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Part_7

Feroz decided to meet his bhabhi but as he knew Ikhtiyar wouldn't allow so he went to her house without telling anyone. Razia just returned from college and was preparing lunch when her door bell rang. Yasir came to open the door

Yasir; jee kahiye

Feroz; uh bha..mera matlab Razia jee ghar pe hen?

Yasir; haan pr aap kon?

Feroz; main Feroz Mirza ...aap unhe bulaiye na

Yasir; kon Feroz Mirza, hum nhi jante aapko

he was closing the door but Razia stopped him. Feroz's jaw dropped

Razia; jee kahiye

Feroz; aap RAzia hen?

Razia; jee

Feroz; aaj smjh me aya mera bhai kyun intizar kr rha tha

Razia; aap kon?

Razia; jee me wo...apka devar...Ikhtiyar ka chota bhai Feroz hun me bhabhijaan..nhi ye bht old fashioned lag rha hai, bhabhz

Razia lowered her eyes, she was not prepared for all this so soon, how can he send his brother to meet her already. She was still thinking if she should let him in or not when Ikhtiyar arrived.

Ikhtiyar; tu yahan kya kr rha hai?..maaf krna iska dimag khrab hai bina btaye chala aya...mene kaha tha na sahi waqt pe mila dunga...ye ami ka bht ladla hai isiliye uth patang harkaten krta hai...aur kya tareeqa hai aate hi devar bhabhi shuru hogaya tera

Yasir raised his eyebrows

Yasir; aapi ye hai aapka boyfriend?

RAzia; YAsir!!

Yasir; handsome hai, iska toh bhai bhi acha hai yr, pr shazia aapi se chota hoga ye

Feroz; toh kya hua..Ittefaq hai na, Ikte ka bestie, wo bhi handsome hai yr

Ikhtiyar; me tera khoon kr dunga chup kr...im sos orry for the embarrasement

Razia smiled.

Razia; koi baat nahi aap dono andar ajaiye

Razia opened the door and they both entered, Ikhtiyar was very irritated

Razia; hum khana bna rhe hen aap dono khayenge?

Feroz; nhi bhabhz hum dono ne abhi abhi nashta kiya hai

Razia smiled, Ikhtiyar hid his face in his hands.

Ikhtiyar stood up and walked towards the fridge to get some water, he saw something on the table and stopped, it was a new sketch, he picked it up and was shocked to see his face drawn in warrior clothes . His eyes opened wide, pupils dilated and he started sweating, he looked at Razia in anger , she was busy listening to Feroz's continous chatter. Ikhtiyar went to RAzia and pulled her from her arm and out of the living room towards the stairs that led to her room, and pinned her to the wall.

Ikhtiyar; ye kya hai?

Razia; ye toh bas..

Ikhtiyar; wo mar chuka hai 800 saal pehle, aur wo aapka kuch nhi lagta, mere andar use mat dhundo Razia, me Ikhtiyar hun, tumhara Ikhtiyar, wo Razia SUltan ka Altunia na, tum mujhe mere liye chaho, na k is liye k mujhme tumhe koi aur dikhta hai

Razia; pr...aap

Ikhtiyar; nahi!! (he said with bloodhsot eyes) Main Altunia nahi hoon, tum smjh jao to acha hoga wrna mujhe bhulana ata hai

he left her house in anger, she stood shocked.

Feroz; ab ise kya hua..bhabhz sb thee toh hai na

Razia went upsatirs without replying.

Feroz was unable to understand so he left not having another choice. Yasir went to Razia and found her lying on her bed crying holding her sketch she recently made

Yasir; aapi aise rote nhi

but she didnt listen, Yasir called Shazia over

Razia hugged Shazia and kept crying

Shazia; arre pagal isme itna rone ki kya baat hai

Razia; aapi wo hamare Malik nhi hain

Yasir put his hand over his head, Razia kept crying and Shazia was trying her best to reason with her.

