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@Sanaya.Barun

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Really felt bad for Khushi! Arnav is really being a jerk.. First he forgot her and now he's making fun of her :(

I hope he gets jealous of Varun!! You must be thinking whats with me and jealousy ! 😃 Well i love jealous Arnav, actually everyone does! Especially when Arnav is being a jerk! :D

Amazing update. And dont be disappointed with feedback dear! It will increase because you are doing an amazing job!

Thanks for PM 😊

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@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

What an exemplary example Arnav is of a stupid hormonal teenager -_-

Nonetheless, the chapter was beautifully written - Khushi's heartbreak was so clearly conveyed. My favorite part had to be the moment when Arnav was laughing at Khushi's expense. That was heart rending. And I'm suddenly beginning to like Varun, he seems to be a very understanding friend! Continue soon! <3

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

hey!
just came across this story and needless to say it IS amazzing!! 😊
initially i had quite a different point of view of this story with no idea of an impending past, heartbreak, etc etc...
ut right now, im truly loving the story!
can't wait for more. do update asap! like really asap!😊

do you pm?
if yes then do pm me!

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scarlet2012

@scarlet2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Arnav is making fun of Khushi in front of La 😡. varun seems to be a nice guy, it will be good to see Varun dating Khushi and making Arnav jealous.

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adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Feeling very bad for khushi😭.i think she should avoid him completely from now onwards because not a friend forget to pick der best friend when they are going for a party😡.i .really hate this arnav and he is making fun of her 😡.hope khushi will spend more time with varun from now onwards

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Just found and read the 7 parts of this story...and love it. Their past is so omnipresent in their today...

And such a heart breaking past for Khushi. Poor girl... I am not sure I can blame Arnav...he was young and silly...not to mention clueless. But the pains of young heart breaking...when the world seems like it will end. I feel for Khushi.

As for the rest of the story..in their present..enjoying your style... The wit and humor is great fun.

Look forward to the next update. Do PM me if possible pls.

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

I don't, usually comment on stories, here, but this story of yours, especially Chapter 7 A & B were so, wonderfully written that I couldn't resist the urge to let you know that your writing strikes a cord with me! Khushi's first love, first heartbreak, its so subtly written, have I said its wonderful, yet! Well, Arnav was being a completely ignorant ass, but I am willing to wait to say that till we see the other side of the story, Arnav's side! Anyway, awesome story, so far, curious to know what happens next!

Edited by archana.mh17 - 12 years ago

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Rayolight

@Rayolight

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Just read all chapters in one go...really well written! Loving the read. Arnav and Khushi are the same but their characters have been tweaked so well. Can't wait to see how it proceeds from here...lots of things fell into place in the first 7 chapters and now waiting for the next.

Update soon! Cheers!

Rayolight

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@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Wonderfully written...👏

Khushi's pain and heartbreak was palpable...

Arnav is being what a typical boy would be...oblivious to the what his best friend is feeling...don't blame him here but he could be a bit more understanding and sensible here, instead of showing off his sense of humour to impress Lavanya on Khushi's expense...

Varun is quite an understanding one here...loved how he tried to make Khushi happy...

Waiting for the next...