Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New* - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

"Then so be it...to the world you will be Urmila...the Princess of Mithila and younger Kulvadhu of Ayodhya...but in the inner quarters of this chamber ...in the deeper recesses of this suite...you will be my Mila as I will be yours!! The unstoppable, unrestrained, wild...passionate.. your true self...won't you?"


"I don't need my mehendi to tell me how much my husband loves me...I know he does...every time he looks at me...with every passing glance, every little gesture...tells me that.


Things like this make a relationship Beautiful .

Beautifully Written 👏 It was worth waiting . I am so sorry for being this late . I am the unlucky one anyways . I am actually quite Amazed with the way you represented their inner emotions , this is what a newly wedded go through , blaming their own selves for each silly mistake . Only time clears that ofcourse . I loved it completely . I could actually see Karan and Yukti enacting this 😳 ! You make them worth falling in Love all over again .


You RoCk GiRL😎

Waiting to read more Lakshmila from you .


Love,

Sruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago
Absolutely loved it...😛😛😛
1 prompt from me😳. Can you write something on Lakshman's jealousy😆. Like maybe after swayamvar, but before Lakshmila's marriage is fixed, if we could have an entry of another Prince(Maybe he came for Sita's swayamvar but fell for Urmila instead😃). He is pursuing Urmila but Urmila and Lakshman are yet to admit their feelings. Something like this. Sounds crazy I guess.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg riya what the hell are you huh?????
Absolutely beautiful, stunning awesome , wonderful!!!!!!!!
What can I say more!
You girl have every right to be made feel special by us!
Trust all you write is wonderful!!!!!!!
I love lakshmila and love them more after I read your works!
Remembers it before writing every time that we die to read what u write and every single piece written matters.
Xoxo
Big hugs,
Love you,
Ananya :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Riya I need more smut on lakshmila plzz write some more hot stuff
Edited by ananya925 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG! How are you able to write such good stuff?
It was dreamy!!!! Really
dreamy!!!
Beautifully written.
Loved it.
plz write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asmitag

OMG so amazing and u have beautifully incorporated whatever I wish to see in Lakshmila so 10 out of 10 from my side❤️👏🤗

Thank you Ashmita...for liking the update. It means a lot to me since it was technically your prompt.😳
Do keep reading😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god Riya you will kill me yr its amazing...
Urmilla worry for her new duties, Lakshman supporting her..awe..
Then jewellery Scene, mehndi scene...
Each and every part is brilliant..
Love it..
The last word always..that's fabulous..
Falling more in love with them through your writing...
U r Brilliant writer ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Meself

I promise I'll be back! Damn the day I am super busy people tend to come up with such pretty fictions!!


Sure...anytime you want to Shivani😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Totally love your writing...looking forward to the prompt about their thoughts during the various show scenes! There are not enough lakshmila moments in the show so kept rewatching their scenes but I am so glad I found your stories!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra


My condition is also like mila who can't express her feelings. Can't tell you how much I loved it.
Mila is so relatable that I believe that we all have a part of Mila in us.

My god, u hv explained each nd every scene so beautifully. I could visualise each nd every scene.

Thank you swati.

His sweet gesture, his concern, his love for her ws divine nd pure.
Our Lakshman is fully lattoo over Mila...isn't he???

Mehndi kissing scene, waiting scene, cursing himself...everything...each nd everything is well written.
Thanks once again darling😃
Kudos to you riya👏


Me full on blushing...kitna praise karoge tum log?😳

Edited by Riya_16 - 9 years ago

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