I I GUILTY II A ShAkhi TS. ( Last part on Pg-3 ) - Page 3

So beautiful

Especially when shaurya took care of anokhi

Its a wonderful story!! And I am so glad you finished it soon, so theres a complete story to read! Very well written and a beautiful story!

I liked Shaurya’s character. Probably when the show’s Shaurya becomes more accepting of the family dynamic he will be a little more calmer and little less stern towards Anokhi. I think then he will be similar to your story. Anokhi is great too! She is firm while confronting her parents and also trying to be self-sufficient.

Keep writing more, will look forward to it!

Read and re-read this beautiful piece thrice. Absolutely soft and heart-warming. Even Shaurya doesn’t seem too out of character. This is the real shaurya- hidden somewhere in prof cool xD. looking forward to more stories by you. ❤️

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Helloooo to mahiii from another mahi 😁😋🤩

This was so nice and sweet yaar. And not at all it was out of character. I truly believe that shaurya is actually this much caring and sweet. Its just because of his past he's wearing this shell. So its not too ott to read a shaurya like this. Rather it feels like a fresh breath.

Pyar to nahi hein abhi bhi...but caring bohut hein..to kya name du is ka? Ice pack wala love story? 😋😂 shaurya bechara ice pack latey latey thak gaya phir bhi cheeks se sunjha huya nishan na gaya . Sach mein bohut maja aya shaurya ki caring side ko padke

And that last part 😂😂consulting doctor 😂😂 flirty shaurya.

Wish yeh khatam na hota....yeh shaurya chalta hi rehta to aur padne ko mil jata 😭 but koyi na will eagerly wait to read more of your stories on shakhi.

Sending Love from mahi to another mahiii 😘😘😘

Heyy Mahi!! Thank you so very much for your review, it does mean a lot to me. Also, if you want me to write on any prompt, do suggest!!❤❤

Sending lot's of love back at ya!💕

Originally posted by: Gurveen

So beautiful

Especially when shaurya took care of anokhi

Thank youu so much!!💕💕

Originally posted by: anamika365

Its a wonderful story!! And I am so glad you finished it soon, so theres a complete story to read! Very well written and a beautiful story!

I liked Shaurya’s character. Probably when the show’s Shaurya becomes more accepting of the family dynamic he will be a little more calmer and little less stern towards Anokhi. I think then he will be similar to your story. Anokhi is great too! She is firm while confronting her parents and also trying to be self-sufficient.

Keep writing more, will look forward to it!

Thank youu bro! I think that too, I'm so looking forward to seeing Shaurya this caring for Anokhi!

Once again, thank you for reviewing!❤❤

Originally posted by: aatiii

Read and re-read this beautiful piece thrice. Absolutely soft and heart-warming. Even Shaurya doesn’t seem too out of character. This is the real shaurya- hidden somewhere in prof cool xD. looking forward to more stories by you. ❤️

Thank youu so very much!!💕💕

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Loved it...beautiful

Thank youu so much!❤

Amazing, written so well, had a great time reading this story will wait eagerly to read more from you, thanku for the update

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Amazing, written so well, had a great time reading this story will wait eagerly to read more from you, thanku for the update

Thank youu so much!!💕

I'm kinda working on as OS. May upload it today or tomorrow. 🙈