DESIREgfh - Page 3

Originally posted by: Shopau

Oh god...

sabse pehle toh yeh batao ki ek update padne ke pehle hi dusra aur phir teesra kaise aa jata hai????😆

Coming to the updates... Mirza and Rico's bonding was just aww!!! the whole update...It was so cute... looking forward to more father-son moments

Razia's past is making me cry...😭 And I am not liking this Mirza😡 (Past wala yaar) I am imagining Rohit Purohit from Aise na karo Vida... HAHA!! if u have watched him in that show.

And I was about to tell you while reading the update that Rico should be calling Razia's Ammi NANI not DADI... but then the suspense was broken. I had a strange weird smile on my face knowing that Mirza's mom is helping Razia. 😃

Actually my reaction was much like ABDUL's...😲

DNA Kaise match nahi hoga... DNA KA BAAP bhi MATCH hoga!!! hehe😆

Continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: arshia200

doosra and teesra updates come bcos of me...i pester her to update...read my comments ull knw how madly impatient i was getting...but offcourse u already know that...considering i have pestered u too no less🤣

AND I LIKE THIS MIRZA...I LIKED HIM AS ARYAMAN TOO...does tht make me bad🤣
bt i mainly like this wala mirza coz of the way she described his feelings...its wrong i knw bt only bcos hes so HAWT ...thts another reason im ignoring the wrong feelings...jo sahi ho jayega dont worry...
P.S- i have a thing for rough and tough guys ..dominating guys...but not in the bad way...in a cute romantic and protective way...which mirza too will be about razia here...im positive of tht ...rather shravani made tht clear ...i understood it from the way she described him and his feelings towards her.😊

Originally posted by: Shopau

Me too!!! I like the dominating guys as well...but don't know why I feel that guys do know when their dominance is being well accepted and when not... Just like Mirza in the present part of the story is quite dominating as well... he still wants her at any cost. That's kinda HAWT... but i just couldn't stand where he forcefully kissed her. It was too torturous for me!!!

Though probably if he kissed her the same way now in the present... I would kinda have found it to be REALLY HAWT. a way of his to claim her and their litlle one.

But just when he first saw her... he didn't know of her life... her problems nothing. And at that point it just feels LUST no LOVE is there.

Therefore I said I didn't like the PAST Mirza.

Though I know the present one will make it ALL IS WELL with his HAWT and NAUGHTY ways...

hope u understand my point.

love

Shopau

Originally posted by: arshia200

aaarreyyy off course i do yaar...it took me one more reading of ur comment to spot that word "past mirza" past...and before i could edit my comment...u commented... but nevertheless even though i didnt see the word past...i still understand ur view point...in reality if someone does tht to a girl its an immediate outburst of protests from everyone arnd and its NOT right at all for something of tht sort to happen with any girl...i definitely know that and agrree to that...But only bcos of my soft corner for mirza and the way she described his present restlessness, i chose to sort of overlook it...though her past shatters me in pieces...lost parents...lost everything and then mirzas horror...thats why i told shravani kii jo bhi yeh kar raha hai..desire hai...wants her at any cost...seems hawt yes...bt make him realize tht he loves her and make him pour some tenderness and care towards her.

i understood ur point yaar and u were right in every way...mujhe galat naa samajh meri jaan🤗

Originally posted by: cuteshravani

yes!! i agree with both of u arshia and shopu that he is dominating and also in a wrong path!! and that's the main point of the story here. the story will describe u how a ruthless lusty person could be changed into a loveble, and seewt caring person becoz of love.

it's not only the journey of two love birds but the change in them as well as their relationship. here i've just told about a bit of their history...the whole story is still there to come.

thank u

hope i have't offened any of u

by any meance and if u people feel that the story is being too clumsy or something like that tell me.thank u.🥱

Originally posted by: Shopau

Oh god...

sabse pehle toh yeh batao ki ek update padne ke pehle hi dusra aur phir teesra kaise aa jata hai????😆

Coming to the updates... Mirza and Rico's bonding was just aww!!! the whole update...It was so cute... looking forward to more father-son moments

Razia's past is making me cry...😭 And I am not liking this Mirza😡 (Past wala yaar) I am imagining Rohit Purohit from Aise na karo Vida... HAHA!! if u have watched him in that show.

And I was about to tell you while reading the update that Rico should be calling Razia's Ammi NANI not DADI... but then the suspense was broken. I had a strange weird smile on my face knowing that Mirza's mom is helping Razia. 😃

Actually my reaction was much like ABDUL's...😲

DNA Kaise match nahi hoga... DNA KA BAAP bhi MATCH hoga!!! hehe😆

Continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Read all chaps in a go

They are amazing excellent

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: arshia200

NO NO NO U DIDNT OFFEND ANY ONE HERE AND UR STORY IS ONE OF THE BESTTT IVE EVER READ...PLS UPDATE SOON...IM SITTING ONLINE WAITING FOR UR UPDATE

PLS DOBARA MAT BOLNA YA SOCHNA THAT UR STORY IS CLUMSY...🥱

we were just expressing our point of view on mirzas character DOES NOT MEAN ur story is clumsy. its perfect the way it is...and i mentioned befpre also I LOVE THE MIRZA HERE