen for real. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushixoxo

Aww I feel bad for Varun! You portray him as such an angel! Khushi should just stick to him ;) hahaha

Lovely update! Can't wait to see what happens next!


Maybe she will...who knows? ;) :D

Thanks for your feedback! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the prologue. Loved it.
Its a great fun read. I would love to receive PMs when you update.

Thanks Shruti, for recommending it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Just read the prologue. Loved it.

Its a great fun read. I would love to receive PMs when you update.

Thanks Shruti, for recommending it.


Thanks! :D

And about the last line...what? O.o
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FieryPhoenix


Thanks so much! But I am confused...Varun ne aisi kya non-sensible cheez ki thi abhi tak? :p

And are you sure you are not sadistic? ;) :D

🤔 Its just that maybe i didnot like him...😆
And yes i am NOT sadistic...
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Posted: 11 years ago

I will once I update! Lol! :p

Provided you sent me a buddy request that is. :p
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