HaYa FF Mere humsafar Part 3 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii guys.. This is Shraddha and I'm going to start an ff on HaYa. I am not a very good writer but I'll try my best. At any point if u don't like the story just let me know. And please help me suggest a good title for it.

My story will start from HaYa's marriage. The poison drama has ended and they have reached Harman's place. How will be their married life since Soumya's secret is yet to be revealed? Will their love be strong to conquer all the problems? What will Maninder do? Who is that veiled lady? Should I continue?


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Index -
Prologue - Above
Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - Page 2
Part 3 - Page 3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It will be an exciting journey...

Title suggestion-HaYa FF :

-mere jeeva saathi

-mere humsafar 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So here is the first part of my ff. Hindi and English both are not my mother tongues. So if there is any mistake sorry for that & feel free to talk about it. :-)

Part 1

HaYa's marriage was a grand affair. People from the whole village witnessed it. But during the wedding Soumya, the bride was poisoned & nobody knows who it was. Harman was at first worried as well as furious to know that someone did this to his Gulabo. By God's grace she was safe now and was in Harman's house after her bidaai from her mayaka. It was night and Harman was waiting anxiously to go to his room but no one was letting him to do so. (Poor soul)
Harman(in mind) - Yeh kya siyappa hai? Koi mujhe andar jaane kyu nahi de raha? Had hai. Ghar mera, Room mera, Biwi meri.. (What's all this nonsense? Why no one is letting me to go inside? This is the limit. It is my house, my room, my wife..) He smiled at the mention of his wife. She was so innocent, so cute, so pure and she was his now. He feel contented at that thought.
All the rituals came to an end and finally everyone have some mercy on Harman and let him leave to his room.
In room, there she sat in the middle of their bed. Looking stunning in her wedding attire. Her face was covered with a veil. He was happy but couldn't understand what to do. She was shy and he didn't wanted to rush things. She was going to be there throughout his life and making her comfortable was his first priority. He slowly marched towards her and sat on the bed. Removing the veil which was covering her face he did something which he wanted to do since he saw her. He complimented her.
Harman - You look stunning.
Soumya blushed hard he smiled and continued. Mai bahut der se ye baat kehne ki koshish kar raha tha magar waqt hi nahi mila. (I was trying to tell u this from a long time but didn't got the time)
She smiled in understanding and nodded her head. He took her hands in his to see the mehandi on her hand while she shivered a little on his touch. He felt proud seeing his name carved on her hand. He decided to talk further.
Harman - Waise tum thik ho? Wo food poisoning kaise ho gayi tumhe? Kya khaya tha tumne? (Between are u alright? What did u eat which lead to causing u food poisoning?)
Soumya - Jee wo bas kheer khayi thi jee aur kuchh nahi. (I just ate the kheer) She replied hesitantly.
Harman - Koi nahi. Dawai kha lo jo Dr. ne tumhi di hai aur so jao tum thak gayi hogi aur tumhari tabiyat bhi kharab thi. (Its ok. Eat ur medicine and sleep. U must be tired and u r not well too)
He got up from his place to occupy the space on the sofa just when Soumya called out for him making him turn.
Soumya - Ji.. Ek baat puchhani thi? (I just wanted to ask u something?)
Harman - Haan ji boliye (Yes please)
Soumya - Wo.. Ji wo..
She was being hesitated but Harman stood there quietly to let her complete.
Soumya - Ji wo Suhaagraat me kya hota hai? (What actually happens on the first night?)
Harman's eyes grew wide as she asked the question. He didn't expected this coming. It was too awkward to say anything. Then he looked at her and saw innocence in her eyes. He smiled and replied.
Harman - Theory se jyaada practically samjhaunga to jyada samajh me aayega. Lekin aaj nahi phir kisi din. Pehle ek dusre ko jaan lete hai phir iss baare me baat karenge. Good night Gulabo. (It is much easy to tell practically than theoretically. But not today some other day. Lets get to know each other first then we will talk. Good night Gulabo.)
Soumya couldn't actually understand what he said but she smiled and replied. Ji good night.
That's how their married life started on happy note without realising the intensity of the storm which was on coming there way.

Precap - Soumya's muh dikhayi and Maninder's another plan to harm her.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thats so cute...
waiting for the next part ..good job dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

It will be an exciting journey...

Title suggestion-HaYa FF :

-mere jeeva saathi

-mere humsafar 🤣


Thanks dear. I loved that second one.. Mere humsafar :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubeada

awesome start

plz continue...