Ikhtiyar on the other side was furious he kicked his car and punched it making dents, Feroz, Ittefaq and Zaroon exchanged looks.

Ikhtiyar; dimag khrab ho rha hai hamara, sb kuch tod denge hum

Feroz got soft drinks in glass bottles, they finisedh drinking and gave the bottles to Ikhtiyar to break.

Feroz; aur laon?

Ikhtiyar; 800 saal pehle nhi mara hta toh aaj marjata wo

he saw a poor man going home with an empty cart and stopped him

Ikhtiyar; ye lo (he gave him 60,000) ab ye thela hamen do aur jao

the poor man blessed him and ran went, Ikhtiyar kicked, punched broke the cart into pieces then broke its pieces futher then set it on fire

Feroz; ami na mirchiyan khati thi jab ye paida hone wala tha, Subatra aunty ne btaya tha mujhe

Zaroon and Ittefaq made faces.

After sometimes Ikhtiyar sat down on the floor and put both of his hands in his hair.

Ikhtiyar; humne bht ziada dara toh nhi diya hoga use, itni masoom hai wo, dikat kya hai hamari, lekin uske dil pe kisi aur ki hukumat bardasht bhi toh nhi hti na

Feroz; ghar chalen?

Ikhtiyar; nhi, wo ror hi hogi toh dil dukhaya humne uska, hum us se milne ja rhe hen

Feroz; tum pagal ho kya

Zaroon; uska baap agaya hoga ghar pe, sb sone wale honge yr

Ikhtiyar; hamen nhi pta hum ja rhe

Feroz; chalo yr hum toh chalen, isko ami nhi sudhar pai hum kya kr lenge

Ikhtiyar stood outside her house late at night, he knew there was no way he could go inside through the main door so he decided to enter her room, he climbed the house by the side and entered her room, it was very easy as the houses were very near and he had great climbing skills.
It was dark inside with only the moonlight falling on her face, he sat besides her, mesmerized by her angelic beauty, he caressed her cheek and felt her tear marks. The thought of inflicting this pain on her pierced his heart, he leaned down and kissed her cheek, she woke up and flinched.

Razia; aap yahan is waqt?

Ikhtiyar; shhh!

he silenced her with his finger. she covered herself with her blanket, and lowered her eyes. Ikhtiyar was drowned in the aura of her beauty, her heavy breaths and lowered eyes tiggered the man in him further, he leaned closer to her, she was about to hit the crown of her bed hard but he put his hand behind her head and secured it. He leaned closer, closing his eyes slowly he tried to kiss her lips but she pushed him and rushed to pick up her dupatta

Razia; aap jaiye yahan se, abu ko pta chal gya to bht bura hoga

Ikhtiyar; Razia hum..humen maaf krdijiye, hum apko...humse bardasht nhi hta k aap kisi aur se...

Razia; kya? hum toh...wo toh bas ek crush hen na

Ikhtiyar; nhi...aap humare andar use dhund rhi hen jo hamen gawara nhi, ...hum wo nhi hain Razia

RAzia; theek hai hum smjh gaye ab jaiye yahan se aur mat miliyega humse ab

she hit a never, he grapped her close, holding her from her arms.

Ikhtiyar; hum aapse mohobbat krte hen Razia, aap pe haq hai hamara, aur is haq ko hum cheen bhi lenge

Razia felt her heart thudding like a birds feathers, he talked like her Altunia but he didnt want to be compared, she knew she would irk him further if she says anything and that he was her Altunia but he didnt like to be called that, and she knew even the real Altunia would have hated it. She hugged him dugging her face into his chest, feeling his heartbeat, she could feel that his heart belonged to her and only her. He was deeply touched by her gesture and held her close, letting her into his heart, filling the gap that was always meant for her.

She moved away and looked into his eyes.

Razia; hum aisa kuch nhi krenge jo aapko na pasand ho

Ikhtiyar smiled and kissed her forehead.

Razia; ab please jaiye

Ikhtiyar nodded and left, she stood by the window and watched him go.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Ohhooo... gussa toh dekho inka😛 janab ko khud ke saath bhi comparison pasand nahi😆 Ama ab kya khud ko maroge😆
Razia was smart enough to understand that Altunia/Ikhtiyar would never like comparison
And Feroz is really cute😃
Yasir bhi kuch kam nahi hai😛
An awesome update altogether
Thanks for updating
Will be waiting for the next part😃
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Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Ohhooo... gussa toh dekho inka😛 janab ko khud ke saath bhi comparison pasand nahi😆 Ama ab kya khud ko maroge😆

Razia was smart enough to understand that Altunia/Ikhtiyar would never like comparison
And Feroz is really cute😃
Yasir bhi kuch kam nahi hai😛
An awesome update altogether
Thanks for updating
Will be waiting for the next part😃

hehehe 😆 thnx lovely 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aapi yeh hai aapka BOYFRIEND ... hahhaha 🤣

Ikte ka friend itefaq hai na...main tera khoon kar dunga chup kar🤣🤣🤣 i like this name btw IKTE ...

Why is he jealous of himself only 😆 okay i know hes not historic Altunia here but still. This obsession is new to me...getting jealous of someone whos like a celeb or dead hero or something like that...more than jealousy it feels like he doesnt wna share at her any cost...
share is also the wrong word...more like he doesnt wna be compared to anyone yes and love him for who he is...aaraarggghhh all the reasons fit in actually.

Ammi mirchiyan khaati thi jab yeh paida hone wala tha 🤣🤣🤣
i love him more when hes angry

badtameez aurat she didnt let him kiss her...anyway he will steal his kiss soon enough...
hum apna haq cheen lenge !!😲 aur aajkal ke ladke be like...aana hai toh aa warna bhaad mein jaa 😵

he is everything what we dream Atlunia to be then how the hell can she stop looking for her Altunia in him ❤️

update soon...thank you for everything u always did for me 🤗 and still do...🤗
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Originally posted by: princess200

aapi yeh hai aapka BOYFRIEND ... hahhaha 🤣


Ikte ka friend itefaq hai na...main tera khoon kar dunga chup kar🤣🤣🤣 i like this name btw IKTE ...

Why is he jealous of himself only 😆 okay i know hes not historic Altunia here but still. This obsession is new to me...getting jealous of someone whos like a celeb or dead hero or something like that...more than jealousy it feels like he doesnt wna share at her any cost...
share is also the wrong word...more like he doesnt wna be compared to anyone yes and love him for who he is...aaraarggghhh all the reasons fit in actually.

Ammi mirchiyan khaati thi jab yeh paida hone wala tha 🤣🤣🤣
i love him more when hes angry

badtameez aurat she didnt let him kiss her...anyway he will steal his kiss soon enough...
hum apna haq cheen lenge !!😲 aur aajkal ke ladke be like...aana hai toh aa warna bhaad mein jaa 😵

he is everything what we dream Atlunia to be then how the hell can she stop looking for her Altunia in him ❤️

update soon...thank you for everything u always did for me 🤗 and still do...🤗

he hates the fact that she has an obsession that is not him 😆 celeb ho ya kuch aur her mind should belong to him only
did u like Feroz?
she wnt left him do anything ...so u know what would happen next😛
i hope my ALtunia gets a bit j of altunia too😆

thanks kis ko boli be 😡
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jaldiii update kar whats gna happen next !!!!
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Part_8

Ikhtiyar had to go out of the city for two days and he was unable to tell Razia as he didnt have her contact number, and he was dying to listen to her voice now, as soon as he landed he asked Feroz to take him to her house

Feroz; yr aise roz roz bin bulaye jana acha lagta hai kya tujhe?