Thank u. Will surely do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

thats so cute...

waiting for the next part ..good job dear


Thank u so much. Will update the next part by tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww its so cute...gosh somu n uske innocent sawal...🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys.. I am back with the 2nd part. Well I guess no one missed me :-p.. There will be no Surabhi staying with HaYa in my story.. So enjoy :-) and the title credit goes to Hybrid_freak. Thanks for the lovely title dear

Part 2 The next day rose with new relations, journeys and new revelations. The day was Soumya's first day at her sasural and her muh dikhayi is held on this day. The house was beautifully decorated with flowers and lights. Harak and Preeto were very excited as their sher puttar was married to a really beautiful girl not only in terms of beauty but her heart was of pure gold. Harman was already up but he didn't woke Soumya up as she was not well. Soumya's mother-in-law herself came to HaYa's room to wake her up.

Preeto - Soumya puttar.. Uth ja. Subah ho gayi hai. Aaj teri muh dikhayi ki rasam hai.

Soumya who was now embarrassed that her MIL herself came to wake her up sat suddenly with a jerk and looked down.

Preeto - Kya hua Soumya? Teri tabiyat thik nahi hai kya?

Soumya - Ji mai.. Thik hun. Wo aap yahan.. Mai jaldi uth.. (she couldn't form a proper sentence)

Preeto - Koi baat nahi beta. Thakan ho jati hai kabhi kabhi aur teri tabiyat bhi thik nahi thi kal. Hum samjhate hai iss baat ko

Soumya's eyes welled up as Preeto spoke.

Preeto - Are.. Are rona nahi. Maine teri maa se vaada kiya hai ki hum tumhe apni beti banakar rakhenge aur apni beti ke liye to mai itna kar hi sakti hu.

She instructed Soumya to get ready and wait till the guests arrive. Harman who was watching the scene from the door was delighted.
After sometime Soumya got ready in a dark pink coloured lehenga which has silver design on it. It was elegant & not too heavy. She was looking breathtakingly gorgeous in her attire. She was wearing her jewellery when Harman entered the room. He looked at her from top to bottom. The colour suited her fair skin complexion and she looked radiant. They shared an eyelock. He held her gaze a little too longer. (HaYa bg) He came towards the dressing table while Soumya broke the eye contact & looked in the mirror. Harman smiled and made her turn towards him without breaking the eye contact the brought his hand towards her partition and filled it with vermilion. Soumya stood bewildered at his action while he smiled, "Perfect" he muttered & left the room leaving his blushing wife behind.

Here Maninder was furious as his plan to kill Soumya failed. He decided to do something to Soumya which will look like an accident. He dressed himself as a waiter with fake beard and all and reached Soumya's sasural.

All the guests arrived, Preeto called Soumya downstairs. All the ladies were complementing Soumya as she was looking beautiful. They were showering her with gifts and blessings. Just then Harman entered and sat on a chair a little away from the tamjham. He was drinking cold drink from a glass without even diverting his gaze from Soumya even for a second.

Suddenly all the crowd ran towards the door as Harman pushed his wife from her place causing her to fall on the ground with a thud and Harman on top of her. Soumya's closed eyes were indicating just how much scared she was. But some other thing caught his eye that was her tears. He hated them. He slowly got up to see the horrible site in front of him. The jhumar was shattered in the middle of the big hall, his eyes travelled towards Soumya's leg which was bleeding due to some glass pieces pierced her tender skin. Blood was continuously flowing from her wounds. He instantly picked her up and placed her on the sofa.

Harman (shouting) - Koi dr ko phone karo aur first aid leke aao tab tak.
His voice softened as he looked towards Soumya "ro mat Soumya abhi thik ho jayega" while she just nodded like an obedient kid while sobbing.

Harak singh quickly told some servants to clean the mess. While the gathered guests especially ladies started to talk.

Lady1 - Dekho ji.. Kal bete ki shadi karvayi nahi ki aaj ye ho gaya.

lady2 - ha.. Ye to bahut bada apshagun ho gaya. Kanch (glass) Ka tutna ashubh hota hai ji.

Lady3 - nayi bahu ke aate hi itna bada apshagun ho gaya.

Harman became furious as he heard that he got up & turned towards the ladies.

Harman - Agar aap meri biwi ki bare me achha nahi bol sakte to bura bolane ka haq aapko kisi ne nahi diya. Wo Soumya Harman Singh uske baare me kuchh bhi bolane se pehle soch lijiye. Hamne yaha aapko hamari khushiyo me shariq hone ke liye bulaya hai agar aap vo nahi kr sakte to hame aapke taano ki bhi koi jarurat nahi hai.

With that he swiftly move towards Soumya picked her up bridal style and rushed to his room telling his mother to send he doctor to his room asap.


Precap - Saumya's pag phere & Harman confronting Maninder.


P.S. I know its kinda boring and I am sorry for that. I am just busy with my admissions will post the next part soon.



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Edited by shraddhask - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

Awww its so cute...gosh somu n uske innocent sawal...🤣
Waitimg for new update


Thank u so much.. Yeah she is too innocent. Have updated the 2nd part. Hope u'll enjoy it too

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