Ikhtiyar; bin bulaye dusron k ghar nhi jate, wo toh hamara sasural hai na tu chup kr

they reached the area, parked the car and walked their way to the narrow lane

Feroz; yahan koi function hai shayad

Ikhtiyar; kahin Razia k baap ko pta toh nhi chal gya, meri Razia ki shadi toh nhi, me qatl krdunga

Feroz; abe aram se, chal k dekh toh len pehle

Ikhtiyar; hamen andr kyun ghusne denge, hamare toh kapde bhi occasion k liye galat hen

Feroz; arre yr..just follow me

Feroz went ahead and hugged the men standing to receive the guests, he gestured to Ikhtiyar to come forward

Feroz; ye hai mera bhai Ikhtiyar, abhi kuch din pehle hi aya hai America se, acha uncle hum andar chalte hen, bhabhi k deedar jo krne hen

Ikhtiyar; ye kya hai?

Feroz; abe guest ko receive krne ladki wale khade hen to me bn gya dulhe ka dost, seena taane akad k chal rhe honge ladke wale toh un k samne me dulhan ka door ka bhai, tactics tu na bollywood movies dekha kr

Ikhtiyar made a face, Mrs.Shuqla saw him

Shuqla; are Ikhtiyar beta kahan the dikhe nhi itne din, acha hua tum agaye wrna Shanno ki shadi me kami reh hi jati

Feroz; Hello aunty me Feroz Ikhtiyar ka bhai

Ikhtiyar; aunty Razia kahan hai?

Shuqla; are wah beta tera to bhai bhi teri hi tarah sundar hai, wari jaon, Razia apne ghar se kuch lene gai hai

Ikhtiyar; thank God, Feroz me Razia ko dekh k aya tum yahan sambhal k rehna

Feroz ; arre dont worry i will manage

Ikhtiyar sneaked into Razia's house and saw her standing by the kitchen top, she was busy in some work, she wore a dark brown ghagra choli with a huge shiny dupatta covering her back. Her hair open loose, and Ikhtiyar got desperate to see how she looked. He went to her and pulled her from her arm and held her from her waist, she was shocked.

Razia; aap?

Ikhtiyar was dumbfound, she was shining, her cheeks were brighter, her blush deeper her lips softer and way more pink then usual, she had applied very little make up and that was enhancing her beautiful features, her eyes, with the little kajal she put were glowing as she stared at him widely.

Razia; kahan the aap? do din se...hum toh

Ikhtiyar; saheli ki sahdi pe aap itni khoobsoorat lag rhi hen, hamari sahdi k din kya hoga, aap parde me rahiyega warna bht kuch galat hojayega

Razia lowered her eyes and her blush intensified, her leaned to kiss her cheek but she moved her head again

Ikhtiyar; kya hai ye?

Razia; aapne btaya nhi aap kahan the?

Ikhtiyar; I'm sorry meri jaan, me tumse tumhara contact no. hi lena bhul gya chalo abhi forun mere phone pe apna no. save kro, i missed u like hell,

Razia took his phone and saved her no.

Razia; aap the kahan?

Ikhtiyar; kuch urgent kaam se Mumbai gya tha, I'm so sorry

Razia; its ok, mujhe laga aap naraz hain us baat ko le k

Ikhtiyar; mujhe baat yaad nhi yaad dilana bhi nhi ghussa phirse ajayega

Razia smiled.

Ikhtiyar; acha ye shadi kis ki hai?

Razia; meri dost hai Shanno uski, are aap ne..hatiye, mujhe ye sb le k jana hai, khana lagne ka same hone hi wala hai

Ikhtiyar; kya? toh catering wale lagayenge na

Razia; ye aap ki high society ki shadi nhi janab, hamare yahan mohalle ki kisi beti ki shadi hti hai toh sb mil k khana bnate hen, jese shuqla aunty aur Simran aunty ne biryani bnai hai, Yaqut sir sharbat bna rhe hen, Mehra uncle ne curry bnai hai

Ikhtiyar; aapne kya bnaya hai?

Razia; aalo ki tikiya, bachon ko bht pasand ati hai

Ikhtiyar; aap pagal hain kya, itne saare logon k liye aapne akele ye tikiyan bnai hen, aapke nazuk se haath

Razia; akele nhi aapi aur abu ne madad ki na

Ikhtiyar; ya maula, dekho Razia aaj k baad tum koi bhari kaam nhi krogi, tum hamari Razia ho

Razia; dekhiye, jb hamari shadi hogi toh yehi sb log hamare liye bhi yehi krenge

Ikhtiyar; hamari shadi yahan nhi hogi, Razia..

Yasir came inside

Yasir; aapi jaldi kro

Razia; haan ayi, she took her stuff and left the house with Yasir

Ikhtiyar followed her and he was shocked, Feroz was sitting with some guys and laughing.

Ikhtiyar; ye nhi sudharne wala, clown!!

Feroz saw him and came running.

Feroz; maine sb pta kr liya hai, wo dekh wahan jo betha hai na, tail lage huye baal, choti si ankhen aur gol se mun wala, wo hai Razia ka baap aur tera sasur, Librarian Nasir Ahmed

Ikhtiyar made a face

Ikhtiyar; ye hai Razia ka baap, zarur maa pe gayi hai, ye toh kahin se bhi..khair tu kr kya rha hai?

Feroz; taluqat badha rha hun aur kya

Ikhtiyar; tu kr apna kaam me ja rha hun

he went to search for Razia, RAzia was standing near a table setting her food. He went to her.

Ikhtiyar; ye lehenga bht old fashioned hai

Razia; hamari ammi ka hai

Ikhtiyar; oh sorry, bht acha hai, aur aap toh hamen hamesha hi khoobsoorat lagti hain

Razia; kya chahiye aapko?

Ikhtiyar; ek kiss!

Razia looked at him in anger.

Razia; apne jazbaat ko qaboo main rakhiye, humne abhi tk abu ko bhi nhi btaya aur kese btayen kya batayen, hum...aap khud hi baat krlijiye na

Ikhtiyar; okay, hum ja k bol dete hen main apki beti ka boyfriend hun

Razia; aapka dimag khrab hogaya hai, sb aapko maar maar k bharta bna denge aur phir humara milna khtam aur hamari shadi kisi ajeeb insan se pakki

Ikhtiyar; koi haath toh uthaye tod k de denge, aur aapki shadi toh humse hi hogi chahe koi mane ya na mane, aap hi toh chahti hen hum aapke abu se baat kren

Razia; haan shadi k baare me na, hamara haath mangiye aap abu se

Ikhtiyar; kya? itni jaldi? dekho Razia i love u, pr mujhe kuch waqt bitana hai tumhare saath as a boyfriend free of tension yaar

Razia; shadi tension hai? dekhiye hum aapse itna ghul mil nhi skte bina kisi rishte k

He wanted to bang his head in the nearest wall , ofcourse she was a girl from the lower middle class, she was not allowed to have a boyfriend, but he was not ready for marriage yet. He was 29 and not ready and she was just 22 and not even sure about him yet she wanted commitment.

Ikhtiyar; Razia meri baat

some girls came and took Razia away, Ikhtiyar sighed, Feroz came to him

Feroz; yar ye sharbat pee k dekh na bht lazeez hai

Ikhtiyar; yahan meri life me itni tension hai tujhe sharbat ki padi hai, idiot

Feroz; kya hua

Ikhtiyar; ghar chal k batonga, i want to kiss...actually na, mujhe hamesha apni zid puri khud hi krni padhti hai no one ever gives in

he left, Feroz was confused, Ikhtiyar went straight to Razia

Ikhtiyar; hamen restroom use krna hai , Razia aap hamen bta skti hain hum kahan jayen

Razia nodded and came to him, she took him to her house and as soon as they were inside he pulled her from her waist and pinned her to the wall

Ikhtiyar; jab mene kaha i wnat a kiss that means i want it, aap itni haseen lag rhi hen ye kya zulm hai hum pe

Razia; dekhiye chodiye humen, kisi ne dekh liya toh?

Ikhtiyar; dekh le, hum sb se lad lenge, aur aapko utha k le jayenge, aapko hamare rehte sirf Uparwale aur humse darne ki zarurat hai

He grabbed her waist tightly and put his hand on her neck, into her hair, bringing her face closer, he leaned forward, her breaths sped up, she was panting, her heartbeat raced, he closed his eyes slowly as he neared her lips, and tightening his grip on her waist and holding her head steady he touched her lips with his, she put her hands on his shoulders , he deepened the kiss, sucking her lower lip, but knowing how uncomfortable she felt he left her.

She looked down and was breathless, he lifted her face with his finger under her chin.

Ikhtiyar; hum aapke saath zabardasti nhi krna chahte pr humse raha bhi nhi jata, do humne beech ka rasta apna liya

Razia smiled a little, he pulled her into a hug. He hugged her so tight she was lifted above her feet. She hugged him back, feeling the love.

Ikhtiyar; I love you so much

she twirled with her in his arms

Razia; bas bas, humen chaqar ajayenge

he put her back on her feet.

Ikhtiyar; aap ko bhi kuch bolna hai

Razia; acha? humen kuch sooj nhi rha

she ran out of the house.

Ikhtiyar smirked.

Ikhtiyar; aapke abu k problem ka kuch toh krna hi hoga

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jo haq pyaar se nahi milta ussey cheenna padhta hai ☺️

I loved the update...i love feroz a lot too...i can imagine ankit more than rohit here actually. i forgot to write this in the previous comment...

isko shaadi se kya dikkat hai hes 29 for gods sake !!! razia ki umar badha thoda it looks like an age gap btwn a very hateful couple we know. if hes 29 she should be 24... 22 is too young yaar.

i want this stupid dikkat of his to fade away with time and marry her soon enough...i have a fantasy in mind abt their shaadi tujhe baadmein batati hoon...i got the idea frm his dikkat wala thing only...

yeh thoda opposite types hogaya...technically it was Razia Sultan delaying the marriage...

The kiss☺️ haq se cheena hua kiss trick wala kiss 😆

but gonna end it with...FEROZ IS SOOO CUTE MAN 😳 im finding him so cuddle worthy for some reason
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Originally posted by: princess200

jo haq pyaar se nahi milta ussey cheenna padhta hai ☺️


I loved the update...i love feroz a lot too...i can imagine ankit more than rohit here actually. i forgot to write this in the previous comment...

isko shaadi se kya dikkat hai hes 29 for gods sake !!! razia ki umar badha thoda it looks like an age gap btwn a very hateful couple we know. if hes 29 she should be 24... 22 is too young yaar.

i want this stupid dikkat of his to fade away with time and marry her soon enough...i have a fantasy in mind abt their shaadi tujhe baadmein batati hoon...i got the idea frm his dikkat wala thing only...

yeh thoda opposite types hogaya...technically it was Razia Sultan delaying the marriage...

The kiss☺️ haq se cheena hua kiss trick wala kiss 😆

but gonna end it with...FEROZ IS SOOO CUTE MAN 😳 im finding him so cuddle worthy for some reason

i know feroz is damn cute😛 i was gonna make her 20😆 but tere dar se 22 krdiya😛
yuck that couple🤢 he will marry her soon dnt worry i will tell u😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome part
What I liked the most...ummm... their romance😳😛
Then...Feroz😃 he's so cute😛
And Altu kar lo yaar shaadi😆
I second arshia di. Di plz make her 24 or 25 plzzz
And I'm waiting to see how Altunia will manaofy his soon to be father in law😆
Beautiful update altogether👏
Loved it😃
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